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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00CYAHKE2AFFWZJ5RC65E
Run Details
Model:
Mistral NeMO
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
9.5s
Cost:
$0.000425
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.27%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
53.76%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
98.88%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
88.89%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
30.16%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
63.49%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
25.71%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
2.86%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
47.62%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
79.1436%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off
the creaking staircase, her worn leather
watch
catching the dim light.
The abandoned Tube station beneath
Camden was as eerie as ever, but tonight, it was more than just a relic of a forgotten time.
Tonight, it was a crime
scene.
The body lay sprawled on
the cold stone floor, a young woman with curly red hair and round glasses.
Eva Kowalski, according to the
ID badge hanging from her worn leather satchel. Quinn had seen her around, a friend of Aurora's, the girl who'd gone missing a week ago.
She tucked her salt-and-pepper hair
behind her ear, a habit she'd picked up since Morris's death, and crouched down for a closer look. "Strangled," Dr. Amelia Hart, the pathologist, said, her voice
echoing
in the cavernous space. "Look at the ligature marks on her neck. She put up a fight, but it was quick."
Quinn nodded, her sharp jaw
set. Something was off.
Eva's glasses were intact, her
satchel still full of books. No signs of a struggle, except for the marks on her neck. And why was she here, in an abandoned station, on a night when the full moon would have the Veil Market in full swing? "Amelia," Quinn said, "have you seen the rest of the scene?"
The pathologist looked up, her
brow
furrowed
. "What do you mean?"
Quinn stood, her military precision
evident in her movements. She gestured to the station, empty except for Eva's body. "No sign of forced entry. No other footprints. Just Eva, here, with no signs of a struggle, except for the marks on her neck."
Amelia looked around, her eyes
widening as she took in the scene. "You think...?" "I think we're missing something,"
Quinn said, her brown eyes
scanning
the area.
She pulled out her Veil
Compass, the small brass compass with its face
etched
with protective sigils.
The needle spun wildly, then
pointed towards the tunnel leading to the Market. "And I think we're not alone."
She pocketed the compass and
turned to her colleague. "Amelia, I need you to keep this quiet. No official report yet. I'll call in a team, but for now, let's keep this between us." Amelia nodded, her eyes serious. "Understood, Detective." Quinn stepped away, her boots
echoing
on the stone floor. She pulled out her phone, dialing her team. "I need you to meet me at the old Camden station,"
she said, her voice low
. "Bring the supernatural kit. We've got a situation."
She hung up and turned
back to Eva's body.
She couldn't shake the feeling
that something was off.
She crouched down again, her
eyes
scanning
the body, the floor, the walls. Then she saw it. A small, almost imperceptible mark on Eva's wrist. A sigil, glowing faintly in the dim light. Quinn leaned in closer, her heart
pounding
. She recognized the sigil.
It was the same one
she'd found on Morris's body, three years ago. The one she'd been unable to explain, the one that had led her down this rabbit hole of supernatural crime.
She stood up, her mind
racing
.
If Eva was involved with
the Market, if she
was involved
with the supernatural, then Aurora was too. And if Aurora
was involved
, then the clique
was involved
. She was sure of it.
She turned to Amelia, her
eyes
determined
. "We need to find out what Eva was doing here. And we need to find Aurora." Amelia nodded, her eyes reflecting Quinn's determination. "I'll start the autopsy. Maybe we'll find something there." Quinn nodded, her mind already
racing
ahead. She stepped towards the tunnel, her hand resting on the Veil Compass in her pocket.
She could feel it, the
pull of the supernatural, the promise of answers.
She took a deep breath
and stepped into the darkness, her military precision guiding her every step. The tunnel was dark, the air damp and heavy with the scent of earth and something else. Something faint, something
familiar
. Quinn's hand tightened on the compass, the needle pointing straight ahead.
She could hear the murmur
of voices, the clink of glasses. The Market was close.
She stepped out of the
tunnel, her eyes widening at the sight before her. The abandoned station had
been transformed
. Stalls lined the walls, selling everything from enchanted trinkets to banned alchemical substances. People in cloaks and hoods milled about, their faces obscured.
It was a supernatural black
market, a hidden world beneath the city. Quinn moved through the crowd, her eyes
scanning
the stalls. She
could feel
the pull of the supernatural, the energy of the Market. She
could feel
it in the air, in the hum of the crowd, in the glow of the sigils
etched
into the walls. She stopped at a stall selling Veil Compasses, her eyes narrowing as she recognized the seller. A Shade artisan, one of the few supernatural beings who could cross the veil between worlds. She'd interrogated him before, after Morris's death. He'd been uncooperative then, but maybe tonight would be different. "Quinn,"
he said, his voice a low growl
. "Back so soon?" "Eva Kowalski is dead,"
she said, her voice flat
. "I think you know something about it." The Shade's
eyes widened
, just a fraction. "Eva? Dead?" Quinn nodded, her eyes steady. "Strangled. In the tunnel. I found this on her wrist." She held up her phone, a picture of the sigil glowing faintly. The Shade looked at the picture, his face impassive. "It's a summoning sigil," he said. "Used to call a creature from the other side." Quinn's heart pounded. "What kind of creature?" The Shade shrugged. "Could be anything. Depends on the sigil, the intent, the sacrifice." Quinn's
blood ran cold
. Sacrifice. Eva had been the sacrifice. But why? And who had summoned the creature? She turned away from the stall, her mind
racing
. She needed to find Aurora. She needed to find out what she knew. She needed to stop this, before it was too late. She moved through the crowd, her eyes
scanning
the faces. She
could feel
the pull of the supernatural, the energy of the Market. She
could feel
it in the air, in the hum of the crowd, in the glow of the sigils
etched
into the walls. She stopped
suddenly
, her eyes widening as she saw a
familiar
face. Aurora, standing at a stall, her back to Quinn. She
was talking
to someone, a figure in a cloak, their face obscured. Quinn could see the
tension
in Aurora's shoulders, the way she
was leaning
in, her voice low. Quinn stepped closer, her heart
pounding
.
She could hear the murmur
of their voices, the clink of glasses. She
could feel
the pull of the supernatural, the energy of the Market. She
could feel
it in the air, in the hum of the crowd, in the glow of the sigils
etched
into the walls. She was close enough to hear now, close enough to see the figure's face. It was a woman, her eyes cold, her lips curved in a cruel smile. She
was holding
a Veil Compass, the needle pointing at Aurora. Quinn's heart pounded. She recognized the woman. She was a member of the clique, the group of wealthy socialites who'd been under her scrutiny for years. She was the one who'd been pulling the strings, the one who'd been using the supernatural for her own gain. Quinn stepped forward, her hand reaching for her gun. But before she could move, the woman turned, her eyes meeting Quinn's. She smiled, a slow, cruel smile. Then she raised her hand, a sigil glowing on her palm. Quinn
felt a jolt
of energy, a wave of darkness. She stumbled back, her vision swimming.
She could hear the murmur
of voices, the clink of glasses. She
could feel
the pull of the supernatural, the energy of the Market. She
could feel
it in the air, in the hum of the crowd, in the glow of the sigils
etched
into the walls. And then, everything went black.
total_cost
0.0004248
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
7
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
24
tagDensity
0.292
leniency
0.583
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
96.27%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1339
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1339
totalAiIsms
30
found
0
word
"echoing"
count
2
1
word
"furrowed"
count
1
2
word
"scanning"
count
4
3
word
"etched"
count
5
4
word
"pounding"
count
2
5
word
"racing"
count
3
6
word
"determined"
count
1
7
word
"could feel"
count
9
8
word
"familiar"
count
2
9
word
"tension"
count
1
highlights
0
"echoing"
1
"furrowed"
2
"scanning"
3
"etched"
4
"pounding"
5
"racing"
6
"determined"
7
"could feel"
8
"familiar"
9
"tension"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"blood ran cold"
count
1
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"blood ran cold"
1
"eyes widened"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
110
matches
0
"felt a jolt"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
110
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
126
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
25
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1337
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
10
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
53.76%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
70
wordCount
1143
uniqueNames
15
maxNameDensity
1.92
worstName
"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow
1
Quinn
22
Tube
1
Camden
1
Kowalski
1
Aurora
7
Morris
3
Amelia
5
Hart
1
Veil
5
Market
8
Eva
7
Compass
3
Compasses
1
Shade
4
persons
0
"Harlow"
1
"Quinn"
2
"Kowalski"
3
"Aurora"
4
"Morris"
5
"Amelia"
6
"Hart"
7
"Eva"
8
"Shade"
places
0
"Market"
globalScore
0.538
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
87
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1337
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
126
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
39
mean
34.28
std
17.88
cv
0.522
sampleLengths
0
46
1
72
2
31
3
55
4
11
5
11
6
43
7
14
8
49
9
34
10
7
11
42
12
51
13
44
14
39
15
23
16
16
17
52
18
47
19
55
20
46
21
49
22
11
23
16
24
9
25
27
26
24
27
7
28
14
29
18
30
32
31
46
32
51
33
54
34
39
35
46
36
38
37
63
38
5
98.88%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
110
matches
0
"was involved"
1
"been transformed"
88.89%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
180
matches
0
"was talking"
1
"was leaning"
2
"was holding"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
126
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1145
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
29
adverbRatio
0.025327510917030567
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.004366812227074236
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
126
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
126
mean
10.61
std
5.79
cv
0.546
sampleLengths
0
16
1
24
2
6
3
19
4
13
5
17
6
23
7
2
8
12
9
17
10
6
11
3
12
10
13
12
14
24
15
11
16
7
17
4
18
9
19
10
20
24
21
12
22
2
23
13
24
17
25
13
26
6
27
9
28
25
29
5
30
2
31
10
32
8
33
16
34
8
35
9
36
9
37
13
38
4
39
8
40
8
41
7
42
4
43
13
44
20
45
6
46
18
47
10
48
5
49
7
30.16%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
25
diversityRatio
0.24603174603174602
totalSentences
126
uniqueOpeners
31
63.49%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
105
matches
0
"Then she saw it."
1
"Then she raised her hand,"
ratio
0.019
25.71%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
51
totalSentences
105
matches
0
"She tucked her salt-and-pepper hair"
1
"She gestured to the station,"
2
"She pulled out her Veil"
3
"She pocketed the compass and"
4
"She pulled out her phone,"
5
"she said, her voice low"
6
"She hung up and turned"
7
"She couldn't shake the feeling"
8
"She crouched down again, her"
9
"She recognized the sigil."
10
"It was the same one"
11
"She stood up, her mind"
12
"She was sure of it."
13
"She turned to Amelia, her"
14
"She stepped towards the tunnel,"
15
"She could feel it, the"
16
"She took a deep breath"
17
"She could hear the murmur"
18
"She stepped out of the"
19
"It was a supernatural black"
ratio
0.486
2.86%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
96
totalSentences
105
matches
0
"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
1
"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
2
"Tonight, it was a crime"
3
"The body lay sprawled on"
4
"Eva Kowalski, according to the"
5
"Quinn had seen her around,"
6
"She tucked her salt-and-pepper hair"
7
"Amelia Hart, the pathologist, said,"
8
"Quinn nodded, her sharp jaw"
9
"Something was off."
10
"Eva's glasses were intact, her"
11
"The pathologist looked up, her"
12
"Quinn stood, her military precision"
13
"She gestured to the station,"
14
"Amelia looked around, her eyes"
15
"Quinn said, her brown eyes"
16
"She pulled out her Veil"
17
"The needle spun wildly, then"
18
"She pocketed the compass and"
19
"Amelia nodded, her eyes serious."
ratio
0.914
47.62%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
105
matches
0
"If Eva was involved with"
ratio
0.01
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
57
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"She stopped at a stall selling Veil Compasses, her eyes narrowing as she recognized the seller."
1
"She was a member of the clique, the group of wealthy socialites who'd been under her scrutiny for years."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
7
uselessAdditionCount
5
matches
0
"Quinn said, her brown eyes scanning the area"
1
"she said, her voice low"
2
"he said, his voice a low growl"
3
"she said, her voice flat"
4
"She held up, a picture of the sigil glowing faintly"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
24
tagDensity
0.25
leniency
0.5
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
79.1436%