Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT016Z7YQHABB3Q5HZ158K0

Run Details

Duration:
51.2s
Cost:
$0.001645
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station tasted of rust, damp earth, and something else, something metallic and coppery that Harlow Quinn recognized instantly. Blood. Her worn leather shoes crunched on grimy tiles as she descended the final set of stairs, the beam of her torch cutting a solitary path through the oppressive gloom. The platform should have been silent, a dead space in the city’s subterranean skeleton, but a low murmur of voices echoed from ahead, punctuated by the occasional flash of a police camera. She found the scene cordoned off near what was once the eastbound platform. Two uniformed officers stood watch, their faces pale under the harsh work lights they’d set up. In the center of the light pool, a figure knelt beside a dark, shapeless heap. “Quinn.” The kneeling figure stood, brushing dust from his trousers. Sergeant Liam Carter, young, earnest, and still too clean for this job. “Messy one.” Harlow stopped at the edge of the tape, her eyes scanning, cataloging. The body was a man, late fifties, dressed in expensive but now ruined tailoring. He lay sprawled on his back, a dark blossom of blood soaking his waistcoat. A silver-tipped cane lay a few feet away, as if tossed aside. “Who found him?” Her voice was flat, devoid of the early morning hour’s weariness. “Security sweep. The contractors are due to start asbestos removal next week. Lucky they did a walk-through.” “Lucky,” Harlow repeated, her gaze drifting past Carter. The station was a known haunt for The Veil Market, a fact the Metropolitan Police officially ignored. Unofficially, it was her obsession. She pulled on a pair of latex gloves, the snap loud in the cavernous space. “Cause of death?” “Looks straightforward.” Carter gestured with his chin towards the body. “Single stab wound, lower abdomen. Probably a robbery gone wrong. Wallet’s missing, watch is gone. We found this near the stairs.” He held up an evidence bag containing a slender, bone-white token, intricately carved. A bone token. Entry to the Market. Her pulse gave a dull thud. “He have a name?” “Alistair Finch. Antiquities dealer. Has a shop in Mayfair. Clean record.” Carter lowered his voice. “The token… you know what that is. Maybe he was down here for a deal, it went south.” Harlow ducked under the tape. She moved with a military precision that made the younger officers straighten their backs. She didn’t look at the token; she looked at the scene. The blood spray was wrong. Too contained. A single, violent stab like that, there should be arterial spray, a pattern on the wall, the ceiling. This was a pool, thick and stagnant, soaking into the man’s clothes and the grimy floor. She crouched, her knees popping. “The weapon?” “Not found. Probably a switchblade. Thief panicked, took it with him.” “A panicked thief who remembers to take the murder weapon but is careless enough to drop his entry token?” She didn’t look at Carter, her focus on the ground. The tile around the body was relatively clean, but a few feet away, a fine layer of dust lay undisturbed. No scuff marks, no signs of a struggle. “Where’s the point of entry? The attack?” Carter pointed to a spot nearer the stairs. “We think he was jumped over there, stumbled back, collapsed here.” Harlow stood and walked to the indicated area. The dust was pristine. “No blood trail, Liam. He didn’t stumble. He was placed here.” “Placed? Why would a mugger move the body?” “They wouldn’t.” Her eyes continued their methodical sweep, moving up the curved tiled wall, over the old, peeling advertisements for cocoa and cigarettes. Her beam halted on a poster for a long-defunct ballet. A faint, almost imperceptible smudge marred the edge of the paper, about five feet off the ground. It wasn’t dirt. It was a residue, a greasy, dark smear. She took a step closer. “Quinn, it’s a simple mugging. A bad one, but simple. The Market attracts all sorts. Finch bit off more than he could chew.” She ignored him, pulling a small evidence swab from her kit. She dabbed at the smear. It came away black, shimmering with a faint, oily rainbow sheen under the light. It smelled of ozone and cold stone. Alchemical residue. Banned substances dealt in the darkest corners of the Market. “This wasn’t a mugging,” she said, her voice low. “This was an execution. Staged to look like one.” “Based on a dirty wall?” Carter’s patience was wearing thin. He’d learned his policing in a clean, modern world of CCTV and phone records. This subterranean world of tokens and smears was alien to him. Harlow turned back to the body. She focused on the wound, ignoring the gore to study the fabric of the waistcoat. The cut was clean, precise. Too precise for a frantic stabbing. And around the edges of the blood-soaked slit, the wool was singed. Not burned by flame, but cauterized, as if by immense, instantaneous heat. Her mind flashed back three years. DS Morris, bleeding out in a warehouse, a wound that defied explanation. The official report called it an industrial accident. She knew it was a lie. She’d seen the same strange, precise, cauterized wound before she’d been ordered from the scene. Her watch felt heavy on her wrist. She looked from the body to the smudged wall, then back to the token in Carter’s evidence bag. A wealthy antiquarian, a banned alchemical substance, a professional killing masked as a clumsy crime. This wasn't random. This was a message. Someone was cleaning house. “Run the token for prints,” she instructed, her tone leaving no room for argument. “And get a full toxicology screen. I want to know what Alistair Finch was really dealing in.” “Quinn, the budget…” “Do it, Sergeant.” Her brown eyes locked with his, and the years of experience in her gaze silenced his protest. “The evidence doesn’t add up because we’re not reading it right. Someone has gone to a lot of trouble to make this look simple. That means it’s anything but.” She peeled off her gloves, the snap echoing in the dead air. “This started in the shadows. That’s where we have to look.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.379
leniency0.759
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"solitary"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"pristine"
count1
7
word"methodical"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"solitary"
1"oppressive"
2"gloom"
3"echoed"
4"scanning"
5"pulse"
6"pristine"
7"methodical"
8"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1033
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount770
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Carter"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Carter"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow6
Quinn1
Sergeant1
Liam1
Carter8
Veil1
Market3
Metropolitan1
Police1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Liam"
4"Carter"
5"Police"
6"Morris"
places
0"Market"
globalScore0.981
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.968
wordCount1033
matches
0"Not burned by flame, but cauterized, as if by immense, instantaneous heat"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean35.62
std22.75
cv0.639
sampleLengths
086
144
224
352
414
517
648
744
813
94
1033
1171
127
1311
1464
1519
1623
178
1866
1923
2049
2118
2235
2356
2447
2551
2631
273
2872
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"was singed"
1"been ordered"
80.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs112
matches
0"was wearing"
1"was cleaning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences90
ratio0.011
matches
0"She didn’t look at the token; she looked at the scene."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount774
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slender, bone-white token,"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.025839793281653745
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00904392764857881
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean11.48
std7.54
cv0.657
sampleLengths
024
11
229
332
413
516
615
710
812
92
1012
1114
1214
1312
1414
1517
168
1717
185
1915
203
2110
2234
233
244
256
264
2715
2818
295
3014
3111
325
332
3418
3516
365
372
3811
3929
4020
418
427
438
4411
458
464
4711
488
4923
64.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.43333333333333335
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners39
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Unofficially, it was her obsession."
1"Too precise for a frantic"
ratio0.028
45.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences71
matches
0"Her worn leather shoes crunched"
1"She found the scene cordoned"
2"He lay sprawled on his"
3"Her voice was flat, devoid"
4"She pulled on a pair"
5"He held up an evidence"
6"Her pulse gave a dull"
7"She moved with a military"
8"She didn’t look at the"
9"She crouched, her knees popping."
10"She didn’t look at Carter,"
11"Her eyes continued their methodical"
12"Her beam halted on a"
13"It wasn’t dirt."
14"It was a residue, a"
15"She took a step closer."
16"She ignored him, pulling a"
17"She dabbed at the smear."
18"It came away black, shimmering"
19"It smelled of ozone and"
ratio0.437
16.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences71
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Her worn leather shoes crunched"
2"The platform should have been"
3"She found the scene cordoned"
4"The kneeling figure stood, brushing"
5"Sergeant Liam Carter, young, earnest,"
6"Harlow stopped at the edge"
7"The body was a man,"
8"He lay sprawled on his"
9"A silver-tipped cane lay a"
10"Her voice was flat, devoid"
11"Harlow repeated, her gaze drifting"
12"The station was a known"
13"She pulled on a pair"
14"Carter gestured with his chin"
15"He held up an evidence"
16"A bone token."
17"Entry to the Market."
18"Her pulse gave a dull"
19"Carter lowered his voice"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Harlow stopped at the edge of the tape, her eyes scanning, cataloging."
1"A silver-tipped cane lay a few feet away, as if tossed aside."
2"She moved with a military precision that made the younger officers straighten their backs."
3"Not burned by flame, but cauterized, as if by immense, instantaneous heat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Harlow repeated, her gaze drifting past Carter"
1"she said, her voice low"
2"she instructed, her tone leaving no room for argument"
3"She peeled off, the snap echoing in the dead air"
81.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Harlow repeated (repeat)"
1"Her eyes continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.207
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.138
82.0178%