| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "I said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.605 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.087 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 78.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1637 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1637 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "lurching" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "tapestry" | | 5 | "dancing" | | 6 | "ensure" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "predator" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "charged" | | 17 | "gleaming" | | 18 | "lurch" | | 19 | "depths" | | 20 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.31% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1625 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1401 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | One | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Six | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Realm | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae-touched" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to emanate from the very soil" | | 1 | "sounded like wind chimes dancing in a grav" | | 2 | "felt like heat" | | 3 | "looked like a sheet of black glass" | | 4 | "as if reaching for something invisible" | | 5 | "looked like they had been forged in the f" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.077 | | wordCount | 1625 | | matches | | 0 | "not in grass, but in a thick, spongy moss" | | 1 | "not near a Hel portal, the lack of heat made sense, but I would have preferred the reassurance" | | 2 | "Not an earthquake, but a rhythmic thudding, like heavy footsteps approaching from d" | | 3 | "not a growl, but a wet, gurgling gasp, like a drowning man begging for air" | | 4 | "not as liquid, but as a massive, sludge-covered tentacle" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 29.02 | | std | 16.91 | | cv | 0.583 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 73 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 59 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 59 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 38 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 43 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 99.51% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "were made" | | 1 | "been forged" |
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| 87.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 236 | | matches | | 0 | "was spinning" | | 1 | "was rising" | | 2 | "was pulling" | | 3 | "was kicking" |
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| 17.73% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "When the wind stirred them—a wind that had no source and blew warm then cold in the same breath—they didn't rustle." | | 1 | "It wasn't the magical ambiance of the Grove; it was the primal instinct of prey realizing the predator had arrived." | | 2 | "It made a sound—not a growl, but a wet, gurgling gasp, like a drowning man begging for air." | | 3 | "The lead creature roared—a wet, guttural sound—and charged." | | 4 | "I could smell the stench of its breath—sour milk and old blood." | | 5 | "A massive shape was pulling itself up from the depths—a thing of infinite mouths and insatiable hunger, its flesh composed of the screaming souls of the damned." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1412 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "brilliant, cold white light" | | 1 | "massive, sludge-covered tentacle" |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.034702549575070823 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012747875354107648 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 11.86 | | std | 6.24 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 54.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.36496350364963503 | | totalSentences | 137 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.61% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "I gasped, clutching at the" | | 1 | "I swallowed the bile rising" | | 2 | "My surroundings had dissolved into" | | 3 | "Her waist-length silver hair spilled" | | 4 | "She turned, her pale lavender" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded like wind" | | 6 | "I muttered, checking my pockets" | | 7 | "My fingers brushed the hilt" | | 8 | "She began to walk towards" | | 9 | "I glanced at Nyx." | | 10 | "They moved with a fluid" | | 11 | "I followed, my boots sinking" | | 12 | "We moved deeper into the" | | 13 | "Their trunks twisted in spirals" | | 14 | "It reminded me of the" | | 15 | "I said, keeping one hand" | | 16 | "I retracted my hand sharply." | | 17 | "I had been reaching for" | | 18 | "I asked, trying to keep" | | 19 | "I checked the Heartstone pendant" |
| | ratio | 0.468 | |
| 14.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The world tilted sideways." | | 1 | "Gravity briefly reconsidered its commitment" | | 2 | "I gasped, clutching at the" | | 3 | "The air pressure dropped so" | | 4 | "The next, silence hung heavy" | | 5 | "Nyx hovered at my shoulder," | | 6 | "The shadow’s faint violet eyes" | | 7 | "I swallowed the bile rising" | | 8 | "My surroundings had dissolved into" | | 9 | "The sky above wasn't the" | | 10 | "Isolde stood a few paces" | | 11 | "Her waist-length silver hair spilled" | | 12 | "She turned, her pale lavender" | | 13 | "Her voice sounded like wind" | | 14 | "I muttered, checking my pockets" | | 15 | "My fingers brushed the hilt" | | 16 | "The moonsilver metal was freezing," | | 17 | "Isolde said, turning away" | | 18 | "She began to walk towards" | | 19 | "I glanced at Nyx." |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Gravity briefly reconsidered its commitment to the ground, sending my stomach lurching into my throat." | | 1 | "Isolde stood a few paces ahead, unaffected by the dimensional vertigo that had nearly flattened me." | | 2 | "She turned, her pale lavender eyes regarding me with an amusement that bordered on predatory." | | 3 | "They moved with a fluid grace that made my own stumbling gait feel clumsy." | | 4 | "Leaves the size of dinner plates hung low, shimmering with an iridescent sheen that changed from crimson to gold as I watched." | | 5 | "Their form elongated, stretching upwards as if reaching for something invisible." | | 6 | "Bubbles burst, releasing thick clouds of steam that smelled of rotting meat and stale wine." | | 7 | "They wore armour fashioned from chitinous plates and human bones, and they wielded massive cleavers that looked like they had been forged in the fires of a garb…" | | 8 | "The moonsilver flared to life, casting a brilliant, cold white light that sliced through the gloom." | | 9 | "The pool of black water exploded outwards, not as liquid, but as a massive, sludge-covered tentacle that whipped through the air." |
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| 38.04% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx hovered, their form flickering like a candle flame in a draught" | | 1 | "Nyx trailed, their voice a mere breath of sound" | | 2 | "I asked, trying to keep the anxiety out of my voice" | | 3 | "Isolde said softly, her hand drifting to the silver dagger at her belt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 3 | "she stated (state)" | | 4 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 6 | "Nyx shouted (shout)" | | 7 | "Nyx screamed (scream)" | | 8 | "Isolde shouted (shout)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.474 | |