Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00YZ263J4KQFPXSD81BPM

Run Details

Duration:
6.3s
Cost:
$0.000310

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell chimed, a shrill sound that cut through the quiet hum of Rory's flat. She paused, mid-sentence in her book, her heart pounding in her chest. She wasn't expecting anyone. She set her book down, her eyes flicking to the clock. It was late, too late for casual visitors. She stood, her chair scraping against the wooden floor, and made her way to the door. Through the peephole, she saw him. Lucien Moreau, standing tall and elegant, his heterochromatic eyes scanning the hallway. She hadn't seen him in months, not since they'd parted ways on that tense note. She took a deep breath, steeling herself, before unlocking the three deadbolts and opening the door. "Lucien," she said, her voice steady despite the flutter in her stomach. "What are you doing here?" He turned to face her, a small smile playing on his lips. "Aurora," he greeted, his voice smooth as velvet. "I apologize for the late hour. I needed to see you." She raised an eyebrow, leaning against the doorframe. "Needed, or wanted?" He chuckled, a sound that sent a shiver down her spine. "Can't it be both?" he countered, his amber eye gleaming in the dim light. She stepped aside, allowing him entry. "Come in," she said, closing the door behind him. Ptolemy, her tabby cat, wound around Lucien's legs, purring loudly. Lucien bent down, scratching the cat behind the ears. "Still charming the creatures, I see," Rory commented, a hint of a smile on her lips. Lucien stood straight, his gaze sweeping over her. "Some things never change," he said, his voice low. "You look well, Aurora." She felt a flush creep up her cheeks at the intensity of his gaze. "I could say the same for you," she replied, turning away to hide her blush. "What can I get you to drink?" "Whiskey, if you have it," he said, taking a seat on her worn-out couch. She poured him a glass, her hands steady despite the turmoil within her. She handed him the drink, their fingers brushing. She felt the spark, the electricity that always seemed to hum between them. She sat down across from him, tucking her legs under her. "So, Lucien," she began, her voice serious. "What brings you to my doorstep at this hour?" He took a sip of his whiskey, his eyes never leaving hers. "I have a proposition for you," he said, setting the glass down on the coffee table. "A job, of sorts." She raised an eyebrow. "A job?" she echoed. "I thought we agreed that our paths were better off separate." He leaned forward, his elbows resting on his knees. "This job is different, Aurora. It's... personal." She studied him, her bright blue eyes searching his face. "Personal how?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. He hesitated, then sighed. "Remember the demon that attacked you last year? The one that started all this?" She nodded, her hand unconsciously going to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "It's back," he said, his voice grim. "And it's causing trouble. I need your help to stop it." She stared at him, shock written all over her face. "My help?" she echoed. "Lucien, I'm just a human. I can't fight demons." He shook his head. "You're not just a human, Aurora. You're smart, resourceful, and you have a unique perspective on the supernatural world. You can help." She took a deep breath, considering his words. "What's in it for me?" she asked, her voice steady. He smiled, a slow, predatory smile. "Besides the satisfaction of ridding the world of a dangerous demon? I'll pay you, of course. Handsomely." She considered his offer, her mind racing. She hadn't worked a supernatural case since she'd left Lucien's employ. She'd missed the thrill, the challenge. But she'd also missed the danger, the fear that had become all too familiar. She looked at Lucien, at the sincerity in his eyes. She thought of the demon that had attacked her, of the terror it had instilled. She thought of the satisfaction she'd feel in helping to take it down. She took a deep breath, her decision made. "Alright," she said, her voice firm. "I'm in." Lucien's face broke into a wide smile, relief evident in his eyes. "Thank you, Aurora," he said, his voice sincere. "You won't regret this." She stood, grabbing her coat from the rack by the door. "I hope not," she said, turning to face him. "Now, let's go catch us a demon." As they left the flat, the door closing behind them, Rory couldn't help but feel a sense of excitement, of anticipation. She was stepping back into the world she'd left behind, back into the danger and the thrill. And she was doing it with Lucien by her side. She only hoped she wasn't making a mistake.
total_cost0.00031005

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.543
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount811
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount811
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pounding"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count2
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"gleaming"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count2
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"scanning"
2"stomach"
3"velvet"
4"eyebrow"
5"down her spine"
6"gleaming"
7"intensity"
8"echoed"
9"whisper"
10"racing"
11"familiar"
12"sense of"
13"anticipation"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"couldn't help but"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"couldn't help but feel"
1"sent a shiver down"
98.96% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences64
matches
0"felt a flush"
1"a sense of excitement"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords808
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount603
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Lucien8
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.837
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount808
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
87.14% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean31.08
std14.14
cv0.455
sampleLengths
066
149
217
331
411
525
650
721
836
948
1027
1132
1219
1316
1420
1551
1623
1726
1818
1923
2038
2138
2216
2324
2427
2556
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs118
matches
0"wasn't expecting"
1"was stepping"
2"was doing"
3"wasn't making"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences80
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount606
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.024752475247524754
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006600660066006601
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean10.1
std4.65
cv0.46
sampleLengths
015
112
24
311
48
516
66
712
815
916
1012
115
1212
138
1411
158
163
1711
1814
196
209
2110
229
2316
248
259
264
2714
2815
297
3014
3113
328
3313
3411
357
369
3712
3816
394
404
414
4211
439
447
4510
4610
474
4829
497
48.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences62
matches
0"She paused, mid-sentence in her"
1"She wasn't expecting anyone."
2"She set her book down,"
3"It was late, too late"
4"She stood, her chair scraping"
5"She hadn't seen him in"
6"She took a deep breath,"
7"she said, her voice steady"
8"He turned to face her,"
9"he greeted, his voice smooth"
10"She raised an eyebrow, leaning"
11"He chuckled, a sound that"
12"he countered, his amber eye"
13"She stepped aside, allowing him"
14"she said, closing the door"
15"he said, his voice low"
16"She felt a flush creep"
17"she replied, turning away to"
18"he said, taking a seat"
19"She poured him a glass,"
ratio0.823
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences62
matches
0"The doorbell chimed, a shrill"
1"She paused, mid-sentence in her"
2"She wasn't expecting anyone."
3"She set her book down,"
4"It was late, too late"
5"She stood, her chair scraping"
6"Lucien Moreau, standing tall and"
7"She hadn't seen him in"
8"She took a deep breath,"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"He turned to face her,"
11"he greeted, his voice smooth"
12"She raised an eyebrow, leaning"
13"He chuckled, a sound that"
14"he countered, his amber eye"
15"She stepped aside, allowing him"
16"she said, closing the door"
17"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, wound"
18"Lucien bent down, scratching the"
19"Rory commented, a hint of"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He chuckled, a sound that sent a shiver down her spine."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"she said, her voice steady despite the flutter in her stomach"
1"he greeted, his voice smooth as velvet"
2"he countered, his amber eye gleaming in the dim light"
3"Rory commented, a hint of a smile on her lips"
4"he said, his voice low"
5"she began, her voice serious"
6"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"he said, his voice grim"
8"she asked, her voice steady"
9"she said, her voice firm"
10"he said, his voice sincere"
11"she said, turning to face him"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory commented (comment)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.371
leniency0.743
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.057
72.4789%