Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00RMSQ8WFNSGSW4GW8JG4

Run Details

Duration:
10.4s
Cost:
$0.001017
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory’s knuckles could rap a second time against the wood. Lucien stood there, one hand braced against the frame, the other gripping his ivory-handled cane like it was the only thing keeping him upright. His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach clench. “You,” he said, voice rough as gravel underfoot. She should have known better than to come. Should have turned around the second she saw the light on in his flat above the bar. But here she was, standing in the dim hallway with the scent of old books and something darker—something like burnt sugar and gunpowder—lingering in the air between them. “Me,” Rory agreed, tilting her chin up. “Surprise.” Lucien didn’t move. Didn’t blink. Just stared at her like she was a ghost he’d been expecting for years. The silence stretched, thick and suffocating, until the distant hum of the fridge in his flat kicked on with a shuddering groan. Then, without a word, he stepped back. The invitation—or the challenge—was clear. Rory exhaled through her nose and crossed the threshold. The flat was exactly as she remembered: too small, too cluttered, too *him*. Stacks of leather-bound books teetered on every surface, their spines cracked with age. A half-empty glass of something amber and expensive sat on the coffee table, condensation beading down the sides. The air smelled like him—expensive cologne, old paper, and the faintest hint of something metallic, like blood. She turned just in time to see him shut the door with a quiet click. The deadbolt slid home. Then the chain. Then the second deadbolt. “Paranoid much?” she asked, though her pulse jumped at the finality of it. Lucien leaned against the door, cane tapping once against the hardwood. “You’re the one who showed up unannounced at midnight.” “It’s ten.” “Close enough.” She rolled her eyes, but the gesture felt hollow. Because he was right. She *had* shown up unannounced. And it *was* late. And the way he was looking at her—like she was both a threat and a miracle—made her skin prickle. “You going to offer me a drink?” she asked, nodding at the glass on the table. “Depends.” His voice was low, dangerous. “You planning to stay long enough to finish it?” Rory swallowed. The question hung between them, heavy with things unsaid. *Stay.* *Leave.* *Why are you here?* *Why did you ever leave?* She reached for the glass anyway. Lucien didn’t stop her. The whiskey burned going down, smooth and sharp all at once. She set the glass back on the table with a click, her fingers lingering on the rim. “I need your help.” A muscle twitched in his jaw. “Of course you do.” “It’s not like that.” “No?” He pushed off the door, moving toward her with the slow, deliberate grace of a predator. “Then what’s it like, *Laila*?” The name hit her like a slap. She flinched. Lucien noticed. His lips curved, just slightly. “Still don’t like that one, huh?” “It’s not my name.” “No?” He stopped just out of reach, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his pupils dilated when he looked at her. “Funny. I remember you answering to it just fine.” Heat flooded her cheeks. “That was different.” “Was it?” His voice dropped, rougher now. “Or are you just better at lying to yourself than you are to me?” Rory’s fingers curled into fists. “I didn’t come here to rehash old arguments.” “No?” He stepped closer. Close enough that she could feel the heat radiating off him, could smell the whiskey on his breath. “Then why *did* you come, *Aurora*?” The way he said her name—like it was a secret, like it was sacred—made her breath catch. She should have stepped back. Should have put distance between them. But she didn’t. Instead, she lifted her chin. “I told you. I need your help.” Lucien’s gaze darkened. “And what makes you think I’d give it to you?” “Because you owe me.” The words hung between them, sharp and final. For a long moment, neither of them moved. Then Lucien laughed—a low, bitter sound—and reached for the whiskey bottle on the side table. He poured himself a glass, then another for her, his movements precise, controlled. “Sit down,” he said, nodding at the couch. Rory hesitated. “Unless you’d rather stand there all night,” he added, taking a slow sip. “Your choice.” She sat. The couch was old, the leather worn smooth in places, but it still held the shape of him—of *them*. She shifted, trying to ignore the way her body remembered the way his had felt pressed against hers. Lucien settled into the armchair across from her, one leg crossed over the other, cane resting against his knee. He looked like a king holding court. Like a man who had all the time in the world. “Talk,” he said. Rory exhaled. “I need information.” “What kind?” “The kind you specialize in.” His fingers tapped against the armrest. “You’re going to have to be more specific.” She hesitated. Then, because she had no choice, she reached into her jacket and pulled out the photograph. It was creased at the edges, the image slightly blurred, but the subject was unmistakable. A man. Mid-forties. Sharp cheekbones, cold eyes. A scar running from his temple to his jawline. Lucien’s expression didn’t change. But his fingers stilled. “You know him,” Rory said. It wasn’t a question. “Everyone in this city knows *him*,” Lucien corrected. “The question is, why do *you*?” She didn’t answer. Didn’t have to. Lucien’s gaze flicked to the photograph, then back to her. “You’re not stupid, Rory. You know what he is.” “A monster,” she said flatly. “Worse.” Lucien set his glass down with a sharp *click*. “He’s a *hunter*.” The word settled between them like a stone. Rory’s stomach twisted. “I know.” “Then you also know what happens to people who cross him.” She met his eyes. “I’m not asking for me.” Lucien went very still. “Who, then?” Rory hesitated. Then, because she had no other choice, she said, “Eva.” The name hung in the air like a curse. Lucien’s expression darkened. “Eva’s dead.” “No.” Rory’s voice was steady, even though her hands weren’t. “She’s not.” Silence. Then— “You’re lying.” “I’m not.” “Prove it.” Rory reached into her pocket and pulled out the second photograph. This one was newer, the edges still sharp. Eva, alive, standing in front of a café in Camden. Smiling. Lucien didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. Just stared at the photograph like it was a ghost. Then, slowly, he reached out and took it from her. His fingers brushed hers. A spark. A memory. *His hands in her hair. Her back against the wall. The way he’d whispered her name like a prayer.* Rory jerked her hand back. Lucien’s gaze snapped to hers, sharp as a blade. “Where did you get this?” “Does it matter?” “Yes.” She exhaled. “Eva sent it to me. Three days ago.” “And you’re just now coming to me?” “I had to be sure.” “Sure of what?” “That she was really alive.” Rory’s voice cracked. “That this wasn’t some trick. Some game.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “And now you’re sure.” “Yes.” “Then why come to *me*?” Because I trust you. Because I don’t know who else to trust. Because I missed you. She didn’t say any of that. Instead, she said, “Because you’re the only one who can help me find her.” Lucien’s gaze held hers for a long, endless moment. Then, slowly, he set the photograph down on the coffee table. “You’re asking for a death sentence,” he said quietly. “I’m asking for your help.” “It’s the same thing.” Rory leaned forward. “Then help me.” Lucien didn’t answer. Didn’t move. Just stared at her like she was a puzzle he couldn’t solve. Then, finally, he reached for his cane and stood. “Get up,” he said. Rory blinked. “What?” “You heard me.” He held out a hand. “We’re leaving.” “Where are we going?” Lucien’s lips curved, just slightly. “To see a man about a monster.” Rory stared at his outstretched hand. Then, because she had no other choice, she took it. His fingers closed around hers, warm and strong. And just like that, she was lost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He stopped just [just]"
1"she said flatly [flatly]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.078
75.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1402
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1402
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"stomach"
2"silence"
3"pulse"
4"predator"
5"could feel"
6"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences195
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans17
markdownWords42
totalWords1386
ratio0.03
matches
0"him"
1"had"
2"was"
3"Stay."
4"Leave."
5"Why are you here?"
6"Why did you ever leave?"
7"Laila"
8"did"
9"Aurora"
10"them"
11"him"
12"you"
13"click"
14"hunter"
15"His hands in her hair. Her back against the wall. The way he’d whispered her name like a prayer."
16"me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1064
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Lucien20
Heat1
Close1
Silence1
Camden1
Didn4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Heat"
3"Silence"
places
0"Camden"
globalScore0.56
windowScore0.167
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like burnt sugar and gunpowder—lin"
1"smelled like him—expensive cologne, old pa"
2"looked like a king holding court"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1386
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences195
matches
0"like that, she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs108
mean12.83
std12.53
cv0.976
sampleLengths
054
18
253
38
441
57
65
770
826
913
1020
112
122
1341
1416
1515
1622
176
184
1932
2010
214
2222
239
2413
254
2640
277
2821
2913
3028
3131
3212
3313
344
358
3636
378
382
3915
402
4137
4237
433
445
452
465
4714
4833
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"was creased"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was, standing"
1"was looking"
10.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences195
ratio0.046
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach clench."
1"But here she was, standing in the dim hallway with the scent of old books and something darker—something like burnt sugar and gunpowder—lingering in the air between them."
2"The invitation—or the challenge—was clear."
3"The air smelled like him—expensive cologne, old paper, and the faintest hint of something metallic, like blood."
4"And the way he was looking at her—like she was both a threat and a miracle—made her skin prickle."
5"The way he said her name—like it was a secret, like it was sacred—made her breath catch."
6"Then Lucien laughed—a low, bitter sound—and reached for the whiskey bottle on the side table."
7"The couch was old, the leather worn smooth in places, but it still held the shape of him—of *them*."
8"Then—"
92.87% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1080
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.04814814814814815
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009259259259259259
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences195
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences195
mean7.11
std5.32
cv0.749
sampleLengths
015
124
215
38
48
517
628
77
81
93
102
1114
1222
137
145
159
1613
1713
1818
1917
2015
214
223
234
2413
2511
269
272
282
299
304
315
324
3319
3416
356
369
372
389
3911
406
414
4211
4317
444
456
464
474
4817
495
46.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.29743589743589743
totalSentences195
uniqueOpeners58
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount15
totalSentences117
matches
0"Just stared at her like"
1"Then, without a word, he"
2"Then the chain."
3"Then the second deadbolt."
4"Instead, she lifted her chin."
5"Then Lucien laughed—a low, bitter"
6"Then, because she had no"
7"Then, because she had no"
8"Just stared at the photograph"
9"Then, slowly, he reached out"
10"Instead, she said,"
11"Then, slowly, he set the"
12"Just stared at her like"
13"Then, finally, he reached for"
14"Then, because she had no"
ratio0.128
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences117
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked"
1"he said, voice rough as"
2"She should have known better"
3"She turned just in time"
4"she asked, though her pulse"
5"She rolled her eyes, but"
6"She *had* shown up unannounced."
7"she asked, nodding at the"
8"His voice was low, dangerous"
9"She reached for the glass"
10"She set the glass back"
11"He pushed off the door,"
12"His lips curved, just slightly."
13"He stopped just out of"
14"His voice dropped, rougher now"
15"He stepped closer"
16"She should have stepped back."
17"He poured himself a glass,"
18"he said, nodding at the"
19"he added, taking a slow"
ratio0.299
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences117
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Lucien stood there, one hand"
2"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked"
3"he said, voice rough as"
4"She should have known better"
5"Rory agreed, tilting her chin"
6"Lucien didn’t move."
7"The silence stretched, thick and"
8"The invitation—or the challenge—was clear."
9"Rory exhaled through her nose"
10"The flat was exactly as"
11"Stacks of leather-bound books teetered"
12"A half-empty glass of something"
13"The air smelled like him—expensive"
14"She turned just in time"
15"The deadbolt slid home."
16"she asked, though her pulse"
17"Lucien leaned against the door,"
18"She rolled her eyes, but"
19"She *had* shown up unannounced."
ratio0.718
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences117
matches
0"Because he was right."
1"Because I trust you."
2"Because I don’t know who"
3"Because I missed you."
ratio0.034
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach clench."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice rough as gravel underfoot"
1"she asked, though her pulse jumped at the finality of it"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory agreed (agree)"
1"he added (add)"
2"Lucien corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.169
leniency0.338
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.078
87.7867%