Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00WGDQPXBS34X2A6M80TA

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Duration:
23.0s
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$0.010064
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rainwater dripped through the shattered tiles of the abandoned ticket hall, echoing between cracked stone columns and peeling advertisements from the 1950s. The red emergency lights of police vans pulsed beyond the boarded-up entrance, casting long shadows that flickered like dying gas lamps. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped onto the broken concrete, her boots crunching over what looked like powdered glass but wasn’t. She knelt, scooped a pinch between gloved fingers, brought it close. Not glass. Bone dust. She looked up. The ceiling had collapsed in a perfect circle, revealing a cavity in the tunnel above—too symmetrical for structural failure. Around the edge, the steel support beams were twisted inward, as if yanked by invisible hands. “Quinn.” A constable in high-vis approached, voice tight. “Body’s down on the platform. You won’t believe—” “I’ll believe when I see it,” she said, standing. Her watch ticked—a mechanical beat against her wrist, steady, familiar. Eighteen years on the force taught her to trust time more than people. She descended the corroded stairs, the air growing thick with the smell of wet iron and something else: burnt honey, maybe. Ozone. Behind her, uniformed officers muttered, radios crackling with broken phrases. A forensic tech in a blue suit crouched near the platform edge, gloved hands hovered over smudges that didn’t look like blood. Harlow stopped. The body lay fifteen feet from the tunnel wall, arms outstretched, one leg bent beneath the torso as if it had fallen mid-sprint. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a tailored coat, now torn open down the front. No visible wounds. No blood pooling. But the skin—gray, tight, desiccated, like parchment left too long in firelight. And around him, drawn in ash and what looked like crushed beetle shells: a spiral ring broken by jagged lines. “Time of death?” she asked. “Less than an hour,” said the tech. “But… it’s strange. No pulse, no respiration, but tissue isn’t cooling. Core temp’s still ninety-eight point six. Like he’s—” “Still alive?” Harlow cut in. The tech didn’t answer. She circled the body, careful not to cross the markings. Her sharp jaw tightened. This wasn’t crime scene work. This was theatre. Then she saw the hand. The victim’s right palm faced upward. In it, clenched so tightly the fingers had locked postmortem, sat a small brass object. She knelt, used her pen to lever one finger back. A compass. Small, tarnished with verdigris, its face etched with symbols she didn’t recognize. The needle didn’t point north. It spun slowly, like a metronome losing power, then froze—twitching toward the broken wall. Harlow’s skin prickled. She’d seen something like this before—once. Three years ago, in the hours after Morris vanished. A hotel basement. A circle drawn in salt and hair. And a compass, just like this, spinning wildly before shattering. No one believed her report. Now here it was again. “Detective Quinn?” She turned. A young woman in a worn satchel and round glasses stepped carefully over debris, red curls escaping from beneath a knit hat. Freckles dotted her nose, and her green eyes scanned the scene with sharp focus. She paused just outside the chalk outline, tucking a curl behind her left ear—a nervous habit, Harlow noted. “You’re with the museum?” Quinn said. “Eva Kowalski,” the woman said. “Research assistant. They called me in for… consultation.” Quinn stood. “On what? Death by occult graffiti?” Eva didn’t smile. “Those aren’t graffiti. They’re wards. And that’s not a body.” “It’s not breathing. It’s not moving. What would you call it?” “A vessel,” Eva said. “Empty. Something used him. Then left.” Harlow studied her. “You’re serious.” “I am. That spiral is a containment sigil. Broken at three points. Whatever was held inside got free.” “The compass?” Quinn asked. Eva’s gaze dropped to it. “A Veil Compass. Points to rifts. Rifts like the one above us.” Harlow looked up. “That’s structural damage.” “No,” Eva said. “That’s a tear. Temporary. But it was open recently. Something came through. Or something went back.” Quinn’s fingers brushed the leather strap of her watch. Tick. Tick. “You expect me to believe a monster crawled out of a hole in the ceiling, wore this man like a suit, then returned home?” “I expect you to look at what’s in front of you,” Eva said calmly. “No blood. No trauma. No decomposition. Forensics won’t find toxins because there’s no poison. This wasn’t murder. It was displacement.” “Displacement of what?” “The self,” Eva said. “His consciousness was… pushed out. Replaced. Then discarded.” Silence. The wind hissed through the tunnel. One of the uniforms laughed—nervous, shaky. “Right. Possession. Next you’ll say he needs an exorcism.” Eva didn’t react. “If you want to prevent another, you’ll seal that rift. Now.” Quinn exhaled through her nose. “And how do we do that?” “Burn salt. Cold iron. Time it to the lunar phase. But you’ll need more than that.” She reached into her satchel, pulled out a leather-bound book. Flipped it open. “There’s a market. Underground. They sell materials for this sort of thing.” “The kind of market that doesn’t exist?” Eva met her gaze. “It moves. Every full moon. But I know where it is tonight.” Quinn stepped closer. “And you know this because—?” “I’ve studied it. For years. I wasn’t sure it was real until I saw that compass.” Harlow stared at her. Then at the compass. Then at the dead man with the open palm and the face of someone who’d seen the other side of the world. Too many pieces didn’t fit. No murder weapon. No motive. No forensic trace. But a sigil. An impossibly preserved corpse. A compass pointing at a hole in reality. And a woman who didn’t flinch. Quinn crouched again, this time near the edge of the spiral. She used her pen to probe the ash. It didn’t scatter. It clung—like powder mixed with resin. She lifted the pen. Traces glistened under her torchlight: faint particles that shimmered, then faded. Not ash. Something else. She glanced at Eva. “You said this market sells materials.” Eva nodded. “Enchanted goods. Banned substances. Knowledge.” “What kind of people run it?” “Those who live between,” Eva said. “Shades. Alchemists. Things without names.” Harlow stood. “And you’ve never reported this.” “I’ve tried. No one listens. Until now.” The compass twitched again. Harlow picked it up—cold brass against her glove. The needle quivered, then settled, unwavering, pointing straight into the dark tunnel beyond the platform. Not north. Not the surface. Something deeper. She tucked the compass into her coat. “Take me to this market,” she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said calmly [calmly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.565
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.043
86.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"mechanical"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
12
word"quivered"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"echoing"
2"pulsed"
3"flickered"
4"perfect"
5"mechanical"
6"familiar"
7"pulse"
8"etched"
9"scanned"
10"silence"
11"shimmered"
12"quivered"
13"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1086
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount733
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow10
Quinn8
Morris1
Eva11
Silence1
Flipped1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.75
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like powdered glass but wasn’t"
1"looked like crushed beetle shells: a spir"
2"something like this before—once"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1086
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean15.74
std16.29
cv1.035
sampleLengths
073
14
238
316
432
554
62
774
85
926
105
114
1222
135
1431
152
1631
173
1835
195
205
212
222
2354
246
2513
268
2713
2811
2910
305
3118
324
3317
346
3519
3635
3734
383
3912
407
4115
4214
4311
4441
457
4616
478
4816
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences138
ratio0.065
matches
0"The ceiling had collapsed in a perfect circle, revealing a cavity in the tunnel above—too symmetrical for structural failure."
1"Her watch ticked—a mechanical beat against her wrist, steady, familiar."
2"But the skin—gray, tight, desiccated, like parchment left too long in firelight."
3"It spun slowly, like a metronome losing power, then froze—twitching toward the broken wall."
4"She’d seen something like this before—once."
5"She paused just outside the chalk outline, tucking a curl behind her left ear—a nervous habit, Harlow noted."
6"One of the uniforms laughed—nervous, shaky."
7"It clung—like powder mixed with resin."
8"Harlow picked it up—cold brass against her glove."
99.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount746
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.040214477211796246
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00804289544235925
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean7.87
std6.02
cv0.765
sampleLengths
022
121
219
311
42
52
63
719
816
98
108
119
1210
1313
1421
151
1610
1722
182
1923
2013
213
223
2312
2420
255
267
2719
285
294
3010
314
325
333
345
356
3615
3710
382
3912
405
4114
423
436
449
453
467
4710
485
495
61.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.4057971014492754
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners56
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then she saw the hand."
1"Then at the compass."
2"Then at the dead man"
3"Too many pieces didn’t fit."
ratio0.049
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences82
matches
0"She knelt, scooped a pinch"
1"She looked up."
2"she said, standing"
3"Her watch ticked—a mechanical beat"
4"She descended the corroded stairs,"
5"She circled the body, careful"
6"Her sharp jaw tightened."
7"She knelt, used her pen"
8"It spun slowly, like a"
9"She’d seen something like this"
10"She paused just outside the"
11"She reached into her satchel,"
12"She used her pen to"
13"It didn’t scatter."
14"It clung—like powder mixed with"
15"She lifted the pen."
16"She glanced at Eva."
17"She tucked the compass into"
ratio0.22
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences82
matches
0"Rainwater dripped through the shattered"
1"The red emergency lights of"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped onto"
3"She knelt, scooped a pinch"
4"She looked up."
5"The ceiling had collapsed in"
6"A constable in high-vis approached,"
7"she said, standing"
8"Her watch ticked—a mechanical beat"
9"She descended the corroded stairs,"
10"A forensic tech in a"
11"The body lay fifteen feet"
12"Harlow cut in"
13"The tech didn’t answer."
14"She circled the body, careful"
15"Her sharp jaw tightened."
16"This wasn’t crime scene work."
17"This was theatre."
18"The victim’s right palm faced"
19"She knelt, used her pen"
ratio0.683
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Now here it was again."
ratio0.012
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The red emergency lights of police vans pulsed beyond the boarded-up entrance, casting long shadows that flickered like dying gas lamps."
1"A forensic tech in a blue suit crouched near the platform edge, gloved hands hovered over smudges that didn’t look like blood."
2"The body lay fifteen feet from the tunnel wall, arms outstretched, one leg bent beneath the torso as if it had fallen mid-sprint."
3"Traces glistened under her torchlight: faint particles that shimmered, then faded."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"high-vis approached, voice tight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.239
leniency0.478
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.3994%