Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01533XTCV80HXHW4CNJAJ

Run Details

Duration:
5.7s
Cost:
$0.000305

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the grimy underbelly of Camden, Detective Harlow Quinn descended into the abandoned Tube station, her worn leather boots echoing on the damp, moss-covered steps. The stench of decay and something more sinister hung heavy in the air, a far cry from the bustling markets above. Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped short, barely stirred in the stagnant breeze as she stepped onto the platform, her sharp jaw set in a grim line. The Veil Market, a hidden supernatural black market, had moved here for the night, its entry requirement met by the bone token now tucked safely in her pocket. The market was a labyrinth of makeshift stalls, hawking everything from enchanted trinkets to banned alchemical substances. Tonight, it was a crime scene, and something about it didn't sit right with Quinn. Her colleague, Detective Andrew "Andy" Harris, was already there, his lanky frame hunched over a body sprawled on the grimy ground. He looked up as she approached, his eyes reflecting the sickly glow of the market's lanterns. "Quinn," he acknowledged, straightening up. "You're just in time. Victim's name is Samuel 'Sammy' Blake. Dealer here, small-time. Throat slit, clean cut. No sign of struggle." Quinn crouched down, her military precision evident in her movements. She examined the body, her brown eyes taking in every detail. "No defensive wounds, no sign of forced entry," she murmured, more to herself than to Harris. "Yet his wallet's still on him, and look at this." She pointed to a small, brass compass clutched in Blake's hand. "He was holding onto this when he died. It's not your average compass, Andy. See the sigils etched on the face? This is a Veil Compass. It points towards supernatural rifts or portals." Harris squinted at the compass, his brow furrowing. "You think this is related to the supernatural, Quinn? You know the brass doesn't like us jumping to those conclusions." Quinn stood up, her gaze sweeping over the market. "I'm not jumping to anything, Andy. I'm just saying, this isn't your average murder. Look around. The market's still open, but no one's panicking. They're going about their business like this is normal. Something's off." She turned to a nearby stall, where a hooded figure was packing up their wares. "Hey!" she called out, striding over. The figure froze, then slowly turned. A young woman with curly red hair and round glasses looked up at Quinn, her green eyes wide behind the lenses. "Eva Kowalski," Quinn said, recognition flickering in her eyes. "What are you doing here?" Eva tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear, a nervous habit Quinn remembered well. "Detective Quinn," Eva acknowledged, her voice barely above a whisper. "I... I work here now. Aurora sent me." Quinn raised an eyebrow. "Aurora? The clique's leader? You're working for her now?" Eva nodded, her freckled complexion flushing. "I'm just a researcher, Detective. I provide information, that's all." Quinn's gaze hardened. "Information about what, Eva? The supernatural? The clique's involvement in it?" Eva looked away, her silence speaking volumes. Quinn turned back to the body, her mind racing. She knew Eva was involved in something dangerous, something that had cost her partner, DS Morris, his life three years ago. She couldn't prove it, not yet, but she was getting closer. She crouched down again, examining the body more closely. There was a faint, almost imperceptible mark on Blake's neck, just below the cut. It looked like a small, crescent moon. She'd seen that mark before, in the case files of Morris's death. She felt a chill run down her spine. "Quinn," Harris called out, his voice hesitant. "You're not thinking... you're not thinking this is related to Morris, are you?" Quinn stood up, her expression grim. "I'm not thinking anything, Andy. I'm just saying, we need to look into this. Closely." She walked back to the body, her eyes scanning the crowd. She needed to find out who'd done this, and why. And she needed to find out what Eva Kowalski knew about it all. Because she was sure, whatever was going on here, it was just the tip of the iceberg.
total_cost0.0003054

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount690
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount690
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"sinister"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"furrowing"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"down her spine"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"sinister"
2"etched"
3"furrowing"
4"whisper"
5"eyebrow"
6"silence"
7"racing"
8"chill"
9"down her spine"
10"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences40
matches
0"felt a chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences40
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences51
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords686
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount480
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.29
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Detective2
Harlow1
Quinn11
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Andrew1
Harris4
Blake2
Eva6
Morris2
Kowalski1
persons
0"Detective"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Market"
4"Andrew"
5"Harris"
6"Blake"
7"Eva"
8"Morris"
9"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.354
windowScore0.167
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a small, crescent moon"
54.23% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.458
wordCount686
matches
0"not yet, but she was getting closer"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"seen that mark"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean40.35
std23.29
cv0.577
sampleLengths
071
160
263
391
428
544
662
734
813
916
1014
117
1241
1350
1420
1521
1651
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"was involved"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs80
matches
0"was packing"
1"was getting"
2"was going"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences51
ratio0
matches(empty)
92.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount483
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"damp, moss-covered steps."
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.041407867494824016
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.016563146997929608
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences51
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences51
mean13.45
std7.29
cv0.542
sampleLengths
025
121
225
328
417
515
621
716
85
921
1010
1111
1216
1321
1433
158
1620
179
1835
1915
206
216
2221
239
245
2516
2610
278
284
299
306
3110
323
3311
347
359
3621
3711
389
3914
407
4112
428
437
4413
456
4615
4711
4810
4913
65.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.45098039215686275
totalSentences51
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences40
matches
0"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped short,"
1"Her colleague, Detective Andrew Harris,"
2"He looked up as she"
3"he acknowledged, straightening up"
4"She examined the body, her"
5"she murmured, more to herself"
6"She pointed to a small,"
7"She turned to a nearby"
8"she called out, striding over"
9"She knew Eva was involved"
10"She couldn't prove it, not"
11"She crouched down again, examining"
12"It looked like a small,"
13"She'd seen that mark before,"
14"She felt a chill run"
15"She walked back to the"
16"She needed to find out"
ratio0.425
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences40
matches
0"The stench of decay and"
1"Her salt-and-pepper hair, cropped short,"
2"The Veil Market, a hidden"
3"The market was a labyrinth"
4"Tonight, it was a crime"
5"Her colleague, Detective Andrew Harris,"
6"He looked up as she"
7"he acknowledged, straightening up"
8"Quinn crouched down, her military"
9"She examined the body, her"
10"she murmured, more to herself"
11"She pointed to a small,"
12"Harris squinted at the compass,"
13"Quinn stood up, her gaze"
14"She turned to a nearby"
15"she called out, striding over"
16"The figure froze, then slowly"
17"A young woman with curly"
18"Quinn said, recognition flickering in"
19"Eva tucked a strand of"
ratio0.9
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences40
matches
0"Because she was sure, whatever"
ratio0.025
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She knew Eva was involved in something dangerous, something that had cost her partner, DS Morris, his life three years ago."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she murmured, more to herself than to Harris"
1"Quinn said, recognition flickering in her eyes"
2"Eva acknowledged, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"Harris called out, his voice hesitant"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she called out (call out)"
3"Eva acknowledged (acknowledge)"
4"Harris called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.526
72.3955%