Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00X2TEY22RWQH6G56KCHY

Run Details

Duration:
2m 14s
Cost:
$0.003353
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The moment Aurora stepped through the Veil, the air turned thick and warm in her lungs, as though she’d walked into a room filled with incense. She blinked against the sudden shift in light, the amber sky casting everything in a golden haze. The ground beneath her boots was soft, yielding like freshly tilled soil, yet it didn’t shift or crumble. Behind her, Silas groaned, his voice low and wary. “This… this doesn’t feel right.” Nyx materialized beside her, their shadowy form flickering as if the air here resisted their presence. “Dymas,” they murmured, their whisper-like voice carrying an edge of unease. “A realm of indulgence, but not without its teeth.” Aurora glanced down at the Heartstone pendant hanging around her neck. It pulsed faintly, the crimson gemstone warm against her skin. She touched it, the steady rhythm grounding her. “Where do we start?” Silas stepped forward, his boots sinking slightly into the spongy ground. “We don’t have much of a choice. Forward’s the only way out.” The path ahead was lined with towering vines, their leaves shimmering like polished copper. The vines twisted upward, forming natural arches that led deeper into the grove. The air was heavy with the scent of ripe fruit and spices, mingling in a way that made Aurora’s mouth water. She could hear the faint hum of insects, their metallic wings catching the amber light as they darted through the air. As they walked, the grove opened up into a sprawling orchard. Trees stretched as far as the eye could see, their branches laden with fruits Aurora couldn’t name. Some were the size of melons, their skins striped in vibrant hues of purple and gold. Others dangled like delicate lanterns, glowing softly from within. The ground was carpeted with moss, its emerald green vividly contrasting the warm amber sky. “Don’t touch anything,” Nyx warned, their violet eyes scanning the trees. “This place thrives on temptation. Everything here is designed to lure you in.” Silas reached for a low-hanging fruit, hesitating as Nyx’s words sank in. He withdrew his hand, shaking it as if he’d been burned. “What happens if we do?” “You’ll find out,” Nyx replied cryptically. Aurora kept her hands at her sides, resisting the urge to pluck one of the glowing lantern-fruits. The air grew warmer the farther they went, the humidity clinging to her skin. She wiped a bead of sweat from her temple, her eyes darting to the movement in the canopy above. Shapes flitted between the branches, too quick to make out clearly. “Something’s watching us,” she murmured. Nyx tilted their head, their shadowy form flickering. “Stay close.” The path narrowed, the vines thickening and twisting into dense walls on either side. The hum of insects grew louder, accompanied by the faint rustle of leaves. Aurora’s pulse quickened as the air shifted, the scent of spices intensifying. She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following them. The vines parted abruptly, revealing a clearing bathed in golden light. At its center stood a massive tree, its trunk as wide as a house and its branches stretching impossibly high. The tree’s bark shimmered like molten gold, its leaves glinting like polished coins. Beneath it, a table was set with an extravagant feast: platters piled high with exotic fruits, steaming dishes of meat and vegetables, and goblets filled with dark, swirling liquid. “Well, that’s ominous,” Silas muttered. Aurora’s stomach growled despite herself. The scent was intoxicating, beckoning her closer. She took a step forward, then stopped herself, clenching her fists. “This is a trap.” “Obviously,” Nyx said, their voice low and tense. “But traps can be useful if you know how to spring them.” The table shimmered, the dishes shifting and rearranging themselves as if alive. The goblets clinked softly, the sound echoing unnaturally. Aurora’s pendant pulsed faster, its warmth almost uncomfortable. She glanced down, noticing the faint glow of the Heartstone seemed brighter here. “We should move,” Silas urged, his eyes darting around the clearing. “This place makes my skin crawl.” Before they could retreat, a voice echoed through the clearing, smooth and honeyed. “Leaving so soon? After I’ve gone to such trouble to prepare a feast for my guests?” The ground beneath them rippled, and Aurora stumbled, catching herself on a nearby vine. The tree’s bark shifted, forming a face: sharp cheekbones, a pointed chin, and eyes that glowed like molten gold. The face smiled, revealing teeth that gleamed like polished ivory. “Prince Belphegor,” Nyx said, their voice steady but tinged with caution. “Ah, the Shadow remembers me,” the tree purred, its voice reverberating through the clearing. “And such esteemed company you’ve brought. A mortal, a shade, and… ah, the bearer of the Heartstone. How delightful.” Aurora straightened, her hand instinctively going to the pendant. “We’re not here to dine.” Belphegor chuckled, the sound resonating deep in Aurora’s chest. “No? But surely you’ve traveled far. A taste of my hospitality wouldn’t hurt.” Silas stepped forward, his jaw set. “We’re not interested in your tricks.” The prince’s golden eyes narrowed, his smile turning sharp. “Tricks? Such harsh words. I merely wish to welcome you to Dymas. Though… I suppose you’ve already been partaking of its pleasures, haven’t you?” Aurora frowned. “What do you mean?” Belphegor’s gaze shifted to her wrist, where the crescent-shaped scar stood out against her skin. “Your little accident. A childhood slip, wasn’t it? Or was it something more?” Her breath hitched. “You don’t know anything about me.” The tree laughed, the sound echoing eerily. “Oh, child, I know more than you realize. But enough talk. Why don’t you—” Nyx stepped forward, their shadowy form solidifying as they raised a hand. “Enough.” Belphegor’s eyes flickered, his smile faltering for a moment. “Ah, the Shadow speaks. What do you propose, then?” “We’re not here for your games,” Nyx said, their voice cold and sharp. “Let us pass.” The prince’s face twisted into a scowl, the bark creaking as his features shifted. “Very well. But remember, you’re in my realm now. And here, indulgence is unavoidable.” The clearing darkened, the golden light fading to a deep amber. The table disappeared, the feast vanishing as though it had never been there. The tree’s face dissolved back into the bark, leaving only the massive trunk shimmering faintly. Silas exhaled sharply, running a hand through his hair. “That could’ve gone worse.” Aurora’s heart was still racing, her wrist tingling where Belphegor had focused his gaze. She glanced at Nyx, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dim light. “What now?” “We keep moving,” Nyx said, their shadowy form flickering again. “Stay close. And whatever you do, don’t accept anything from this place.” The path ahead was darker now, the vines closing in around them. The air grew heavier, the scent of spices replaced by something sharper, almost acrid. Aurora tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its cold metal a stark contrast to the warmth of the pendant. As they moved deeper, the grove began to change. The trees grew twisted, their branches gnarled and reaching like claws. The ground beneath them became uneven, the moss replaced by cracked earth. The amber sky seemed to dim, the light fading into a murky twilight. Silas muttered something under his breath, his voice tense. “This place feels… wrong.” Aurora nodded silently, her senses on high alert. The pendant pulsed steadily, its warmth now a constant reminder of their proximity to danger. She glanced at Nyx, their shadowy form flickering more frequently now, as if the air here was working against them. “Stay focused,” Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible. “We’re not alone.” Ahead, the path widened into another clearing, this one darker and more foreboding. The trees here were blackened, their bark charred and cracked. At the center stood a single tree, its branches bare and twisted. Hanging from its limbs were strange, bulbous fruits, their surfaces smooth and reflecting the dim light. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat as she realized what they were—eyes. Each fruit was a perfect replica of a human eye, their irises glowing faintly. The gazes locked onto her, unblinking and unnerving. Silas cursed under his breath. “What the hell is this?” Nyx’s form flickered violently, their voice strained. “A warning. We’re being watched.” The eyes blinked in unison, their gaze shifting to follow the group’s movements. The air grew colder, the warmth of the pendant the only thing keeping Aurora grounded. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, its faint luminescence casting a pale light in the clearing. “Keep moving,” Nyx urged, their shadowy form flickering rapidly now. “Don’t look back.” Aurora stepped forward, her boots crunching on the cracked earth. The eyes tracked her every movement, their gazes piercing through her. She forced herself to look away, focusing on the path ahead. The grove seemed to close in around them, the trees twisting and contorting as if alive. The air grew heavier, the scent of decay mingling with the sharp, acrid smell. Aurora’s heart pounded in her chest, her senses overwhelmed by the oppressive atmosphere. As they reached the edge of the clearing, the path opened up into a wider, more open space. The trees here were less twisted, their branches reaching upward as if seeking the amber sky. The ground beneath them was soft again, the moss returning to its emerald green. Aurora exhaled sharply, her grip on the blade loosening slightly. “What was that?” Nyx’s form stabilized slightly, their voice low and tense. “A test. And one we passed—barely.” Silas rubbed his face, his hands trembling slightly. “This place is messing with my head.” “Stay focused,” Nyx said, their violet eyes glowing faintly. “We’re not out yet.” The path ahead was brighter now, the amber light casting the trees in a warm glow. The air smelled faintly of honey and cinnamon, the oppressive atmosphere lifting slightly. Aurora glanced down at the pendant, its pulse steady but insistent. She took a deep breath, her resolve hardening. “Let’s keep moving.” The trio pressed on, the grove shifting around them as they ventured deeper into Dymas. The path twisted and turned, the trees growing taller and more imposing. The air was alive with the hum of insects and the faint rustle of leaves, but there was an underlying tension, a sense of being watched that made Aurora’s skin crawl. As they walked, the grove began to change again. The trees were no longer uniform; some twisted into unnatural shapes, their branches reaching like claws. Others shimmered with an otherworldly light, their leaves glowing softly. The ground beneath their feet alternated between soft moss and cracked earth, as though the realm itself couldn’t decide what form it wanted to take. Silas muttered something under his breath, his voice tense. “This place feels… wrong.” Aurora nodded silently, her senses on high alert. The pendant pulsed steadily, its warmth now a constant reminder of their proximity to danger. She glanced at Nyx, their shadowy form flickering more frequently now, as if the air here was working against them. “Stay focused,” Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible. “We’re not alone.” Ahead, the path widened into another clearing, this one darker and more foreboding. The trees here were blackened, their bark charred and cracked. At the center stood a single tree, its branches bare and twisted. Hanging from its limbs were strange, bulbous fruits, their surfaces smooth and reflecting the dim light. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat as she realized what they were—eyes. Each fruit was a perfect replica of a human eye, their irises glowing faintly. The gazes locked onto her, unblinking and unnerving. Silas cursed under his breath. “What the hell is this?” Nyx’s form flickered violently, their voice strained. “A warning. We’re being watched.” The eyes blinked in unison, their gaze shifting to follow the group’s movements. The air grew colder, the warmth of the pendant the only thing keeping Aurora grounded. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, its faint luminescence casting a pale light in the clearing. “Keep moving,” Nyx urged, their shadowy form flickering rapidly now. “Don’t look back.” Aurora stepped forward, her boots crunching on the cracked earth. The eyes tracked her every movement, their gazes piercing through her. She forced herself to look away, focusing on the path ahead. The grove seemed to close in around them, the trees twisting and contorting as if alive. The air grew heavier, the scent of decay mingling with the sharp, acrid smell. Aurora’s heart pounded in her chest, her senses overwhelmed by the oppressive atmosphere. As they reached the edge of the clearing, the path opened up into a wider, more open space. The trees here were less twisted, their branches reaching upward as if seeking the amber sky. The ground beneath them was soft again, the moss returning to its emerald green. Aurora exhaled sharply, her grip on the blade loosening slightly. “What was that?” Nyx’s form stabilized slightly, their voice low and tense. “A test. And one we passed—barely.” Silas rubbed his face, his hands trembling slightly. “This place is messing with my head.” “Stay focused,” Nyx said, their violet eyes glowing faintly. “We’re not out yet.” The path ahead was brighter now, the amber light casting the trees in a warm glow. The air smelled faintly of honey and cinnamon, the oppressive atmosphere lifting slightly. Aurora glanced down at the pendant, its pulse steady but insistent. She took a deep breath, her resolve hardening. “Let’s keep moving.”
created_at"2026-02-19T03:45:12.803Z" 2/19/2026, 3:45:12 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx replied cryptically [cryptically]"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.266
leniency0.531
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.031
64.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2261
totalAiIsmAdverbs16
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count9
1
adverb"softly"
count3
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count3
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
2"very"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2261
totalAiIsms47
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"quickened"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count3
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"clenching"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count6
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"tinged"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count3
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"stark"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count2
17
word"foreboding"
count2
18
word"perfect"
count2
19
word"oppressive"
count4
20
word"resolve"
count2
21
word"imposing"
count1
22
word"tension"
count1
23
word"sense of"
count1
24
word"otherworldly"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"pulsed"
2"scanning"
3"pulse"
4"quickened"
5"shimmered"
6"glinting"
7"stomach"
8"clenching"
9"echoing"
10"warmth"
11"echoed"
12"tinged"
13"flickered"
14"racing"
15"stark"
16"reminder"
17"foreboding"
18"perfect"
19"oppressive"
20"resolve"
21"imposing"
22"tension"
23"sense of"
24"otherworldly"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count2
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"The air was heavy with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences156
matches(empty)
97.07% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences156
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences203
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2248
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Behind her, Silas groaned, his voice low and wary."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount1880
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora29
Veil1
Silas13
Heartstone2
Nyx23
Belphegor4
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Ahead2
Dymas1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Silas"
2"Nyx"
3"Belphegor"
4"Blade"
places
0"Veil"
1"Dymas"
globalScore0.729
windowScore0.667
99.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences148
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed brighter here"
1"as if seeking the amber sky"
2"as if seeking the amber sky"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2248
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences203
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs80
mean28.1
std17.88
cv0.636
sampleLengths
070
15
236
333
423
569
668
724
828
96
1061
115
1210
1350
1473
155
1627
1720
1841
1917
2029
2143
2211
2333
2414
2522
2612
2733
286
2928
309
3121
3213
3318
3416
3528
3639
3713
3829
3922
4049
4145
4213
4343
4411
4551
4634
4710
4812
4946
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences156
matches
0"was lined"
1"was carpeted"
2"been burned"
3"were blackened"
4"being watched"
5"were blackened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs348
matches
0"was working"
1"was working"
86.56% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences203
ratio0.02
matches
0"She glanced over her shoulder, half-expecting to see someone—or something—following them."
1"Aurora’s breath caught in her throat as she realized what they were—eyes."
2"The trees were no longer uniform; some twisted into unnatural shapes, their branches reaching like claws."
3"Aurora’s breath caught in her throat as she realized what they were—eyes."
90.74% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1891
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount85
adverbRatio0.0449497620306716
lyAdverbCount49
lyAdverbRatio0.025912215758857746
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences203
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences203
mean11.07
std5.16
cv0.466
sampleLengths
026
117
218
39
45
516
611
79
811
910
108
114
1211
1312
1414
1513
1621
1721
1811
1917
2016
219
2215
2311
2413
2512
2611
275
286
2917
3014
3119
3211
335
348
352
3614
3713
3812
3911
4011
4120
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4329
445
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467
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39.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.2315270935960591
totalSentences203
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences153
matches
0"She blinked against the sudden"
1"they murmured, their whisper-like voice"
2"It pulsed faintly, the crimson"
3"She touched it, the steady"
4"She could hear the faint"
5"He withdrew his hand, shaking"
6"She wiped a bead of"
7"She glanced over her shoulder,"
8"She took a step forward,"
9"She glanced down, noticing the"
10"Her breath hitched."
11"She glanced at Nyx, their"
12"She glanced at Nyx, their"
13"She tightened her grip on"
14"She forced herself to look"
15"She took a deep breath,"
16"She glanced at Nyx, their"
17"She tightened her grip on"
18"She forced herself to look"
19"She took a deep breath,"
ratio0.131
9.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount138
totalSentences153
matches
0"The moment Aurora stepped through"
1"She blinked against the sudden"
2"The ground beneath her boots"
3"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
4"they murmured, their whisper-like voice"
5"Aurora glanced down at the"
6"It pulsed faintly, the crimson"
7"She touched it, the steady"
8"Silas stepped forward, his boots"
9"The path ahead was lined"
10"The vines twisted upward, forming"
11"The air was heavy with"
12"She could hear the faint"
13"Trees stretched as far as"
14"Some were the size of"
15"Others dangled like delicate lanterns,"
16"The ground was carpeted with"
17"Nyx warned, their violet eyes"
18"Silas reached for a low-hanging"
19"He withdrew his hand, shaking"
ratio0.902
32.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"Before they could retreat, a"
ratio0.007
67.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences104
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Nyx materialized beside her, their shadowy form flickering as if the air here resisted their presence."
1"The path ahead was lined with towering vines, their leaves shimmering like polished copper."
2"He withdrew his hand, shaking it as if he’d been burned."
3"The table shimmered, the dishes shifting and rearranging themselves as if alive."
4"She glanced at Nyx, their shadowy form flickering more frequently now, as if the air here was working against them."
5"The grove seemed to close in around them, the trees twisting and contorting as if alive."
6"The trees here were less twisted, their branches reaching upward as if seeking the amber sky."
7"The ground beneath their feet alternated between soft moss and cracked earth, as though the realm itself couldn’t decide what form it wanted to take."
8"She glanced at Nyx, their shadowy form flickering more frequently now, as if the air here was working against them."
9"The grove seemed to close in around them, the trees twisting and contorting as if alive."
10"The trees here were less twisted, their branches reaching upward as if seeking the amber sky."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount14
matches
0"they murmured, their whisper-like voice carrying an edge of unease"
1"Nyx warned, their violet eyes scanning the trees"
2"Nyx said, their voice low and tense"
3"Silas urged, his eyes darting around the clearing"
4"Nyx said, their voice steady but tinged with caution"
5"the tree purred, its voice reverberating through the clearing"
6"Nyx said, their voice cold and sharp"
7"Nyx said, their shadowy form flickering again"
8"Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible"
9"Nyx urged, their shadowy form flickering rapidly now"
10"Nyx said, their violet eyes glowing faintly"
11"Nyx whispered, their voice barely audible"
12"Nyx urged, their shadowy form flickering rapidly now"
13"Nyx said, their violet eyes glowing faintly"
9.38% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"Silas muttered (mutter)"
4"Silas urged (urge)"
5"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
6"Nyx urged (urge)"
7"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
8"Nyx urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences64
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.563
effectiveRatio0.281
74.0484%