Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021HRCTR027RYMBHQ4M5

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Duration:
35.1s
Cost:
$0.026310

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed above them, ancient oaks twisted into impossible spirals that defied every law of nature Rory had ever known. Bark ridged with silver veins caught moonlight and threw it back in patterns that made her eyes water. "The boundary holds strong tonight." Isolde's voice drifted like silk through the darkness. Her pale lavender eyes reflected the strange luminescence as she pressed her palm against the nearest trunk. "Step through together. Do not let go of one another." Nyx's shadowy form rippled at the edge of Rory's vision. "What lies beyond?" "What has always been beyond." Isolde's silver hair moved in a breeze that touched nothing else. "What was here before London drew its first breath." The Heartstone pendant grew warm against Rory's chest as she reached for Nyx's hand. Their fingers were solid tonight, cool but firm. Isolde took her other hand with a grip that felt like morning frost. They stepped forward as one. The world folded. Rory's stomach lurched as reality bent around them, colours bleeding into one another like watercolours in rain. The sensation lasted only seconds, but when it ended, she stood in a place that belonged to dreams. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance. Roses bloomed alongside daffodils, their petals shimmering with dewdrops that caught light from no visible source. The air itself seemed to glow with a soft, pearl-like radiance that made everything appear painted in watercolours. "Christ." The word slipped from Rory's lips before she could stop it. "Language holds power here." Isolde released their hands and glided forward, her feet leaving no impression on the flower-strewn earth. "Choose your words with care." The grove stretched before them, larger than any clearing had a right to be within Richmond Park's boundaries. Ancient trees formed a living cathedral, their branches interweaving overhead in patterns that suggested deliberate architecture rather than natural growth. Silver moss hung like curtains, and through the gaps between, distant lights flickered like captured stars. "How is this possible?" Rory knelt to touch a cluster of bluebells that pulsed with their own inner light. The petals felt real enough, silk-soft and cool, but they hummed against her fingertips with a vibration she felt in her bones. "Reality bends differently here." Nyx moved between the trees like liquid shadow, their form shifting between solid and incorporeal with each step. "I can feel it. The spaces between things." A sound drifted through the grove—not quite music, not quite singing, but something that made Rory's chest tighten with inexplicable longing. It seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, woven into the very air they breathed. "What is that?" "The grove remembers." Isolde paused beside a stream that wound through the flowers, its water running silver in the strange light. "Every footstep, every word spoken within these boundaries. The echoes never fully fade." Rory followed the stream's edge, marvelling at how the water seemed to flow uphill in places, defying gravity with casual indifference. Fish swam within its depths—if they were fish. They moved with too much grace, their scales catching light in colours that had no names. "Time moves strangely here," Nyx observed, their voice carrying that wind-whisper quality that made words seem like secrets. "I can feel it. Past and present layering over one another like sediment." Indeed, as they moved deeper into the grove, Rory began to glimpse things that shouldn't exist. A medieval knight's gauntlet lay half-buried beneath morning glories. A child's wooden toy horse grazed peacefully among the flowers, moving its head to track their passage. Stone fragments carved with runes that hurt to look at directly jutted from the earth like broken teeth. "People have been coming here for centuries," Rory breathed, understanding flooding through her. "This place... it collects things." "It preserves what matters." Isolde's robes—if they were robes—seemed to be cut from the same pearl-light that illuminated the grove. "What is precious. What is lost. What is needed." They reached the grove's heart, and Rory's breath caught. A pool of water so still it looked like polished obsidian reflected not the sky above, but something else entirely. Stars wheeled in its depths, but they formed constellations she'd never seen. Mountains of glass rose from silvered plains. Cities of light floated like jellyfish through seas of mist. "The Seeing Pool shows what is, what was, and what may come to pass." Isolde knelt beside the water, her reflection fracturing into a thousand different versions of herself. "But be warned—it shows truth without kindness." Nyx's form solidified as they approached the pool's edge. "And if we look?" "Then you see." Isolde's smile held depths Rory couldn't fathom. "The question becomes whether you can bear what truth reveals." The pendant at Rory's throat pulsed with sudden heat. In the pool's surface, something stirred. Not quite images, but suggestions of movement. Shadows that might have been people. Light that might have been fire. And beneath it all, a presence vast and patient, watching from spaces between the stars. "Something's coming," Rory whispered, her hand instinctively moving to where the Fae blade rested against her ribs. "Through the pool?" "Not through." Isolde rose, her movements fluid as water. "From. The pool shows what draws near to our world. What tests the boundaries of what mortals call real." The grove around them seemed to hold its breath. Even the eternal singing faded to whispers. Flowers turned their faces toward the pool as if seeking warmth from a dying sun. And in the water's depths, something immense shifted its attention toward them.
total_cost0.02631

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde's voice drifted like [like]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.069
94.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount932
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount932
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"silk"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"lurched"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"echoes"
count1
7
word"casual indifference"
count1
8
word"depths"
count4
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"silk"
2"stomach"
3"lurched"
4"flickered"
5"pulsed"
6"echoes"
7"casual indifference"
8"depths"
9"whisper"
10"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords922
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount739
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Heartstone1
Nyx5
Isolde9
Richmond1
Park1
Indeed1
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.553
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like morning frost"
1"not quite music, not quite singing, but something that made Rory's chest tighten with inexplicable longing"
2"not quite singing, but something that made Rory's chest tighten with inexplicable longing"
3"looked like polished obsidian reflected n"
4"Not quite images, but suggestions of movement"
5"as if seeking warmth from a dying sun"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords4.338
wordCount922
matches
0"not quite music, not quite singing, but something"
1"not quite singing, but something"
2"not the sky above, but something else entirely"
3"Not quite images, but suggestions of movement"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"carrying that wind"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean29.74
std15.17
cv0.51
sampleLengths
040
140
213
325
435
55
63
735
841
912
1025
1154
1241
1330
1436
153
1634
1745
1831
1960
2018
2129
2258
2336
2413
2520
2649
2720
2828
2931
3012
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs126
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences72
ratio0.042
matches
0"A sound drifted through the grove—not quite music, not quite singing, but something that made Rory's chest tighten with inexplicable longing."
1"Fish swam within its depths—if they were fish."
2"\"It preserves what matters.\" Isolde's robes—if they were robes—seemed to be cut from the same pearl-light that illuminated the grove."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount748
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03609625668449198
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0066844919786096255
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean12.81
std5.87
cv0.458
sampleLengths
022
118
213
317
410
510
63
716
89
914
108
1113
125
133
1417
1518
167
1716
1818
1912
2020
215
2218
2320
2416
2519
2622
2722
288
2921
3015
313
3221
3313
3421
358
3616
3718
3813
3916
409
4117
4218
4313
445
4520
469
479
4820
4912
94.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.6111111111111112
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences57
matches
0"Indeed, as they moved deeper"
1"Even the eternal singing faded"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences57
matches
0"Her pale lavender eyes reflected"
1"Their fingers were solid tonight,"
2"They stepped forward as one."
3"It seemed to come from"
4"They moved with too much"
5"They reached the grove's heart,"
ratio0.105
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences57
matches
0"The standing stones loomed above"
1"Bark ridged with silver veins"
2"Isolde's voice drifted like silk"
3"Her pale lavender eyes reflected"
4"Nyx's shadowy form rippled at"
5"Isolde's silver hair moved in"
6"The Heartstone pendant grew warm"
7"Their fingers were solid tonight,"
8"Isolde took her other hand"
9"They stepped forward as one."
10"The world folded."
11"Rory's stomach lurched as reality"
12"The sensation lasted only seconds,"
13"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
14"Roses bloomed alongside daffodils, their"
15"The air itself seemed to"
16"The word slipped from Rory's"
17"Isolde released their hands and"
18"The grove stretched before them,"
19"Rory knelt to touch a"
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The standing stones loomed above them, ancient oaks twisted into impossible spirals that defied every law of nature Rory had ever known."
1"Bark ridged with silver veins caught moonlight and threw it back in patterns that made her eyes water."
2"Isolde took her other hand with a grip that felt like morning frost."
3"Roses bloomed alongside daffodils, their petals shimmering with dewdrops that caught light from no visible source."
4"The air itself seemed to glow with a soft, pearl-like radiance that made everything appear painted in watercolours."
5"A sound drifted through the grove—not quite music, not quite singing, but something that made Rory's chest tighten with inexplicable longing."
6"Rory followed the stream's edge, marvelling at how the water seemed to flow uphill in places, defying gravity with casual indifference."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Isolde released, her feet leaving no impression on the flower-strewn earth"
1"Nyx moved, their form shifting between solid and incorporeal with each step"
2"Isolde knelt, her reflection fracturing into a thousand different versions of herself"
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx observed (observe)"
1"Rory breathed (breathe)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.207
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.207
69.2481%