Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT015Z0KQ8N8RDH0EM1X905

Run Details

Duration:
10.6s
Cost:
$0.015240
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing Aurora Carter standing in the dim hallway, her bright blue eyes catching the light from the streetlamp outside. She hesitated, her hand still on the doorframe, as if the threshold were a barrier she wasn't sure she wanted to cross. The air was thick with the scent of spices from the curry house below, mingling with the faint aroma of old paper and ink from within the flat. Lucien Moreau stood in the center of the room, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the late hour. His heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — fixed on her with an intensity that made her heart skip. The ivory-handled cane rested against the arm of a worn chair, its blade hidden but ever-present, much like the tension between them. "Rory," he greeted, his voice smooth, carrying the faintest trace of his French accent. It was a name she hadn't heard from him in years, a name that held memories of whispered conversations and stolen glances. "Lucien," she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. She stepped inside, closing the door behind her with a soft click. The three deadbolts were a reminder of the security she sought, both in her surroundings and in her heart. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, meandered over, weaving between Aurora's legs before settling on the windowsill, his eyes half-closed in feline indifference. The room was cramped, every surface cluttered with books and scrolls, a testament to Eva's relentless pursuit of knowledge. It was a space that felt both familiar and foreign, much like the man standing before her. "You didn't call," Aurora said, her tone carrying a hint of accusation, though she tried to mask it with indifference. She crossed her arms, a defensive gesture that belied the vulnerability she felt. Lucien's lips curved into a slight smile, one that didn't quite reach his eyes. "I thought it best to speak in person. Some things are better said face to face." She nodded, though the words left a bitter taste. Their last encounter had been anything but simple, a tangled web of emotions and misunderstandings. Yet here they were, drawn together by forces unseen, as if fate had decided their story wasn't finished. "Eva's not here," Aurora said, glancing around the room as if expecting her friend to materialize from the shadows. "She left for a conference in Edinburgh." "I know," Lucien replied, his gaze unwavering. "I came to see you." The admission hung in the air, heavy with implications. Aurora felt a flicker of something — hope, perhaps, or the ghost of old feelings she thought she'd buried. She moved to the small table, picking up a scroll and pretending to study it, though her mind was elsewhere. "Why now?" she asked, her voice softer, the edge of her earlier tone dulled by curiosity and the undeniable pull of the past. Lucien took a step closer, his presence commanding yet not imposing. "Because I realized some things can't be left unsaid forever. And because I missed you." The confession was unexpected, a crack in the armor he wore so well. Aurora met his gaze, searching for sincerity in those mismatched eyes. She found it, a glimmer of truth that resonated with her own unspoken longing. "You hurt me," she said, the words escaping before she could stop them. They were raw, unfiltered, a reminder of the pain that had driven them apart. "I know," Lucien replied, his voice tinged with regret. "And I've regretted it every day since." Aurora placed the scroll back on the table, her fingers brushing against the rough paper. She turned to face him fully, her posture open, inviting honesty. "Why did you leave?" Lucien hesitated, the silence stretching between them like a taut wire. "I thought it was for the best. I was wrong." The admission was simple, yet it carried the weight of their shared history. Aurora felt the sting of old wounds, but also the balm of understanding. She took a deep breath, letting it out slowly, as if releasing the tension that had coiled within her. "Things are different now," she said, her voice steady, though her heart raced. "I'm different." Lucien nodded, acknowledging the truth in her words. "And yet, some things remain the same." The statement was both a challenge and a promise, a reminder of the connection that had always existed between them, despite the distance and time. Aurora felt the pull, the magnetic force that had drawn them together once before, and she wondered if it was strong enough to bridge the gap that had formed. "Do you want to try again?" she asked, the question bold, unguarded, a leap into the unknown. Lucien's smile was genuine this time, a warmth that softened the sharp angles of his face. "I do. If you'll have me." Aurora considered his words, weighing them against the memories and the hurt. But beneath it all was the undeniable truth — she had missed him too. The realization was both terrifying and exhilarating, a reminder that some risks were worth taking. "Then let's see where this goes," she said, her voice firm, a decision made. Lucien stepped closer, the space between them shrinking until it was almost nonexistent. Aurora felt the heat of his presence, the familiar scent of his cologne mingling with the spices in the air. It was a moment suspended in time, a crossroads where past and future converged. Ptolemy stretched lazily on the windowsill, his tail flicking in contentment. The room was quiet, the world outside forgotten, as Aurora and Lucien stood together, the promise of something new unfolding between them. Aurora reached for his hand, her fingers brushing against the ivory handle of his cane before finding his. It was a gesture of trust, a bridge built on the foundation of shared history and the hope of what might be. Lucien's grip was firm, reassuring, a silent vow that echoed the words they hadn't yet spoken. Together, they stood in the cluttered flat, surrounded by the remnants of Eva's research and the whispers of their own past, ready to face whatever came next.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:45:21.897Z" 2/19/2026, 3:45:21 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1024
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1024
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"tension"
count2
2
word"reminder"
count4
3
word"testament"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"encounter"
count1
6
word"unwavering"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"imposing"
count1
9
word"resonated"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"tinged"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"carried the weight"
count1
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"magnetic"
count1
16
word"warmth"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"tension"
2"reminder"
3"testament"
4"familiar"
5"encounter"
6"unwavering"
7"flicker"
8"imposing"
9"resonated"
10"unspoken"
11"tinged"
12"silence"
13"carried the weight"
14"raced"
15"magnetic"
16"warmth"
17"echoed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"hung in the air"
96.26% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences58
matches
0"d with regret"
1"felt the sting"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1025
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.81% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount913
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Carter1
Moreau1
French1
Eva3
Lucien11
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"French"
4"Eva"
5"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.788
windowScore0.833
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"as if expecting her friend to materialize from the shadows"
2"as if releasing the tension that had coiled within her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1025
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
82.80% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean34.17
std15.03
cv0.44
sampleLengths
073
160
236
341
457
533
630
742
826
912
1048
1123
1226
1338
1427
1516
1630
1721
1845
1915
2015
2154
2217
2322
2441
2514
2647
2733
2840
2943
87.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences58
matches
0"was cramped"
1"were, drawn"
2"was unexpected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
16.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences68
ratio0.044
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — fixed on her with an intensity that made her heart skip."
1"Aurora felt a flicker of something — hope, perhaps, or the ghost of old feelings she thought she'd buried."
2"But beneath it all was the undeniable truth — she had missed him too."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount912
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.019736842105263157
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003289473684210526
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
94.42% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean15.07
std5.82
cv0.386
sampleLengths
023
122
228
318
420
522
614
722
810
912
1019
1121
1219
1317
1420
1513
1614
1716
189
1915
2018
2119
227
237
245
259
2619
2720
2823
2911
3015
3113
3211
3314
3413
3514
369
377
3815
3911
404
4111
4210
4313
4413
4519
4613
472
488
497
52.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3235294117647059
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences58
matches
0"She hesitated, her hand still"
1"His heterochromatic eyes — one"
2"he greeted, his voice smooth,"
3"It was a name she"
4"she replied, her voice steady"
5"She stepped inside, closing the"
6"It was a space that"
7"She crossed her arms, a"
8"She nodded, though the words"
9"Their last encounter had been"
10"She moved to the small"
11"she asked, her voice softer,"
12"She found it, a glimmer"
13"she said, the words escaping"
14"They were raw, unfiltered, a"
15"She turned to face him"
16"She took a deep breath,"
17"she said, her voice steady,"
18"she asked, the question bold,"
19"she said, her voice firm,"
ratio0.379
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences58
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"She hesitated, her hand still"
2"The air was thick with"
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"His heterochromatic eyes — one"
5"The ivory-handled cane rested against"
6"he greeted, his voice smooth,"
7"It was a name she"
8"she replied, her voice steady"
9"She stepped inside, closing the"
10"The three deadbolts were a"
11"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, meandered"
12"The room was cramped, every"
13"It was a space that"
14"Aurora said, her tone carrying"
15"She crossed her arms, a"
16"Lucien's lips curved into a"
17"She nodded, though the words"
18"Their last encounter had been"
19"Aurora said, glancing around the"
ratio0.948
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
29.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She hesitated, her hand still on the doorframe, as if the threshold were a barrier she wasn't sure she wanted to cross."
1"His heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one black — fixed on her with an intensity that made her heart skip."
2"She crossed her arms, a defensive gesture that belied the vulnerability she felt."
3"She found it, a glimmer of truth that resonated with her own unspoken longing."
4"She took a deep breath, letting it out slowly, as if releasing the tension that had coiled within her."
5"Lucien's smile was genuine this time, a warmth that softened the sharp angles of his face."
6"Aurora reached for his hand, her fingers brushing against the ivory handle of his cane before finding his."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil within"
1"Lucien replied, his gaze unwavering"
2"she said, the words escaping before she could stop them"
3"she said, her voice steady, though her heart raced"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.3828%