Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021HJ9JNGRBRYKY9N6Z8

Run Details

Duration:
31.4s
Cost:
$0.000978

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed against the roof of the abandoned Tube station, blending with the muffled sounds of the city above. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit cavern, her sharp jawline set in a tight line. A flicker of unease rippled through her; an uncanny sensation clung to the air, like a whispering ghost. She surveyed the scene. Crumpled remnants from last night's illicit dealings littered the platform—empty vials, torn pages of ancient text, and the telltale marks of a supernatural disturbance. A faint whiff of sulfur punctuated the air, drawing her to the center of the chaos. “Quinn.” She turned at the sound of her colleague’s voice, Detective Charles Grant, a stocky man with a penchant for improvisation. His brow furrowed as he gestured toward a pool of something shimmering near the edge of the platform. “You sure about this? Doesn’t fit the profile.” “It fits perfectly.” Quinn crouched, her fingers hovering over the iridescent liquid. “Look at the reflections. It’s from an alchemical substance, something they use in the Veil Market. This isn’t just a drug deal gone wrong. It’s deeper.” Grant scratched his head, the stubble rasping under his fingers. “But there’s no sign of a struggle. No bodies. Just a bunch of junk. Maybe it’s not what you think.” She straightened, irritation sharpening her focus. “You’re missing the connection, Grant. The Veil Market moves locations every full moon. They don’t leave messes like this without good reason.” A flicker of doubt crossed his face, but he held his ground. “What about last month’s bust near Brixton? That guy said something about a ghost. Maybe this is a coincidence.” Harlow shook her head, pulling the worn leather watch on her wrist into view. “Ghosts don’t spill potions across the platform like a careless barmaid. This is a message—one meant for someone specific. They need to know what happens to ‘uncooperative’ members.” Grant shifted uneasily. “You really believe that?” “Yes.” Harlow exhaled, frustration bleeding through. “And you’ll need to keep an open mind.” She stepped closer, her gaze darting over the scene. The tracks seemed to hum beneath the weight of every unspoken secret. Something danced just out of reach, both familiar and alien. More glimmers caught her eye. She knelt again, tracing a more intricate pattern in the slick surface, intricate runes shimmering momentarily. The damp air tingled, and she felt the subtle resonance of magic as if the very ground had a pulse. “Any idea what this is?” She glanced over her shoulder, catching Grant’s guarded expression. “They’re not markings I recognize.” “Which means it’s not a simple exchange, and that’s the issue.” Quinn stood and brushed off her trousers, peering into the shadows where the rough edges of murky tunnels beckoned. Her instincts, honed through years of experience, pricked at some unseen presence. “Think anyone’s still here?” Grant asked, his voice low, betraying the tension dancing between the two officers. “Possibly.” They took a step deeper into the scene, the boards creaking underfoot as they ventured further from the platform. A dim, flickering light glowed from one of the tunnels. Quinn moved ahead, pulling her phone from her pocket, the screen illuminating the dark. “What are you planning on finding?” Grant whispered, falling back half a step. The shadows loomed close, thick as smoke. “Answers.” The tunnel narrowed, the atmosphere thick with foreboding. Then the faintest hint of movement caught her eye—a figure slipped between two shadows. Without thinking, Quinn broke into a run, her heartbeat matching the thrum of urgency in her veins. “Quinn!” Grant yelled behind her, scrambling to follow. She emerged into a wider section of the tunnel, the flickering light revealing a figure huddled in a corner. A curly-haired woman, freckled, wide-eyed, and clutching a satchel as if it were a lifeline. “Hannah?” Quinn called out, recognition hitting her hard. “What are you doing here?” The woman looked up, fear momentarily eclipsed by familiarity. “Detective Quinn? I didn’t think—” “Step away from there.” Quinn pointed. The woman turned, revealing a tattered book barely sticking from the satchel. “Please, I—” “You’re not in trouble. I just need to understand.” Quinn softened her tone, stepping closer despite the surging tension. “They—they wanted me to help with the artifacts, but it got out of hand.” Hannah's voice trembled as she shuffled back against the wall, her reflection flickering under the light's erratic glow. “I didn’t mean to summon anything. It just… it just happened.” Quinn exchanged a glance with Grant, who lingered in the tunnel's mouth. “Summon what?” “I don’t know! Something from the other side. That’s why everything’s like this.” She gestured weakly towards the shimmering remnants on the ground. “It’s alive, Detective. It’s angry. They told me it was safe.” “You mean the Market?” Quinn pressed, her intuition flaring. “Why would they sell something so volatile?” Fingers nervously tucked hair behind her ear, Hannah’s eyes darted around, trapped between panic and realization. “They thought it would be a demonstration… to show their power. But it didn’t work.” Quinn stepped forward. “Did anyone else know you were here?” Terror gripped Hannah’s features. “Only the buyers. They came in and couldn’t control it. They ran. I just…” “Can you show us where?” Harlow’s voice softened as she offered her hand. Hannah hesitated and then nodded, scrambling to her feet with a newfound determination. “Sure. Just be careful. It’s not safe.” Quinn caught Grant's eye over the girl’s head, a signal that set them both on edge. Something charged the air as they pushed deeper into the shadows of the Tube, the weight of unspoken secrets thickening between them. They had stumbled into a nexus of danger, one that transcended mere crime. “Don’t follow too close.” Quinn warned, as Hannah led the way. She kept her senses open, ready for whatever lay beneath the veil of the everyday. In this forgotten station, where shadows deepened and light bent strangely, she was prepared for anything.
total_cost0.0009782999999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured weakly [weakly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.053
79.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
2"very"
3"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount994
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"flicker"
count2
1
word"uncanny"
count1
2
word"furrowed"
count1
3
word"scratched his head"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"unspoken"
count2
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count2
9
word"resonance"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"tension"
count2
12
word"dancing"
count1
13
word"loomed"
count1
14
word"foreboding"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"newfound"
count1
17
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"uncanny"
2"furrowed"
3"scratched his head"
4"weight"
5"unspoken"
6"familiar"
7"tracing"
8"intricate"
9"resonance"
10"pulse"
11"tension"
12"dancing"
13"loomed"
14"foreboding"
15"trembled"
16"newfound"
17"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"A flicker of doubt"
95.24% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences56
matches
0"A flicker of unease"
1"k with foreboding"
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords989
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount675
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Harlow4
Quinn13
Detective2
Charles1
Grant9
Hannah5
Fingers1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Detective"
3"Charles"
4"Grant"
5"Hannah"
6"Fingers"
places(empty)
globalScore0.537
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount989
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean24.73
std15.37
cv0.622
sampleLengths
054
144
247
338
430
528
631
742
87
945
1041
1114
125
1311
1431
1517
161
1743
1820
191
2039
218
2234
2313
2414
2518
262
2719
2843
2914
3034
3116
3231
3310
3418
3513
3613
377
3851
3942
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"was prepared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences78
ratio0.038
matches
0"A flicker of unease rippled through her; an uncanny sensation clung to the air, like a whispering ghost."
1"Crumpled remnants from last night's illicit dealings littered the platform—empty vials, torn pages of ancient text, and the telltale marks of a supernatural disturbance."
2"Then the faintest hint of movement caught her eye—a figure slipped between two shadows."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount679
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.030927835051546393
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.013254786450662739
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean12.68
std6.59
cv0.52
sampleLengths
019
117
218
34
424
516
621
718
88
912
1026
1110
1220
136
1422
1512
1619
1714
1828
193
204
216
2217
2312
2410
255
2616
2720
2814
295
3011
3119
3212
3317
341
3519
3610
3714
3813
397
401
418
4214
4317
448
4519
4615
478
485
499
91.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5512820512820513
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences55
matches
0"More glimmers caught her eye."
1"Then the faintest hint of"
ratio0.036
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences55
matches
0"She surveyed the scene."
1"She turned at the sound"
2"His brow furrowed as he"
3"She straightened, irritation sharpening her"
4"She stepped closer, her gaze"
5"She knelt again, tracing a"
6"She glanced over her shoulder,"
7"Her instincts, honed through years"
8"They took a step deeper"
9"She emerged into a wider"
10"She gestured weakly towards the"
11"They had stumbled into a"
12"She kept her senses open,"
ratio0.236
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences55
matches
0"Rain drummed against the roof"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
2"A flicker of unease rippled"
3"She surveyed the scene."
4"A faint whiff of sulfur"
5"She turned at the sound"
6"His brow furrowed as he"
7"Quinn crouched, her fingers hovering"
8"Grant scratched his head, the"
9"She straightened, irritation sharpening her"
10"A flicker of doubt crossed"
11"Harlow shook her head, pulling"
12"Grant shifted uneasily."
13"Harlow exhaled, frustration bleeding through"
14"She stepped closer, her gaze"
15"The tracks seemed to hum"
16"Something danced just out of"
17"She knelt again, tracing a"
18"The damp air tingled, and"
19"She glanced over her shoulder,"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Without thinking, Quinn broke into a run, her heartbeat matching the thrum of urgency in her veins."
1"A curly-haired woman, freckled, wide-eyed, and clutching a satchel as if it were a lifeline."
2"Quinn caught Grant's eye over the girl’s head, a signal that set them both on edge."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Quinn crouched, her fingers hovering over the iridescent liquid"
1"Harlow exhaled, frustration bleeding through"
2"She stepped, her gaze darting over the scene"
3"Grant yelled, scrambling to follow"
4"Quinn called out, recognition hitting her hard"
5"Hannah's voice trembled, her reflection flickering under the light's erratic glow"
6"Quinn pressed, her intuition flaring"
18.42% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Grant whispered (whisper)"
1"Grant yelled (yell)"
2"Quinn called out (call out)"
3"Quinn pressed (press)"
4"Quinn warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.263
77.3914%