Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021K848VMFVEGN2SXS03

Run Details

Duration:
20.9s
Cost:
$0.009649
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain rattled once, then again, before the door cracked open just enough for Eva’s voice to slice through the gap. "What in the name of all that’s cursed are you doing here, Aurora?" Rory stood on the worn welcome mat, shoulders hunched against the drizzle that had clung to East London all afternoon. Her delivery pouch, still strapped across her chest, bore the golden phoenix of the *Golden Empress* faded at the seams. Rainwater glistened in her black hair, framing a face that had learned to wear stillness like armor. Eva hadn’t changed—same auburn curls pinned messily atop her head, same smudged reading glasses perched on her nose, same oversized jumper swallowing her frame. But her eyes, sharp and green as broken glass, hadn’t softened. "I needed to see you," Rory said. Her voice was low, calm, but the fingers curled around the strap of her bag trembled once before she caught them. Eva stepped back, didn’t open the door wider. Ptolemy, the tabby, wound around her ankles and peered out with disinterest at the unwelcome guest. "You *needed*?" Eva’s laugh was brittle. "You vanish for eight months. No note, no message. Just a single text—*I’m leaving, don’t look for me*—and now, out of the blue, you show up soaked and expect to just… walk back in?" "I didn’t know where else to go." That stopped her. Eva exhaled through her nose, studied Rory like she was parsing a spell gone wrong. Behind her, the flat breathed—paper-thin walls humming with the curry house’s extractor fan, the creak of old floorboards, the rustle of scrolls as wind slipped through a cracked window. Then, grudgingly, Eva undid the chain. Rory stepped inside. The warmth hit her first—thick, spiced air layered with old paper, jasmine tea, and the faint metallic tang of dried herbs. Books spilled from sagging shelves. Scrolls lay unrolled on the kitchen table, weighted down by a cracked geode and a half-empty mug of something dark. Symbols Rory didn’t recognize pulsed faintly at the margins under low lamplight. "You still keep wards on the windows," Rory murmured, toeing off her damp boots. "Learned my lesson," Eva said flatly. "People disappearing in the night tends to do that." Rory flinched. Ptolemy circled her legs once, then retreated beneath the sofa. Eva folded her arms. "So. What changed? Did your conscience finally catch up? Or did Yu-Fei fire you for being a ghost?" "I’m not working for Yu-Fei anymore." "Oh?" Eva arched a brow. "And what noble cause has Aurora Carter thrown herself into this time?" "I’m freelance." "Running packages between witches and warlocks? Playing courier in the underbelly again?" Rory’s jaw tightened, a muscle flickering near her temple. "I needed distance. From everything. From *him*." Eva softened—just a fraction. "You didn’t have to disappear from *me*." "You wouldn’t have let me go." "No. I wouldn’t." Eva turned, walking to the kettle. It whistled a moment later, high and sharp. "You scared the hell out of me, Rory. One day you’re here, crashing on my sofa, talking about suing the university for wrongful dismissal when they dropped your funding. The next, you’re gone. No calls. Nothing." "I didn’t want you involved." "Involved in what?" Eva spun, tea spoon frozen in midair. "Evan? Please. I’d already hexed his car tires flat when he followed you here that one time. You think I’d hesitate to ruin the rest of him?" Rory looked down. The scar on her wrist—pale, crescent-shaped—caught the lamplight as she rubbed it absentmindedly. "I didn’t want you to have to," she said quietly. Silence stretched. Eva set the spoon down. She poured hot water into two chipped mugs, dropped in teabags without asking. "You were always the one who thought running was the same as surviving," she said, softer now. Rory took the mug. The heat seeped into her palms. She didn’t drink. "I made a mess of things," she admitted. "With you. With… everything." "Understatement." "I came back because I need help. Not with Evan—he’s in prison. Blackwood Asylum, actually. Fraud, assault, possession of restricted grimoires. Lucien sent him there." Eva froze. "Lucien Moreau? The *Frenchman* helped you?" Rory nodded. "He’s… complicated. But he keeps his word." Eva studied her. "You trust him." "Not blindly. But he's saved my life twice. Once when Evan’s people came after me in Camden. Once when I nearly drowned in the Thames running from a shade he *swore* wasn’t his fault." A faint smile tugged at Eva’s lips. "Sounds like you’ve been busy." "I’ve been trying to stay alive." "And now?" Rory looked up. Her bright blue eyes met Eva’s. Not pleading. Not demanding. Just present. "Now I want to come back. To London. To… this." She gestured vaguely at the cluttered flat, the life still vibrating in its corners despite her absence. "If you’ll let me." Eva didn’t answer right away. She walked to the window, undid a pin, and traced a sigil into the glass. It glowed faintly blue, then faded. A ward reinforced. "You remember the first time you stayed here?" Eva asked. Rory let out a small breath. "You were translating that Sumerian curse tablet. I spilled tea on it." "You *did*. And I screamed so loud the ceiling cracked." Eva turned, a real smile breaking through. "You stayed anyway. Made me laugh about it later. Said cursed tea would give me *extra insight*." "I stand by that." Eva stepped closer. Close enough that Rory could see the freckles dusting her nose, the faint shadow beneath her eyes. She reached out, slow, hesitant, and brushed a strand of wet hair from Rory’s forehead. "You look tired," she said. "I’ve been running for a long time." "You don’t have to anymore." The air between them shifted—charged, fragile. Not quite safe. But open. Eva’s fingers lingered at Rory’s temple, then dropped. "You can sleep on the sofa," she said. "But I’m changing the locks again tomorrow. And if you vanish like that again, I won’t come looking. I’ll let the next curse find you." Rory nodded. "Fair." "And you’re helping me clean this mess." "Deal." Eva turned toward the kitchen, then paused, not looking back. "You could’ve called, Rory." "I know." "I missed you." Rory closed her eyes. For the first time in months, something in her chest cracked, not broke. "I missed you too."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Eva said flatly [flatly]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
2"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.259
leniency0.519
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.111
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords16
totalWords1054
ratio0.015
matches
0"Golden Empress"
1"needed"
2"I’m leaving, don’t look for me"
3"him"
4"me"
5"Frenchman"
6"swore"
7"did"
8"extra insight"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount577
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity3.99
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva23
East1
London1
Rory18
Silence1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Silence"
places
0"East"
1"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1054
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean16.47
std14.23
cv0.864
sampleLengths
021
113
257
335
428
524
640
77
847
96
1061
1114
1215
132
1414
1518
166
1717
182
1912
2016
2111
226
2353
245
2537
2616
2710
2820
2917
3013
3112
321
3325
348
359
366
3734
3812
396
402
4115
4231
4329
4410
4518
4634
474
4835
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs118
matches
0"was parsing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences111
ratio0.054
matches
0"Eva hadn’t changed—same auburn curls pinned messily atop her head, same smudged reading glasses perched on her nose, same oversized jumper swallowing her frame."
1"Behind her, the flat breathed—paper-thin walls humming with the curry house’s extractor fan, the creak of old floorboards, the rustle of scrolls as wind slipped through a cracked window."
2"The warmth hit her first—thick, spiced air layered with old paper, jasmine tea, and the faint metallic tang of dried herbs."
3"Eva softened—just a fraction."
4"The scar on her wrist—pale, crescent-shaped—caught the lamplight as she rubbed it absentmindedly."
5"The air between them shifted—charged, fragile."
88.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount587
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.05281090289608177
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.013628620102214651
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean9.5
std7.88
cv0.83
sampleLengths
021
113
220
320
417
524
611
77
821
98
1016
116
1234
137
143
1515
1629
176
183
1921
205
2120
2212
2314
246
259
262
2710
284
2918
306
315
3212
332
3412
359
367
374
387
396
409
418
4236
435
4410
4527
463
4713
4810
492
57.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3783783783783784
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners42
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Then, grudgingly, Eva undid the"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences58
matches
0"Her delivery pouch, still strapped"
1"Her voice was low, calm,"
2"It whistled a moment later,"
3"she said quietly"
4"She poured hot water into"
5"she said, softer now"
6"She didn’t drink."
7"Her bright blue eyes met"
8"She gestured vaguely at the"
9"She walked to the window,"
10"It glowed faintly blue, then"
11"She reached out, slow, hesitant,"
ratio0.207
11.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences58
matches
0"The chain rattled once, then"
1"Rory stood on the worn"
2"Her delivery pouch, still strapped"
3"Rainwater glistened in her black"
4"Eva hadn’t changed—same auburn curls"
5"Her voice was low, calm,"
6"Eva stepped back, didn’t open"
7"Ptolemy, the tabby, wound around"
8"Eva’s laugh was brittle"
9"That stopped her."
10"Eva exhaled through her nose,"
11"Rory stepped inside."
12"The warmth hit her first—thick,"
13"Books spilled from sagging shelves."
14"Scrolls lay unrolled on the"
15"Symbols Rory didn’t recognize pulsed"
16"Rory murmured, toeing off her"
17"Eva said flatly"
18"Ptolemy circled her legs once,"
19"Eva folded her arms."
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory stood on the worn welcome mat, shoulders hunched against the drizzle that had clung to East London all afternoon."
1"Rainwater glistened in her black hair, framing a face that had learned to wear stillness like armor."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She gestured vaguely, the life still vibrating in its corners despite her absence"
1"Eva turned, a real smile breaking through"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.074
79.4939%