Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00NFPWP5EJ334FJ22Y04W

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.000557
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the back of Quinn’s throat like rust. Her torch cut through the dark, illuminating peeling posters advertising long-forgotten theatre shows, their edges curled like dead leaves. The air hummed, not with the usual London underground vibration, but with something else. A low, persistent thrum, like a tuning fork struck and left to vibrate against bone. “You’re late.” The voice came from the shadows, sharp as a blade unsheathed. DS Carter didn’t turn around, his back to her as he crouched near the body. His torch lay abandoned beside him, its beam pooling uselessly against the tiled wall. Quinn stepped over a shattered tile, her boots crunching on something brittle. She didn’t answer. Late meant she’d had time to stop at the café on the corner, to watch the steam rise from her black coffee while she flipped through the case file one last time. Late meant she’d seen the way the constable’s hands had shaken when he’d handed her the call log. *Something’s not right down there, ma’am. Not right at all.* She crouched beside Carter, her knee pressing into the cold, damp ground. The body lay sprawled across the tracks, limbs splayed like a broken marionette. A man, mid-thirties, dressed in a tailored suit that had seen better days. His tie was loosened, his shirt cuffs rolled up to the elbows. No signs of struggle. No defensive wounds. Just a single, neat puncture in the centre of his chest, dark and precise as a tailor’s pin. “No blood,” Quinn said. Carter exhaled through his nose, a sound that might’ve been a laugh if it hadn’t been so hollow. “Not a drop.” She reached out, her gloved fingers hovering just above the wound. The skin around it was unmarred, no bruising, no tearing. Just that single, perfect hole. She leaned in closer. The air above the body shimmered, like heat rising from asphalt. She blinked, and it was gone. “You see that?” she asked. Carter didn’t look up. “See what?” Quinn’s jaw tightened. She didn’t repeat herself. Instead, she shifted her gaze to the man’s hands. His fingers were curled slightly, as if he’d been holding something when he died. She reached into her pocket, pulled out a pen, and used it to pry his fingers apart. Nothing. Just the faintest smudge of something dark beneath his nails. She scraped at it with her pen, catching a flake of what looked like dried mud—or ash. “You run his prints?” she asked. “Clean,” Carter said. “No ID on him. No wallet, no phone. Just this.” He held up a small, brass compass, its face etched with strange, angular symbols. The needle spun lazily, then stilled, pointing not north, but directly at the body. Quinn took it from him, turning it over in her palm. The metal was cold, almost unnaturally so. The patina of verdigris clung to the edges, but the symbols were sharp, fresh. She’d seen enough forgeries in her time to know this wasn’t one. “Where’d you find it?” “In his hand,” Carter said. “Clutched like it was the last thing he ever held.” Quinn’s thumb traced the edge of the compass. The needle twitched, then swung wildly, pointing past the body, down the tunnel. She followed its direction with her torch. The beam caught on something glinting in the dark—a scattering of small, white objects half-buried in the grime. She stood, her boots splashing through shallow puddles as she moved closer. Bones. Not animal. Not human, either. Too small, too delicate. She crouched again, picking one up between her fingers. It was light, almost hollow. A finger bone, maybe. Or a toe. The end was jagged, as if it had been snapped rather than cut. She turned it over. Etched into the surface were the same symbols as the compass. “You see these?” she asked, holding it up. Carter didn’t move. “See what?” Quinn’s grip tightened around the bone. She stood, her torch sweeping the ground. More bones. Dozens of them, scattered like breadcrumbs leading deeper into the tunnel. She followed them, her pulse steady, her breath even. The thrumming in the air grew louder, vibrating in her teeth. Then she saw it. A door. Not a Tube station door. Not a maintenance hatch. This was something else entirely. Carved into the wall, its edges seamless, as if it had always been there and always would be. The wood was dark, almost black, and the handle was wrought iron, twisted into the shape of a serpent eating its own tail. The bones led straight to it, piling up at its base like an offering. Quinn reached out, her fingers brushing the wood. It was warm. Alive. “Quinn.” She turned. Carter stood a few paces behind her, his face pale in the torchlight. His hands were clenched at his sides, his knuckles white. “You don’t see any of this, do you?” she asked. He didn’t answer. His eyes flickered past her, to the door, then back. “See what?” She exhaled sharply. “The bones. The door. The *compass*.” Carter’s Adam’s apple bobbed. “There’s no door, Quinn. There’s no bones. Just the body. Just the tunnel.” She looked back at the door. The serpent handle seemed to writhe, its iron scales catching the light. She reached for it. “Quinn, don’t—” Her fingers closed around the handle. The metal burned, searing through her glove. She gasped, but didn’t let go. The door swung open with a groan, revealing not darkness, but a market. Stalls lined a cavernous space, their awnings strung with lanterns that cast a sickly, greenish light. The air smelled of incense and something metallic, like old coins. Figures moved between the stalls—some human, some not. A woman with too many eyes turned her head, her gaze locking onto Quinn. A man with skin like cracked leather hissed, baring teeth that were too sharp, too numerous. Quinn’s breath came fast. She stepped back, her boot crushing a bone beneath her heel. The door slammed shut. Silence. She turned. Carter was gone. The tunnel stretched empty behind her, the body still sprawled across the tracks. The compass lay where she’d dropped it, its needle spinning wildly. Quinn crouched, picking it up. The symbols on its face pulsed, glowing faintly in the dark. She closed her fingers around it, her grip tight. Then she heard it. A whisper. Not from the tunnel. Not from the market. From the compass itself. *“Find me.”*
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1091
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lazily"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1091
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"the last thing"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"searing"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"perfect"
2"shimmered"
3"etched"
4"the last thing"
5"traced"
6"glinting"
7"pulse"
8"flickered"
9"searing"
10"silence"
11"pulsed"
12"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences118
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords13
totalWords1084
ratio0.012
matches
0"Something’s not right down there, ma’am. Not right at all."
1"compass"
2"“Find me.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1001
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Quinn11
London1
Carter10
Adam1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Carter"
2"Adam"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.951
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like dried mud—or ash"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.768
wordCount1084
matches
0"not with the usual London underground vibration, but with something else"
1"not north, but directly at the body"
2"not darkness, but a market"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean25.81
std24.55
cv0.951
sampleLengths
069
142
275
375
44
521
647
75
86
975
106
1141
1248
1315
1458
151
1658
178
185
1946
204
212
2269
2312
241
2525
2610
2715
289
2917
3022
312
3232
3365
3419
351
3629
3725
384
392
4012
412
84.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences118
matches
0"was loosened"
1"was unmarred"
2"was gone"
3"were curled"
4"was jagged"
5"been snapped"
6"were clenched"
7"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs173
matches(empty)
54.26% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences129
ratio0.031
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the back of Quinn’s throat like rust."
1"She scraped at it with her pen, catching a flake of what looked like dried mud—or ash."
2"The beam caught on something glinting in the dark—a scattering of small, white objects half-buried in the grime."
3"Figures moved between the stalls—some human, some not."
85.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1008
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay abandoned beside him,"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.0496031746031746
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010912698412698412
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean8.4
std5.75
cv0.684
sampleLengths
021
119
214
315
413
515
614
712
83
932
1018
116
124
1312
1413
1513
1612
174
183
1918
204
2118
223
2311
2410
255
264
2711
286
295
304
312
323
334
349
3514
3617
371
3810
3917
406
413
4224
4314
4411
457
4614
4712
484
495
43.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3023255813953488
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences102
matches
0"Just a single, neat puncture"
1"Just that single, perfect hole."
2"Instead, she shifted her gaze"
3"Just the faintest smudge of"
4"Too small, too delicate."
5"Then she saw it."
6"Then she heard it."
ratio0.069
90.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences102
matches
0"Her torch cut through the"
1"His torch lay abandoned beside"
2"She didn’t answer."
3"She crouched beside Carter, her"
4"His tie was loosened, his"
5"She reached out, her gloved"
6"She leaned in closer."
7"She blinked, and it was"
8"She didn’t repeat herself."
9"His fingers were curled slightly,"
10"She reached into her pocket,"
11"She scraped at it with"
12"He held up a small,"
13"She’d seen enough forgeries in"
14"She followed its direction with"
15"She stood, her boots splashing"
16"She crouched again, picking one"
17"It was light, almost hollow."
18"She turned it over."
19"she asked, holding it up"
ratio0.324
62.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences102
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked"
1"Her torch cut through the"
2"The air hummed, not with"
3"A low, persistent thrum, like"
4"The voice came from the"
5"DS Carter didn’t turn around,"
6"His torch lay abandoned beside"
7"Quinn stepped over a shattered"
8"She didn’t answer."
9"*Something’s not right down there,"
10"She crouched beside Carter, her"
11"The body lay sprawled across"
12"A man, mid-thirties, dressed in"
13"His tie was loosened, his"
14"Carter exhaled through his nose,"
15"She reached out, her gloved"
16"The skin around it was"
17"She leaned in closer."
18"The air above the body"
19"She blinked, and it was"
ratio0.794
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station reeked of damp concrete and something older—something that clung to the back of Quinn’s throat like rust."
1"Stalls lined a cavernous space, their awnings strung with lanterns that cast a sickly, greenish light."
2"A man with skin like cracked leather hissed, baring teeth that were too sharp, too numerous."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.5840%