Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021HC0DAV3Q0294EMQ0H

Run Details

Duration:
7.4s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora crouched at the edge of the oak circle, the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant draped around her neck. The crimson gem throbbed against her pulse, a low warmth rising whenever she brushed the ancient standing stones. She lifted the pendant, watching its glow swell as she stepped through the veil that shimmered like a heat haze. A whisper of violet slipped over her ears, and Nyx coalesced from the shadows, their silhouette flickering between solid and mist. The Shade’s violet eyes caught the light, and a faint smile curled their lipless mouth. “The thin veil shivers,” Nyx said, their voice a wind through dry leaves. Isolde stood a breath away, silver hair spilling over her shoulders, lavender eyes reflecting a sky that seemed to bend around them. She lifted a hand, and the grass beneath her feet wilted without a trace. “Time folds here,” she murmured, each word a riddle wrapped in a sigh. The three crossed the threshold together, the world beyond a pulse of colors that defied description. The air tasted of honey and iron; a low hum resonated from the stone walls, vibrating through Aurora’s bones. A waterfall of luminescent droplets fell upward, each bead a tiny star caught in reverse gravity. Aurora’s boots sank into a floor of smooth glass, the surface rippling under each step. She raised her hand, feeling the cold edge of the Fae‑Forged Blade tucked into her belt. The dagger’s moonsilver sang against her palm, a faint chill spreading through her fingers. “It sings,” Aurora whispered, her breath forming a thin mist. “Listen.” Nyx drifted forward, their shadowy form slipping through the cracks between the glass and the air. “The walls remember,” Nyx said, voice echoing as if spoken from a distant canyon. “They have seen the feasts of Dymas, the gluttony of Prince Belphegor.” Isolde lifted a palm toward a wall of living vines that twisted into spirals of amber and violet. The vines pulsed, each leaf a tiny heartbeat. “The garden of excess,” she intoned, eyes narrowing. “A place where hunger devours itself.” A low chuckle rose from the stone, not from any mouth but from the very floor beneath them. Aurora pressed the pendant to the wall, the crimson gem flashing brighter, as if recognizing a hidden portal. The glass cracked, and a doorway of shimmering amber unfolded, revealing a cavern beyond mortal comprehension. The group stepped through, the scent of ripe fruit and smoked meat assaulting their nostrils. Rows of towering vines bore fruit the size of barrels, their skins rippling with a sheen that caught the amber light. In the distance, a massive banquet table stretched across the cavern, set with plates of steaming delicacies that seemed to pulse with life. Aurora’s eyes widened. “This is Dymas,” she said, voice barely a whisper. “The realm of gluttony.” Nyx’s form solidified, shadow coiling around a chair at the table. “The ruler fe here,” Nyx said, their fingers brushing a goblet that never emptied. “Prince Belphegor, hungry for souls.” Isolde floated closer to a marble statue of a feasting figure, its eyes empty voids. “He trades souls for flavor,” she said, the words a soft chant. “A contract bound in blood.” A sudden clatter echoed as a silver tray slid across the table, stopping before Aurora. On it rested a piece of meat that glowed with an inner fire, the scent of it curling into her throat. She reached out, the blade’s edge humming as it brushed the meat. The dagger cut through the flesh, and a burst of vapor rose, forming a fleeting image of a human soul—brief, flickering, then gone. Aurora inhaled, the temperature dropping around her. “The Veil weakens here,” she said, gripping the pendant tighter. “The winter solstice must be near.” Nyx’s violet eyes darted to a corner where a dark pool reflected the cavern’s light. The water rippled, showing glimpses of a city of stone and fire beyond the pool’s surface. “The Rift points,” Nyx murmured, voice barely audible. “Wardens watch, but they cannot see all.” Isolde stepped forward, palms cupped, and the pool’s surface broke, sending a cascade of silver droplets into the air. The droplets hung, each one a tiny mirror reflecting the cavern’s excess. “The Fae Courts watch,” she said, droplets falling like rain. “They send gifts, like this blade, to cut through the wards that bind us.” A sudden tremor shook the cavern, vines vines trembling, the banquet table rattling. A low growl rose from the shadows, a sound that seemed to come from the walls themselves. Aurora felt the pendant pulse faster, a warning thudding against her ribs. “Too much,” Aurora said, cheeks tightening. “The excess is a trap.” Nyx’s silhouette stretched, shadow limbs reaching for the source of the sound. “The hunger is alive,” Nyx warned, voice a hiss. “It feeds on greed, on the very desire that drives us.” A massive figure emerged from a veil of steam, its form a hulking mass of flesh and fire, eyes like molten amber. It lunged toward the table, its massive hands tearing at the banquet, scattering food like ash. The air filled with the scent of burnt sugar and iron. Aurora swung the bladesae‑Forged Blade, the moonsilver cutting through the creature’s arm with a scream that echoed through the cavern. The creature recoiled, a spray of dark blood splattering the vines. “You cannot devour us,” Aurora shouted, the words fierce enough to make the vines quiver. Nyx slipped around the creature, their form dissolving into the shadows, then coalescing behind it. “Your hunger blinds,” Nyx said, voice a whisper that cut through the creature’s roar. “You are bound to the gluttony you serve.” Isolde lifted a hand, and a burst of lunar light spilled from her fingertips, bathing the creature in cold sheen. The creature shivered, its flames dimming, the flesh recoiling from the cold. “Fae magic cuts deeper than steel,” Isolde said, eyes shining with an inner fire. The creature’s scream faded, and its massive body collapsed onto the table, the banquet turning to ash that drifted like snow. The cavern fell silent, the only sound the soft crackle of the ember fire that remained. Aurora lowered the blade, the moonsilver still humming. She glanced at the Heartstone Pendant, its glow steady, a calm beacon in the chaos. “The Veil will close soon,” Aurora said, voice low. “We must leave before it seals.” Nyx drifted toward the exit, their form thinning like smoke. “The portal will fade,” Nyx warned, eyes flickering. “Time here moves differently. One hour may be days outside.” Isolde turned to the standing stones, her silver hair fluttering as if caught in a wind she could not feel. “The Grove protects,” she said, her words a riddle that folded upon itself. “We will return, but only when the moon smiles upon the garden.” The three stepped toward the doorway, the amber light pulsing like a heartbeat. Aurora felt the pendant’s warmth settle into a steady thrum, the heartbeat of an ancient power. She pressed the blade against her side, the cold metal a reminder of the Fae’s watchful eye. As they crossed the threshold, the cavern’s walls seemed to sigh, the vines retracting, the ash scattering into the void. The veil of amber shivered, then dissolved into a thin mist that drifted away, leaving the glass floor of the Grove pristine once more. Aurora emerged into the clearing, the ancient oak stones standing silent, the wildflowers swaying under a sky that shifted between twilight and dawn. The pendant’s glow dimmed, its pulse matching her own steady heart. Nyx hovered above the ground, their silhouette merging with the shadows cast by the trees. Isolde’s silver hair caught the light, a halo of moonlit threads. “You felt it,” Aurora said, eyes scanning the horizon. “The taste of excess, the weight of hunger.” Nyx chuckled, a sound like rustling leaves. “It lingers in the breath of the world.” Isolde smiled, a fleeting curve. “The riddle is unfinished, but the answer lies within.” The trio stood in the grove, the veil between worlds humming faintly in the distance, a promise of other places waiting beyond the thin boundary. The night deepened, the stars twinkling as if watching, and the ancient stones held their secrets, waiting for the next step.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:44:45.754Z" 2/19/2026, 3:44:45 AM
model"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
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tokens_prompt1816
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native_tokens_prompt1662
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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finish_reason"stop"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.526
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1383
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1383
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count5
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count3
5
word"resonated"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"marble"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"fleeting"
count2
12
word"desire"
count1
13
word"hulking"
count1
14
word"beacon"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"pristine"
count1
17
word"scanning"
count1
18
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"shimmered"
4"whisper"
5"resonated"
6"chill"
7"echoing"
8"pulsed"
9"marble"
10"echoed"
11"fleeting"
12"desire"
13"hulking"
14"beacon"
15"reminder"
16"pristine"
17"scanning"
18"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
75.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1382
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1172
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Nyx16
Shade1
Isolde9
Aurora17
Blade2
Fae2
Grove1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Isolde"
4"Aurora"
5"Blade"
6"Fae"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.775
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"sky that seemed to bend around them"
1"as if recognizing a hidden portal"
2"delicacies that seemed to pulse with life"
3"sound that seemed to come from the walls themselves"
4"as if watching and the ancient stones held their secrets, waiting for the next step"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.724
wordCount1382
matches
0"not from any mouth but from the very floor beneath them"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
59.29% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean40.65
std14.53
cv0.358
sampleLengths
058
149
249
351
456
542
640
752
859
916
1030
1132
1271
1323
1446
1555
1642
1711
1832
1949
2046
2137
2246
2337
2438
2528
2645
2746
2844
2960
3017
3115
3214
3346
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
87.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences103
ratio0.019
matches
0"The air tasted of honey and iron; a low hum resonated from the stone walls, vibrating through Aurora’s bones."
1"The dagger cut through the flesh, and a burst of vapor rose, forming a fleeting image of a human soul—brief, flickering, then gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1173
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.021312872975277068
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0034100596760443308
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
98.11% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean13.42
std5.3
cv0.395
sampleLengths
020
118
220
321
415
513
622
714
813
916
1019
1116
1215
1316
1414
1510
161
1716
1814
1912
2018
218
228
236
2418
2518
2616
2715
2821
2923
303
319
324
3311
3414
355
3615
3712
385
3915
4021
4112
4223
437
4410
456
4615
4716
488
497
37.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.22330097087378642
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences85
matches
0"She lifted the pendant, watching"
1"She lifted a hand, and"
2"she murmured, each word a"
3"She raised her hand, feeling"
4"she intoned, eyes narrowing"
5"she said, voice barely a"
6"she said, the words a"
7"She reached out, the blade’s"
8"she said, gripping the pendant"
9"she said, droplets falling like"
10"It lunged toward the table,"
11"She glanced at the Heartstone"
12"she said, her words a"
13"She pressed the blade against"
ratio0.165
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences85
matches
0"Aurora crouched at the edge"
1"The crimson gem throbbed against"
2"She lifted the pendant, watching"
3"A whisper of violet slipped"
4"The Shade’s violet eyes caught"
5"Nyx said, their voice a"
6"Isolde stood a breath away,"
7"She lifted a hand, and"
8"she murmured, each word a"
9"The three crossed the threshold"
10"The air tasted of honey"
11"A waterfall of luminescent droplets"
12"Aurora’s boots sank into a"
13"She raised her hand, feeling"
14"The dagger’s moonsilver sang against"
15"Aurora whispered, her breath forming"
16"Nyx drifted forward, their shadowy"
17"Nyx said, voice echoing as"
18"Isolde lifted a palm toward"
19"The vines pulsed, each leaf"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount14
matches
0"Isolde stood a breath away, silver hair spilling over her shoulders, lavender eyes reflecting a sky that seemed to bend around them."
1"The three crossed the threshold together, the world beyond a pulse of colors that defied description."
2"Aurora pressed the pendant to the wall, the crimson gem flashing brighter, as if recognizing a hidden portal."
3"Rows of towering vines bore fruit the size of barrels, their skins rippling with a sheen that caught the amber light."
4"In the distance, a massive banquet table stretched across the cavern, set with plates of steaming delicacies that seemed to pulse with life."
5"On it rested a piece of meat that glowed with an inner fire, the scent of it curling into her throat."
6"Aurora swung the bladesae‑Forged Blade, the moonsilver cutting through the creature’s arm with a scream that echoed through the cavern."
7"Nyx slipped around the creature, their form dissolving into the shadows, then coalescing behind it."
8"The creature shivered, its flames dimming, the flesh recoiling from the cold."
9"The creature’s scream faded, and its massive body collapsed onto the table, the banquet turning to ash that drifted like snow."
10"Isolde turned to the standing stones, her silver hair fluttering as if caught in a wind she could not feel."
11"The veil of amber shivered, then dissolved into a thin mist that drifted away, leaving the glass floor of the Grove pristine once more."
12"Aurora emerged into the clearing, the ancient oak stones standing silent, the wildflowers swaying under a sky that shifted between twilight and dawn."
13"The night deepened, the stars twinkling as if watching, and the ancient stones held their secrets, waiting for the next step."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount15
matches
0"Nyx said, their voice a wind through dry leaves"
1"she murmured, each word a riddle wrapped in a sigh"
2"Aurora whispered, her breath forming a thin mist"
3"Nyx said, voice echoing as if spoken from a distant canyon"
4"she intoned, eyes narrowing"
5"she said, voice barely a whisper"
6"Nyx said, their fingers brushing a goblet that never emptied"
7"Nyx murmured, voice barely audible"
8"she said, droplets falling like rain"
9"Aurora said, cheeks tightening"
10"Isolde said, eyes shining with an inner fire"
11"Aurora said, voice low"
12"Nyx warned, eyes flickering"
13"she said, her words a riddle that folded upon itself"
14"Aurora said, eyes scanning the horizon"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"Aurora shouted (shout)"
5"Nyx warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.316
effectiveRatio0.316
67.6008%