Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00EQZ46MFQ7Q5ZYBD7M3M

Run Details

Duration:
8.7s
Cost:
$0.000367

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the belly of London, beneath the bustling streets of Camden, Detective Harlow Quinn descended into the abandoned Tube station that housed the Veil Market. The market, a supernatural black hole, moved locations every full moon, and tonight, it was her oyster. Her worn leather watch glinted in the dim light as she checked the time, her sharp jaw set in a grim line. She'd been chasing whispers of this place for years, and finally, she had a reason to dig deeper. The station was a labyrinth of shadows and echoes, the air thick with the scent of old stone and something more sinister. Harlow's boots echoed on the cracked tiles as she followed the yellow tape that led her to the crime scene. A body lay sprawled on the platform, the victim's eyes wide open, staring at nothing. She approached cautiously, her military precision kicking in, her gaze sweeping the scene. Dr. Amelia Hart, the coroner, was already there, her gloved hands hovering over the body. She looked up as Harlow approached, her glasses reflecting the harsh light. "Quinn," she acknowledged, her voice barely above a whisper. "You're late." Harlow ignored the jab. "What do we have, Amelia?" Dr. Hart stood up, her eyes scanning the body. "Male, late twenties. Cause of death? That's where it gets interesting." She pointed at the victim's chest. "See these marks? They're not from any knife I've seen. They're... too perfect." Harlow leaned in, her brow furrowing. The wounds were indeed peculiar, precise cuts that seemed almost... surgical. "What are you suggesting, Amelia? Some kind of ritual?" Dr. Hart shrugged. "I'm a coroner, not an occult expert. But I've seen enough to know when something's not right. And this?" She gestured to the body. "This is very, very wrong." Harlow's gaze drifted from the body to the rest of the platform. Something was off. The usual market chatter was absent, replaced by an eerie silence. The stalls, usually brimming with enchanted goods and banned alchemical substances, were empty. Even the air seemed still, as if the very atmosphere was holding its breath. She turned to her colleague, DCI Richard Thompson, who was busy scribbling notes. "Rich, what's your take on this?" Thompson looked up, his eyes meeting hers. "I think it's a gang initiation gone wrong. The victim, according to our sources, was a small-time dealer. Maybe he refused to pay protection money, or maybe he was trying to muscle in on someone else's territory." Harlow raised an eyebrow. "And the wounds? The empty market?" Thompson shrugged. "Maybe they panicked and fled. Or maybe they're just lying low until the heat's off." Harlow's gaze drifted back to the body. Something didn't add up. She pulled out her Veil Compass, the small brass compass crafted by a Shade artisan, its face etched with protective sigils. The needle spun wildly, then pointed towards the tunnel leading out of the station. Harlow's heart pounded. She knew that look. The compass was reacting to supernatural energy. She tucked the compass away, her mind racing. If there was supernatural activity here, it could explain the peculiar wounds, the empty market. But it also meant she was treading on dangerous ground. The Veil Market was a place where the rules of the mundane world didn't apply. Harlow turned to her team. "I want this scene processed thoroughly. Every inch of this station needs to be searched. And I want a list of everyone who was here tonight. If anyone knows anything, I want to hear it." Thompson nodded, but she could see the skepticism in his eyes. He didn't believe in her supernatural hunch, and she didn't blame him. She didn't have proof, not yet. But she knew, deep in her gut, that this was more than just a gang initiation gone wrong. Harlow walked away from the body, her boots echoing in the silent station. She followed the compass's lead, her hand resting on the butt of her gun. The tunnel was dark, the air colder. She could feel the energy, pulsating like a heartbeat. It was strong here, stronger than she'd ever felt it before. She rounded a corner and stopped dead in her tracks. There, etched into the wall, was a symbol. It was a rune, one she recognized from her partner's old case files. The case that had ended with Morris's death and a supernatural mystery she'd been trying to solve ever since. Her heart pounded in her chest. This was it. This was the break she'd been waiting for. She pulled out her phone, snapping pictures of the rune. She needed to get back to the station, run these pictures through the system, see if they matched anything in their database. But as she turned to leave, she heard a noise. A soft shuffling, like footsteps echoing in the distance. She froze, her hand tightening around her gun. She wasn't alone. She listened, her breath held captive in her lungs. The footsteps grew louder, closer. She could hear the rustle of fabric, the soft inhale of breath. She counted the steps, her heart pounding in her ears. Three... two... one... She spun around, her gun drawn, just as a figure emerged from the shadows. It was a woman, her curly red hair a stark contrast against the dark tunnel. She wore a worn leather satchel full of books, round glasses perched on her nose. Her freckled complexion was pale, her green eyes wide with fear. Harlow lowered her gun, her brow furrowing. "Eva Kowalski," she said, recognition dawning. "Aurora's friend. What are you doing here?" Eva swallowed hard, tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear. "I could ask you the same thing, Detective Quinn," she replied, her voice steady despite the fear in her eyes. "But I think we both know why we're here." Harlow's gaze drifted back to the rune on the wall. She could feel the energy pulsating, stronger now that Eva was here. She looked back at Eva, her eyes narrowing. "You know something about this, don't you?" Eva hesitated, then nodded. "I think we both do, Detective. The question is, what are we going to do about it?" Word count: 1000
total_cost0.00036704999999999995

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1034
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1034
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"sinister"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"furrowing"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"eyebrow"
count1
9
word"etched"
count2
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"processed"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count2
13
word"could feel"
count2
14
word"database"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count2
16
word"pounding"
count1
17
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"sinister"
2"echoed"
3"whisper"
4"scanning"
5"perfect"
6"furrowing"
7"silence"
8"eyebrow"
9"etched"
10"racing"
11"processed"
12"echoing"
13"could feel"
14"database"
15"footsteps"
16"pounding"
17"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences85
matches
0"e with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1033
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount818
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.59
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
London1
Camden1
Detective1
Harlow13
Quinn1
Tube1
Veil3
Market2
Hart3
Richard1
Thompson4
Compass1
Shade1
Morris1
Eva4
Dr3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Hart"
3"Richard"
4"Thompson"
5"Compass"
6"Morris"
7"Eva"
8"Dr"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.705
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed still as if the very atmosphere was holding its breath"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1033
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"knew that look"
95.14% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean38.26
std18.48
cv0.483
sampleLengths
082
170
238
39
439
526
632
753
819
944
1010
1117
1260
1348
1440
1547
1654
1750
1849
1930
2039
2155
2220
2341
2437
2521
263
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
57.14% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was holding"
1"was reacting"
2"was treading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences99
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount818
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03300733496332518
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009779951100244499
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean10.43
std6.85
cv0.657
sampleLengths
025
117
222
318
422
520
615
713
81
914
1012
119
122
134
145
151
168
1717
1813
196
2010
211
229
231
242
2524
265
2712
283
2911
3013
3114
3213
336
347
3537
364
376
382
3915
407
414
4221
4314
443
454
467
478
4815
4910
50.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3434343434343434
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners34
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Even the air seemed still,"
ratio0.013
41.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences76
matches
0"Her worn leather watch glinted"
1"She'd been chasing whispers of"
2"She approached cautiously, her military"
3"She looked up as Harlow"
4"she acknowledged, her voice barely"
5"She pointed at the victim's"
6"She gestured to the body"
7"She turned to her colleague,"
8"She pulled out her Veil"
9"She knew that look."
10"She tucked the compass away,"
11"He didn't believe in her"
12"She didn't have proof, not"
13"She followed the compass's lead,"
14"She could feel the energy,"
15"It was strong here, stronger"
16"She rounded a corner and"
17"It was a rune, one"
18"Her heart pounded in her"
19"She pulled out her phone,"
ratio0.447
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"The market, a supernatural black"
1"Her worn leather watch glinted"
2"She'd been chasing whispers of"
3"The station was a labyrinth"
4"Harlow's boots echoed on the"
5"A body lay sprawled on"
6"She approached cautiously, her military"
7"Amelia Hart, the coroner, was"
8"She looked up as Harlow"
9"she acknowledged, her voice barely"
10"Harlow ignored the jab."
11"Hart stood up, her eyes"
12"She pointed at the victim's"
13"Harlow leaned in, her brow"
14"The wounds were indeed peculiar,"
15"She gestured to the body"
16"Harlow's gaze drifted from the"
17"Something was off."
18"The usual market chatter was"
19"The stalls, usually brimming with"
ratio0.921
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"If there was supernatural activity"
ratio0.013
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"In the belly of London, beneath the bustling streets of Camden, Detective Harlow Quinn descended into the abandoned Tube station that housed the Veil Market."
1"Even the air seemed still, as if the very atmosphere was holding its breath."
2"She turned to her colleague, DCI Richard Thompson, who was busy scribbling notes."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she acknowledged, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"she said, recognition dawning"
2"she replied, her voice steady despite the fear in her eyes"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she acknowledged (acknowledge)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.105
78.2726%