Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00GNRQE019VSNJS7JT1PD

Run Details

Duration:
8.8s
Cost:
$0.000603
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just after midnight, sharp and insistent, like someone had pressed their knuckles to the wood and refused to lift them. Rory froze mid-sip, the lukewarm tea in her mug forgotten. Ptolemy’s ears twitched from his perch on the windowsill, tail flicking once before he slunk behind the sofa. She set the mug down with a quiet *clink* against the chipped saucer. No one knocked at this hour unless they were lost, drunk, or trouble. The deadbolts held firm, but the sound came again—three rapid strikes, then a pause, then two more. A pattern. One she recognised. Her fingers tightened around the edge of the counter. *No. Not possible.* The knock repeated, louder this time. A voice followed, smooth as aged whiskey, laced with that damnable French accent. “Rory. Open the door.” She exhaled through her nose, sharp and controlled. The flat smelled of old paper and the faint tang of curry seeping up from the restaurant below. She should’ve known. Should’ve *felt* him coming, the way the air thickened before a storm. Ptolemy hissed from his hiding spot. Rory crossed the room in three strides, her bare feet silent against the worn floorboards. She pressed her palm to the door, felt the vibration of another knock through the wood. “Go away, Lucien.” A beat of silence. Then, “I would, *chérie*, but you left something of mine.” Her stomach dropped. *Shit.* The ledger. The one she’d swiped from his office three months ago, the one with names and debts and half the supernatural underworld’s secrets scrawled in his precise handwriting. She’d meant to return it. Eventually. She unlatched the first deadbolt. Then the second. The third stuck, and she had to jiggle it before it gave with a metallic groan. The door swung open just enough to reveal him—tall, immaculate, leaning against the frame like he owned the place. His cane tapped once against the floor, the ivory handle gleaming under the flickering hallway light. Lucien’s gaze raked over her, slow and deliberate. “You look like hell.” She didn’t rise to it. “What do you want?” “What I’ve always wanted.” His lips quirked, just slightly. “For you to stop stealing from me.” Rory stepped back, letting the door swing wider. The flat’s dim light spilled over him—tailored charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back, those damn eyes, one amber, one black, catching the glow like polished stone. He smelled like expensive cologne and something darker, something that made her pulse jump. She crossed her arms. “You could’ve called.” “And miss the chance to see your face?” He pushed off the frame, stepping inside without invitation. The door clicked shut behind him. “Besides, you never answer.” Ptolemy chose that moment to dart out from behind the sofa, back arched, tail puffed. Lucien didn’t flinch. He simply crouched, extending a hand. “Bonjour, *petit monstre*.” The cat sniffed his fingers, then—traitor—rubbed his cheek against Lucien’s knuckles before slinking away. Rory scowled. “He hates everyone.” “Not everyone.” Lucien straightened, his gaze flicking to the stack of books on the coffee table, the half-empty tea mug, the way her fingers dug into her own arms. “You’ve been busy.” “Not that it’s any of your business.” He smirked. “Everything you do is my business, *Laila*.” The name hit like a spark to dry kindling. She hadn’t heard it in months—not since the last time they’d stood this close, not since the night she’d walked out of his office with the ledger tucked under her arm and his voice raw in her ears. *Don’t you dare.* She turned away, moving to the kitchenette. “Tea?” “No.” “Whiskey, then.” “You don’t have any.” She yanked open a cabinet, grabbed the half-empty bottle of cheap bourbon she kept for emergencies. “I do now.” Lucien watched as she poured two fingers into a chipped glass, the liquid sloshing slightly. She didn’t offer him one. He didn’t ask. She downed it in one go, the burn grounding her. “You could’ve sent someone else.” “And risk them seeing what’s in that ledger?” He tilted his head. “I don’t trust anyone else with my secrets.” “Funny. You trusted me.” His expression darkened, just for a second. “I did.” The air between them thickened, heavy with things unsaid. The ledger sat on the desk, half-buried under a pile of notes. She could grab it, toss it at him, and be done with this. But the way he was looking at her—like he could see straight through her—made her fingers twitch at her sides. Lucien stepped closer. Not enough to crowd her, but enough that she could feel the heat of him, the way his presence filled the cramped space. “You took it for a reason.” She didn’t answer. “Was it the money?” His voice dropped, rougher now. “Or was it because you knew it would piss me off?” She turned, leaning back against the counter. “Maybe I just wanted to see if you’d notice.” His jaw tightened. “I notice everything about you, *chérie*. Even when I don’t want to.” The words hung between them, sharp and honest. She should’ve looked away. Should’ve laughed it off, deflected, done anything but stand there, her pulse hammering in her throat. Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. She didn’t pull away. “You’re bleeding.” She glanced down. A thin line of red welled from a paper cut she hadn’t noticed. He lifted her hand, his thumb pressing lightly against the wound. The sting faded, replaced by something warmer, something that made her breath catch. “You always were careless,” he murmured. “And you always were a liar.” His grip tightened, just slightly. “I never lied to you.” “No?” She met his gaze, unflinching. “Then what do you call it when you let me walk out that door?” His thumb stilled. The air between them crackled, charged with something dangerous. “I call it the biggest mistake of my life.” She should’ve stepped back. Should’ve told him to leave. But the way he was looking at her—like she was the only thing in the room, the only thing that mattered—made her stomach twist. Lucien’s free hand came up, his fingers tangling in the hair at the nape of her neck. “Tell me to stop.” She didn’t. His mouth crashed into hers, hot and demanding. She gasped, her hands flying to his chest, but she didn’t push him away. Instead, her fingers curled into the lapels of his jacket, pulling him closer. He tasted like sin and whiskey, like every bad decision she’d ever made wrapped up in one. He groaned against her lips, his grip tightening. “You drive me insane.” She nipped his lower lip. “Good.” He backed her against the counter, his body pressing into hers. The ledger, the reason he’d come, the months of silence—none of it mattered. Not when his hands were on her, not when his mouth was tracing fire down her throat. Ptolemy yowled from the sofa, but neither of them paid him any mind. Lucien’s fingers found the hem of her shirt, slipping beneath to trace the bare skin of her waist. She arched into him, her breath coming in sharp gasps. “We shouldn’t—” “Shut up, Rory.” She obeyed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His lips quirked just [just]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.326
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.047
83.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1212
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1212
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count2
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"gleaming"
3"pulse"
4"could feel"
5"charged"
6"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords14
totalWords1199
ratio0.012
matches
0"clink"
1"No. Not possible."
2"felt"
3"chérie"
4"Shit."
5"petit monstre"
6"Laila"
7"Don’t you dare."
8"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount989
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
French1
Rory4
Lucien9
Ptolemy4
Should3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Should"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like expensive cologne and somethi"
1"tasted like sin and whiskey, like every b"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.834
wordCount1199
matches
0"Not enough to crowd her, but enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean20.67
std15.79
cv0.764
sampleLengths
051
148
212
323
441
56
634
714
839
959
1012
119
1216
1348
147
1527
1627
1714
185
1932
207
219
2250
238
241
252
264
2719
2823
2915
3020
314
329
3354
3432
353
3620
3716
3815
3928
4018
4140
426
436
4410
4520
4621
4733
4821
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
88.89% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was looking"
1"was looking"
2"was tracing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences136
ratio0.059
matches
0"The deadbolts held firm, but the sound came again—three rapid strikes, then a pause, then two more."
1"The door swung open just enough to reveal him—tall, immaculate, leaning against the frame like he owned the place."
2"The flat’s dim light spilled over him—tailored charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back, those damn eyes, one amber, one black, catching the glow like polished stone."
3"The cat sniffed his fingers, then—traitor—rubbed his cheek against Lucien’s knuckles before slinking away."
4"She hadn’t heard it in months—not since the last time they’d stood this close, not since the night she’d walked out of his office with the ledger tucked under her arm and his voice raw in her ears."
5"But the way he was looking at her—like he could see straight through her—made her fingers twitch at her sides."
6"But the way he was looking at her—like she was the only thing in the room, the only thing that mattered—made her stomach twist."
7"The ledger, the reason he’d come, the months of silence—none of it mattered."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1002
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03592814371257485
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007984031936127744
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean8.82
std6.65
cv0.754
sampleLengths
023
110
218
313
413
517
62
73
89
91
102
116
1213
134
148
1518
163
1712
186
1915
2016
213
224
2310
243
253
2627
275
281
295
303
3116
3219
3316
348
354
365
374
389
397
408
4126
4214
434
443
4517
466
474
4815
493
47.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.27941176470588236
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners38
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Instead, her fingers curled into"
ratio0.022
30.99% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences91
matches
0"She set the mug down"
1"Her fingers tightened around the"
2"She exhaled through her nose,"
3"She should’ve known."
4"She pressed her palm to"
5"Her stomach dropped."
6"She’d meant to return it."
7"She unlatched the first deadbolt."
8"His cane tapped once against"
9"She didn’t rise to it."
10"His lips quirked, just slightly"
11"He smelled like expensive cologne"
12"She crossed her arms."
13"He pushed off the frame,"
14"He simply crouched, extending a"
15"She hadn’t heard it in"
16"She turned away, moving to"
17"She yanked open a cabinet,"
18"She didn’t offer him one."
19"He didn’t ask."
ratio0.473
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences91
matches
0"The knock came just after"
1"Rory froze mid-sip, the lukewarm"
2"Ptolemy’s ears twitched from his"
3"She set the mug down"
4"The deadbolts held firm, but"
5"Her fingers tightened around the"
6"The knock repeated, louder this"
7"A voice followed, smooth as"
8"She exhaled through her nose,"
9"The flat smelled of old"
10"She should’ve known."
11"Ptolemy hissed from his hiding"
12"Rory crossed the room in"
13"She pressed her palm to"
14"A beat of silence."
15"Her stomach dropped."
16"The one she’d swiped from"
17"She’d meant to return it."
18"She unlatched the first deadbolt."
19"The third stuck, and she"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He smelled like expensive cologne and something darker, something that made her pulse jump."
1"The sting faded, replaced by something warmer, something that made her breath catch."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.047
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.047
82.7741%