| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 973 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.92% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 973 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "mosaic" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 16 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 963 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "alive" | | 1 | "shift" | | 2 | "alive" | | 3 | "moved" | | 4 | "feel" | | 5 | "else" | | 6 | "move" | | 7 | "wrong" | | 8 | "shifted" | | 9 | "rippled" | | 10 | "bulged" | | 11 | "boiled" | | 12 | "shadows" | | 13 | "fuck" | | 14 | "breaking" | | 15 | "screamed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 886 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.26 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 20 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.371 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening to something only she could hear" | | 1 | "It was as if it weren’t water at all, but a mirror, perfectly still, perfectly *wrong" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 5.192 | | wordCount | 963 | | matches | | 0 | "not with the wind, but with something else, something" | | 1 | "not just in her ears, but in her chest, in her blood" | | 2 | "not the sky, but something else" | | 3 | "not her face, but a city, vast" | | 4 | "not with water, but with *shadows*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 24.08 | | std | 23.7 | | cv | 0.984 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 91 | | 5 | 80 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 67 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 72 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 49 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 75.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "were walking" | | 1 | "were trying" | | 2 | "was staring" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "The sound was wrong—too sharp, too *alive*—like metal dragged across bone." | | 1 | "Rory had seen them before—from a distance, when she’d first stumbled upon this place with Isolde—but now, standing between them, she felt the weight of their age pressing down like a physical force." | | 2 | "Their leaves weren’t green—they were *alive*, shifting between hues of violet and crimson and deep, impossible blue." | | 3 | "A sound cut through the silence—a low, melodic hum, like a choir of voices singing just below hearing." | | 4 | "The ground was a mosaic of glowing flowers, their petals shifting colours as she watched—deep red bleeding into gold, gold into violet, violet into a shade of blue so dark it was almost black." | | 5 | "At first, she saw only her own reflection—her dark hair, her bright blue eyes, the small crescent scar on her wrist." | | 6 | "The pool *rippled*, and for a heartbeat, Rory saw something else beneath the surface—not her face, but a city, vast and sprawling, its towers twisting like blackened fingers against a blood-red sky." | | 7 | "Rory lunged to her feet as the surface erupted, not with water, but with *shadows*—thick, writhing tendrils of darkness that lashed out like whips." |
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| 94.03% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 897 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.046822742474916385 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011148272017837236 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 10.13 | | std | 7.76 | | cv | 0.766 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 47.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3263157894736842 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she turned and walked" | | 1 | "Then, slowly, it reached up," | | 2 | "Then, slowly, she reached into" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled back, fingers tightening" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice threading through" | | 2 | "It was the scent of" | | 3 | "She didn’t touch the stones." | | 4 | "She didn’t need to." | | 5 | "She never did, not directly." | | 6 | "Their bark was smooth as" | | 7 | "Their leaves weren’t green—they were" | | 8 | "She could *feel* it, not" | | 9 | "It was the sound of" | | 10 | "They rounded a bend, and" | | 11 | "It didn’t *move*." | | 12 | "It was as if it" | | 13 | "She crouched beside the pool," | | 14 | "Her reflection smiled." | | 15 | "She knew that name." | | 16 | "She was staring at the" | | 17 | "It pulsed in her hand," |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 17.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The blade of Rory’s Fae-forged" | | 1 | "The sound was wrong—too sharp," | | 2 | "She pulled back, fingers tightening" | | 3 | "The moonsilver was cold, colder" | | 4 | "Nyx materialised beside her, their" | | 5 | "they whispered, voice threading through" | | 6 | "The standing stones of the" | | 7 | "Rory had seen them before—from" | | 8 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 9 | "It was the scent of" | | 10 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver" | | 11 | "She didn’t touch the stones." | | 12 | "She didn’t need to." | | 13 | "The moment she passed between" | | 14 | "The trees beyond the circle" | | 15 | "The ground beneath Rory’s boots" | | 16 | "Isolde said, her voice carrying" | | 17 | "Rory exhaled sharply." | | 18 | "Isolde didn’t answer." | | 19 | "She never did, not directly." |
| | ratio | 0.886 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stretched a clearing," |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had seen them before—from a distance, when she’d first stumbled upon this place with Isolde—but now, standing between them, she felt the weight of their ag…" | | 1 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older, something that didn’t belong to this world." | | 2 | "The trees beyond the circle bent inward, their branches twisting into impossible shapes, their leaves shimmering with colours that didn’t exist in the mortal re…" | | 3 | "Isolde paused, tilting her head as if listening to something only she could hear." | | 4 | "It was the sound of something ancient, something that had watched civilisations rise and fall like tides." | | 5 | "The ground was a mosaic of glowing flowers, their petals shifting colours as she watched—deep red bleeding into gold, gold into violet, violet into a shade of b…" | | 6 | "It was as if it weren’t water at all, but a mirror, perfectly still, perfectly *wrong*." | | 7 | "The reflection’s hand pressed harder, and the water *bulged*, as if something were trying to push through." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, voice threading through the silence" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice carrying the weight of centuries" | | 2 | "Rory demanded, her dagger raised" | | 3 | "Rory said, her voice tight" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Rory demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.481 | | leniency | 0.963 | | rawRatio | 0.385 | | effectiveRatio | 0.37 | |