Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT014WGNWRMVCY2XHXA5T69

Run Details

Duration:
8.8s
Cost:
$0.000838

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock echoed through the flat, a staccato rhythm that punctuated the silence. Rory, midway through a chapter of "Wuthering Heights," sighed and marked her page. She wasn't expecting visitors, and Eva was out, buried under stacks of ancient texts at the British Library. The knock came again, more insistent this time. She set her book down and crossed the room, her footsteps muffled by the worn rug. Through the peephole, she saw a familiar face, or rather, half of one. An amber eye and a sliver of platinum hair were all that was visible, but it was enough. She leaned her forehead against the cool wood of the door, closing her eyes briefly before unlocking the three deadbolts. Lucien stood there, impeccable as ever in his tailored charcoal suit, ivory-handled cane in hand. His heterochromatic eyes met hers, one warm, one cold, reflecting the duality she'd always found intriguing. He offered a small smile, but it didn't reach his eyes. "Rory," he said, his voice a low rumble, like distant thunder. "Luc," she replied, stepping aside to let him in. "What brings you to my humble abode?" She closed the door behind him, the locks clicking into place with a sense of finality. He turned to face her, his gaze sweeping over her. She was dressed in simple jeans and a worn band t-shirt, her straight black hair tied up in a messy bun. "You've not changed," he observed, a hint of something—nostalgia? Regret?—in his voice. Rory raised an eyebrow. "Neither have you. Still the picture of elegance." She gestured to the small living room. "Drink?" "Whiskey, if you have it," he said, taking a seat on the worn couch. His cane lay across his lap, the thin blade hidden within glinting in the dim light. Rory poured two glasses, handing one to Lucien before sitting down in the armchair opposite him. She took a sip, feeling the burn of the liquor as it slid down her throat. "So," she said, breaking the silence, "what are you doing here, Luc?" Lucien swirled the amber liquid in his glass, watching the light catch it. "I have a proposition for you," he said finally, looking up at her. "A job." Rory leaned back in her chair, crossing her legs. "I'm listening." "It involves... old acquaintances," he said, choosing his words carefully. "People from our past. People who know about us." Rory's grip tightened on her glass. "Us," she repeated, tasting the word on her tongue. It was a loaded word, one that held a lifetime of memories and regrets. "What about them?" "They're causing trouble," Lucien said. "Trouble that could... attract unwanted attention. From both our worlds." Rory took another sip of her whiskey, considering. "And you want me to what? Clean up their mess?" "In a manner of speaking," Lucien said. "You have a unique perspective, Rory. You understand both worlds. And you're good at what you do." Rory set her glass down on the coffee table, her eyes never leaving Lucien's. "I don't work for free, Luc," she said, her voice steady. "And I don't work for old acquaintances. Not anymore." Lucien nodded, as if he'd expected her response. He reached into his pocket and pulled out an envelope, placing it on the table. "Consider it a down payment," he said. "There's more where that came from, if you're interested." Rory picked up the envelope, weighing it in her hand. She didn't open it, didn't count the money. She knew Lucien well enough to know it would be enough. "And if I'm not?" she asked, her voice soft. Lucien stood up, buttoning his suit jacket. "Then I'll find someone who is," he said. "But I thought you might be interested, given your... history with these people." Rory stood up as well, her chair scraping back. "You thought wrong," she said, her voice cold. "I don't do favors, Luc. Not anymore. Not for you. Not for them." Lucien paused at the door, his hand on the knob. "Think about it, Rory," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "It's not just about the money. It's about closure. About putting the past to rest." Rory didn't respond, didn't move. She just stood there, her eyes on the door, her heart pounding in her chest. Lucien opened the door, stepped out, and closed it softly behind him. The locks clicked into place, sealing Rory in, sealing Lucien out. She stood there for a moment, her eyes on the door, her mind racing. Then she picked up the envelope, tore it open, and counted the money. It was enough. More than enough. But it wasn't about the money. It was about the past. About closure. About putting ghosts to rest. She picked up her phone, dialed a number she hadn't called in years. It rang twice before a familiar voice picked up. "Rory," the voice said, a hint of surprise in it. "It's been a while." "Yes," Rory said, her voice steady. "It has. I need a favor, Eva. A big one." There was a pause on the other end of the line. Then, "What do you need, Rory?" Eva asked, her voice serious. "I need information," Rory said. "About old acquaintances. About our past." Eva was silent for a moment. Then she said, "I'll see what I can find. But Rory... be careful. Some things are better left in the past." "I know," Rory said, her eyes on the door. "But some things... some things need to be faced. Head on." She hung up the phone, her mind made up. She picked up her book, opened it to the marked page, and started to read. But her mind wasn't on "Wuthering Heights." It was on the past. On old acquaintances. On closure. On putting ghosts to rest. And on Lucien. On his heterochromatic eyes. On his small smile. On his proposition. On the money. On the job. On the chance to face the past. Head on.
total_cost0.0008378999999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.558
leniency1
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.042
84.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount997
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount997
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"intriguing"
count1
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silence"
2"footsteps"
3"familiar"
4"intriguing"
5"sense of"
6"eyebrow"
7"glinting"
8"whisper"
9"pounding"
10"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords995
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount738
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
British1
Library1
Regret1
Lucien13
Rory14
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
places
0"British"
1"Library"
globalScore0.551
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount995
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
75.59% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean32.1
std13.31
cv0.415
sampleLengths
068
151
253
332
443
520
630
744
828
911
1019
1132
1215
1318
1424
1534
1639
1738
1828
1930
2037
2143
2251
2336
2416
2522
2611
2727
2820
2946
3029
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"was dressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
87.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences103
ratio0.019
matches
0"\"You've not changed,\" he observed, a hint of something—nostalgia?"
1"Regret?—in his voice."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount740
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02972972972972973
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006756756756756757
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean9.66
std4.89
cv0.506
sampleLengths
013
113
218
38
416
513
618
720
815
916
1011
1111
129
1323
1410
1521
169
173
184
1915
201
2114
2216
2316
2416
2512
2613
2713
282
299
302
3110
329
336
349
3514
363
375
3810
398
4010
417
4217
4314
4411
459
468
4715
487
499
48.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.34951456310679613
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then she picked up the"
1"More than enough."
2"Then, Eva asked, her voice"
3"Then she said,"
ratio0.051
40.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences78
matches
0"She wasn't expecting visitors, and"
1"She set her book down"
2"She leaned her forehead against"
3"His heterochromatic eyes met hers,"
4"He offered a small smile,"
5"he said, his voice a"
6"she replied, stepping aside to"
7"She closed the door behind"
8"He turned to face her,"
9"She was dressed in simple"
10"he observed, a hint of"
11"She gestured to the small"
12"he said, taking a seat"
13"His cane lay across his"
14"She took a sip, feeling"
15"she said, breaking the silence"
16"he said finally, looking up"
17"he said, choosing his words"
18"she repeated, tasting the word"
19"It was a loaded word,"
ratio0.449
75.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences78
matches
0"The knock echoed through the"
1"Rory, midway through a chapter"
2"She wasn't expecting visitors, and"
3"The knock came again, more"
4"She set her book down"
5"An amber eye and a"
6"She leaned her forehead against"
7"Lucien stood there, impeccable as"
8"His heterochromatic eyes met hers,"
9"He offered a small smile,"
10"he said, his voice a"
11"she replied, stepping aside to"
12"She closed the door behind"
13"He turned to face her,"
14"She was dressed in simple"
15"he observed, a hint of"
16"Regret?—in his voice."
17"Rory raised an eyebrow."
18"She gestured to the small"
19"he said, taking a seat"
ratio0.769
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble, like distant thunder"
1"She closed, the locks clicking into place with a sense of finality"
2"he observed, a hint of something—nostalgia"
3"she said, her voice steady"
4"she asked, her voice soft"
5"she said, her voice cold"
6"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
7"the voice said, a hint of surprise in it"
8"Rory said, her voice steady"
9"Eva asked, her voice serious"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.512
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
82.1279%