| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 706 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 706 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "enigma" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "gleaming" | | 7 | "otherworldly" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "resonated" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "delved" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "down her spine" | | 14 | "depths" | | 15 | "quickened" | | 16 | "treacherous" | | 17 | "steeled" | | 18 | "trembled" | | 19 | "anticipation" | | 20 | "enigmatic" | | 21 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" |
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| 71.24% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 31 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a shiver" | | 1 | "d with anticipation" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 31 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 703 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.73% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 590 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Nyx | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.737 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 703 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.44% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 15 | | mean | 46.87 | | std | 14.16 | | cv | 0.302 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 36 | | ratio | 0.056 | | matches | | 0 | "She peered into the depths, and for an instant, she thought she saw a glimmer of a face staring back – a face that was not her own." | | 1 | "As they continued through the grove, the group encountered strange and wondrous sights: a ring of mushrooms that glowed with a soft, ethereal light; a copse of trees whose branches seemed to twist and writhe like living serpents; and a clearing filled with a dazzling array of wildflowers that shone like stars in the fading light." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 593 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.03541315345699832 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01011804384485666 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 36 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 36 | | mean | 19.53 | | std | 8.27 | | cv | 0.424 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 11 |
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| 64.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.3888888888888889 | | totalSentences | 36 | | uniqueOpeners | 14 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the weight of" | | 1 | "She felt the pulse of" | | 2 | "She peered into the depths," | | 3 | "She felt a presence lurking" | | 4 | "She felt the weight of" | | 5 | "she said, her voice firm," |
| | ratio | 0.194 | |
| 40.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's eyes adjusted slowly to" | | 1 | "The air was alive with" | | 2 | "She felt the weight of" | | 3 | "The silver chain of the" | | 4 | "The Half-Fae seer glided across" | | 5 | "Nyx, ever the enigma, shifted" | | 6 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 7 | "Aurora's gaze darted toward the" | | 8 | "The air seemed to vibrate" | | 9 | "She felt the pulse of" | | 10 | "Nyx solidified beside the pool's" | | 11 | "Isolde whispered, her voice barely" | | 12 | "Aurora felt a shiver run" | | 13 | "The water's surface seemed to" | | 14 | "She peered into the depths," | | 15 | "Nyx's whisper carried on the" | | 16 | "She felt a presence lurking" | | 17 | "Isolde's hand closed around Aurora's" | | 18 | "the seer cautioned" | | 19 | "Aurora felt the weight of" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx solidified beside the pool's edge, their faintly glowing violet eyes reflecting the gentle ripples that disturbed the surface." | | 1 | "As they continued through the grove, the group encountered strange and wondrous sights: a ring of mushrooms that glowed with a soft, ethereal light; a copse of …" | | 2 | "With each step, the air grew thick with an expectant energy, as if the very fabric of reality was about to tear apart, revealing secrets hidden for centuries." | | 3 | "The air seemed to vibrate with an energy that resonated deep within Aurora's chest, and the pulse of the Heartstone Pendant quickened, as if it too sensed the p…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes gleaming with an otherworldly intensity" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes gleaming with an otherworldly intensity" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |