Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00GCXJK6AJ8N7K5DBWMPT

Run Details

Duration:
11.0s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory lifted the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant, its deep crimson gem thudding against her palm. The pulse quickened as the ancient oak stones loomed ahead, their bark twisted into runes that seemed to breathe. Nyx slipped between their trunks, a silhouette of living shadow that flickered like candlelight caught in a draft. Isolde’s silver hair brushed the moss, each strand catching the faint luminescence that rose from the ground. The air smelled of damp earth and something sweet, a perfume that lingered between rain and honey. Wildflowers, colors that defied the usual palette, swayed in a rhythm that felt rehearsed. A low hum rose from the stones, a vibration that made the hair on Rory’s arms stand up. “Do you feel the weight of a?” Nyx’s voice slipped through the wind, a whisper that brushed her ears without a mouth to speak. The words hung in the air, a question that felt more like a promise. Rory’s eyes narrowed, the bright blue of them reflecting the amber sky that stretched over the grove. She pressed the pendant against her chest, feeling its warm pulse sync with the hum. “It’s not just weight. It’s a line, a thread that pulls.” Isolde stepped forward, her feet leaving no imprint on the moss. She lifted a hand, and the ancient stones glowed faintly, their runes shifting from dark to a pale lavender that matched her eye color. “A veil thins where the world forgets its borders,” she said, each word a riddle that wrapped around the moment. The trio moved deeper, the path narrowing between towering oaks that seemed to lean in, their branches forming arches that filtered the sky into shards of amber and violet. Light filtered through leaves in a way that made the whole clearing flicker like a candle in a draft. A low, melodic chime resonated from somewhere unseen, a sound that made the heartstone beat louder. Rory reached out, her fingers brushing a smooth slab of stone that was warm to the touch. The slab vibrated, a tremor that traveled up her arm. She turned, the pendant’s glow flaring as if it sensed a portal nearby. “There’s a fissure,” she said, voice low, “something that sings.” Nyx drifted ahead, his form spilling into the shadows, then coalescing as a solid silhouette that brushed the stone. He raised a hand, and a ripple of darkness spread across the ground, revealing a faint outline of a doorway. The doorway was framed by vines that glowed with an inner light, each leaf pulsing like a heartbeat. Isolde smiled, a thin line that seemed to hold centuries of secrets. “The Fae hide their doors in plain sight,” she said, and the vines twitched, parting to reveal a corridor of floating motes that drifted upward, leaving trails of silver dust. The trio stepped through the doorway, the world shifting as if the very air turned liquid. The temperature dropped, a chill that brushed their skin like a sigh. Somewhere in the distance, a bell rang, a sound that seemed to come from both the earth and the sky. Rory’s breath fogged, the Heartstone Pendant pulsing now in a rhythm that matched the bell. She glanced at the blade at her hip, its moonsilver edge catching a sliver of moonlight that filtered through the foliage. The blade was cold, a contrast to the warmth of the pendant. She slipped the dagger from its sheath, feeling its weight, its promise of cutting through wards. Nyx drifted behind a stone column, his violet eyes flickering as he watched the shadows shift. He raised a hand, and the shadows coalesced into a shape—a doorway made of pure darkness, its edges humming with an unseen power. “Hel calls,” he whispered, the wind carrying his words to the others. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair flowing like water. She placed a palm on the dark doorway, and the violet glow of her eyes intensified, casting a lavender sheen over the stone. “The Veil thins at the solstice,” she said, each phrase a riddle that hinted at a barrier that could be crossed. “We stand where the veil breathes.” Rory pressed the pendant against the dark doorway, and a faint inner glow rose from the crystal, matching the violet hue of Nyx’s eyes. The darkness rippled, revealing a corridor of obsidian that stretched into a horizon that was both far and near. The scent of spices and burnt sugar drifted from somewhere beyond, a reminder of Dymas, a place of excess that lay beyond the veil. A low growl echoed, not from any creature but from the stone itself. The ground trembled, and a fissure opened, a crack that glowed an amber—same as the sky above—spilling a thin stream of fire. The fire rose in a column, twisting like a serpent, its heat licking the air. Nyx’s form shivered, his shadow stretching longer, merging with the fire. He raised his hand, and the fire dimmed, the orange flame turning into a soft amber glow that illuminated the corridor. “We can walk through,” he said, voice a breath that seemed to carry the scent of night. Isolde stepped into the amber light, her feet leaving no mark. She raised a hand, and the vines that had once guarded the doorway recoiled, revealing a stone altar at the far end of the corridor. The altar was carved from a single slab of crystal, its surface etched with runes that pulsed in time with the Heartstone. Rory approached the altar, the pendant’s pulse matching the rhythm of the runes. She placed the pendant on the stone, and a wave of warmth surged, flooding the corridor with an inner glow that made the walls shimmer like liquid glass. The runes flared, and a low chant rose from the stone, a sound that seemed to be both a warning and an invitation. Nyx hovered above the altar, his violet eyes reflecting the amber light. He extended a hand, and a shadowed blade materialized, its edge cold and sharp, a twin to the moonsilver dagger at Rory’s hip. The blade sang as it cut the air, a sound that made the stone vibrate. Isolde’s lips moved, and a riddle slipped from her mouth: “When the moon kisses the sun, the hidden shall be seen.” Her words hung, a clue that seemed to wrap around the moment like ivy. Rory felt the air shift, a subtle change that made her skin prickle. The pendant glowed brighter, the crimson pulse now a steady beacon. She drew the moonsilver dagger, its cold touch a comfort against the warmth of the stone. She lifted the blade, and the runes on the altar flared, a cascade of silver light that spilled onto the floor. Nyx’s shadow elongated, merging with the light, and for a heartbeat the corridor became a place where darkness and illumination danced together. The violet hum of his voice rose, a whisper that seemed to echo through centuries. “We are at the edge,” he said, each word a ripple that disturbed the stillness. Behind them, the wildflowers swayed, their petals pulsing with a light that mirrored the amber sky. A distant bell rang again, a sound that seemed to come from the heart of the grove itself. The air thrummed with a melody that made the stones sing. Rory turned to Isolde, her eyes reflecting the silver blade and the crimson pendant. She held the dagger aloft, the moonlight catching its edge, and the blade sang a note that resonated with the altar. “The veil is thin,” she said, her voice a calm that cut through the hum, “the path opens.” Isolde placed a hand on the altar, her silver hair brushing the crystal. The runes flared, and a thin veil of mist rose, curling around the trio like a living thing. The mist shimmered, revealing fleeting images—a banquet of exotic fruits from Dymas, a feast of endless indulgence, a throne of vines and stone. The visions flickered, each a promise of excess and danger. Nyx watched the mist, his violet eyes narrowing. He lifted a hand, and the mist recoiled, forming a shape—a doorway that pulsed with a faint inner glow, a portal that seemed to lead beyond the grove, perhaps to the realm of Hel. He turned his head, and the amber sky above the grove shifted, a subtle change that made the light dim for a heartbeat before flaring again. Rory felt a chill run down her spine, the cold of the dagger meeting the warmth of the pendant. She pressed the pendant to her chest, feeling its pulse sync with the heartbeat of the grove. “We must decide,” she said, voice steady, “whether to step through or stay.” Isolde’s gaze lingered on the portal, her eyes reflecting the violet glow of Nyx’s eyes. “The veil is a barrier, but also a bridge,” she said, each word a riddle that seemed to echo in the stone. “We can walk between worlds, but each step costs a piece of us.” Nyx drifted close, his form shifting between solid and incorporeal, his violet aura mingling with the amber light. “The veil thins at the solstice, but it flick not broken,” he whispered, his voice a wind that brushed the leaves. “It watches, it remembers.” The trio stood at the edge of the portal, the ancient oak stones surrounding them like silent witnesses. The Heartstone Pendant glowed brighter, its crimson light a steady beacon against the amber sky. The moonsilver blade hummed, its cold edge a promise of cutting through any ward that might block their way. The mist swirled, revealing more visions—glimpses of a grand feast in Dymas, a banquet where souls were bound to taste eternity, a throne of vines that pulsed with a power that could bend reality. Rory inhaled, the scent of wildflowers and burnt sugar filling her lungs. She lifted the pendant, feeling its warmth spread through her fingertips. She placed the dagger against the altar, and the runes flared, a cascade of silver light that illuminated the portal. The doorway shimmered, its edges rippling like water. Nyx’s shadow stretched, merging with the portal’s light, and for a fleeting moment the veil seemed to pulse, a thin line that trembled between worlds. The violet glow of his eyes intensified, and his voice rose, a whisper that seemed to carry the weight of centuries. “We step together,” he said, his words a promise that resonated within the stone. Isolde lifted her hand, her silver hair catching the amber light, and she placed a gentle palm on the portal’s edge. The mist recoiled, revealing a path of moonlit stones that led into a realm of excess, where the sky blazed with a warm amber hue and the air smelled of ripe fruit and charred sugar. The path beckoned, a promise of unknown wonders and peril. Rory felt the heartbeat of the Heartstone sync with the pulse of the portal. She tightened her grip on the moonsilver dagger, feeling the cold bite of the metal. She stepped forward, the pendant’s glow illuminating the stone beneath her feet. The portal’s edge rippled, and a soft, resonant hum filled the clearing, a sound that seemed to echo the beating of a heart. Nyx drifted beside her, his form shifting as he moved, the violet light trailing like a comet’s tail. He placed a hand on her shoulder, a gesture that felt both comforting and unsettling. “We move as one,” he said, his voice a wind that brushed the leaves. Isolde followed, her presence a calm that steadied the air. She lifted her hand, and the ancient oak stones seemed to bow, their runes glowing in harmony with the Heartstone. The portal widened, a doorway of amber light framed by vines that pulsed with an inner glow. The trio stepped through, the world shifting as they crossed the threshold. The air grew thick with the scent of spices, the sound of distant laughter, the hum of a thousand voices chanting in unison. The sky above was a tapestry of amber and violet, a horizon that stretched into infinity. The ground beneath them was a mosaic of vineyards, orchards, and gardens that seemed to grow in impossible patterns, each plant bearing fruit that glowed with an inner fire. Rory’s eyes widened as she surveyed the scene. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed, its crimson glow matching the amber sky. She lifted the moonsilver dagger, its edge cutting through the air with a whisper that made the vines tremble. She felt the weight of the moment, the thrill of stepping into a realm of indulgence and danger. Nyx’s shadow stretched across the ground, merging with the vines, his violet eyes reflecting the endless banquet that unfolded before them. He smiled, a grin that seemed to be made of darkness, and the wind carried his laughter like a secret. Isolde moved forward, her silver hair flowing like a river of moonlight. She placed a hand on a vine, and the vine responded, its leaves shimmering with a pale lavender hue. She spoke, her words a riddle that floated on the breeze: “When the feast ends, the soul returns home.” The trio continued deeper, their footsteps echoing on the stone path. The air grew warmer, the smell of roasted meat mingling with the sweet perfume of exotic fruit. The distant bell rang again, a sound that seemed to mark the passage of time in this alien place. Rory felt the Heartstone’s pulse grow steady, a rhythm that matched the beating of her own heart. She glanced at Nyx, his violet eyes flickering with curiosity. She glanced at Isolde, her lavender eyes reflecting the endless banquet. The moment stretched, a breath that held the promise of discovery and the whisper of unease. The scene paused, the group standing at the edge of a grand hall where a table stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with dishes that glowed and steam that rose in ribbons of color. The air thrummed with anticipation, the veil between worlds thin enough to hear the soft sigh of distant realms. The adventure lay ahead, the world unfolding beneath their feet, each step a promise and a peril.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:44:59.814Z" 2/19/2026, 3:44:59 AM
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2377
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2377
totalAiIsms65
found
0
word"pulse"
count8
1
word"quickened"
count1
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"weight"
count5
5
word"whisper"
count5
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"resonated"
count3
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"chill"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count5
11
word"crystal"
count3
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count2
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count5
17
word"beacon"
count2
18
word"echo"
count3
19
word"shimmered"
count2
20
word"fleeting"
count2
21
word"down her spine"
count1
22
word"peril"
count2
23
word"comforting"
count1
24
word"tapestry"
count1
25
word"mosaic"
count1
26
word"footsteps"
count1
27
word"echoing"
count1
28
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"quickened"
2"loomed"
3"flickered"
4"weight"
5"whisper"
6"flicker"
7"resonated"
8"vibrated"
9"chill"
10"warmth"
11"crystal"
12"reminder"
13"echoed"
14"trembled"
15"etched"
16"pulsed"
17"beacon"
18"echo"
19"shimmered"
20"fleeting"
21"down her spine"
22"peril"
23"comforting"
24"tapestry"
25"mosaic"
26"footsteps"
27"echoing"
28"anticipation"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"the weight of the moment"
3"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences132
matches
0"a wave of warmth"
1"felt a chill"
2"d with anticipation"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount18
narrationSentences132
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2371
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount2228
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone8
Pendant4
Rory15
Nyx15
Isolde13
Dymas3
Hel1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Dymas"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences130
glossingSentenceCount15
matches
0"runes that seemed to breathe"
1"oaks that seemed to lean in, their branches forming arches that filtered the sky into shards of amber and violet"
2"line that seemed to hold centuries of secrets"
3"sound that seemed to come from both the earth and the sky"
4"breath that seemed to carry the scent of night"
5"sound that seemed to be both a warning and an invitation"
6"clue that seemed to wrap around the moment like ivy"
7"whisper that seemed to echo through centuries"
8"sound that seemed to come from the heart of the grove itself"
9"portal that seemed to lead beyond the grove, perhaps to the realm of Hel"
10"riddle that seemed to echo in the stone"
11"whisper that seemed to carry the weight of centuries"
12"sound that seemed to echo the beating of a heart"
13"grin that seemed to be made of darkness, and the wind carried his laughter like a secret"
14"sound that seemed to mark the passage of time in this alien place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.422
wordCount2371
matches
0"not from any creature but from the stone itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
13.34% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean55.14
std10.84
cv0.197
sampleLengths
071
149
238
343
455
564
650
757
842
948
1064
1151
1259
1367
1450
1549
1658
1764
1850
1935
2061
2152
2245
2353
2464
2568
2649
2750
2843
2986
3051
3160
3266
3364
3447
3547
3680
3756
3841
3950
4047
4154
4273
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences132
matches
0"was framed"
1"was carved"
2"were bound"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs360
matches(empty)
37.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences136
ratio0.037
matches
0"He raised a hand, and the shadows coalesced into a shape—a doorway made of pure darkness, its edges humming with an unseen power."
1"The ground trembled, and a fissure opened, a crack that glowed an amber—same as the sky above—spilling a thin stream of fire."
2"The mist shimmered, revealing fleeting images—a banquet of exotic fruits from Dymas, a feast of endless indulgence, a throne of vines and stone."
3"He lifted a hand, and the mist recoiled, forming a shape—a doorway that pulsed with a faint inner glow, a portal that seemed to lead beyond the grove, perhaps to the realm of Hel."
4"The mist swirled, revealing more visions—glimpses of a grand feast in Dymas, a banquet where souls were bound to taste eternity, a throne of vines that pulsed with a power that could bend reality."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2234
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.011190689346463742
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0004476275738585497
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
77.40% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean17.43
std5.99
cv0.344
sampleLengths
017
119
218
317
417
514
618
724
814
917
1015
1111
1211
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2110
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2512
2630
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30.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.11764705882352941
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners16
25.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.008
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences132
matches
0"She pressed the pendant against"
1"She lifted a hand, and"
2"she said, each word a"
3"She turned, the pendant’s glow"
4"she said, voice low"
5"He raised a hand, and"
6"she said, and the vines"
7"She glanced at the blade"
8"She slipped the dagger from"
9"He raised a hand, and"
10"he whispered, the wind carrying"
11"She placed a palm on"
12"she said, each phrase a"
13"He raised his hand, and"
14"he said, voice a breath"
15"She raised a hand, and"
16"She placed the pendant on"
17"He extended a hand, and"
18"She drew the moonsilver dagger,"
19"She lifted the blade, and"
ratio0.333
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount130
totalSentences132
matches
0"Rory lifted the silver chain"
1"The pulse quickened as the"
2"Nyx slipped between their trunks,"
3"Isolde’s silver hair brushed the"
4"The air smelled of damp"
5"Wildflowers, colors that defied the"
6"A low hum rose from"
7"Nyx’s voice slipped through the"
8"The words hung in the"
9"Rory’s eyes narrowed, the bright"
10"She pressed the pendant against"
11"Isolde stepped forward, her feet"
12"She lifted a hand, and"
13"she said, each word a"
14"The trio moved deeper, the"
15"Light filtered through leaves in"
16"A low, melodic chime resonated"
17"Rory reached out, her fingers"
18"The slab vibrated, a tremor"
19"She turned, the pendant’s glow"
ratio0.985
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences112
technicalSentenceCount29
matches
0"Nyx slipped between their trunks, a silhouette of living shadow that flickered like candlelight caught in a draft."
1"Wildflowers, colors that defied the usual palette, swayed in a rhythm that felt rehearsed."
2"Rory’s eyes narrowed, the bright blue of them reflecting the amber sky that stretched over the grove."
3"She lifted a hand, and the ancient stones glowed faintly, their runes shifting from dark to a pale lavender that matched her eye color."
4"The trio moved deeper, the path narrowing between towering oaks that seemed to lean in, their branches forming arches that filtered the sky into shards of amber…"
5"A low, melodic chime resonated from somewhere unseen, a sound that made the heartstone beat louder."
6"Nyx drifted ahead, his form spilling into the shadows, then coalescing as a solid silhouette that brushed the stone."
7"She glanced at the blade at her hip, its moonsilver edge catching a sliver of moonlight that filtered through the foliage."
8"The darkness rippled, revealing a corridor of obsidian that stretched into a horizon that was both far and near."
9"He raised his hand, and the fire dimmed, the orange flame turning into a soft amber glow that illuminated the corridor."
10"Rory felt the air shift, a subtle change that made her skin prickle."
11"The violet hum of his voice rose, a whisper that seemed to echo through centuries."
12"Behind them, the wildflowers swayed, their petals pulsing with a light that mirrored the amber sky."
13"She held the dagger aloft, the moonlight catching its edge, and the blade sang a note that resonated with the altar."
14"He lifted a hand, and the mist recoiled, forming a shape—a doorway that pulsed with a faint inner glow, a portal that seemed to lead beyond the grove, perhaps t…"
15"He turned his head, and the amber sky above the grove shifted, a subtle change that made the light dim for a heartbeat before flaring again."
16"Nyx drifted close, his form shifting between solid and incorporeal, his violet aura mingling with the amber light."
17"The moonsilver blade hummed, its cold edge a promise of cutting through any ward that might block their way."
18"The mist swirled, revealing more visions—glimpses of a grand feast in Dymas, a banquet where souls were bound to taste eternity, a throne of vines that pulsed w…"
19"Nyx’s shadow stretched, merging with the portal’s light, and for a fleeting moment the veil seemed to pulse, a thin line that trembled between worlds."
20"The violet glow of his eyes intensified, and his voice rose, a whisper that seemed to carry the weight of centuries."
21"The mist recoiled, revealing a path of moonlit stones that led into a realm of excess, where the sky blazed with a warm amber hue and the air smelled of ripe fr…"
22"Nyx drifted beside her, his form shifting as he moved, the violet light trailing like a comet’s tail."
23"He placed a hand on her shoulder, a gesture that felt both comforting and unsettling."
24"Isolde followed, her presence a calm that steadied the air."
25"The ground beneath them was a mosaic of vineyards, orchards, and gardens that seemed to grow in impossible patterns, each plant bearing fruit that glowed with a…"
26"She lifted the moonsilver dagger, its edge cutting through the air with a whisper that made the vines tremble."
27"Nyx’s shadow stretched across the ground, merging with the vines, his violet eyes reflecting the endless banquet that unfolded before them."
28"The moment stretched, a breath that held the promise of discovery and the whisper of unease."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"she said, each word a riddle that wrapped around the moment"
1"she said, voice low,"
2"she said, and the vines twitched, parting to reveal a corridor of floating motes that drifted upward, leaving trails of silver dust"
3"he whispered, the wind carrying his words to the others"
4"Isolde’s lips moved, and a riddle slipped from her mouth:"
5"he said, each word a ripple that disturbed the stillness"
6"she said, her voice a calm that cut through the hum,"
7"she said, voice steady,"
8"he whispered, his voice a wind that brushed the leaves"
9"he said, his words a promise that resonated within the stone"
10"he said, his voice a wind that brushed the leaves"
11"She spoke, her words a riddle that floated on the breeze:"
42.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
2"She spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.214
62.5355%