Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00CYAHKE2AFFWZJ5RC65E

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Duration:
9.5s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the creaking staircase, her worn leather watch catching the dim light. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden was as eerie as ever, but tonight, it was more than just a relic of a forgotten time. Tonight, it was a crime scene. The body lay sprawled on the cold stone floor, a young woman with curly red hair and round glasses. Eva Kowalski, according to the ID badge hanging from her worn leather satchel. Quinn had seen her around, a friend of Aurora's, the girl who'd gone missing a week ago. She tucked her salt-and-pepper hair behind her ear, a habit she'd picked up since Morris's death, and crouched down for a closer look. "Strangled," Dr. Amelia Hart, the pathologist, said, her voice echoing in the cavernous space. "Look at the ligature marks on her neck. She put up a fight, but it was quick." Quinn nodded, her sharp jaw set. Something was off. Eva's glasses were intact, her satchel still full of books. No signs of a struggle, except for the marks on her neck. And why was she here, in an abandoned station, on a night when the full moon would have the Veil Market in full swing? "Amelia," Quinn said, "have you seen the rest of the scene?" The pathologist looked up, her brow furrowed. "What do you mean?" Quinn stood, her military precision evident in her movements. She gestured to the station, empty except for Eva's body. "No sign of forced entry. No other footprints. Just Eva, here, with no signs of a struggle, except for the marks on her neck." Amelia looked around, her eyes widening as she took in the scene. "You think...?" "I think we're missing something," Quinn said, her brown eyes scanning the area. She pulled out her Veil Compass, the small brass compass with its face etched with protective sigils. The needle spun wildly, then pointed towards the tunnel leading to the Market. "And I think we're not alone." She pocketed the compass and turned to her colleague. "Amelia, I need you to keep this quiet. No official report yet. I'll call in a team, but for now, let's keep this between us." Amelia nodded, her eyes serious. "Understood, Detective." Quinn stepped away, her boots echoing on the stone floor. She pulled out her phone, dialing her team. "I need you to meet me at the old Camden station," she said, her voice low. "Bring the supernatural kit. We've got a situation." She hung up and turned back to Eva's body. She couldn't shake the feeling that something was off. She crouched down again, her eyes scanning the body, the floor, the walls. Then she saw it. A small, almost imperceptible mark on Eva's wrist. A sigil, glowing faintly in the dim light. Quinn leaned in closer, her heart pounding. She recognized the sigil. It was the same one she'd found on Morris's body, three years ago. The one she'd been unable to explain, the one that had led her down this rabbit hole of supernatural crime. She stood up, her mind racing. If Eva was involved with the Market, if she was involved with the supernatural, then Aurora was too. And if Aurora was involved, then the clique was involved. She was sure of it. She turned to Amelia, her eyes determined. "We need to find out what Eva was doing here. And we need to find Aurora." Amelia nodded, her eyes reflecting Quinn's determination. "I'll start the autopsy. Maybe we'll find something there." Quinn nodded, her mind already racing ahead. She stepped towards the tunnel, her hand resting on the Veil Compass in her pocket. She could feel it, the pull of the supernatural, the promise of answers. She took a deep breath and stepped into the darkness, her military precision guiding her every step. The tunnel was dark, the air damp and heavy with the scent of earth and something else. Something faint, something familiar. Quinn's hand tightened on the compass, the needle pointing straight ahead. She could hear the murmur of voices, the clink of glasses. The Market was close. She stepped out of the tunnel, her eyes widening at the sight before her. The abandoned station had been transformed. Stalls lined the walls, selling everything from enchanted trinkets to banned alchemical substances. People in cloaks and hoods milled about, their faces obscured. It was a supernatural black market, a hidden world beneath the city. Quinn moved through the crowd, her eyes scanning the stalls. She could feel the pull of the supernatural, the energy of the Market. She could feel it in the air, in the hum of the crowd, in the glow of the sigils etched into the walls. She stopped at a stall selling Veil Compasses, her eyes narrowing as she recognized the seller. A Shade artisan, one of the few supernatural beings who could cross the veil between worlds. She'd interrogated him before, after Morris's death. He'd been uncooperative then, but maybe tonight would be different. "Quinn," he said, his voice a low growl. "Back so soon?" "Eva Kowalski is dead," she said, her voice flat. "I think you know something about it." The Shade's eyes widened, just a fraction. "Eva? Dead?" Quinn nodded, her eyes steady. "Strangled. In the tunnel. I found this on her wrist." She held up her phone, a picture of the sigil glowing faintly. The Shade looked at the picture, his face impassive. "It's a summoning sigil," he said. "Used to call a creature from the other side." Quinn's heart pounded. "What kind of creature?" The Shade shrugged. "Could be anything. Depends on the sigil, the intent, the sacrifice." Quinn's blood ran cold. Sacrifice. Eva had been the sacrifice. But why? And who had summoned the creature? She turned away from the stall, her mind racing. She needed to find Aurora. She needed to find out what she knew. She needed to stop this, before it was too late. She moved through the crowd, her eyes scanning the faces. She could feel the pull of the supernatural, the energy of the Market. She could feel it in the air, in the hum of the crowd, in the glow of the sigils etched into the walls. She stopped suddenly, her eyes widening as she saw a familiar face. Aurora, standing at a stall, her back to Quinn. She was talking to someone, a figure in a cloak, their face obscured. Quinn could see the tension in Aurora's shoulders, the way she was leaning in, her voice low. Quinn stepped closer, her heart pounding. She could hear the murmur of their voices, the clink of glasses. She could feel the pull of the supernatural, the energy of the Market. She could feel it in the air, in the hum of the crowd, in the glow of the sigils etched into the walls. She was close enough to hear now, close enough to see the figure's face. It was a woman, her eyes cold, her lips curved in a cruel smile. She was holding a Veil Compass, the needle pointing at Aurora. Quinn's heart pounded. She recognized the woman. She was a member of the clique, the group of wealthy socialites who'd been under her scrutiny for years. She was the one who'd been pulling the strings, the one who'd been using the supernatural for her own gain. Quinn stepped forward, her hand reaching for her gun. But before she could move, the woman turned, her eyes meeting Quinn's. She smiled, a slow, cruel smile. Then she raised her hand, a sigil glowing on her palm. Quinn felt a jolt of energy, a wave of darkness. She stumbled back, her vision swimming. She could hear the murmur of voices, the clink of glasses. She could feel the pull of the supernatural, the energy of the Market. She could feel it in the air, in the hum of the crowd, in the glow of the sigils etched into the walls. And then, everything went black.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.292
leniency0.583
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1339
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1339
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"echoing"
count2
1
word"furrowed"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count4
3
word"etched"
count5
4
word"pounding"
count2
5
word"racing"
count3
6
word"determined"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count9
8
word"familiar"
count2
9
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"furrowed"
2"scanning"
3"etched"
4"pounding"
5"racing"
6"determined"
7"could feel"
8"familiar"
9"tension"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences110
matches
0"felt a jolt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1337
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1143
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn22
Tube1
Camden1
Kowalski1
Aurora7
Morris3
Amelia5
Hart1
Veil5
Market8
Eva7
Compass3
Compasses1
Shade4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Aurora"
4"Morris"
5"Amelia"
6"Hart"
7"Eva"
8"Shade"
places
0"Market"
globalScore0.538
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1337
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean34.28
std17.88
cv0.522
sampleLengths
046
172
231
355
411
511
643
714
849
934
107
1142
1251
1344
1439
1523
1616
1752
1847
1955
2046
2149
2211
2316
249
2527
2624
277
2814
2918
3032
3146
3251
3354
3439
3546
3638
3763
385
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"was involved"
1"been transformed"
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was talking"
1"was leaning"
2"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences126
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1145
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.025327510917030567
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004366812227074236
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean10.61
std5.79
cv0.546
sampleLengths
016
124
26
319
413
517
623
72
812
917
106
113
1210
1312
1424
1511
167
174
189
1910
2024
2112
222
2313
2417
2513
266
279
2825
295
302
3110
328
3316
348
359
369
3713
384
398
408
417
424
4313
4420
456
4618
4710
485
497
30.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.24603174603174602
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners31
63.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"Then she saw it."
1"Then she raised her hand,"
ratio0.019
25.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences105
matches
0"She tucked her salt-and-pepper hair"
1"She gestured to the station,"
2"She pulled out her Veil"
3"She pocketed the compass and"
4"She pulled out her phone,"
5"she said, her voice low"
6"She hung up and turned"
7"She couldn't shake the feeling"
8"She crouched down again, her"
9"She recognized the sigil."
10"It was the same one"
11"She stood up, her mind"
12"She was sure of it."
13"She turned to Amelia, her"
14"She stepped towards the tunnel,"
15"She could feel it, the"
16"She took a deep breath"
17"She could hear the murmur"
18"She stepped out of the"
19"It was a supernatural black"
ratio0.486
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences105
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
2"Tonight, it was a crime"
3"The body lay sprawled on"
4"Eva Kowalski, according to the"
5"Quinn had seen her around,"
6"She tucked her salt-and-pepper hair"
7"Amelia Hart, the pathologist, said,"
8"Quinn nodded, her sharp jaw"
9"Something was off."
10"Eva's glasses were intact, her"
11"The pathologist looked up, her"
12"Quinn stood, her military precision"
13"She gestured to the station,"
14"Amelia looked around, her eyes"
15"Quinn said, her brown eyes"
16"She pulled out her Veil"
17"The needle spun wildly, then"
18"She pocketed the compass and"
19"Amelia nodded, her eyes serious."
ratio0.914
47.62% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"If Eva was involved with"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She stopped at a stall selling Veil Compasses, her eyes narrowing as she recognized the seller."
1"She was a member of the clique, the group of wealthy socialites who'd been under her scrutiny for years."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Quinn said, her brown eyes scanning the area"
1"she said, her voice low"
2"he said, his voice a low growl"
3"she said, her voice flat"
4"She held up, a picture of the sigil glowing faintly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.1436%