Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01505QYC7NE4Y43TJ29D0

Run Details

Duration:
21.2s
Cost:
$0.011107
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed against the cracked windowpane of Eva’s flat, a steady rhythm broken only by the occasional hiss of the radiator kicking on. The scent of old paper, turmeric, and cat fur clung to the air. Rory stood barefoot in the kitchenette, wiping down the counter with a threadbare cloth, her black hair damp from the shower, tendrils escaping the half-hearted ponytail she’d tossed it into. Ptolemy sprawled across the armchair, tail flicking, eyes narrowed at the television, which played a muted nature documentary about snow leopards. A knock came at the door — not the usual three quick taps Eva used, nor the fumbling knock of the delivery guys from next door. This was deliberate. Formal. Three measured raps, spaced just a breath apart. Rory froze. No one came here without calling first. Not even Yu-Fei, and especially not after nine. She moved to the door, eyeing the three deadbolts still engaged. “Who is it?” Silence. Then, low and smooth, like smoke curling under a door: “It’s me.” Her breath caught. She didn’t need a name. She knew that voice — the quiet French roll of *me*, the way the *m* lingered like a threat or a promise. Lucien. She stared at the scar on her left wrist, the pale crescent hidden beneath the sleeve of her sweater. A memory flashed: cold rain in Soho, his fingers brushing hers as he handed her a slip of paper with a number on it. *Call if you need out,* he’d said. She never did. Three months ago, he’d stood on the corner of Aldgate, face shadowed by an umbrella, and told her he was leaving London. *“We were a distraction,”* he said. *“Not a solution.”* She’d nodded, arms folded, jaw tight, pretending the words didn’t slice. Now he was here. She unlatched the top bolt. Then the middle. Then the bottom. Turned the knob. Lucien stood in the dim hall light, immaculate as ever. Charcoal suit draped over broad shoulders, platinum hair slicked back like he’d stepped from a 1940s noir film. One hand gripped the ivory head of his cane; the other hung loose at his side. Raindrops glistened on his coat. His eyes — mismatched, unforgettable — locked onto hers. Amber and black. One human. One not. “You weren’t supposed to be here,” he said, voice quiet. “I wasn’t supposed to let you in.” She didn’t step back. “What do you want, Lucien?” He exhaled through his nose, almost a laugh. “You look well.” “That’s not an answer.” “I needed to see you.” Ptolemy padded into the hall, fur bristling, then rubbed against Lucien’s leg with a low purr. Rory blinked. “He remembers you.” “I remember the tuna I slipped him last time.” Lucien leaned on his cane, shifting his weight. “Can I come in? Or are we going to stand in the hallway and pretend this doesn’t ache?” She stepped aside. He entered with the quiet grace of someone trained to move without noise. Closed the door behind him. Took off his coat, draping it over a chair piled with books on geomancy. Water pooled beneath his polished shoes. Rory crossed her arms. “You left. No call. No note. Just vanished.” “I didn’t vanish. I sent a message.” “A text. *‘Gone to Marseille. Don’t follow.’* That’s not closure. That’s cowardice.” He turned, slow, and for the first time, she saw the shadow beneath his eyes. “I wasn’t protecting myself, Rory. I was protecting you.” “From what? Dinner and conversation?” “From me.” She scoffed. “You don’t get to decide that.” “I do when the things I know — the people I’ve crossed — start showing up on *your* doorstep.” He stepped closer. Not threatening, but impossible to ignore. “That demon from the canal? The one who tried to take your shadow? He doesn’t work alone. And he doesn’t forget.” She stiffened. The encounter two weeks prior — the figure with molten eyes rising from the water behind the Golden Empress, whispering her real name like it was a key. Lucien had appeared, blade drawn, and sent it screaming back into the dark. They hadn’t spoken since. “You didn’t tell me why he knew my name.” “Because some doors stay shut for a reason.” His voice softened. “I left so you’d be safe. So you could *live*. Not spend your nights dodging revenants and half-truths.” “And who decides that? You?” She stepped forward, eyes blazing. “You don’t get to write my story, Lucien. Not after the way you looked at me in that alley behind Silas’ bar. Not after you kissed me when you thought I wouldn’t remember.” He flinched. She had him. “I remember every second,” she said. “The warmth of your hands. The way you stopped, like you were afraid to want me. And then you walked away. Again.” His jaw tightened. “I’m not human, Rory. You know what that means.” “It means your father was a demon. It doesn’t mean you’re a monster.” “It means I carry a hunger most can’t survive. You think I don’t lie awake wondering what I might do in a moment of weakness? What I might take from you without meaning to?” “So you decided to take everything anyway. By leaving.” Her voice cracked, just once. “Did you think I wouldn’t feel it? That I wouldn’t notice the silence where your messages used to be?” He looked down. “No.” Silence settled, thick with everything unsaid. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill, tail high, and stared out at the rain. Lucien lifted his eyes again. “I came back because Malphora is awake.” Rory went still. *Malphora.* The name they’d found scrawled in Eva’s grandmother’s journals — a forgotten deity of thresholds and stolen names. A being that fed on identity. “She’s stirring,” Lucien said. “And she’s looking for a vessel.” Rory touched her wrist, fingers brushing the scar. “And you think it’s me.” “I *know* it’s you. Your name was spoken in the ritual that first woke her. *Aurora.* Not Rory. Not Laila. *Aurora.* The name you tried to bury.” She backed up a step. “That was my mother’s choice. We said it once, at a bonfire, when I was ten. Just once.” “It was enough.” She turned, gripping the edge of the kitchen counter. “So what? You show up now, after months, because I’m in danger? Convenient.” “It’s not convenient. It’s torture.” He moved to her, close but not touching. “Every day I was gone, I thought of you. The way you solve problems like they’re puzzles written in a language only you can read. The way you laugh when you think no one’s watching. I came back because I can’t let her take you. And because I couldn’t stand not seeing you again.” She turned her head, eyes bright. “That’s not enough.” “I know.” “Then why come?” “Because I’m done pretending I don’t love you.” The words hung in the air like a struck bell. Rory’s breath shivered. He didn’t move. Didn’t reach for her. Just stood there, bare honesty in his mismatched eyes. She closed the space between them. Her hand pressed against his chest, feeling the steady beat beneath the fine fabric. Then she looked up. “You don’t get to leave again. Not like that. Not without a fight.” “I won’t.” “No vague disappearances. No noble sacrifices. If we do this, it’s together. Even when it’s hard. Even when it’s dangerous.” He covered her hand with his. Cold fingers, but his grip was sure. “Together.” Outside, the rain slowed. Ptolemy yawned, stretched, and leapt onto the couch. Rory didn’t let go.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice cracked just [just]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.415
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.038
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1256
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"encounter"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"encounter"
4"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans12
markdownWords25
totalWords1261
ratio0.02
matches
0"me"
1"m"
2"Call if you need out,"
3"“We were a distraction,”"
4"“Not a solution.”"
5"‘Gone to Marseille. Don’t follow.’"
6"your"
7"live"
8"Malphora."
9"know"
10"Aurora."
11"Aurora."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount724
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Yu-Fei1
French1
Soho1
Aldgate1
London1
Lucien7
Golden1
Empress1
Rory8
Ptolemy4
One3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Empress"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"One"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.948
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.793
wordCount1261
matches
0"Not threatening, but impossible to ignore"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"being that fed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean18.01
std17.25
cv0.957
sampleLengths
087
138
22
315
414
513
63
728
853
922
109
1111
124
1314
1465
1510
1616
1711
184
195
2018
213
2235
233
2438
2512
267
2712
2824
295
302
318
3249
3347
349
3529
3643
372
383
3928
4012
4113
4234
4333
444
456
4613
4712
4828
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was leaving"
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences132
ratio0.045
matches
0"A knock came at the door — not the usual three quick taps Eva used, nor the fumbling knock of the delivery guys from next door."
1"She knew that voice — the quiet French roll of *me*, the way the *m* lingered like a threat or a promise."
2"One hand gripped the ivory head of his cane; the other hung loose at his side."
3"His eyes — mismatched, unforgettable — locked onto hers."
4"The encounter two weeks prior — the figure with molten eyes rising from the water behind the Golden Empress, whispering her real name like it was a key."
5"*Malphora.* The name they’d found scrawled in Eva’s grandmother’s journals — a forgotten deity of thresholds and stolen names."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount720
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.029166666666666667
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002777777777777778
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean9.55
std8.37
cv0.876
sampleLengths
023
113
230
321
426
53
61
78
82
97
108
1111
123
131
1412
153
165
1722
181
1919
2024
217
223
2322
246
253
2611
274
285
293
303
313
3210
3318
3416
355
369
373
382
392
4010
4111
425
438
443
454
465
4716
482
493
56.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then, low and smooth, like"
1"Then the middle."
2"Then the bottom."
3"Just stood there, bare honesty"
4"Then she looked up."
ratio0.064
61.03% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences78
matches
0"She moved to the door,"
1"Her breath caught."
2"She didn’t need a name."
3"She knew that voice —"
4"She stared at the scar"
5"She never did."
6"She’d nodded, arms folded, jaw"
7"She unlatched the top bolt."
8"His eyes — mismatched, unforgettable"
9"he said, voice quiet"
10"She didn’t step back"
11"He exhaled through his nose,"
12"She stepped aside."
13"He entered with the quiet"
14"He turned, slow, and for"
15"He stepped closer"
16"They hadn’t spoken since."
17"His voice softened"
18"She stepped forward, eyes blazing"
19"She had him."
ratio0.397
81.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences78
matches
0"Rain drummed against the cracked"
1"The scent of old paper,"
2"Rory stood barefoot in the"
3"Ptolemy sprawled across the armchair,"
4"A knock came at the"
5"This was deliberate."
6"She moved to the door,"
7"Her breath caught."
8"She didn’t need a name."
9"She knew that voice —"
10"She stared at the scar"
11"A memory flashed: cold rain"
12"*Call if you need out,*"
13"She never did."
14"She’d nodded, arms folded, jaw"
15"She unlatched the top bolt."
16"Lucien stood in the dim"
17"Charcoal suit draped over broad"
18"Raindrops glistened on his coat."
19"His eyes — mismatched, unforgettable"
ratio0.756
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Now he was here."
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Ptolemy sprawled across the armchair, tail flicking, eyes narrowed at the television, which played a muted nature documentary about snow leopards."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice quiet"
1"She stepped, eyes blazing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.151
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.2568%