Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00P7XKWWNMDF3WCHZC94J

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Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.000413

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell echoed through the flat, a harsh, unexpected sound that sliced through the quiet hum of Rory's laptop. She looked up from her desk, her heart pounding as she pushed her glasses up her nose. The clock on her screen read 10:30 PM. Too late for Yu-Fei's deliveries, too late for unexpected visitors. Rory stood, her chair scraping against the wooden floor. She crossed the room, her steps echoing in the silence. She peered through the peephole, her breath catching in her throat. Standing on the other side was a figure from her past, a face she hadn't seen in over a year. Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, leaned against the doorframe, his heterochromatic eyes looking straight into hers. Rory took a deep breath, steeling herself before unlocking the three deadbolts. She swung the door open, her voice steady despite the turmoil within her. "Lucien. What are you doing here?" Lucien pushed off from the doorframe, a smirk playing on his lips. "Aurora Carter. Still as charming as ever, I see." His gaze swept over her, taking in her worn jeans, the oversized sweater, her hair tied up in a messy bun. "You're a sight for sore eyes." Rory crossed her arms, her eyes narrowing. "Flattery won't get you anywhere, Lucien. What do you want?" Lucien held up his hands in surrender, his smirk fading. "I come in peace, Rory. May I come in?" Rory hesitated, then stepped aside, allowing him to enter. Ptolemy, her tabby cat, chose that moment to make an appearance, rubbing against Lucien's legs. Lucien chuckled, bending down to scratch Ptolemy behind the ears. "Still the welcoming committee, I see." Rory closed the door, locking it behind her. "He likes you. I, on the other hand, am still undecided." Lucien straightened, turning to face her. "I deserve that. I deserve a lot of things from you, Rory. But I'm here to make amends." Rory raised an eyebrow, her arms still crossed. "Amends? After a year of silence?" Lucien sighed, running a hand through his slicked-back hair. "I know it's been a long time. I know I hurt you. But I had my reasons, Rory. Reasons I can't explain right now." Rory uncrossed her arms, her hands clenching into fists at her sides. "You can't explain? Or you won't?" Lucien met her gaze, his amber eye flickering. "Both. But I promise, I will. Just... give me a chance, Rory. Let me make this right." Rory looked at him, her bright blue eyes searching his face. She saw the sincerity in his eyes, the regret. She remembered the man she had fallen for, the man who had made her feel alive. She remembered the hurt, the betrayal. She remembered the love. "Fine," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "But you have a lot of explaining to do, Lucien." Lucien nodded, relief washing over his face. "I know. And I'm ready to do it. Can I sit down?" Rory gestured to the couch, watching as Lucien took a seat. She sat down on the armchair across from him, her body tense. "So," she said, her voice steady. "Start talking." Lucien took a deep breath, his eyes meeting hers. "I know you have questions, Rory. I know you deserve answers. But I need you to promise me something first." Rory raised an eyebrow. "Promise you what?" "That you'll hear me out," Lucien said, his voice serious. "That you'll let me explain everything before you make any judgments. Can you do that?" Rory hesitated, then nodded. "I can do that." Lucien smiled, a genuine smile that reached his eyes. "Thank you, Rory. More than you know." He took another deep breath, his eyes flickering as he searched for the right words. "I know I hurt you, Rory. I know I pushed you away. But it wasn't because I didn't care about you. It was because I cared about you too much." Rory frowned, her eyes narrowing. "What does that mean?" Lucien leaned forward, his elbows resting on his knees. "It means that I knew, from the moment I met you, that you were different. That you were special. And I knew that being with me, being a part of my world, would put you in danger." Rory's frown deepened. "Your world? What are you talking about, Lucien?" Lucien looked at her, his eyes filled with a mix of fear and determination. "I'm talking about the world I come from, Rory. The world of the supernatural. The world of demons and magic and things that go bump in the night." Rory stared at him, her eyes wide with shock. "You're joking," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien shook his head, his eyes serious. "I wish I was, Rory. But I'm not. I'm half-demon, Rory. My father is from the realm of Avaros. And my world is dangerous. Especially for someone like you." Rory looked at him, her mind racing. She thought of the things she had seen, the things she had experienced since meeting Lucien. She thought of the creatures she had fought, the magic she had witnessed. She thought of the man she had fallen in love with, the man who had broken her heart. "You're telling the truth," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Aren't you?" Lucien nodded, his eyes filled with pain. "I am, Rory. I wish I wasn't. I wish I could take it all back, wish I could go back to the day we met and change everything. But I can't. All I can do is try to make things right." Rory looked at him, her heart aching. She remembered the man she had fallen in love with, the man who had made her feel alive. She remembered the hurt, the betrayal. She remembered the love. "Why now, Lucien?" she asked, her voice steady. "Why come back now, after all this time?" Lucien took a deep breath, his eyes meeting hers. "Because I need your help, Rory. Because the world I come from, the world I've been trying to protect you from, is in danger. And I need your help to save it." Rory stared at him, her mind racing. She thought of the man she had fallen in love with, the man who had broken her heart. She thought of the danger, the magic, the world of the supernatural. She thought of the love, the hurt, the things left unsaid. "What do you need me to do?" she asked, her voice steady. Lucien smiled, a small, hopeful smile. "I need you to trust me, Rory. I need you to believe in me, in us. I need you to help me save the world." Rory looked at him, her heart aching. She remembered the love, the hurt, the things left unsaid. She remembered the man she had fallen in love with, the man who had made her feel alive. "I can do that," she said, her voice steady. "I can trust you, Lucien. I can believe in you. I can help you save the world." Lucien's smile widened, relief washing over his face. "Thank you, Rory. Thank you more than you know." He stood, walking over to her. He took her hand, his thumb brushing against her small crescent-shaped scar. "I promise you, Rory. I promise you that I will make this right. I promise you that I will protect you, that I will keep you safe. I promise you that I will love you, always." Rory looked at him, her heart aching. She remembered the love, the hurt, the things left unsaid. She remembered the man she had fallen in love with, the man who had made her feel alive. "I know you will, Lucien," she said, her voice steady. "I know you will." And with that, she leaned into him, her lips meeting his in a soft, tender kiss. A kiss that promised a second chance, a kiss that promised a future. A kiss that promised love, always.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count3
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1334
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"eyebrow"
count2
5
word"clenching"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count3
7
word"racing"
count2
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pounding"
2"echoing"
3"silence"
4"eyebrow"
5"clenching"
6"whisper"
7"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
72.26% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences79
matches
0"n in love"
1"n in love"
2"n in love"
3"n in love"
4"n in love"
70.52% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
97.35% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount1
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0.009
matches
0"\"I promise you, Rory. I promise you that I will make this right. I promise you that I will protect you, that I will keep you safe. I promise you that I will love you, always.\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1330
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount787
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.67
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory20
Yu-Fei1
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Lucien21
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Moreau"
3"Frenchman"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.166
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1330
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"chose that moment"
98.74% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean29.56
std14.65
cv0.496
sampleLengths
054
165
231
348
417
519
640
719
824
914
1033
1118
1225
1346
1419
1519
1631
1729
187
1925
208
2116
2245
239
2446
2511
2642
2719
2836
2954
3014
3148
3235
3316
3441
3548
3612
3731
3835
3926
4017
4154
4235
4314
4435
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences113
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount790
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.016455696202531647
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0037974683544303796
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean11.77
std7.49
cv0.636
sampleLengths
019
117
28
310
49
510
611
720
815
912
1013
116
1212
1330
146
157
1610
1710
189
199
2015
2110
226
238
2411
256
2618
278
286
299
3024
3112
326
338
3417
3511
369
3716
386
394
409
4110
427
4312
4411
4512
466
472
489
4920
33.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.26548672566371684
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners30
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Too late for Yu-Fei's deliveries,"
ratio0.013
47.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences79
matches
0"She looked up from her"
1"She crossed the room, her"
2"She peered through the peephole,"
3"She swung the door open,"
4"His gaze swept over her,"
5"She saw the sincerity in"
6"She remembered the man she"
7"She remembered the hurt, the"
8"She remembered the love."
9"she said, her voice barely"
10"She sat down on the"
11"she said, her voice steady"
12"He took another deep breath,"
13"she said, her voice barely"
14"She thought of the things"
15"She thought of the creatures"
16"She thought of the man"
17"she said, her voice barely"
18"She remembered the man she"
19"She remembered the hurt, the"
ratio0.43
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences79
matches
0"The doorbell echoed through the"
1"She looked up from her"
2"The clock on her screen"
3"Rory stood, her chair scraping"
4"She crossed the room, her"
5"She peered through the peephole,"
6"Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, leaned"
7"Rory took a deep breath,"
8"She swung the door open,"
9"Lucien pushed off from the"
10"His gaze swept over her,"
11"Rory crossed her arms, her"
12"Lucien held up his hands"
13"Rory hesitated, then stepped aside,"
14"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, chose"
15"Lucien chuckled, bending down to"
16"Rory closed the door, locking"
17"Lucien straightened, turning to face"
18"Rory raised an eyebrow, her"
19"Lucien sighed, running a hand"
ratio0.962
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The doorbell echoed through the flat, a harsh, unexpected sound that sliced through the quiet hum of Rory's laptop."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"she said, her voice steady"
2"Lucien said, his voice serious"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"she asked, her voice steady"
6"she asked, her voice steady"
7"she said, her voice steady"
8"she said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.409
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.5376%