Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021NW3RSEVVBT2K58RJM

Run Details

Duration:
8.6s
Cost:
$0.000818
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory’s knuckles could rap a second time against the wood. Eva stood there, barefoot in a rumpled oversized jumper, her dark curls tangled from sleep. The flat smelled of stale coffee and something sharper—burnt paper, maybe. Or gunpowder. “You look like hell,” Eva said, stepping aside. Rory didn’t answer. She shouldered past, the strap of her delivery bag digging into her collarbone. The flat was exactly as she remembered—cluttered, chaotic, alive. Scrolls and books spilled across the floor, a half-empty mug of tea balanced precariously on a stack of journals. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, eyed her from the sofa before stretching and sauntering off. “You’re bleeding,” Eva said. Rory touched her wrist. The crescent scar had split open again, a thin line of red welling against her skin. She wiped it on her jeans. “It’s nothing.” Eva exhaled through her nose, a sound that was half laugh, half frustration. “Right. Because you always show up at my door at midnight with a busted wrist and that look on your face.” “What look?” “The one that says you’ve either killed someone or are about to.” Rory dropped her bag onto the kitchen counter. The flat was small enough that the movement sent a stack of papers sliding to the floor. She didn’t apologise. “I need a favour.” Eva crossed her arms. “No.” “You haven’t even heard what it is.” “I don’t need to. Last time you asked for a favour, I ended up in a police station with a concussion and a very angry vampire.” Rory picked up a book from the counter—*The Occult in Modern London*—and flipped through it. The pages were dog-eared, margins scribbled with Eva’s messy handwriting. “This isn’t like that.” “It’s never like that. Until it is.” Eva grabbed the book back and slammed it shut. “What do you want, Rory?” Rory hesitated. The words stuck in her throat, thick and bitter. She hadn’t planned on coming here. Hadn’t planned on seeing Eva again, not after the way things had ended. But the alternative was worse. “I need you to find someone for me.” Eva’s expression didn’t change, but her fingers tightened around the book’s spine. “Who?” “Lucien Moreau.” The name hung between them, heavy and charged. Eva’s laugh was sharp, humourless. “You’ve got to be joking.” Rory met her gaze. “I’m not.” Eva turned away, running a hand through her hair. “You’re insane. You know that, right? After everything—” “It’s not like that.” “Then what’s it like?” Eva whirled back around, her voice rising. “Because last I checked, you swore you’d never speak to him again. You swore you’d never *see* him again. And now you’re standing in my flat at midnight asking me to track him down like some lovesick—” “It’s not about that,” Rory snapped. “Then what is it about?” Eva’s chest heaved, her cheeks flushed. “Because from where I’m standing, it looks like you’re still running after the same damn man who—” “He’s in trouble.” The words cut through the tension like a blade. Eva stilled. The flat was suddenly too quiet, the hum of the fridge the only sound between them. “What kind of trouble?” Eva asked, her voice low. Rory exhaled. “The kind that involves demons. And a debt he can’t pay.” Eva’s eyes flickered with something—fear, maybe, or recognition. She knew what that meant. They both did. “Shit,” Eva breathed. Rory nodded. “Yeah.” Eva turned away again, her shoulders tense. “You realise what you’re asking me to do, right? If I find him, if I *help* you—” “I know.” “No, you don’t.” Eva’s voice was sharp. “You don’t know what it’s like, Rory. You don’t know what it’s like to be the one left behind when you go off chasing your next disaster. You don’t know what it’s like to wait for the call that says you’re dead in a ditch somewhere.” Rory flinched. The words hit like a physical blow, because Eva wasn’t wrong. She *had* left. She *had* run. And Eva had been the one to pick up the pieces. “I’m sorry,” Rory said quietly. Eva didn’t look at her. “Sorry doesn’t fix it.” “I know.” Silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating. Rory wanted to reach out, to bridge the gap that had grown between them, but she didn’t. She couldn’t. Not yet. Eva sighed, rubbing her temples. “Fine. I’ll find him. But I’m not doing it for you.” Rory’s chest tightened. “Then who are you doing it for?” Eva finally looked at her, her dark eyes burning. “For the girl who used to be my best friend. Before she disappeared.” The words struck Rory like a punch to the gut. She opened her mouth, but no sound came out. Eva turned away, grabbing a notebook from the counter. “Give me a day. And Rory?” “Yeah?” “If he’s in as deep as you say he is, you’d better be ready to burn it all down to get him out.” Rory swallowed. “I am.” Eva didn’t look up from her notes. “We’ll see.” The flat door clicked shut behind Rory as she stepped out into the hallway, the weight of Eva’s words pressing down on her. The air was cooler out here, the scent of rain and damp concrete filling her lungs. She leaned against the wall, her fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. She wasn’t the same girl who had run from Lucien. She wasn’t the same girl who had left Eva behind. But as she pushed off the wall and started down the stairs, one thought echoed in her mind, sharp and unrelenting: *Was that enough?*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva whirled back [back]"
1"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.089
89.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"charged"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"charged"
2"tension"
3"flickered"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords12
totalWords936
ratio0.013
matches
0"The Occult in Modern London"
1"see"
2"help"
3"had"
4"had"
5"Was that enough?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount581
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity4.99
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity8.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Eva29
Occult1
Modern1
Lucien1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Modern"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount936
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean17.66
std14.54
cv0.823
sampleLengths
043
18
257
34
428
534
62
712
832
95
107
1126
1229
1321
1435
158
1613
172
1818
196
2017
214
2248
236
2428
253
2627
279
2813
2916
303
313
3224
332
3453
3530
365
379
382
3928
4016
4110
4222
4319
4415
451
4623
474
489
4953
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences108
ratio0.037
matches
0"The flat smelled of stale coffee and something sharper—burnt paper, maybe."
1"The flat was exactly as she remembered—cluttered, chaotic, alive."
2"Rory picked up a book from the counter—*The Occult in Modern London*—and flipped through it."
3"Eva’s eyes flickered with something—fear, maybe, or recognition."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount586
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.034129692832764506
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010238907849829351
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean8.67
std7.29
cv0.841
sampleLengths
015
115
211
32
48
53
613
79
819
913
104
114
1216
136
142
1513
1621
172
1812
198
2017
213
224
234
241
257
2626
2715
2810
294
3016
315
322
339
346
3513
365
378
3812
391
402
418
425
435
444
452
469
478
484
4911
48.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3148148148148148
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences61
matches
0"She shouldered past, the strap"
1"She wiped it on her"
2"She didn’t apologise."
3"She hadn’t planned on coming"
4"She knew what that meant."
5"They both did."
6"She *had* left."
7"She *had* run."
8"She opened her mouth, but"
9"She leaned against the wall,"
10"She wasn’t the same girl"
11"She wasn’t the same girl"
ratio0.197
0.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences61
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Eva stood there, barefoot in"
2"The flat smelled of stale"
3"Eva said, stepping aside"
4"Rory didn’t answer."
5"She shouldered past, the strap"
6"The flat was exactly as"
7"Scrolls and books spilled across"
8"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, eyed her"
9"Rory touched her wrist."
10"The crescent scar had split"
11"She wiped it on her"
12"Eva exhaled through her nose,"
13"Rory dropped her bag onto"
14"The flat was small enough"
15"She didn’t apologise."
16"Eva crossed her arms."
17"Rory picked up a book"
18"The pages were dog-eared, margins"
19"Eva grabbed the book back"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Eva exhaled through her nose, a sound that was half laugh, half frustration."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva whirled back, her voice rising"
1"Eva’s chest heaved, her cheeks flushed"
2"Eva asked, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory snapped (snap)"
1"Eva breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.089
77.9655%