Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00SY07H99VGD8VVS3JVY0

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Duration:
1m 4s
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$0.069980
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Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The platform at Camden Town station had been closed to the public for six hours. Yellow tape stretched across the entrance. Portable floodlights cast a sterile glare over the old tiles. But Detective Harlow Quinn wasn't standing on the platform the public knew. She was three levels beneath it, at the bottom of a service stairwell that shouldn't have existed, in a tunnel that appeared on no Transport for London schematic she'd ever seen. The body lay face-down on a stretch of cracked Victorian tile. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a long coat that had seen better decades. No wallet, no phone, no identification of any kind. Just a pair of scorched handprints on the wall above him and a smell that reminded Quinn of burnt copper. She crouched. The worn leather of her watch strap creaked against her wrist as she pulled on nitrile gloves. Her knees complained. Eighteen years on the job had worn grooves in her joints the way water wears grooves in limestone — slowly, invisibly, until one day the whole thing threatens to give. "Pathologist puts time of death at roughly two a.m." DC Amara Osei stood a few paces back, tablet in hand, her face underlit by its glow. She was young, competent, and visibly unsettled by the location. "Preliminary cause: cardiac arrest." "Cardiac arrest." Quinn turned the words over like a counterfeit coin. She leaned closer to the dead man's hands. His fingernails were black. Not bruised. Black, as if dipped in ink that had dried and fused with the keratin. She'd seen something like it once before. Three years ago. The night Morris died. She sealed that thought behind glass and moved on. "Who found him?" "Maintenance crew doing a drainage survey at oh-six-hundred. They accessed this level through a utility hatch near the northbound tunnel. Said they'd never been down here before. Had to break through a bricked-up section to reach this chamber." Quinn stood and swept her gaze across the space. It wasn't a tunnel, not really. It was a room. Vaulted ceiling, decorative ironwork pillars, a floor pattern of alternating dark and light tiles like a chessboard. Alcoves lined the walls, each one roughly the size of a market stall. Some still held fragments of shelving. Others contained smashed glass, scattered powder, the remains of things she couldn't immediately categorize. "This was a station once?" "No record of it. I checked twice. The architecture's consistent with 1890s construction, but there's nothing in the archives." Quinn studied one of the alcoves. A length of velvet — deep burgundy, eaten by moths — hung from a brass rod. Beneath it, a wooden crate had been upended. Inside, packed in straw, sat a row of small glass bottles. Most were shattered. One remained intact, filled with a viscous liquid the color of a bruise. She didn't touch it. In the next alcove, the shelving had survived. Scratched into the wood, over and over, was a symbol she didn't recognize: a circle bisected by a vertical line, with two curved marks flanking it like horns or wings. The same symbol appeared on a brass plaque bolted to the nearest pillar, green with age. "Osei. What does this look like to you?" The DC approached, studied the space, scrolled through something on her tablet. "Some kind of storage facility? Black market, maybe. Could be decades old. The way these alcoves are arranged, it's like stalls." "Market stalls." "Right. Could tie to that Camden underground scene — the drug networks we've been mapping. Maybe our victim stumbled into something he shouldn't have." Quinn said nothing. She walked to the center of the room, where the body lay, and looked at the floor around it. The tiles here were different. Cleaner. Someone had swept them recently — within the last week, she'd guess, based on the thin film of dust that had accumulated since. Boot prints marked the dust in overlapping patterns. Not one person. Dozens. "This place was active recently." "Sorry?" "Look at the floor. Multiple sets of prints, different sizes, overlapping. This wasn't abandoned. People were here. Regularly." Osei frowned and crouched to photograph the prints. "Could still be a drug operation. Underground rave, maybe." "In a bricked-up chamber three levels below an active station? With no ventilation, no power supply, and an entrance that required demolition to reach?" "The maintenance crew had to break through the brick. But maybe there's another way in." Quinn was already looking for it. She moved past the body — noting the way the dead man's coat had ridden up, revealing a belt with an empty leather pouch on the hip — and followed the far wall. Behind the last row of alcoves, partially concealed by a collapsed shelf unit, she found it. A door. Iron, riveted, standing slightly ajar. Beyond it, a narrow passage led upward at a steep angle. She nudged the door wider with her elbow. The passage was lined with the same Victorian tile. Candle stubs filled small recesses in the walls. Recently burned. The wax had barely cooled. "There's our other entrance." Osei appeared at her shoulder. "Should I get a team down here?" "Not yet." Quinn turned back to the body. She circled it the way she circled every scene — methodically, widening her orbit each time, letting the room speak before she started asking questions. On her third pass, she spotted something beneath the dead man's right hand. His fingers were curled around an object. She knelt, tilted her head, and could just make out the edge of something round. Brass. The green patina of verdigris. She photographed it in situ, then carefully pried the fingers open. The object was a small compass. Its casing was etched with markings — not cardinal directions, not any navigational system she recognized, but symbols that matched the ones carved into the shelving. The needle quivered, then swung to point down the passage she'd just found, toward whatever lay at its other end. Quinn held the compass level and turned her body. The needle didn't track north. It tracked something else entirely. She slipped it into an evidence bag, but not before she noticed the way the needle had trembled when she first touched it. Almost like a heartbeat. "Quinn?" Osei's voice had gone careful. "What's his cause of death, do you think? Really?" "The pathologist said cardiac arrest." "And you believe that?" Quinn looked at the scorched handprints on the wall. They were too high — nearly eight feet up. The dead man was perhaps five-ten. You'd need to jump, or be lifted, or be thrown. The prints weren't smudged. They were perfect impressions, every line of the palm rendered in what appeared to be charred plaster. As if someone had pressed their hands to the wall with enough heat to burn through the surface layer. She examined the dead man's palms again. No burns. No residue. No calluses consistent with manual labor or climbing. His hands were clean — preternaturally so, given the filth of the surrounding environment. And those black fingernails. "The handprints aren't his," Quinn said. "How can you be sure?" "They're too high for his reach without assistance. His palms show no burn damage. And look at the spread." She held her own hand up near the mark, not touching. "Those prints are larger. Broader. Different person entirely." "So there was someone else here." "Someone else was here, and they left an impression of superhea—" She stopped herself. Rephrased. "They left burn marks consistent with extreme thermal contact. Yet there's no accelerant residue. No fire damage to the surrounding structure. Just the handprints." Osei was writing rapidly, but her pen had slowed. "That's not possible." "No. It isn't." Quinn straightened up and surveyed the room once more. A hidden chamber beneath Camden, set up like a market. Alcoves for vendors. A secret entrance maintained with candles. A dead man clutching a compass that pointed toward something other than magnetic north. Scorched handprints from hands too large and too hot to belong to anyone the evidence could explain. She pulled out her phone and scrolled through her contacts until she found a number she hadn't dialed in months. Eva Kowalski. A research assistant at the British Museum — someone Morris had introduced her to, back when Morris was alive and working angles Quinn hadn't understood at the time. Eva specialized in old things. Unusual things. The kind of things Quinn was looking at right now. She pressed call. Three rings. A breathless voice, the background noise of a busy archive. "Detective Quinn? It's been a while." "I need you to look at something, Kowalski. Tonight." A pause. Quinn heard the sound of a leather satchel being shifted, books resettling against each other. "What kind of something?" "The kind Morris would have called you about." Silence on the line. Long enough that Quinn checked the screen to see if the call had dropped. Then Eva's voice came back, stripped of its initial warmth, careful and precise. "Where?" "Camden. I'll send a car. And Eva—" Quinn looked down at the evidence bag in her hand, at the green-crusted compass with its impossible needle still straining toward the dark passage. "Bring whatever references you have on underground markets. The old kind. The ones that move." She ended the call. Osei was watching her with an expression Quinn recognized from every junior officer she'd ever partnered with — the look that said the case had just crossed a line they hadn't known existed. "Who was that?" "A consultant." "Since when do we use consultants?" Quinn dropped the evidence bag into her coat pocket and moved back toward the body. Something else had caught her eye — on the dead man's belt, the empty leather pouch. She opened it with gloved fingers and found a residue inside. Fine, chalky, bone-white. She brought it close to her face and sniffed. Calcium. Old calcium, the kind that came from ground bone. The pouch was sized for a token. Something small, flat, and round. An entry requirement, perhaps. A ticket to a place that shouldn't exist, run by people who shouldn't be possible, selling things that didn't obey the laws Quinn had built her entire career around. She stood, brushed off her knees, and looked at Osei. "Expand the cordon. I want this entire sublevel sealed. No one in or out except forensics, and I want them to document every alcove, every symbol, every piece of broken glass. Full photographic record." "You think this is bigger than one body." Quinn glanced at the handprints, still faintly radiating warmth on the wall above the dead man's head. She thought about Morris, alone in a basement in Whitechapel three years ago, his face frozen in an expression pathology had called "inconsistent with known medical phenomena." "I think this is where it starts making sense."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.17
leniency0.34
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1807
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1807
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"unsettled"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"quivered"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"structure"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count2
highlights
0"unsettled"
1"velvet"
2"shattered"
3"etched"
4"quivered"
5"trembled"
6"perfect"
7"structure"
8"magnetic"
9"silence"
10"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences135
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences174
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1812
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1373
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Town1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn21
Transport1
London1
Victorian2
Amara1
Osei7
Morris4
Rephrased1
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Eva3
Whitechapel1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Osei"
3"Morris"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"London"
3"British"
4"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.735
windowScore0.5
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"competent, and visibly unsettled by the lo"
1"something like it once before"
89.62% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.104
wordCount1812
matches
0"not cardinal directions, not any navigational system she recognized, but symbols"
1"not any navigational system she recognized, but symbols"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences174
matches
0"sealed that thought"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean26.26
std23.27
cv0.886
sampleLengths
074
152
252
340
453
59
63
738
869
95
1019
1157
124
1354
148
1533
162
1724
1863
195
201
2118
2217
2324
2415
2573
2632
274
2812
292
3072
3163
3219
3327
3415
355
364
3774
3837
396
405
4138
426
4339
4412
453
4659
4767
483
4912
84.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences135
matches
0"been closed"
1"been upended"
2"were shattered"
3"was lined"
4"were curled"
5"was etched"
6"being shifted"
7"was sized"
81.48% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs225
matches
0"wasn't standing"
1"was writing"
2"was looking"
3"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences174
ratio0.063
matches
0"Eighteen years on the job had worn grooves in her joints the way water wears grooves in limestone — slowly, invisibly, until one day the whole thing threatens to give."
1"A length of velvet — deep burgundy, eaten by moths — hung from a brass rod."
2"Someone had swept them recently — within the last week, she'd guess, based on the thin film of dust that had accumulated since."
3"She moved past the body — noting the way the dead man's coat had ridden up, revealing a belt with an empty leather pouch on the hip — and followed the far wall."
4"She circled it the way she circled every scene — methodically, widening her orbit each time, letting the room speak before she started asking questions."
5"Its casing was etched with markings — not cardinal directions, not any navigational system she recognized, but symbols that matched the ones carved into the shelving."
6"They were too high — nearly eight feet up."
7"His hands were clean — preternaturally so, given the filth of the surrounding environment."
8"A research assistant at the British Museum — someone Morris had introduced her to, back when Morris was alive and working angles Quinn hadn't understood at the time."
9"Osei was watching her with an expression Quinn recognized from every junior officer she'd ever partnered with — the look that said the case had just crossed a line they hadn't known existed."
10"Something else had caught her eye — on the dead man's belt, the empty leather pouch."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1365
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.0336996336996337
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.013186813186813187
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences174
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences174
mean10.41
std8.19
cv0.786
sampleLengths
015
16
210
312
431
511
612
79
820
92
1017
113
1230
1326
1410
154
1611
178
184
192
2014
217
223
234
249
253
2638
279
286
294
3017
3113
326
3314
345
3519
366
3716
388
3911
403
4113
424
438
4430
4516
468
4712
4821
492
76.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.47126436781609193
totalSentences174
uniqueOpeners82
84.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences119
matches
0"Just a pair of scorched"
1"Almost like a heartbeat."
2"Then Eva's voice came back,"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences119
matches
0"She was three levels beneath"
1"Her knees complained."
2"She was young, competent, and"
3"She leaned closer to the"
4"His fingernails were black."
5"She'd seen something like it"
6"She sealed that thought behind"
7"It wasn't a tunnel, not"
8"It was a room."
9"She didn't touch it."
10"She walked to the center"
11"She moved past the body"
12"She nudged the door wider"
13"She circled it the way"
14"His fingers were curled around"
15"She knelt, tilted her head,"
16"She photographed it in situ,"
17"Its casing was etched with"
18"It tracked something else entirely."
19"She slipped it into an"
ratio0.286
94.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences119
matches
0"The platform at Camden Town"
1"She was three levels beneath"
2"The body lay face-down on"
3"The worn leather of her"
4"Her knees complained."
5"DC Amara Osei stood a"
6"She was young, competent, and"
7"Quinn turned the words over"
8"She leaned closer to the"
9"His fingernails were black."
10"She'd seen something like it"
11"The night Morris died."
12"She sealed that thought behind"
13"Quinn stood and swept her"
14"It wasn't a tunnel, not"
15"It was a room."
16"Alcoves lined the walls, each"
17"Some still held fragments of"
18"Others contained smashed glass, scattered"
19"Quinn studied one of the"
ratio0.731
42.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"As if someone had pressed"
ratio0.008
61.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She was three levels beneath it, at the bottom of a service stairwell that shouldn't have existed, in a tunnel that appeared on no Transport for London schemati…"
1"Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a long coat that had seen better decades."
2"Just a pair of scorched handprints on the wall above him and a smell that reminded Quinn of burnt copper."
3"Its casing was etched with markings — not cardinal directions, not any navigational system she recognized, but symbols that matched the ones carved into the she…"
4"Osei was watching her with an expression Quinn recognized from every junior officer she'd ever partnered with — the look that said the case had just crossed a l…"
5"A ticket to a place that shouldn't exist, run by people who shouldn't be possible, selling things that didn't obey the laws Quinn had built her entire career ar…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She held, not touching"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.021
leniency0.043
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.8075%