Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021N1J8S3DE321ZF1M25

Run Details

Duration:
13.0s
Cost:
$0.000600

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the hushed quiet of the Richmond Park dawn, Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stood before the ancient oak standing stones, their silhouettes stark against the faint lavender glow of the Fae Grove. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and blooming wildflowers, a symphony of colors that seemed to shift and change with every breath. Rory's heart pounded in her chest, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a nervous habit she'd thought she'd outgrown. Nyx, their form solid but somehow translucent, turned to Rory. "Are you sure about this, Rory? The Grove is not a place to be taken lightly." Their voice was a whisper, a rustle of leaves carried on the wind. Rory took a deep breath, her gaze flicking to Isolde. The Half-Fae seer stood serenely, her silver hair cascading down to her waist, her pale lavender eyes reflecting the grove's ethereal glow. "We need answers, Nyx," Rory said, her voice steady despite the butterflies in her stomach. "And Isolde believes they're here." Isolde smiled, her eyes crinkling at the corners. "Belief is the first step, child," she said, her voice a soft, melodic hum. "But yes, the answers you seek are within the Grove. Come." She stepped forward, her feet leaving no prints on the dew-kissed grass. The Grove swallowed them whole. The standing stones seemed to blur, their ancient faces watching, judging. The air grew colder, heavier, as they ventured deeper. The wildflowers here were unlike any they'd seen before, their petals iridescent, their colors shifting like a sunset in fast-forward. Rory reached out, her fingers brushing against a petal as soft as velvet. It shimmered, changed color, and she snatched her hand back, a gasp escaping her lips. "It's... it's alive," she stammered, her breath fogging in the suddenly frigid air. Nyx chuckled, a sound like dry leaves crunching underfoot. "Everything here is, Rory. The Grove is a living, breathing entity. It's aware of us, watching us." A sudden rustle echoed through the grove, and a creature darted across their path. It was small, no larger than a cat, with fur that seemed to absorb the light, leaving only shadows in its wake. Its eyes were twin orbs of violet, like Nyx's, and it left no footprints in its wake. "That," Isolde said, her voice barely above a whisper, "was a Shadowling. A creature of the spaces between realms. It's a good omen, a sign that we're on the right path." Rory swallowed hard, her eyes wide. "Omen? I thought we were just looking for answers, not... not signs from the universe." Isolde laughed, a sound like wind chimes. "Answers are signs, child. They're all connected." They continued, the grove growing denser, the air heavier. The trees here were unlike any they'd seen before, their trunks twisted, their branches intertwined, forming a canopy that blocked out the sky. The only light came from the glowing flowers, casting eerie shadows that seemed to move of their own accord. Nyx paused, their form wavering. "Something's not right," they said, their voice a low growl. "The Grove feels... wrong. Tainted." Rory's hand went to her Fae-Forged Blade, the moonsilver cold against her palm. She could feel it too, a wrongness that made her skin crawl, her stomach churn. "Can you pinpoint it?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx closed their eyes, their form dissolving into a cloud of shadows that spread out, seeping into the ground, the trees, the very air. After what felt like an eternity, they reformed, their eyes glowing brighter. "It's coming from ahead," they said, their voice grim. "A rift. A tear in the Veil." Isolde nodded, her expression grave. "That's what we've come to seal," she said. "But we must be careful. Rifts are unpredictable. They can be... dangerous." They pressed on, the wrongness growing stronger, the air heavier. The trees here were dead, their branches bare, their trunks blackened, twisted. The flowers were gone, replaced by a thick, choking mist that seemed to cling to their skin, their clothes. Rory coughed, her eyes watering. "This is... this is Hel," she gasped, her heart pounding in her chest. "This is what Hel feels like." Nyx nodded, their form flickering. "Yes," they said, their voice a low growl. "And it's getting stronger. We need to find the rift, seal it, before it's too late." They found the rift in a clearing, a pool of darkness in the heart of the Grove. It was a circle of nothingness, a void that seemed to swallow all light, all sound, all hope. The air around it shimmered, the Veil weakened, the boundary between realms thin, fragile. Rory approached, her heart in her throat. She could feel it, the power of the rift, the wrongness, the danger. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the edge of the darkness. It was cold, colder than anything she'd ever felt, and it seemed to... pulse, like a heartbeat. Suddenly, a figure stepped out of the darkness. It was a man, tall, imposing, his eyes burning with a cold, malevolent light. He was dressed in finery, his clothes rich, his jewelry gleaming, but there was something wrong, something off about him. His skin was pale, almost translucent, and his eyes... his eyes were empty, hollow. "Who are you?" Rory asked, her voice steady despite the fear that gripped her heart. "What do you want?" The man smiled, a cold, cruel smile that sent a shiver down Rory's spine. "I am Belphegor," he said, his voice a low purr. "Prince of Gluttony, Ruler of Dymas. And I want what is mine." Rory's hand tightened around her blade, her heart pounding in her chest. "And what, exactly, is yours?" she asked, her voice steady despite the fear that gripped her heart. Belphegor's gaze flicked to the Heartstone Pendant around Rory's neck, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly with warmth. "That," he said, his voice a low growl. "It belongs to me. It always has." Rory's hand went to the pendant, her fingers closing around it protectively. "No," she said, her voice firm. "It was given to me. It's mine." Belphegor laughed, a sound like thunder. "Nothing is yours, mortal," he said, his voice a low growl. "Not in this place. Not in this realm. Everything belongs to me." Nyx stepped forward, their form solidifying, their eyes glowing brighter. "Not everything, Belphegor," they said, their voice a low growl. "Some things belong to the shadows. And we won't let you take them." Belphegor sneered, his eyes flashing with anger. "You think you can stop me, Shade? You think you can stand against a Prince of Hel?" Nyx smiled, a cold, cruel smile that sent a shiver down Rory's spine. "We've done it before," they said, their voice a low growl. "And we'll do it again." The battle was swift, brutal. Belphegor was a formidable foe, his power immense, his attacks relentless. But Rory, Nyx, and Isolde were a formidable team, their skills complementing each other, their attacks precise, their defenses solid. Rory fought with the Fae-Forged Blade, its moonsilver glowing brightly in the darkness, its edge cutting through Belphegor's attacks with ease. Nyx fought with shadows, their form dissolving, reforming, striking from unexpected angles, their attacks hitting their mark with deadly accuracy. Isolde fought with her mind, her eyes glowing with a soft, ethereal light, her spells striking Belphegor with a force that seemed to shake the very air. Belphegor fought back, his attacks powerful, his defenses solid. He was a formidable foe, but he was no match for the three of them. With a final, desperate attack, he lunged at Rory, his eyes burning with hatred, his hands outstretched, his fingers like claws. But Rory was ready. She sidestepped his attack, her blade flashing, and with a final, powerful strike, she cut through his neck, his head falling to the ground with a thud, his body dissolving into shadows, swallowed by the darkness. The rift closed, the darkness receding, the wrongness fading. The Grove was safe once more, the boundary between realms restored. Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stood there, panting, their bodies aching, their hearts pounding, but alive, victorious. Rory looked at the Heartstone Pendant, its gemstone pulsing faintly with warmth. "He said this belonged to him," she said, her voice soft. "Do you think... do you think he was telling the truth?" Nyx looked at her, their eyes glowing softly. "It doesn't matter, Rory," they said, their voice a low growl. "It's yours now. You earned it. You fought for it. That's all that matters." Isolde nodded, her eyes crinkling at the corners. "Yes," she said, her voice a soft hum. "It's yours, child. And with it, you have the power to protect this realm, to keep it safe from those who would seek to harm it." Rory looked at the pendant, then at Nyx, then at Isolde. She took a deep breath, her heart swelling with pride, with determination. "Then I'll do just that," she said, her voice firm. "I'll protect this realm. I'll keep it safe. I promise." And with that, the three of them turned, leaving the Grove behind, ready to face whatever came next, together.
total_cost0.0006004500000000001

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1542
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count2
4
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"suddenly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"very"
4"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1542
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"symphony"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count3
4
word"cascading"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count2
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"wavering"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count2
11
word"churn"
count1
12
word"grave"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count3
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"imposing"
count1
16
word"gleaming"
count1
17
word"flicked"
count1
18
word"warmth"
count2
highlights
0"stark"
1"symphony"
2"tracing"
3"whisper"
4"cascading"
5"stomach"
6"velvet"
7"shimmered"
8"echoed"
9"wavering"
10"could feel"
11"churn"
12"grave"
13"pounding"
14"pulse"
15"imposing"
16"gleaming"
17"flicked"
18"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count2
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"The air was thick with"
2"sent a shiver down"
90.99% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences98
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"g with anger"
2"y with warmth"
3"g with pride"
26.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1536
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions76
wordCount1182
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory23
Nyx14
Isolde11
Fae4
Grove5
Half-Fae1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Veil1
Belphegor7
Heartstone2
Pendant2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Blade"
4"Veil"
5"Belphegor"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Heartstone"
5"Pendant"
globalScore0.527
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"colors that seemed to shift and change with every breath"
1"fur that seemed to absorb the light, leaving only shadows in its wake"
2"shadows that seemed to move of their own accord"
3"felt like an eternity, they reformed, t"
4"mist that seemed to cling to their skin, their clothes"
5"void that seemed to swallow all light, all sound, all hope"
6"force that seemed to shake the very air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1536
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
60.16% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean37.46
std13.51
cv0.361
sampleLengths
080
139
252
345
445
541
626
753
831
921
1014
1151
1220
1340
1452
1525
1641
1724
1829
1949
2049
2156
2219
2336
2429
2533
2625
2729
2833
2924
3029
3136
3268
3345
3440
3536
3634
3733
3842
3943
4019
98.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"were gone"
1"was dressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs212
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences119
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1188
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.026094276094276093
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.010942760942760943
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean12.91
std6.45
cv0.5
sampleLengths
032
126
222
310
429
510
622
715
85
98
1014
1123
125
1311
149
1520
1613
1715
1813
199
2017
2114
2222
2317
2431
256
2615
277
287
299
3023
3119
325
3310
345
3513
3615
3712
3824
3912
409
417
425
438
4412
4510
4612
4719
485
4913
47.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3445378151260504
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners41
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Suddenly, a figure stepped out"
ratio0.01
63.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences97
matches
0"Their voice was a whisper,"
1"she said, her voice a"
2"She stepped forward, her feet"
3"It shimmered, changed color, and"
4"she stammered, her breath fogging"
5"It was small, no larger"
6"Its eyes were twin orbs"
7"They continued, the grove growing"
8"they said, their voice a"
9"She could feel it too,"
10"she asked, her voice barely"
11"they said, their voice grim"
12"They pressed on, the wrongness"
13"she gasped, her heart pounding"
14"they said, their voice a"
15"They found the rift in"
16"It was a circle of"
17"She could feel it, the"
18"She reached out, her fingers"
19"It was cold, colder than"
ratio0.392
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences97
matches
0"The air was thick with"
1"Rory's heart pounded in her"
2"Nyx, their form solid but"
3"Their voice was a whisper,"
4"Rory took a deep breath,"
5"The Half-Fae seer stood serenely,"
6"Rory said, her voice steady"
7"Isolde smiled, her eyes crinkling"
8"she said, her voice a"
9"She stepped forward, her feet"
10"The Grove swallowed them whole."
11"The standing stones seemed to"
12"The air grew colder, heavier,"
13"The wildflowers here were unlike"
14"Rory reached out, her fingers"
15"It shimmered, changed color, and"
16"she stammered, her breath fogging"
17"Nyx chuckled, a sound like"
18"A sudden rustle echoed through"
19"It was small, no larger"
ratio0.928
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and blooming wildflowers, a symphony of colors that seemed to shift and change with every breath."
1"The only light came from the glowing flowers, casting eerie shadows that seemed to move of their own accord."
2"She could feel it too, a wrongness that made her skin crawl, her stomach churn."
3"Nyx closed their eyes, their form dissolving into a cloud of shadows that spread out, seeping into the ground, the trees, the very air."
4"Nyx stepped forward, their form solidifying, their eyes glowing brighter."
5"Rory fought with the Fae-Forged Blade, its moonsilver glowing brightly in the darkness, its edge cutting through Belphegor's attacks with ease."
6"Nyx fought with shadows, their form dissolving, reforming, striking from unexpected angles, their attacks hitting their mark with deadly accuracy."
7"Isolde fought with her mind, her eyes glowing with a soft, ethereal light, her spells striking Belphegor with a force that seemed to shake the very air."
8"She sidestepped his attack, her blade flashing, and with a final, powerful strike, she cut through his neck, his head falling to the ground with a thud, his bod…"
9"Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stood there, panting, their bodies aching, their hearts pounding, but alive, victorious."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount22
matches
0"Rory said, her voice steady despite the butterflies in her stomach"
1"she said, her voice a soft, melodic hum"
2"She stepped, her feet leaving no prints on the dew-kissed grass"
3"she stammered, her breath fogging in the suddenly frigid air"
4"Isolde said, her voice barely above a whisper,"
5"they said, their voice a low growl"
6"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"they said, their voice grim"
8"she gasped, her heart pounding in her chest"
9"they said, their voice a low growl"
10"Rory asked, her voice steady despite the fear that gripped her heart"
11"he said, his voice a low purr"
12"she asked, her voice steady despite the fear that gripped her heart"
13"he said, his voice a low growl"
14"she said, her voice firm"
15"he said, his voice a low growl"
16"they said, their voice a low growl"
17"they said, their voice a low growl"
18"she said, her voice soft"
19"they said, their voice a low growl"
20"she said, her voice a soft hum"
21"she said, her voice firm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she stammered (stammer)"
1"she gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences45
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