Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT003K2N3XT1P2AHN7DQ2SK

Run Details

Duration:
1m 4s
Cost:
$0.156780

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past midnight, three sharp raps that cut through the silence of Eva's flat like gunshots. Rory froze mid-step, the mug of tea in her hand forgotten. She'd been pacing for the last hour, unable to sleep despite the exhaustion that pulled at her bones. Another knock, softer this time. Almost hesitant. "Eva's asleep," she called through the door, not moving closer. "Come back tomorrow." "It's me, Rory." The mug slipped from her fingers. Hot tea splashed across the wooden floor, soaking into the Persian rug Eva had found at a car boot sale. That voice—smooth as aged whiskey, with just a hint of Marseille beneath the polished London accent. She hadn't heard it in three months. "I know you're there." Lucien's words carried through the heavy oak. "I can hear your heartbeat." Damn his demon heritage. Rory's hands trembled as she stepped over the spreading puddle and reached for the first deadbolt. Then the second. Her fingers hesitated on the third. "What do you want?" "To talk." "We did plenty of talking three months ago." "No." A pause. She could picture him on the other side, probably adjusting his cufflinks or smoothing that platinum hair. "You talked. I listened. Then you left." The memory hit her like a physical blow. The warehouse. The blood on his charcoal suit. The look in his mismatched eyes when she'd told him she couldn't do this anymore—couldn't watch him walk the knife's edge between human and demon, couldn't pretend his underworld connections didn't terrify her. She turned the final lock. Lucien stood in the narrow hallway, and her breath caught. Even at past midnight, after whatever business had brought him here, he looked immaculate. The hall light caught the sharp angles of his face, throwing shadows that made him look more dangerous than she remembered. His ivory-handled cane rested against his leg, though she knew he didn't need it for support. "You're bleeding." The words escaped before she could stop them. A dark stain spread across the left side of his shirt, visible where his suit jacket hung open. He glanced down as if noticing it for the first time. "Occupational hazard." "And you came here?" Anger flared, hot and familiar. "Eva's got Ptolemy to think about. She doesn't need your world bleeding into hers." "I didn't come for Eva." The weight of those words settled between them. Rory's fingers tightened on the doorframe. Behind her, Ptolemy meowed from his perch atop a stack of medieval manuscripts. "Five minutes," she said finally, stepping back. He moved past her, careful not to brush against her despite the narrow entrance. The scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker—made her stomach twist. She locked the door again, all three bolts, while he surveyed the cluttered flat. "It hasn't changed." He picked up a Byzantine text from the coffee table, handling it with the reverence Eva would approve of. "Still a library masquerading as a living space." "Lucien." He set the book down and turned. In the lamplight, she could see the exhaustion he'd been hiding. The amber eye seemed duller, the black one deeper. Blood had soaked through his shirt now, creating an expanding map of violence across expensive fabric. "Sit," she ordered, pointing to Eva's ancient sofa. "Before you bleed all over her research." He obeyed without argument, which worried her more than the blood. She grabbed Eva's first aid kit from beneath the kitchen sink—Eva kept three, having learned the hard way that supernatural research came with its own risks. "Jacket and shirt off." His fingers moved to the buttons with practiced ease. She kept her eyes fixed on the wall behind his head, on one of Eva's charts mapping demon hierarchies. Anywhere but on the lean muscles she remembered too well. The wound ran along his ribs, deeper than she'd expected. Claw marks, from the look of them. Something with very particular ideas about anatomy. "Verath demon?" She knelt beside the sofa, antiseptic in hand. "You've been studying." "I live above a bar that caters to the supernatural. I picked up a few things." She pressed gauze against the wounds, perhaps harder than necessary. "This needs stitches." "It'll heal by morning. Benefit of mixed blood." Her hands stilled. There it was—the thing that had always stood between them. Not just his demon heritage, but how casually he wielded it. How easily he moved between worlds while she stumbled in the dark. "Why are you here?" She focused on cleaning the wounds, tried to ignore the way his breath hitched when the antiseptic hit raw flesh. "Really." "There's a price on your head." The gauze slipped from her fingers. "What?" "Fifty thousand pounds. Posted three days ago in all the usual places." His hand caught hers, steadying it. "Someone wants Aurora Carter found and delivered. Alive, specifically." "That's impossible. I'm nobody. I deliver Chinese food and live above a bar." "You're Brendan Carter's daughter. That makes you somebody to certain people." Her father. Of course. Even from Belfast, even after she'd changed her number and stopped returning his calls, Brendan Carter's shadow stretched long. "What did he do?" "The better question is who did he cross?" Lucien winced as she resumed cleaning the wounds. "Your father has a talent for making enemies. This time, it seems one of them decided to use you as leverage." "And you came to warn me?" She couldn't keep the bitterness from her voice. "How noble." His hand shot out, catching her wrist. The touch burned through her skin, familiar and foreign at once. "I came because I've spent three days killing everyone who tried to collect." The words hung in the air. She looked down at his hand on her wrist, at the blood beneath his manicured nails. Not his blood, she realized. His grip gentled but didn't release her. "You can't protect me from my father's mistakes." "Watch me." "Lucien—" "You left." The words came out raw, nothing like his usual polished delivery. "You walked out of that warehouse and disappeared. Do you know what that did to me?" She tried to pull away, but he held firm. His amber eye burned while the black one seemed to pull light from the room. "I know exactly what it did." Her voice cracked. "I saw what you became that night. What you're capable of. I couldn't—" "Couldn't what? Couldn't accept what I am?" "Couldn't watch you enjoy it." He released her as if burned. She grabbed fresh gauze, needing something to do with her hands. The silence stretched, broken only by Ptolemy's purring and the distant sound of late-night traffic. "I don't enjoy it." His voice had dropped to barely above a whisper. "The violence, the blood—it's necessity, not pleasure." "Your demon half—" "Is part of me, yes. But it doesn't control me." He caught her hand again, gentler this time. "When I killed those men in the warehouse, when I tore through them like paper—I didn't do it because my demon side demanded blood. I did it because they were going to hurt you." Her vision blurred. "Don't." "Three months, Rory. Three months of you haunting every shadow in London. Do you think I came here bleeding because I had nowhere else to go? I have safe houses across the city. I came here because—" The bedroom door creaked open. Eva stood in the doorway, wild-haired and wielding a cricket bat, her pajamas covered in cartoon owls. "Right," she said, taking in the scene—Lucien shirtless and bloody on her sofa, Rory kneeling beside him with tears on her cheeks. "I'll put the kettle on, shall I?"
total_cost0.15678

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.305
leniency0.61
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.034
88.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1286
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1286
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"practiced ease"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"trembled"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"stomach"
5"practiced ease"
6"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"The weight of those words"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1273
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount874
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva8
Persian1
Marseille1
London1
Damn1
Ptolemy2
Byzantine1
Belfast1
Brendan1
Carter1
Lucien4
Rory4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Brendan"
3"Carter"
4"Lucien"
5"Rory"
places
0"Persian"
1"Marseille"
2"London"
3"Belfast"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if noticing it for the first time"
1"seemed duller the black one deeper"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.786
wordCount1273
matches
0"Not just his demon heritage, but how casually he wielded it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"smoothing that platinum"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean19.89
std15.15
cv0.762
sampleLengths
049
17
213
33
449
516
629
74
82
98
1027
1149
125
1361
1410
1529
162
1723
185
1927
207
2139
2230
231
2443
2515
2637
274
2838
2924
3010
313
3229
338
3436
3525
366
377
3827
3913
4011
4123
424
4337
4416
4518
4613
4734
488
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
4.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences124
ratio0.048
matches
0"That voice—smooth as aged whiskey, with just a hint of Marseille beneath the polished London accent."
1"The look in his mismatched eyes when she'd told him she couldn't do this anymore—couldn't watch him walk the knife's edge between human and demon, couldn't pretend his underworld connections didn't terrify her."
2"The scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something darker—made her stomach twist."
3"She grabbed Eva's first aid kit from beneath the kitchen sink—Eva kept three, having learned the hard way that supernatural research came with its own risks."
4"There it was—the thing that had always stood between them."
5"\"Right,\" she said, taking in the scene—Lucien shirtless and bloody on her sofa, Rory kneeling beside him with tears on her cheeks."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount885
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02937853107344633
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006779661016949152
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean10.27
std7.06
cv0.687
sampleLengths
020
111
218
35
42
510
63
73
86
920
1016
117
1211
135
144
1516
163
176
184
192
208
213
2217
237
248
252
266
2733
285
2910
3014
3121
3216
3310
3418
3511
362
379
3814
395
408
416
4213
437
4414
4511
4614
4722
488
491
68.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4435483870967742
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners55
84.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Anywhere but on the lean"
ratio0.025
37.72% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences79
matches
0"She'd been pacing for the"
1"she called through the door,"
2"She hadn't heard it in"
3"Her fingers hesitated on the"
4"She could picture him on"
5"She turned the final lock."
6"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
7"He glanced down as if"
8"she said finally, stepping back"
9"He moved past her, careful"
10"She locked the door again,"
11"He picked up a Byzantine"
12"He set the book down"
13"she ordered, pointing to Eva's"
14"He obeyed without argument, which"
15"She grabbed Eva's first aid"
16"His fingers moved to the"
17"She kept her eyes fixed"
18"She knelt beside the sofa,"
19"She pressed gauze against the"
ratio0.456
35.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences79
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory froze mid-step, the mug"
2"She'd been pacing for the"
3"Another knock, softer this time."
4"she called through the door,"
5"The mug slipped from her"
6"That voice—smooth as aged whiskey,"
7"She hadn't heard it in"
8"Lucien's words carried through the"
9"Rory's hands trembled as she"
10"Her fingers hesitated on the"
11"She could picture him on"
12"The memory hit her like"
13"The blood on his charcoal"
14"The look in his mismatched"
15"She turned the final lock."
16"Lucien stood in the narrow"
17"The hall light caught the"
18"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
19"The words escaped before she"
ratio0.848
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Even at past midnight, after"
1"Even from Belfast, even after"
ratio0.025
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She'd been pacing for the last hour, unable to sleep despite the exhaustion that pulled at her bones."
1"The hall light caught the sharp angles of his face, throwing shadows that made him look more dangerous than she remembered."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she called, not moving closer"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she ordered (order)"
1"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.169
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.068
86.0938%