Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021JAH1747PSKAAJ1PM3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.001841
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass slot in the concrete wall swallowed the phalanx of bone, a sharp click echoing through the damp tunnel before the heavy iron door groaned open. The smell hit Detective Harlow Quinn first—a rot of wet concrete, stale ozone, and something sweeter, like overripe fruit rotting in the sun. She stepped across the threshold, her worn leather boots settling into the gravel that replaced the ticket hall tiles centuries ago. The neon strip lights overhead flickered with a hum that vibrated in her teeth. “Late again.” Detective Miller stood by a rusted turnstile, his back to the decaying corridors of what had once been the Camden Tube Station. He held a glimmering cigarette between his knuckles, exhaling a plume of smoke that seemed to dissipate instantly into the air. He wore a drab trench coat, a stark contrast to the vibrant tapestries hanging from the ceiling here in the Veil Market. “Traffic,” Quinn said, brushing a stray lock of closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair from her forehead. She checked her watch. The leather strap was worn smooth, the face a cheap plastic casing that mattered less than the ticking inside. “They’re closing the Northern Line for repairs.” “Six weeks, Quinn. You can walk.” “You can’t walk to Hell on a Tuesday afternoon, Miller.” She marched past him, ignoring the eager eyes of the street hawkers who drifted out of their stalls like smoke. Bodies don’t belong here. Not human bodies. The Market dealt in enchanted trinkets, potions for high school crushes, and blades that never stopped bleeding. People came here with money they couldn’t explain and left with problems that definitely could. But a dead body? That was a police matter. Or at least, that was the excuse she told the superiors. The scene was contained in the remnants of a ticket booth, a square of darkness cut out of the larger cavern. Two uniformed officers stood guard, bodies rigid, eyes darting at the shadows in the corners. “What do we have?” Quinn asked, her voice dropping an octave. Miller flicked his cigarette butt, watching it bounce off a pile of rusted trolleys. “Victim’s name is Thorne. Elias Thorne. Or at least, that’s what his driver’s license says. Model executive. Ran a hedge fund down on the Strand. Or so he claimed.” Thorne slumped against the back wall of the booth, his expensive suit looking like grey rags. His head was tilted at an awkward angle, neck snapped. “Suicide,” Miller said, shrugging. “Threw himself against the turnstile after we called it in.” Quinn stepped closer, her jaw tight. She ignored the buzzing at her wrist. She knelt beside the body, her knees popping in the silence. She pulled on a pair of latex gloves, the snap echoing sharply. “Suicide.” She repeated the word, tasting the bile on her tongue. “He’s six feet tall, Miller. He died standing up against the metal. The contusion on his forehead is a fracture, yes. But it matches the hard angle of the ticket machine. He fell forward.” “He fell forward from a turnstile?” Miller’s brow furrowed, a flicker of annoyance crossing his face. “He didn’t die from the fall.” Quinn traced the line of the crack in the concrete floor, leading away from the booth. “Look at the position of his arms. Defense posture.” She took a snapshot in her mind. Thorne wasn't lying here. He was standing, bracing himself against something, and then— “Five stab wounds to the chest,” Miller rattled off, checking his notepad. “And defensive wounds to the forearms. It was a struggle. He fought back.” “Then who hit him?” “I’m saying he was mugged. Reckless bastard was carrying a paywave chip instead of cash, thought the lights made it invisible.” Quinn stood up, dusting off her knees. She looked at the ceiling, then the walls, then the floor, her eyes narrowing. Her gaze landed on the discarded item near Thorne’s limp hand—a small brass compass with a patina of verdigris green spreading over the casing. “Throw it to me.” Miller handed it over without complaint. Quinn spun the compass in the air. The needle didn't wobble; it snapped into a tight spiral, a miniature hurricane inside the glass face, then snapped back to point straight north. “New stock?” Miller asked, leaning against the booth. “Looks pricey.” “Looks fake.” Quinn’s eyes analyzed the etching on the face—the protective sigils were too uniform. Mass-produced trinket. The kind of junk the market sold to tourists who thought they were buying luck. She let the compass drop into her pocket. “Tell me about the witnesses, Miller.” “The usual. Five market rats. Dead end. They’re terrified of the Cliques. Said no one came in through the front, but no one saw anyone leave.” “Underground markets move,” Quinn mused, pacing the perimeter. “Shift locations every full moon. But this place feels… active.” “Why are we even here?” Miller asked. “It’s not murder. It’s a mugging gone wrong in the middle of a criminal underground. You want to book Thorne for resisting arrest?” Quinn stopped pacing. She walked back to the body and crouched again, ignoring Miller’s rising sigh. She looked at the blood pooling around Thorne’s ribs. It was dark, almost black, crusted at the edges. “You’re missing the geometry,” Quinn murmured. “Excuse me?” “The blood spatter.” She pointed a gloved finger at the ceiling just above Thorne’s head. “There are flecks of red there, small and fine. The drops on his collar are larger, heavier. The impact angle is wrong.” “Because he was lying on the floor.” Miller rubbed his temples. “Because he was leaning back.” Quinn stood and looked at the booth’s interior wall, where a dark stain oozed upward, as if absorbed by the concrete. “If he was fighting a man, his back would be against the machine, the killer in front of him. The blood on his chest would belong to the killer.” “Could be splatter from the stab wound.” “High-velocity splatter doesn’t hang in the air like that,” Quinn countered. “This isn't a fight scene. It’s a disposal scene.” She turned to Miller. “Get me a crime scene photographer. Now.” “Quinn, this is an underground market. It’s messy.” “Get him.” Quinn ignored the murmurs of the officers. She pressed her hand against the booth wall, ignoring the dampness seeping through her glove. Her jaw worked. She looked at the spot where Thorne’s feet should have been, but were currently too short to reach the floor. “Did you measure his legs?” she asked, not turning around. “Yes.” “And how long were they?” “Seventy-three centimeters.” “Then he wasn’t dead when he came through that door.” Miller frowned. “What?” “He was draped over something,” Quinn said, her eyes fixed on the compass in her pocket. She reached in and pulled it out again. The needle was still spinning, faster now. A low thrumming sound started to emanate from the brass casing. “Quinn, put that toy down.” She didn't. The needle was pointing at a specific section of the wall, specifically the section where the damp stain was heaviest. The artifact was reacting to the anomaly. “Whoever put him in that booth stood him on something,” Quinn said, her mind racing. “If we level the body, the feet are suspended. If we stretch the body, the arms don't match the wounds.” She grabbed a flashlight from Miller’s belt and shone it on the concrete floor. “Look at this.” Miller stepped closer, the light reflecting in his tired eyes. The flashlight beam cut through the dust settling on the floor. “There’s writing,” Miller muttered. “Symbols,” Quinn corrected. “A sigil. An anchor. Someone brought him here on a tether.” “The bone token,” Miller said. “We thought the token just let us in.” “No.” Quinn lowered the flashlight. She looked at the compass again. The needle stopped its frantic spinning and pointed directly at her chest. Her eyes widened, the realization hitting her with the force of a physical blow. “The Compass is a tether,” she said. “It points to the nearest rift. But it also anchors things.” “A tether? You think he was stapled to the floor?” “No.” Quinn gestured to the air between her and the wall. “Think about where Thorne was found. Camden Tube. This station was closed in the nineties because of structural instability. The tunnels collapsed.” Quinn stepped back, putting distance between herself and the wall. She looked at Miller, really looked at him, and for the first time, she saw the nervous tick in his eye, the slight tremor in his hands he always hid. “Look at the blood, Miller. It’s coagulating, but it’s also… static. It’s bubbling.” “Nerves,” Miller said, a little too quickly. “No.” Quinn walked to the edge of the clearing, her eyes scanning the vast, dark expanse of the abandoned platform. “Thorne didn’t come here from the street. He came here from somewhere else.” She tapped the compass against her palm. The face markings etched with protective sigils flashed, glowing faintly green. “There’s a tear in the fabric of this station,” Quinn said. “The market moved here, or maybe it’s just resting here temporarily. But there’s a leak. The compass is reacting to a portal opening nearby.” “And Thorne?” “He was dragged through it,” Quinn concluded, her voice steady. “This isn’t a mugging. The Clique used this man to test a breach. They pulled him through, nailed him to a bench to keep him from falling back, and left him to die.” “So what do we do? Call it in? The Clique will have the place emptied in five minutes. The token mechanism will lock, and we’re trapped.” Quinn looked back at the booth. The body was just a prop, a vessel for something else. The emergency exit was on the other side of the platform, ten yards away. “The evidence doesn't add up because we’re looking at a collision, not a crime scene,” she said. “He’s not a victim. He’s a spatial coordinates.” She holstered the Compass and pulled her handcuffs from her belt. “You can arrest him for resisting, Miller. I’m going after the ones who dragged him.” “What? We don’t even know where the rift is.” “We have a direction.” Quinn pointed the flashlight beam at the dark, twisting tunnels that branched off into the deep dark. “The Compass points to the strongest pull. That way.” Miller hesitated, the cigarette burning down to the filter. He looked at the body, then at Quinn, and finally dropped the butt on the ground, stepping on it. “Fine,” Miller said, pulling his service weapon. “But if this is a trap, I’m arresting you for forcing me down here.” “Fair enough.” Quinn turned and started walking toward the dark, the hum of the station settling back into silence, save for the distant, phantom sound of a train rushing through stone, miles above their heads.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.39
leniency0.78
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1811
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"really"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1811
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoing"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"analyzed"
count1
10
word"etching"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"flickered"
2"vibrated"
3"stark"
4"flicked"
5"silence"
6"furrowed"
7"flicker"
8"traced"
9"analyzed"
10"etching"
11"racing"
12"scanning"
13"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1805
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1092
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.47
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Harlow1
Quinn27
Miller20
Camden1
Tube1
Station1
Veil1
Market2
Thorne6
Mass-produced1
Compass1
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Miller"
4"Station"
5"Market"
6"Thorne"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.264
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smoke that seemed to dissipate instantly into the air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1805
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean22.85
std16.71
cv0.731
sampleLengths
085
12
265
345
46
510
659
720
836
911
1043
1126
1214
1336
1445
1516
1631
1720
1825
194
2021
2145
224
2337
2410
2532
2614
2726
2818
2930
3034
316
322
3337
3411
3555
367
3720
3811
398
402
4145
4210
431
445
452
4610
473
4842
495
98.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"was contained"
1"was tilted"
31.65% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs198
matches
0"wasn't lying"
1"was standing"
2"were buying"
3"was pointing"
4"was reacting"
49.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences153
ratio0.033
matches
0"The smell hit Detective Harlow Quinn first—a rot of wet concrete, stale ozone, and something sweeter, like overripe fruit rotting in the sun."
1"He was standing, bracing himself against something, and then—"
2"Her gaze landed on the discarded item near Thorne’s limp hand—a small brass compass with a patina of verdigris green spreading over the casing."
3"The needle didn't wobble; it snapped into a tight spiral, a miniature hurricane inside the glass face, then snapped back to point straight north."
4"“Looks fake.” Quinn’s eyes analyzed the etching on the face—the protective sigils were too uniform."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1098
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.037340619307832425
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01092896174863388
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean11.8
std7.5
cv0.636
sampleLengths
027
123
221
314
42
522
621
722
815
94
1019
117
126
1310
1420
154
163
1717
1815
194
205
2111
2221
2315
2411
2514
2629
2716
2810
294
3010
316
327
3311
3412
3511
3634
3716
3822
399
407
414
429
4312
4413
454
4621
477
4814
4924
57.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.39215686274509803
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners60
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.34% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences91
matches
0"She stepped across the threshold,"
1"He held a glimmering cigarette"
2"He wore a drab trench"
3"She checked her watch."
4"She marched past him, ignoring"
5"His head was tilted at"
6"She ignored the buzzing at"
7"She knelt beside the body,"
8"She pulled on a pair"
9"She repeated the word, tasting"
10"She took a snapshot in"
11"He was standing, bracing himself"
12"She looked at the ceiling,"
13"Her gaze landed on the"
14"She let the compass drop"
15"She walked back to the"
16"She looked at the blood"
17"It was dark, almost black,"
18"She pointed a gloved finger"
19"She turned to Miller."
ratio0.352
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences91
matches
0"The brass slot in the"
1"The smell hit Detective Harlow"
2"She stepped across the threshold,"
3"The neon strip lights overhead"
4"Detective Miller stood by a"
5"He held a glimmering cigarette"
6"He wore a drab trench"
7"Quinn said, brushing a stray"
8"She checked her watch."
9"The leather strap was worn"
10"She marched past him, ignoring"
11"Bodies don’t belong here."
12"The Market dealt in enchanted"
13"People came here with money"
14"That was a police matter."
15"The scene was contained in"
16"Quinn asked, her voice dropping"
17"Miller flicked his cigarette butt,"
18"Thorne slumped against the back"
19"His head was tilted at"
ratio0.956
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She stepped across the threshold, her worn leather boots settling into the gravel that replaced the ticket hall tiles centuries ago."
1"He held a glimmering cigarette between his knuckles, exhaling a plume of smoke that seemed to dissipate instantly into the air."
2"She marched past him, ignoring the eager eyes of the street hawkers who drifted out of their stalls like smoke."
46.88% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Quinn asked, her voice dropping an octave"
1"Miller’s brow furrowed, a flicker of annoyance crossing his face"
2"she asked, not turning around"
3"Quinn said, her mind racing"
4"Quinn concluded, her voice steady"
76.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"She repeated (repeat)"
1"Quinn’s eyes analyzed (analyze)"
2"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
3"Miller muttered (mutter)"
4"Quinn corrected (correct)"
5"Quinn concluded (conclude)"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.488
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.146
76.4983%