| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said suddenly [suddenly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.619 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 79.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1718 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "precisely" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1718 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "absolutely" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "velvet" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "sanctuary" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "throbbed" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 137 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 166 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 1729 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove knows its own steel. Carry it, and the thorns will not mistake you for prey." | | 1 | "The Grove holds what the Grove holds. What you seek is already seeking you." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1392 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 16 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Nyx | 12 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Dymasian | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Blade" | | 5 | "Prince" | | 6 | "Belphegor" | | 7 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Fae-Forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.925 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 91.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not-quite glass" | | 1 | "looked like polished obsidian" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1729 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 25.81 | | std | 24.05 | | cv | 0.932 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 110 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 63 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 67 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 89 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 56 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 47 |
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| 97.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "were made" | | 1 | "was made" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 87.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 237 | | matches | | 0 | "was doing" | | 1 | "was beginning" | | 2 | "were joking" | | 3 | "was recalibrating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 166 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "Not with words — Rory wasn't that far gone yet — but with silence." | | 1 | "She could see through it — sort of — but the image on the other side refused to hold still." | | 2 | "She stepped off it and saw more — rough-hewn slabs that might have been natural rock if they hadn't formed a perfect arc disappearing into the undergrowth on both sides." | | 3 | "Towering oaks — the same species as those on the other side, but wrong in scale — stretched upward until their canopy became a vaulted ceiling of interlocking branches and leaves that glowed with their own pale light." | | 4 | "They had flattened themselves against the trunk of the nearest oak, blending so thoroughly with the bark's shadow that only their eyes gave them away — two violet pinpoints." | | 5 | "The oaks grew wider, their trunks splitting into shapes that looked almost deliberate — archways, windows, the suggestion of doorways leading somewhere else." | | 6 | "Their voice — that perpetual whisper, wind carried through old hallways — gave nothing away." | | 7 | "Their head — or the suggestion of one — tilted." | | 8 | "Rory looked up and saw movement in the canopy — a bird, she thought at first, but the shape was wrong." | | 9 | "These were tall, pale, and carved with symbols that shifted when Rory looked at them directly — holding still only in her peripheral vision." | | 10 | "She thought of Dymas — the amber skies, the feasts, Prince Belphegor's sprawling vineyards." | | 11 | "The way she spoke — never lying, always circling." | | 12 | "The standing stones hummed — she could feel it in her molars, that deep resonance below hearing." | | 13 | "The moth — or another one — circled the hawthorn once before vanishing into the canopy." |
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| 84.07% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1227 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay beyond, smaller, its" |
| | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.05134474327628362 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012224938875305624 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 166 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 166 | | mean | 10.42 | | std | 8.27 | | cv | 0.794 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 54.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3614457831325301 | | totalSentences | 166 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the wet crunch of" | | 1 | "Just a pearlescent luminescence that" | | 2 | "Then it launched itself soundlessly" | | 3 | "More still than usual, which" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 91.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Their violet eyes flared brighter." | | 1 | "She could see through it" | | 2 | "she said, pulling up the" | | 3 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 4 | "It was grey stone, weathered" | | 5 | "She stepped off it and" | | 6 | "They simply stepped through the" | | 7 | "She touched the pendant again." | | 8 | "She stepped through." | | 9 | "It filled her lungs so" | | 10 | "Her boots left no impression." | | 11 | "They had flattened themselves against" | | 12 | "It wasn't a question." | | 13 | "She was beginning to think" | | 14 | "They moved deeper in." | | 15 | "She jerked back." | | 16 | "She couldn't tell if they" | | 17 | "Their voice — that perpetual" | | 18 | "They pressed on." | | 19 | "she said suddenly" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 67.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks had warned them" | | 1 | "The birdsong that had followed" | | 2 | "The next, nothing." | | 3 | "Nyx extended a hand of" | | 4 | "Their violet eyes flared brighter." | | 5 | "The distortion wavered, vertical and" | | 6 | "She could see through it" | | 7 | "Branches appeared where none should" | | 8 | "she said, pulling up the" | | 9 | "The Heartstone Pendant resting against" | | 10 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 11 | "The edges of their form" | | 12 | "Rory looked down." | | 13 | "The root she'd been bracing" | | 14 | "It was grey stone, weathered" | | 15 | "She stepped off it and" | | 16 | "Nyx walked forward and vanished." | | 17 | "They simply stepped through the" | | 18 | "Rory stared at the space" | | 19 | "She touched the pendant again." |
| | ratio | 0.786 | |
| 44.64% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "As if the Grove swallowed" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped off it and saw more — rough-hewn slabs that might have been natural rock if they hadn't formed a perfect arc disappearing into the undergrowth on bo…" | | 1 | "Nyx peeled away from the tree and drifted forward, their form slightly translucent here, as if the Grove's light was doing something to the shadows they were ma…" | | 2 | "The oaks grew wider, their trunks splitting into shapes that looked almost deliberate — archways, windows, the suggestion of doorways leading somewhere else." | | 3 | "The path, if it could be called that, wasn't marked in any obvious way, but Rory noticed that the flowers parted where she walked, bending aside as though pushe…" | | 4 | "A moth the size of a hawk, with wings of deep emerald velvet and antennae that swayed like metronomes, tracking them." | | 5 | "These were tall, pale, and carved with symbols that shifted when Rory looked at them directly — holding still only in her peripheral vision." | | 6 | "They formed a circle, and at the circle's center grew a single hawthorn tree, ancient and gnarled, its branches heavy with white blossoms that drifted to the gr…" | | 7 | "The Dymasian sky flickered and steadied on the other side of the rift, achingly beautiful, that amber light spilling through in a thin column that caught the fa…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |