Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00YRDBGC8JWG7N6TV68JF

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock echoed through the flat like a gunshot, jarring Rory from her book. She glanced at the clock—nearly midnight. No one ever came calling this late, especially not unannounced. She crossed the room, her heart pounding in her chest, and pressed her eye to the peephole. A man stood in the dim light of the landing, his face obscured by shadows. But she'd know that slicked-back platinum hair anywhere. Lucien. She hadn't seen him since she'd left London, since she'd walked away from their complicated dance of attraction and betrayal. She took a deep breath, steeling herself, and opened the door. "Lucien," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her. "What are you doing here?" He leaned against the doorframe, one hand in his pocket, the other holding an ivory-handled cane that Rory knew concealed a thin blade. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, met hers. "Rory," he said, his voice as smooth as velvet. "Or should I say, Laila?" She bristled at the use of her alias, the name she'd used when they'd first met, when she'd been trying to outrun her past. "What do you want, Lucien?" He pushed off from the doorframe, stepping closer. "Can I come in? I think we have some things to discuss." Rory hesitated, then stepped aside, letting him enter. The flat was small, little more than a studio with a kitchenette and a bathroom tucked away. Books and research notes were strewn about, evidence of Eva's obsession with the supernatural. Lucien's gaze swept over the chaos, a small smile playing at the corners of his mouth. "Eva's still collecting lost souls, I see," he commented, running a finger along the spine of a dusty tome. "She's not here," Rory said, closing the door behind him. "She's in Prague, following some lead about a vampire coven." Lucien raised an eyebrow. "Vampires? Really?" Rory shrugged. "You know Eva. She believes in everything." Lucien turned to face her, his expression serious. "I need your help, Rory." She crossed her arms, leaning against the counter that separated the kitchen from the living area. "My help? With what?" He hesitated, then said, "There's a demon. A powerful one. It's causing... problems. I need someone with your unique skills to help me track it down." Rory raised an eyebrow. "My unique skills? You mean my ability to see through glamours? To see demons for what they really are?" Lucien nodded. "Exactly." Rory shook her head. "I'm not that person anymore, Lucien. I left all that behind when I came here." Lucien took a step closer, his voice low. "You can't outrun who you are, Rory. And neither can I. We're bound to this world, to its darkness. You know that." Rory looked away, her gaze landing on the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. A memento from her childhood, a reminder of the darkness that had always been a part of her life. She sighed, running a hand through her straight, shoulder-length black hair. "What kind of problems?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien's expression darkened. "The kind that can't be ignored. People are dying, Rory. And if we don't stop it, more will follow." Rory looked back at him, her bright blue eyes filled with a mix of fear and determination. "I'll help you, Lucien. But only because people are dying. Not because of some... bond between us." Lucien nodded, a small smile playing at the corners of his mouth. "I wouldn't expect anything less, Laila." Rory rolled her eyes at the use of her alias, but she couldn't help the small smile that tugged at the corners of her mouth. It was good to see him again, to feel that spark of attraction that had always been there between them. But she knew better than to trust it, to trust him. She pushed off from the counter, grabbing her coat from the back of a chair. "Let's go, then. Before I change my mind." Lucien held out his arm, a small, mocking bow. "After you, Laila." As they left the flat, Rory couldn't shake the feeling that she was walking into something far more dangerous than she could imagine. But she also knew that she couldn't turn her back on the darkness, not when it was calling to her like this. And she certainly couldn't turn her back on Lucien, not when he was standing there, looking at her with those heterochromatic eyes, reminding her of all the things they'd left unsaid, all the things they'd never done. But she would be careful, she told herself as they stepped out into the night. She would keep her distance, keep her heart guarded. Because she knew, better than anyone, that the darkness could consume you if you let it. And she wouldn't let it consume her, not again. Not even for Lucien.
total_cost0.0007965

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.083
81.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"dance"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count2
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pounding"
2"dance"
3"velvet"
4"eyebrow"
5"reminder"
6"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords813
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.22% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"But she would be careful, she told herself as they stepped out into the night."
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount610
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
London1
Eva1
Lucien11
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.598
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount813
matches(empty)
68.63% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"feel that spark"
1"knew that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean26.23
std16.9
cv0.644
sampleLengths
070
11
231
316
446
529
620
755
819
920
106
119
1213
1320
1426
1523
163
1719
1830
1945
2012
2122
2234
2318
2456
2523
2612
2745
2837
2949
304
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"were strewn"
14.81% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs108
matches
0"was walking"
1"was calling"
2"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences68
ratio0.015
matches
0"She glanced at the clock—nearly midnight."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount615
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.032520325203252036
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0065040650406504065
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean11.96
std7.25
cv0.606
sampleLengths
014
16
210
317
415
58
61
720
811
911
105
1123
129
139
145
1524
165
178
1812
198
2017
2114
2216
2319
2410
2510
264
272
282
297
308
315
3216
334
3426
354
3619
372
381
394
4015
418
4222
4315
4419
4511
4612
473
4819
4917
60.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.38235294117647056
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences47
matches
0"She glanced at the clock—nearly"
1"She crossed the room, her"
2"She hadn't seen him since"
3"She took a deep breath,"
4"she said, her voice steady"
5"He leaned against the doorframe,"
6"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
7"he said, his voice as"
8"She bristled at the use"
9"He pushed off from the"
10"he commented, running a finger"
11"She crossed her arms, leaning"
12"He hesitated, then said,"
13"She sighed, running a hand"
14"she asked, her voice barely"
15"It was good to see"
16"She pushed off from the"
17"She would keep her distance,"
ratio0.383
66.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences47
matches
0"The knock echoed through the"
1"She glanced at the clock—nearly"
2"She crossed the room, her"
3"A man stood in the"
4"She hadn't seen him since"
5"She took a deep breath,"
6"she said, her voice steady"
7"He leaned against the doorframe,"
8"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
9"he said, his voice as"
10"She bristled at the use"
11"He pushed off from the"
12"Rory hesitated, then stepped aside,"
13"The flat was small, little"
14"Books and research notes were"
15"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
16"he commented, running a finger"
17"Rory said, closing the door"
18"Lucien raised an eyebrow."
19"Lucien turned to face her,"
ratio0.787
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"Because she knew, better than"
ratio0.021
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She crossed her arms, leaning against the counter that separated the kitchen from the living area."
1"A memento from her childhood, a reminder of the darkness that had always been a part of her life."
2"Rory rolled her eyes at the use of her alias, but she couldn't help the small smile that tugged at the corners of her mouth."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil inside her"
1"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he commented (comment)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.083
80.3363%