Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021JGR3VRSPAPYNB10Y0

Run Details

Duration:
10.3s
Cost:
$0.000607
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just after midnight, sharp and insistent, like someone had pressed their knuckles to the wood and refused to lift them. Rory froze mid-sip, the lukewarm tea sloshing over the rim of her mug. Ptolemy’s ears twitched, his tail flicking once before he slunk under the sofa. No one visited at this hour—not unless they were lost, drunk, or trouble. She set the mug down with a quiet *clink* and wiped her palms on her thighs. The flat smelled of old paper and the faint, lingering spice of the curry house below. Three deadbolts. She’d installed them herself after the last time Evan had shown up, after the restraining order, after the way his voice had slithered through the letterbox like smoke. *You can’t hide forever, Laila.* The knock came again. Not a fist this time—knuckles, precise. Deliberate. Rory exhaled through her nose and crossed the room. The floorboards creaked under her bare feet. She pressed her eye to the peephole. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim glow of the hallway light, his platinum hair slicked back, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the hour. One hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane, the other tucked into his pocket. His face was unreadable, but then, it always was. The amber eye caught the light, sharp as a blade, while the black one stayed in shadow. She should’ve known. Rory unlatched the first bolt. Then the second. The third stuck, as it always did, and she had to jiggle it before it gave with a metallic *thunk*. The door swung open just enough to let the hallway’s stale air rush in, carrying the scent of rain and something darker—something like burnt sugar and old books. Lucien didn’t wait for an invitation. He stepped inside, his shoulder brushing hers as he passed, close enough that she caught the faintest trace of his cologne—something expensive, something that made her stomach clench. The door clicked shut behind him. “You look like hell,” he said, his voice smooth, accented just enough to make the words sound like a caress. Rory crossed her arms. “What do you want, Luc?” He turned, leaning slightly on his cane, and let his gaze drag over her—rumpled T-shirt, sleep-mussed hair, the way her fingers dug into her own biceps. A smirk tugged at the corner of his mouth. “Can’t a man visit an old friend?” “At midnight? In *my* flat?” She gestured to the chaos around them—stacks of books teetering like Jenga towers, half-empty coffee cups, the glow of her laptop screen casting blue light over the chaos. “You don’t do *friendly*, Luc. So cut the shit.” His smirk deepened. “Always so direct.” He stepped further into the room, his cane tapping once against the floorboards before he set it aside, leaning it against the armchair. “I need your help.” Rory barked a laugh. “You’ve got to be joking.” “Do I look like I’m joking?” No. He didn’t. His heterochromatic eyes were too sharp, his posture too controlled. This wasn’t a social call. This was business. She exhaled, rubbing her temples. “Fine. Talk.” Lucien didn’t sit. Instead, he moved to the window, parting the curtains just enough to peer down at the street below. The neon glow of the curry house sign painted his profile in sickly orange. “There’s a job. A retrieval.” “Not interested.” “You haven’t heard the details.” “I don’t need to.” She dropped her hands. “Last time I worked with you, I ended up with a knife in my ribs and a demon’s curse hanging over my head. Remember?” His jaw tightened. “That wasn’t my fault.” “Wasn’t it?” She stepped closer, close enough to see the way his pupils dilated, just slightly, when she invaded his space. “You sent me into that warehouse blind. You *knew* what was in there.” “And you walked out alive.” His voice dropped, rougher now. “Because of me.” Silence stretched between them, thick and electric. The air smelled like ozone, like the moment before a storm breaks. Rory looked away first. “What’s the job?” Lucien turned back to the window, his reflection warped in the glass. “A book. Stolen from a private collector. He wants it back.” “Let me guess—it’s not just any book.” “No.” A beat. “It’s a grimoire. One that doesn’t belong in human hands.” She should’ve known. Of course it was something supernatural. Of course it was dangerous. “And why me?” “Because you’re the only one who can get it without setting off every alarm in the city.” He finally looked at her, his gaze locking onto hers. “And because I trust you.” The words hit like a punch to the gut. Trust. As if that word meant anything between them. Rory turned away, grabbing her mug and taking a long, scalding sip. The tea burned her throat. “Where is it?” “A gallery in Mayfair. Tomorrow night.” She set the mug down harder than she meant to. “You’re asking me to break into a gallery. *Tomorrow.*” “You’ve done worse.” “That’s not the point.” “Then what is?” He stepped closer, close enough that she could feel the heat of him, close enough that if she breathed too deeply, her chest would brush his. “You owe me, *Laila.*” The name—her old name, the one she’d shed like a skin—made her flinch. “Don’t call me that.” “Why not?” His voice was low, dangerous. “It’s who you are.” “No.” She met his gaze, unflinching. “It’s who I *was.*” For a second, neither of them moved. The air between them crackled, charged with something neither of them would name. Then Lucien exhaled, sharp and controlled, and took a step back. “Fine.” He reached into his jacket and pulled out a slim envelope, tossing it onto the coffee table. “The details are in there. The job pays fifty thousand.” Rory didn’t touch it. “I don’t need your money.” “Then do it for the thrill.” His lips quirked. “Or because you miss me.” She should’ve slapped him. Should’ve told him to get the hell out. But the words died in her throat because, god help her, part of her *did* miss him. Missed the way he looked at her like she was the only thing in the room worth seeing. Missed the way his voice dropped when he was angry, the way his hands— No. Rory snatched the envelope off the table and ripped it open. Inside was a single sheet of paper, a floor plan, and a keycard. She scanned the details, her mind already racing ahead, mapping out the job. “This is suicide.” “You’ve survived worse.” She glared at him. “That’s not reassuring.” “It wasn’t meant to be.” He picked up his cane, twirling it once before gripping the handle. “So. Are you in?” Rory looked at the paper in her hands. Then at him. At the way his suit clung to his shoulders, at the way his eyes burned into hers, daring her to say no. She should’ve said no. But she never could resist a challenge. “Fine.” She crumpled the paper in her fist. “But I’m not doing it for you.” Lucien’s smile was slow, triumphant. “Liar.” And then he was gone, the door clicking shut behind him, leaving her alone with the hum of the fridge and the weight of his words pressing down on her like a promise.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stepped further [further]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.491
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.038
91.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1233
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"stomach"
2"silence"
3"electric"
4"could feel"
5"charged"
6"scanned"
7"racing"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords14
totalWords1221
ratio0.011
matches
0"clink"
1"You can’t hide forever, Laila."
2"thunk"
3"my"
4"friendly"
5"knew"
6"Tomorrow."
7"Laila."
8"was."
9"did"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount946
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Evan1
Moreau1
Rory10
Jenga1
Silence1
Lucien6
persons
0"Evan"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Silence"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.971
windowScore1
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like burnt sugar and old books"
1"smelled like ozone, like the moment before"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1221
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean21.42
std17.32
cv0.808
sampleLengths
062
167
211
323
465
53
656
740
820
99
1042
1142
1233
139
146
1521
167
1740
182
195
2032
217
2234
2313
2419
257
2623
277
2813
2917
3032
3118
3220
336
3419
353
364
3733
3817
3911
4010
4131
4228
439
4414
4561
461
4740
483
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences130
ratio0.062
matches
0"No one visited at this hour—not unless they were lost, drunk, or trouble."
1"Not a fist this time—knuckles, precise."
2"The door swung open just enough to let the hallway’s stale air rush in, carrying the scent of rain and something darker—something like burnt sugar and old books."
3"He stepped inside, his shoulder brushing hers as he passed, close enough that she caught the faintest trace of his cologne—something expensive, something that made her stomach clench."
4"He turned, leaning slightly on his cane, and let his gaze drag over her—rumpled T-shirt, sleep-mussed hair, the way her fingers dug into her own biceps."
5"“At midnight? In *my* flat?” She gestured to the chaos around them—stacks of books teetering like Jenga towers, half-empty coffee cups, the glow of her laptop screen casting blue light over the chaos."
6"The name—her old name, the one she’d shed like a skin—made her flinch."
7"Missed the way his voice dropped when he was angry, the way his hands—"
91.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount957
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.050156739811912224
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006269592476489028
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean9.39
std7.52
cv0.801
sampleLengths
023
113
213
313
416
516
62
728
85
94
106
111
129
137
147
1523
1616
179
1817
193
205
213
2220
2328
246
2528
266
2720
284
295
3026
319
327
3333
349
353
3626
374
384
395
406
411
422
4310
445
453
465
472
483
4918
56.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36153846153846153
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Instead, he moved to the"
2"Of course it was something"
3"Of course it was dangerous."
4"Then Lucien exhaled, sharp and"
5"Then at him."
ratio0.071
69.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences85
matches
0"She set the mug down"
1"She’d installed them herself after"
2"*You can’t hide forever, Laila.*"
3"She pressed her eye to"
4"His face was unreadable, but"
5"She should’ve known."
6"He stepped inside, his shoulder"
7"he said, his voice smooth,"
8"He turned, leaning slightly on"
9"She gestured to the chaos"
10"His smirk deepened."
11"He stepped further into the"
12"His heterochromatic eyes were too"
13"She exhaled, rubbing her temples."
14"She dropped her hands"
15"His jaw tightened."
16"She stepped closer, close enough"
17"His voice dropped, rougher now"
18"She should’ve known."
19"He finally looked at her,"
ratio0.376
71.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences85
matches
0"The knock came just after"
1"Rory froze mid-sip, the lukewarm"
2"Ptolemy’s ears twitched, his tail"
3"She set the mug down"
4"The flat smelled of old"
5"She’d installed them herself after"
6"*You can’t hide forever, Laila.*"
7"The knock came again."
8"Rory exhaled through her nose"
9"The floorboards creaked under her"
10"She pressed her eye to"
11"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
12"His face was unreadable, but"
13"The amber eye caught the"
14"She should’ve known."
15"Rory unlatched the first bolt."
16"The third stuck, as it"
17"The door swung open just"
18"Lucien didn’t wait for an"
19"He stepped inside, his shoulder"
ratio0.776
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"As if that word meant"
ratio0.012
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He stepped inside, his shoulder brushing hers as he passed, close enough that she caught the faintest trace of his cologne—something expensive, something that m…"
1"And then he was gone, the door clicking shut behind him, leaving her alone with the hum of the fridge and the weight of his words pressing down on her like a pr…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.038
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.6852%