| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.558 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.042 | | effectiveRatio | 0.042 | |
| 84.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 997 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.80% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 997 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "intriguing" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "eyebrow" | | 7 | "glinting" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 995 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 738 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | British | 1 | | Library | 1 | | Regret | 1 | | Lucien | 13 | | Rory | 14 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.551 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 995 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.59% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 32.1 | | std | 13.31 | | cv | 0.415 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.38% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.019 | | matches | | 0 | "\"You've not changed,\" he observed, a hint of something—nostalgia?" | | 1 | "Regret?—in his voice." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 740 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.02972972972972973 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006756756756756757 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 9.66 | | std | 4.89 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 48.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.34951456310679613 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she picked up the" | | 1 | "More than enough." | | 2 | "Then, Eva asked, her voice" | | 3 | "Then she said," |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 40.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She wasn't expecting visitors, and" | | 1 | "She set her book down" | | 2 | "She leaned her forehead against" | | 3 | "His heterochromatic eyes met hers," | | 4 | "He offered a small smile," | | 5 | "he said, his voice a" | | 6 | "she replied, stepping aside to" | | 7 | "She closed the door behind" | | 8 | "He turned to face her," | | 9 | "She was dressed in simple" | | 10 | "he observed, a hint of" | | 11 | "She gestured to the small" | | 12 | "he said, taking a seat" | | 13 | "His cane lay across his" | | 14 | "She took a sip, feeling" | | 15 | "she said, breaking the silence" | | 16 | "he said finally, looking up" | | 17 | "he said, choosing his words" | | 18 | "she repeated, tasting the word" | | 19 | "It was a loaded word," |
| | ratio | 0.449 | |
| 75.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock echoed through the" | | 1 | "Rory, midway through a chapter" | | 2 | "She wasn't expecting visitors, and" | | 3 | "The knock came again, more" | | 4 | "She set her book down" | | 5 | "An amber eye and a" | | 6 | "She leaned her forehead against" | | 7 | "Lucien stood there, impeccable as" | | 8 | "His heterochromatic eyes met hers," | | 9 | "He offered a small smile," | | 10 | "he said, his voice a" | | 11 | "she replied, stepping aside to" | | 12 | "She closed the door behind" | | 13 | "He turned to face her," | | 14 | "She was dressed in simple" | | 15 | "he observed, a hint of" | | 16 | "Regret?—in his voice." | | 17 | "Rory raised an eyebrow." | | 18 | "She gestured to the small" | | 19 | "he said, taking a seat" |
| | ratio | 0.769 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice a low rumble, like distant thunder" | | 1 | "She closed, the locks clicking into place with a sense of finality" | | 2 | "he observed, a hint of something—nostalgia" | | 3 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 4 | "she asked, her voice soft" | | 5 | "she said, her voice cold" | | 6 | "he said, his voice barely above a whisper" | | 7 | "the voice said, a hint of surprise in it" | | 8 | "Rory said, her voice steady" | | 9 | "Eva asked, her voice serious" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 22 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he observed (observe)" | | 1 | "she repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.512 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |