| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde's voice drifted like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 94.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 932 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 932 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "casual indifference" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "lurched" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "echoes" | | 7 | "casual indifference" | | 8 | "depths" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 922 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.28% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 739 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.89 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Isolde | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Indeed | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.553 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like morning frost" | | 1 | "not quite music, not quite singing, but something that made Rory's chest tighten with inexplicable longing" | | 2 | "not quite singing, but something that made Rory's chest tighten with inexplicable longing" | | 3 | "looked like polished obsidian reflected n" | | 4 | "Not quite images, but suggestions of movement" | | 5 | "as if seeking warmth from a dying sun" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 4.338 | | wordCount | 922 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite music, not quite singing, but something" | | 1 | "not quite singing, but something" | | 2 | "not the sky above, but something else entirely" | | 3 | "Not quite images, but suggestions of movement" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 29.74 | | std | 15.17 | | cv | 0.51 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "A sound drifted through the grove—not quite music, not quite singing, but something that made Rory's chest tighten with inexplicable longing." | | 1 | "Fish swam within its depths—if they were fish." | | 2 | "\"It preserves what matters.\" Isolde's robes—if they were robes—seemed to be cut from the same pearl-light that illuminated the grove." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 748 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.03609625668449198 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0066844919786096255 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 12.81 | | std | 5.87 | | cv | 0.458 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 94.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.6111111111111112 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Indeed, as they moved deeper" | | 1 | "Even the eternal singing faded" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 1 | "Their fingers were solid tonight," | | 2 | "They stepped forward as one." | | 3 | "It seemed to come from" | | 4 | "They moved with too much" | | 5 | "They reached the grove's heart," |
| | ratio | 0.105 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed above" | | 1 | "Bark ridged with silver veins" | | 2 | "Isolde's voice drifted like silk" | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 4 | "Nyx's shadowy form rippled at" | | 5 | "Isolde's silver hair moved in" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant grew warm" | | 7 | "Their fingers were solid tonight," | | 8 | "Isolde took her other hand" | | 9 | "They stepped forward as one." | | 10 | "The world folded." | | 11 | "Rory's stomach lurched as reality" | | 12 | "The sensation lasted only seconds," | | 13 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 14 | "Roses bloomed alongside daffodils, their" | | 15 | "The air itself seemed to" | | 16 | "The word slipped from Rory's" | | 17 | "Isolde released their hands and" | | 18 | "The grove stretched before them," | | 19 | "Rory knelt to touch a" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed above them, ancient oaks twisted into impossible spirals that defied every law of nature Rory had ever known." | | 1 | "Bark ridged with silver veins caught moonlight and threw it back in patterns that made her eyes water." | | 2 | "Isolde took her other hand with a grip that felt like morning frost." | | 3 | "Roses bloomed alongside daffodils, their petals shimmering with dewdrops that caught light from no visible source." | | 4 | "The air itself seemed to glow with a soft, pearl-like radiance that made everything appear painted in watercolours." | | 5 | "A sound drifted through the grove—not quite music, not quite singing, but something that made Rory's chest tighten with inexplicable longing." | | 6 | "Rory followed the stream's edge, marvelling at how the water seemed to flow uphill in places, defying gravity with casual indifference." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde released, her feet leaving no impression on the flower-strewn earth" | | 1 | "Nyx moved, their form shifting between solid and incorporeal with each step" | | 2 | "Isolde knelt, her reflection fracturing into a thousand different versions of herself" |
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| 46.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.103 | | leniency | 0.207 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |