Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00WBR9HADXXZ703NDEWSN

Run Details

Duration:
40.5s
Cost:
$0.001088

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood in the cramped kitchen of Eva's flat, the scent of curry wafting through the air from the restaurant below. She stirred a pot of lentils, her mind wandering to the stack of books piled high on the table. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged lazily on the windowsill, soaking up the afternoon sun. A sudden knock at the door jolted her from her thoughts. She wiped her hands on a dish towel, glancing at the clock. Eva was supposed to be at work, and no one else ever visited. Another knock, more insistent this time. Rory hesitated, her heart racing. She approached the door, her pulse quickening with each step. She peered through the peephole, her breath catching in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood on the other side, his slicked-back platinum hair gleaming in the light. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame perfectly, an ivory-handled cane resting against his side. She opened the door, her heart pounding. “Lucien,” she breathed, surprise mingling with a rush of emotions. “Rory,” he replied, his voice smooth, yet edged with something unspoken. The air thickened between them, memories flooding back—late-night conversations, stolen glances, the way he had made her laugh even when the world felt heavy. “What are you doing here?” she asked, trying to keep her voice steady. “I needed to see you.” He stepped inside, the door clicking shut behind him. Rory crossed her arms, a defensive posture. “You could have called.” “I thought it best to come in person.” He glanced around the flat, his gaze lingering on the clutter of books and scrolls. “You’ve made quite the nest for yourself.” “Yeah, well, it’s not a palace,” she shot back, her tone sharper than she intended. Lucien’s lips quirked into a half-smile, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “I see you’re still as charming as ever.” “Charming? Is that what you call it?” She stepped back, creating distance. “You didn’t seem to think so last time we spoke.” He shifted, the cane tapping lightly against the floor. “I came to apologize.” “Apologize?” She scoffed, disbelief coloring her voice. “You think that’s enough?” “I know it’s not enough.” His expression turned serious, the playful banter fading. “But I need you to understand—” “Understand what? That you just disappeared? That you left me to pick up the pieces?” “I had my reasons.” “Right, your reasons.” She waved a hand dismissively. “You always had your reasons.” Lucien stepped closer, his eyes searching hers. “I didn’t want to hurt you, Rory. I thought it was for the best.” “For who? You or me?” “Both.” “Is that what you tell yourself?” He ran a hand through his hair, frustration evident in his posture. “I didn’t want to drag you into my world. It’s dangerous.” “Dangerous?” She laughed, a bitter sound. “You think I can’t handle danger? I’ve been living in it since you left.” “Rory—” “Don’t.” She held up a hand, cutting him off. “You don’t get to come back and act like you care. Not after everything.” “I do care.” “Then why did you leave?” Silence stretched between them, heavy and charged. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the floor, the weight of his choices hanging in the air. “Because I thought it would keep you safe,” he finally said, his voice low. “Safe?” She shook her head, disbelief etched on her features. “You think running away keeps me safe? You think I wanted to be left alone?” “I thought you’d be better off without me.” “Better off?” She stepped forward, her voice rising. “You don’t get to decide that for me! You don’t know what I wanted!” “I know you wanted a normal life.” “Normal?” She laughed again, the sound sharp. “You think I wanted normal? I wanted you, Lucien. I wanted us.” His eyes flickered with something—regret, longing, maybe even hope. “I wanted that too.” “Then why did you walk away?” “Because I was scared.” “Scared of what?” “Of losing you.” Rory’s breath caught in her throat. The vulnerability in his voice pierced through her anger, leaving her momentarily speechless. “Losing me?” she echoed, her voice softer now. “Yes.” He stepped closer, the space between them shrinking. “I didn’t know how to protect you from my world. I thought it would be easier to let you go.” “Easier for you, maybe.” “Rory, please.” He reached out, his fingers brushing against her arm. “I’m here now. I want to make things right.” She pulled back, her heart racing. “You think it’s that simple? You can just waltz back in and fix everything?” “No, I don’t think it’s simple. But I’m willing to try.” “Try?” She shook her head, frustration bubbling up again. “You think trying is enough?” “I’m not asking for forgiveness. I just want a chance to explain.” “Explain what? That you were too scared to face the truth?” “Explain that I was a fool.” Rory’s heart softened at his admission, but she fought against it. “A fool who left me in the dark.” “I know.” He took a deep breath, his eyes locking onto hers. “I can’t change the past, but I want to be here now. With you.” “Why now?” “Because I realized I can’t run from my feelings. Not anymore.” “Feelings?” “Yes.” He stepped even closer, his voice dropping to a whisper. “I still care about you, Rory. More than I should.” The air crackled with tension, the unspoken words hanging between them. Rory’s heart raced, torn between anger and the flicker of hope igniting within her. “Lucien…” “Just give me a chance.” She searched his eyes, the sincerity there almost disarming. “And what if I say no?” “Then I’ll respect your choice.” Rory hesitated, the weight of his gaze anchoring her. “You really think you can just walk back into my life?” “I’m willing to try.” “Try.” She repeated the word, testing it on her tongue. “Yes.” “Fine.” She crossed her arms, her heart pounding. “But don’t think this means I trust you.” “I wouldn’t expect anything less.” The tension shifted, a fragile truce forming in the space between them. “Now what?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Now we talk.” “Talk?” “Yes.” “About what?” “About us.” Rory’s breath caught again, the weight of his words settling in. “Us?” “Yes.” “Okay.” “Okay.” And with that, the door to the past creaked open, leaving them standing on the threshold, uncertain yet hopeful.
total_cost0.0010883999999999998

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
2"he finally said [finally]"
3"She laughed again [again]"
dialogueSentences88
tagDensity0.284
leniency0.568
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.091
76.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"perfectly"
2"lightly"
3"really"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"racing"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count2
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"tension"
count2
13
word"raced"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"racing"
1"pulse"
2"gleaming"
3"pounding"
4"unspoken"
5"silence"
6"charged"
7"weight"
8"etched"
9"flickered"
10"echoed"
11"whisper"
12"tension"
13"raced"
14"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences58
matches
0"the flicker of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1067
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount584
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Ptolemy1
Moreau1
Rory7
Lucien4
Silence1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Silence"
places(empty)
globalScore0.901
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1067
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean12.55
std9.86
cv0.786
sampleLengths
054
136
26
326
433
57
610
711
824
913
1014
1111
1230
1315
1420
1522
1613
1711
1819
1915
204
2113
2221
235
241
256
2623
2720
281
2923
303
315
3222
3314
3425
358
3622
377
3819
3913
406
414
423
433
4419
458
4629
474
4820
4920
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
95.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences121
ratio0.017
matches
0"The air thickened between them, memories flooding back—late-night conversations, stolen glances, the way he had made her laugh even when the world felt heavy."
1"His eyes flickered with something—regret, longing, maybe even hope."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount590
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03389830508474576
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.011864406779661017
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean8.82
std5.01
cv0.568
sampleLengths
021
119
214
311
412
513
66
75
810
911
1015
1118
127
1310
1411
1524
1613
1714
187
194
2023
217
2215
2312
248
2512
2610
279
284
297
304
3113
326
3315
344
358
365
377
3814
395
401
416
4212
4311
446
4514
461
479
4814
493
61.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.39669421487603307
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences58
matches
0"She stirred a pot of"
1"She wiped her hands on"
2"She approached the door, her"
3"She peered through the peephole,"
4"He wore a tailored charcoal"
5"She opened the door, her"
6"she breathed, surprise mingling with"
7"he replied, his voice smooth,"
8"she asked, trying to keep"
9"He stepped inside, the door"
10"He glanced around the flat,"
11"she shot back, her tone"
12"She stepped back, creating distance"
13"He shifted, the cane tapping"
14"She scoffed, disbelief coloring her"
15"His expression turned serious, the"
16"She waved a hand dismissively"
17"He ran a hand through"
18"She laughed, a bitter sound"
19"She held up a hand,"
ratio0.621
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences58
matches
0"Aurora stood in the cramped"
1"She stirred a pot of"
2"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged"
3"A sudden knock at the"
4"She wiped her hands on"
5"Eva was supposed to be"
6"Another knock, more insistent this"
7"Rory hesitated, her heart racing."
8"She approached the door, her"
9"She peered through the peephole,"
10"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
11"He wore a tailored charcoal"
12"She opened the door, her"
13"she breathed, surprise mingling with"
14"he replied, his voice smooth,"
15"The air thickened between them,"
16"she asked, trying to keep"
17"He stepped inside, the door"
18"Rory crossed her arms, a"
19"He glanced around the flat,"
ratio0.983
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He wore a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame perfectly, an ivory-handled cane resting against his side."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount15
matches
0"she asked, trying to keep her voice steady"
1"He stepped, the door clicking shut behind him"
2"He glanced around, his gaze lingering on the clutter of books and scrolls"
3"she shot back, her tone sharper than she intended"
4"She scoffed, disbelief coloring her voice"
5"His expression turned, the playful banter fading"
6"he finally said, his voice low"
7"She stepped, her voice rising"
8"she echoed, her voice softer now"
9"He reached out, his fingers brushing against her arm"
10"She shook, frustration bubbling up again"
11"He took, his eyes locking onto hers"
12"He stepped even, his voice dropping to a whisper"
13"She crossed, her heart pounding"
14"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"She laughed again (laugh)"
3"She repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences88
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.091
77.2012%