Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021JHGT768ET5GBH46RE

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Duration:
43.0s
Cost:
$0.022817
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door lurched open before Aurora could step back. Lucien Moreau filled the frame, his tailored charcoal jacket unsettlingly pristine, the ivory handle of his cane glinting under the hallway light. Her pulse thundered against her ribs. He leaned on the cane, one amber eye fixed on her bright blue stare, the other shaded like a darkened hall. A breath escaped her. He dipped a polite nod. “Mind if I come in?” She gripped her keys so hard the metal bit into her palm. She’d imagined this moment a thousand ways—angry refusals, slammed doors, his silhouette fading into fog—but never this calm, measured tone. Her throat worked. She let the word stumble out. “Fine.” He crossed the threshold, stepping gingerly as though testing for traps. Cardboard boxes from the Golden Empress sat stacked near the sofa. A faded copy of Pushkin lay open on the coffee table. She’d been reading it last night, though she could no longer recall why she bothered with Russian verse. He shut the door behind him. Silence swelled. She lifted her chin. “You look well.” He gave a half–smile that didn’t touch his eyes. “Marseille sun treats me kindly.” She closed the gap between them until he had to tilt his head. Too close, she reminded herself, his demon half still perched on his shoulder. She’d fled him once for secrets and half–truths. She wouldn’t repeat her mistake. He inhaled slowly, scent of tobacco and cedar. “I didn’t mean to vanish.” Her jaw clenched. “You left a note.” She lifted a crumpled sheet from the floor. “Three lines of apology and then nothing.” He reached for it, stopped himself. “I left because I had to.” She searched his eyes for a flicker of regret. Found calculation instead. “You always did love dramatic exits.” He studied the paint peeling near the skirting board. “Not today.” She crossed her arms. “Then why are you here? I don’t need your explanations.” He straightened his spine and clicked his cane on the wooden floor. “Because you do.” Her pulse zinged. Oxygen turned to fire in her lungs. “No, I don’t.” He tucked a lock of platinum hair behind his ear, careful as a surgeon. “Aurora, listen. I tried to shield you.” She barked a laugh. “You shielded me by disappearing.” He met her gaze. “By keeping you safe.” She snorted. “Safe? You left me with questions, Lucien. You left me alone in a city crawling with shadows.” He stepped closer. “I left because they threatened to break through that door.” His voice dropped to a whisper. “And they knew your name.” She stared at the lock on the door. Three deadbolts? No. That was Eva’s Flat. But her flat above Silas’s bar only had one. He’d found her anyway. Her shoulders sagged for a heartbeat. Then she lifted her chin, anger flaring. “You think you can barge in and fix this?” He met that flare with his own burn. “I intend to.” She flicked out her wrist. The faint crescent scar caught the light. “I don’t need your protection.” He reached for her hand, fingers brushing the scar. She jerked away, heart jarring. “Stop.” He closed his eyes for a moment. When he opened them, both colours burned. “Aurora, I’m sorry.” That word hammered against her defences. Hurt welled up. She swallowed. “Sorry doesn’t… doesn’t erase months of silence.” He exhaled good air, steadying himself. “No, it doesn’t. I know you have every right to— A crash sounded from below, like wood splintering against stone. They froze. She swallowed thickly. “What was that?” He pivoted, cane raised. “Trouble.” Another crack, then a heavy footfall on the floor beneath. He turned back, eyes glinting with warning. “Someone’s on their way up.” She felt the walls close in. This was why he’d come. Not for her forgiveness but to warn her they weren’t alone. “Who?” He didn’t answer. He nocked his cane against his palm. “Get back.” She hesitated. Then edged towards the sofa, kicking aside a cushion with trembling foot. He pivoted smoothly, body coiled. Footsteps thudded below. She pressed her back to the wall, legs trembling. He pointed at the door. “The lock. Help me.” She dropped to her knees, yanking at the bolt. It refused. Panic fluttered in her chest. He strode to her side. One gloved hand hovered over her head. With a flick, he disarmed both deadbolts—no, one bolt, then kicked the door shut. The latch snapped. Behind them the outer door rattled as someone tried to force their way in. He opened the door to the living room, cane raised. “Stay behind me.” She pressed against the armrest. Dust motes danced in the lamplight, the city’s hush leaking through the single pane. He met her eyes. “Are you hurt?” Her pulse thundered too loud to lie. “No.” He nodded and turned back to the corridor. Shadows pooled near the stairs. She watched him tighten his jaw. A heavy knock rang through the door they’d just bolted. Then a voice, low and mocking. “Lucien Moreau. Fancy meeting you here.” His amber eye flicked to the crack beneath the door. He whispered, “Hide.” She scrambled behind the coffee table, heart in her throat. He slipped to the door, cane cocked like a gun. He whispered her name. She shook her head, pressed her cheek to the cool wood. The bolt rattled under pounding fists. He pressed his ear to the door. Then straightened. He glanced at her, expression unreadable. “We have company.” Her legs shook so badly she couldn’t stand. He crouched beside her and offered his hand. She stared at it, torn between fear and longing. Her fingers curled before she gripped his. His warmth flowed through her glove. He hauled her up and half–drifted, half–carried her behind the sofa. Footsteps thundered up the stairs. The floorboards groaned under heavy boots. He slid silently along the wall. She followed, breath flat. They reached the archway into the kitchenette. She saw the peeling wallpaper stained by steam and the dented fridge. The place looked ordinary—cozy even. And now, impossible to defend. He reached the knife concealed in his cane and flicked it free. The blade gleamed obsidian in the lamp’s glow. He slid the handle against the wood frame, ready to strike. A shout made her flinch. “Open up!” A voice she didn’t know. He pressed his finger to his lips. “Quiet.” Her scar throbbed. She curled her fists. If he died here—he wouldn’t. She wouldn’t let that happen. He closed his eyes. Then he inhaled. “Aurora, on three we spring.” She searched his face. The demon side bared its teeth. But his human side trembled. “One…” His voice lowered until only she heard. “Two…” A crash from the door. Splinters flew. “Three.” He flung open the door before they had time to hesitate. The figure in the corridor froze at the sight of the blade. He advanced in a single fluid step, cane–knife slicing the air. The intruder backed away, hands up. She watched Lucien move, his platinum hair brushing his collar, amber and black eyes cold beneath neatly arched brows. His blade arced in a spark of metal on wood. She realised then exactly why he had to return. Only he could face what waited beyond her door. The intruder fled down the stairs, crashing into something on the second step. Lucien didn’t pursue. He turned and beckoned her forward. She felt the heat in her cheeks as she climbed the few steps to reach him, her hand still in his. Every thrum of her heartbeat told her they stood together again, just as dangerously close as months ago. He reached the landing, paused, and met her eyes. “I promised you safety.” She drew in a breath. The flat behind them held no refuge. Danger pressed from below. But here, beside him, she felt an odd certainty. He lowered his blade. “We leave now.” Her gaze strayed to the street light filtering through the window above Silas’s bar. She pictured the night waiting outside. It offered no comfort, only fresh threats. He slipped an arm around her waist. His touch scorched through her coat. She didn’t step back. His lips brushed her temple. “Trust me.” She inhaled cedar and something fiercer. A promise, or a warning. Footsteps began again on the hallway floor below. This time closer. Metal scraped wood. He tightened his grip. “Time to go.” She nodded, voice caught in her throat. Together they slipped down the stairs into the pulse of London night, danger at their heels, old wounds raw beneath the moonless sky.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She swallowed thickly. [thickly]"
1"He turned back [back]"
2"Her pulse thundered too [too]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.449
leniency0.898
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.122
96.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1442
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"lurched"
count1
1
word"pristine"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count4
4
word"thundered"
count3
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"jaw clenched"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count3
11
word"footfall"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count3
13
word"fluttered"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count1
16
word"warmth"
count1
17
word"throbbed"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"lurched"
1"pristine"
2"glinting"
3"pulse"
4"thundered"
5"measured"
6"silence"
7"jaw clenched"
8"flicker"
9"whisper"
10"flicked"
11"footfall"
12"footsteps"
13"fluttered"
14"pounding"
15"unreadable"
16"warmth"
17"throbbed"
18"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences111
matches
0"a flicker of regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1432
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1234
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.24
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
Pushkin1
Russian1
Eva1
Flat1
Silas2
Lucien3
London1
Footsteps3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Moreau"
2"Empress"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Lucien"
6"Footsteps"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though testing for traps"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.698
wordCount1432
matches
0"Not for her forgiveness but to warn her they weren’t alone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"met that flare"
1"let that happen"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs83
mean17.25
std9.27
cv0.537
sampleLengths
037
125
210
332
410
551
68
77
814
939
1013
1122
1212
1318
1411
1514
1615
1713
1821
199
208
2119
2224
2328
2422
2511
2617
2715
2817
2918
3016
3112
326
335
3422
3523
3612
3719
3812
399
4016
4129
4214
4313
4419
457
468
4719
4822
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs246
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences136
ratio0.059
matches
0"She’d imagined this moment a thousand ways—angry refusals, slammed doors, his silhouette fading into fog—but never this calm, measured tone."
1"He gave a half–smile that didn’t touch his eyes."
2"She’d fled him once for secrets and half–truths."
3"He strode to her side. One gloved hand hovered over her head. With a flick, he disarmed both deadbolts—no, one bolt, then kicked the door shut. The latch snapped."
4"His warmth flowed through her glove. He hauled her up and half–drifted, half–carried her behind the sofa."
5"He slid silently along the wall. She followed, breath flat. They reached the archway into the kitchenette. She saw the peeling wallpaper stained by steam and the dented fridge. The place looked ordinary—cozy even. And now, impossible to defend."
6"Her scar throbbed. She curled her fists. If he died here—he wouldn’t. She wouldn’t let that happen."
7"He advanced in a single fluid step, cane–knife slicing the air. The intruder backed away, hands up."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount454
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.037444933920704845
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.00881057268722467
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean10.53
std7.94
cv0.754
sampleLengths
09
122
26
321
44
55
65
712
820
93
106
111
1211
1311
1411
1518
166
172
184
193
209
215
2213
2313
248
255
268
275
283
2912
307
316
326
339
343
356
369
372
384
3910
4012
413
423
437
443
4514
467
474
485
494
46.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.27941176470588236
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners38
63.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"Too close, she reminded herself,"
1"Then she lifted her chin,"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount78
totalSentences105
matches
0"Her pulse thundered against her"
1"He leaned on the cane,"
2"He dipped a polite nod."
3"She gripped her keys so"
4"She’d imagined this moment a"
5"Her throat worked."
6"She let the word stumble"
7"He crossed the threshold, stepping"
8"She’d been reading it last"
9"He shut the door behind"
10"She lifted her chin."
11"He gave a half–smile that"
12"She closed the gap between"
13"She’d fled him once for"
14"She wouldn’t repeat her mistake."
15"He inhaled slowly, scent of"
16"Her jaw clenched."
17"She lifted a crumpled sheet"
18"He reached for it, stopped"
19"She searched his eyes for"
ratio0.743
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences105
matches
0"The door lurched open before"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the frame,"
2"Her pulse thundered against her"
3"He leaned on the cane,"
4"A breath escaped her."
5"He dipped a polite nod."
6"She gripped her keys so"
7"She’d imagined this moment a"
8"Her throat worked."
9"She let the word stumble"
10"He crossed the threshold, stepping"
11"Cardboard boxes from the Golden"
12"A faded copy of Pushkin"
13"She’d been reading it last"
14"He shut the door behind"
15"She lifted her chin."
16"He gave a half–smile that"
17"She closed the gap between"
18"She’d fled him once for"
19"She wouldn’t repeat her mistake."
ratio0.924
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
88.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"His amber eye flicked (flick)"
1"He pressed (press)"
2"He pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.122
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.122
79.0892%