Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT013NFDZXBYAFE3VNKB3KZ

Run Details

Duration:
27.5s
Cost:
$0.012289
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked back one by one, the sound sharp in the narrow stairwell. Rory didn’t look through the peephole. Ptolemy yowled from somewhere behind the cluttered hallway, tail puffed. She pulled the door open, keys still in hand, the scent of cumin and turmeric from the curry house below thick in the air. Her breath caught. Lucien stood there, shoulders squared beneath a charcoal suit that didn’t hide the tension in his frame. Rain glistened in his slicked-back platinum hair, and one of his eyes caught the dim hallway light—amber, the other, flat as ink. The ivory handle of his cane pressed into the worn welcome mat. He didn’t smile. Didn’t speak. Rory’s fingers tightened on the door. “You lost?” “Not quite.” His voice was lower than she remembered, rougher. Like it had been dragged across gravel. She didn’t move. “You can’t just show up here.” “I can. And I did.” “Three years, Lucien. Three years and nothing. No word. No call. Then suddenly you’re on my doorstep in the rain like some tragic film noir ghost?” Her voice stayed level, but her pulse thudded against the scar on her wrist, a dull ache she hadn’t felt in months. He exhaled through his nose, barely a breath. “I didn’t come for a reunion.” “Then why?” “You were followed tonight.” Her spine snapped straight. “What?” “Two blocks from the Golden Empress. Man in a grey coat, kept pace behind your bike. Not human.” His good eye—amber—narrowed slightly. “He lost you in Spitalfields. Temporarily.” Rory stepped back, scanning the street beyond him. Empty. Glistening cobbles. “You’ve been watching me?” “I watch a lot of things.” “That’s not an answer.” “No. It isn’t.” They stood in silence, the weight of the past pressing between them. Not just the years. The last time she’d seen him, she was bleeding from a cut above her brow, Lucien pressing a folded handkerchief to it in the back room of Silas’ bar. His fingers had trembled. Or maybe that was her. She turned, leaving the door open behind her. A silent permission. He followed, closing the door with a quiet click and sliding the deadbolts home. His cane tapped once on the wood as he moved past her. Ptolemy circled Lucien’s legs, sniffing, then darted away under the sofa. The flat was chaos—stacks of grimoires balanced on teetering stools, runes sketched on napkins, a half-dismantled sigil glowing faintly on the kitchen counter. A single mug sat cooling on the arm of the sofa—green tea, cold. Lucien didn’t touch anything. Just stood in the center of the room, dripping onto her rug. “You’re tracking rain,” she said, folding her arms. “You never did let a little mess bother you.” “That was before I had to clean it up.” He turned to face her. “I heard about Evans.” Her breath stilled. “You heard?” “People talk. Especially when a man like him shows up screaming about demons in Camden.” Rory’s laugh was brittle. “And what? You thought I needed saving again?” “No.” His voice hardened. “I thought you’d want to know he’s not just screaming. He’s *hunting*. And he’s working with someone who knows how to summon.” The room tilted. Rory gripped the back of the sofa. “He’s still chasing ghosts?” “Ghosts? No.” Lucien’s fingers brushed the hilt of the concealed blade in his cane. “He’s chasing *you*. And he’s picked up a summoner from the Outer Rings. A woman named Malphora.” The name landed like a stone. Rory paled. *Malphora.* Her alias. One of many. But not one Evans should have known. “You gave me that name,” she whispered. Lucien’s expression didn’t change. “I gave it to *no one*.” “Then how—” “Doesn’t matter. What matters is that they’re using it. Calling it. And whatever answered… isn’t you.” She stepped forward, eyes blazing. “You think I don’t know what I am and what I’m not? You think I’d let that bastard use *my* name to tear holes in the Veil?” “I don’t think anything. I act.” “Right. The great Lucien Moreau. Arbiter of consequences.” She dropped her arms, voice cracking. “You vanished, Lucien. After Silas died. After I—” She cut herself off. After she’d kissed him in the rain outside the morgue. After he’d pulled away like she’d burned him. His jaw tightened. “You think I wanted to go?” “You didn’t *tell* me. You just disappeared. One day you were there, the next—gone. No note. Nothing.” “I kept you alive.” “By walking out?” “By making sure *they* didn’t know you mattered to me.” Rory froze. “What?” His black eye seemed to swallow the light. “The High Circle was watching. They knew about Silas. Knew about your connection to the Empress. Knew you were asking too many questions. If they’d known about *us*—” He stopped. “Us.” He looked away. “That’s rich. There was never an ‘us,’ Lucien. Not really. You made that clear.” “I kept you safe.” “At what cost?” She stepped closer, close enough to see the faint silver scar along his jawline she hadn’t noticed before. “You think I wanted safety? I wanted *you*. After Silas. After everything—I called. I waited. I thought you were *dead*.” “I couldn’t contact you. Not then.” “Because of the Circle?” “Because of what I am.” She laughed, sharp and sudden. “Don’t give me that half-demon martyr act. You chose your world over me. Again.” “I didn’t choose.” His voice dropped. “I *obeyed*. There’s a difference.” “Not to me.” Silence settled, heavier than before. Ptolemy crept out, hopping onto the windowsill, tail twitching. Rory turned to the kitchen, grabbed a towel, and tossed it at him. “Dry off. You’re ruining my floor.” He caught it one-handed, stared at it like it was a live grenade, then slowly wiped his hair. “You should leave the city,” he said quietly. “No.” “You’re not safe.” “I haven’t been safe in years.” “This is different.” “Because of Evans? Because of some woman using my name? Please.” She faced him. “You don’t get to waltz back in here and tell me what’s dangerous. Not after *you* taught me how to fight. How to hide. How to survive.” “I didn’t teach you to invite war.” “I didn’t *invite* it.” “You’re still standing in it.” They stared at each other, the air crackling. Then Lucien reached into his coat. Rory tensed. He pulled out a slender envelope, sealed with wax the colour of dried blood. “What’s that?” “An invitation.” “To what?” “The Convening. In Prague. The Half-Bloods are gathering. They’re choosing a new Regent. Someone has to balance the Courts now that Silas is gone.” “And you think *I* should go?” “I know you should.” “Why?” “Because Malphora isn’t just a name anymore. It’s a *claim*. And only you can deny it.” Rory took a step back. “You want me to walk into a den of demons and half-breeds and say, ‘Hey, I’m not the ancient entity you’re looking for’?” “I want you to stand where they can see you. Alive. Human.” His voice softened. “I want them to see what I see.” Her breath caught. “What’s that?” “The woman who walked into a summoning circle with a chef’s knife and a bag of salt and walked out alive.” “That wasn’t bravery. It was panic.” “It was *you*.” She looked away, fingers pressing into her wrist, over the crescent scar. The same one he’d kissed once, long ago, when the world still felt possible. “You don’t get to come back and rewrite history,” she said, voice low. “I’m not.” He placed the envelope on the counter. “I’m asking you to write the next page.” Outside, thunder rolled over East London. Ptolemy flicked an ear. Rory didn’t move. Didn’t speak. Lucien lifted his cane. “I’ll be at the Iron Gate. Midnight. If you want answers. If you want to stop what’s coming.” He turned toward the door. “Lucien.” Her voice stopped him. He didn’t turn. “You still love me?” The silence stretched. Then, without looking back, he said, “I never stopped.” And he was gone, the door clicking shut behind him, leaving only damp footprints and a blood-red seal on the counter.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"good eye—amber—narrowed slightly [slightly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences87
tagDensity0.23
leniency0.46
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.046
85.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"glistening"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"pulse"
2"scanning"
3"glistening"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"trembled"
7"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords17
totalWords1351
ratio0.013
matches
0"hunting"
1"you"
2"Malphora."
3"no one"
4"my"
5"tell"
6"they"
7"us"
8"you"
9"dead"
10"obeyed"
11"you"
12"invite"
13"I"
14"claim"
15"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount674
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Like1
Rory11
Lucien8
Evans1
Silence1
East1
London1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Evans"
3"Silence"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"East"
1"London"
globalScore0.684
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1351
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs109
mean12.39
std11.6
cv0.936
sampleLengths
030
127
251
35
48
517
69
75
848
914
102
114
125
1328
1415
156
164
173
1854
1911
2026
2111
2236
2316
248
259
269
279
285
2915
3012
3126
3214
3331
346
352
361
3712
387
3910
402
4116
4232
436
4426
4518
469
4717
484
493
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"been dragged"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs136
matches
0"was bleeding"
71.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences160
ratio0.025
matches
0"Rain glistened in his slicked-back platinum hair, and one of his eyes caught the dim hallway light—amber, the other, flat as ink."
1"“Two blocks from the Golden Empress. Man in a grey coat, kept pace behind your bike. Not human.” His good eye—amber—narrowed slightly."
2"The flat was chaos—stacks of grimoires balanced on teetering stools, runes sketched on napkins, a half-dismantled sigil glowing faintly on the kitchen counter."
3"A single mug sat cooling on the arm of the sofa—green tea, cold."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount648
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.033950617283950615
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009259259259259259
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean8.44
std7.28
cv0.862
sampleLengths
014
16
210
324
43
517
622
712
83
92
106
112
1210
137
143
156
165
1748
188
196
202
214
224
231
2422
256
268
271
282
294
306
314
323
3312
344
3529
364
375
388
393
4014
4112
4211
4323
4413
454
4612
478
489
499
44.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"Just stood in the center"
1"Then Lucien reached into his"
2"Then, without looking back, he"
ratio0.037
22.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences81
matches
0"She pulled the door open,"
1"Her breath caught."
2"He didn’t smile."
3"His voice was lower than"
4"She didn’t move."
5"Her voice stayed level, but"
6"He exhaled through his nose,"
7"Her spine snapped straight."
8"His good eye—amber—narrowed slightly"
9"They stood in silence, the"
10"His fingers had trembled."
11"She turned, leaving the door"
12"He followed, closing the door"
13"His cane tapped once on"
14"she said, folding her arms"
15"He turned to face her."
16"Her breath stilled."
17"His voice hardened"
18"She stepped forward, eyes blazing."
19"She dropped her arms, voice"
ratio0.494
40.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences81
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked back one"
1"Rory didn’t look through the"
2"Ptolemy yowled from somewhere behind"
3"She pulled the door open,"
4"Her breath caught."
5"Lucien stood there, shoulders squared"
6"Rain glistened in his slicked-back"
7"The ivory handle of his"
8"He didn’t smile."
9"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
10"His voice was lower than"
11"She didn’t move."
12"Her voice stayed level, but"
13"He exhaled through his nose,"
14"Her spine snapped straight."
15"His good eye—amber—narrowed slightly"
16"Rory stepped back, scanning the"
17"They stood in silence, the"
18"The last time she’d seen"
19"His fingers had trembled."
ratio0.84
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien stood there, shoulders squared beneath a charcoal suit that didn’t hide the tension in his frame."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she remembered, rougher"
1"Her voice stayed, but her pulse thudded against the scar on her wrist, a dull ache she hadn’t felt in months"
2"She dropped, voice cracking"
3"she said, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences87
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.115
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.023
83.2180%