Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0181ABAY666EB3QN9WRWZ

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Duration:
15.4s
Cost:
$0.001041
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before she could even reach for the latch, revealing Lucien Moreau standing on the threshold, every inch of him turned rigid as if he’d been carved from stone. His platinum blond hair gleamed beneath the dull glow of the narrow hallway’s flickering light, slicked back with an effortless precision. His tailored charcoal suit hugged muscle beneath the fabric, revealing the sharp lines of a man accustomed to getting what he wants—except now, his expression was anything but composed. Aurora’s breath hitched. Her eyes flicked from his black-and-amber eyes to the ivory-handled cane clenched in his gloved hand. For a second, she wondered whether she was dreaming, whether gravity had shifted overnight, or if her mind simply refused to believe he’d appear at her door again after all the silence. "You didn't answer your phone," he said, voice smooth and low, with a faint trace of amusement that didn’t quite reach his eyes. The cane tapped lightly against the hardwood floor as he stepped inside without waiting for permission. When the door swung fully open, the scent of cold cedar and something darker, more primal, filled the narrow space. Aurora’s jaw tightened. Her black hair was a mess from her hurried chores, her bright blue eyes wary, waves of conflicting emotion crashing within her. "Lucien," she said, voice barely above a whisper, yet her tone carried a hint of steel. "What are you doing here?" He paused, eyeing her in that unsettling way he always did—like he was weighing her, weighing everything she’d been, everything she’d become. His lips curled into a faint, sardonic smile. “I needed to see you. I thought you might still be... around.” Despite herself, her fingers clenched into a fist at her side. Her flat was small, cluttered with research notes, her workbag leaning against the doorframe. Nothing about it invited visitors, especially not him, not her. Every nerve in her body screamed to close the door and walk away, but her pride kept her rooted. "Well, now you have your wish," she said, voice clipped. "What exactly do you want?" He stepped further, the cane swinging lazily as he approached. “To talk. Or perhaps just to look at you again.” His gaze lingered, heavy with the weight of things unspoken. “It’s been too long, Rory. You’re still the most intriguing thing I’ve ever come across.” Her cheeks flushed with a mixture of anger and something else—something bittersweet. That thing she’d buried deep behind her walls, the ache she’d refused to admit, resurfaced and clung stubbornly. She clenched her fists tighter, feeling the scar on her wrist twinge as though it knew what was coming. “You don’t get to come back here and pretend everything’s fine,” she snapped, voice trembling slightly. “You left me hanging, Lucien. You disappeared, like I meant nothing.” He halted a mere breath from her, those unsettling eyes unblinking. “You’re wrong. You matter more than you realise.” His tone was a dark promise, like an interlocking coil of shadows and silk. “I’ve been... distracted. But I’ve come to make it right.” Her heart hammered, and she fought the urge to step back, to shut the door and slam it in his face. Instead, she pressed her palm against the doorframe, steadying herself. “You—” she started, but her voice broke. “You can’t just show up unannounced and expect me to forget everything.” His expression softened for a moment, just enough to reveal a hint of vulnerability, a crack in his otherwise impenetrable façade. “You think I want to relive that mess? Believe me, Rory, I regret the words I didn’t say, the nights I left you alone, the promises I failed to keep. I was wrong. I’m still wrong. But I’m not leaving here until I make some of it up—some of it, anyway.” She shook her head, fists clenched. “Too little, too late. You’re not the only one with regrets. I’ve been rebuilding, Lucien. I’ve been fighting to forget what we almost were—what we never truly had.” Her voice faltered only slightly, but she kept her gaze locked on him. “And I don’t know if I can do the ‘making it right’ part anymore. Not after everything.” His eyes flickered, momentarily darkening. “Because denying what we are, what we’ve always been, is what kept us apart. You blame me? Fine. But you can’t deny the pull.” The words hung in the air, thick with longing and pain, stirring the ghost of that night—the last night they’d really touched. She felt it creeping in her veins: the echo of his touch, his voice, the way her skin tingled when he whispered her name. Everything she’d tried to numb with daily routines threatened to surface, relentless and unbidden. “Pulling’s what got us into trouble in the first place,” she whispered, voice trembling. “Maybe it’s better if we leave it alone.” His hand, gloved but trembling slightly, reached out, brushing her wrist where the scar lay—a tiny crescent-shaped reminder of childhood accidents and scars she wore like armour. Her breath hitched again, instinctively flinching, but he held her gaze, steady. “That scar,” he murmured. “Every time I see it, I remember how fierce you are. How much fire you carry inside. That’s why I came. I want to remind you how much you’ve got left to fight for.” Her shoulders stiffened. “You don’t get to decide that either. You’ve lost your right to decide for me—after everything.” Her voice cracked, but her pride refused to give in. He took a slow step forward, cane planted firmly, and tilted his head, eyes dark with something unspoken. “And yet I’m here. Because I know you’re still fighting, Rory. I see it. I feel it. But I also know you’re tired. That’s why I came—to remind you that you’re not alone. Not really.” Her heart thundered in her chest, the fleeting hope she’d fought so desperately to suppress threatening to break free. She clenched her fists until her knuckles went white, trying to suppress the turmoil inside her. Why did this feel like her hands were tied, even now, even after she’d built walls so high? “I don’t want to talk,” she said abruptly, voice sharper than intended. “Just—leave. Before you hurt me again.” His lips quirked into a small, inscrutable smile. “Hurt you? Rory, I’d rather die trying to make this right than see you destroy yourself by pretending it’s never going to happen.” She stared at him, lips parted, breath ragged. Long seconds passed in the quiet, heavy air, thick with memories and unanswered questions—as if the universe itself was holding its breath. And then, with a sudden burst of resolve, she stepped back, narrowing her eyes. “Get out, Lucien. Now.” He hesitated—fingers tight on the cane—before slowly turning, his suit whispering against the narrow frame as he moved towards the door. His eyes flicked back to her, lingering with undeniable intensity. “I’ll be waiting, Rory. When you’re ready.” He left her standing there, the door shutting softly behind him, a faint echo of his words still ringing in her ears, threatening to undo everything she’d fought so hard to protect.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
62.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Her voice faltered only [only]"
1"she said abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.414
leniency0.828
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.138
54.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1204
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count3
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count2
6
adverb"slowly"
count1
7
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"lazily"
3"slightly"
4"truly"
5"really"
6"slowly"
7"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1204
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"effortless"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count2
6
word"intriguing"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"echo"
count2
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"firmly"
count1
12
word"thundered"
count1
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"effortless"
1"flicked"
2"silence"
3"whisper"
4"weight"
5"unspoken"
6"intriguing"
7"silk"
8"flickered"
9"echo"
10"reminder"
11"firmly"
12"thundered"
13"fleeting"
14"resolve"
15"intensity"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches5
maxInWindow5
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count2
2
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
3
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
1"clenched her fists"
2"fists clenched"
3"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences55
matches
0"k with longing"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1189
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions2
wordCount807
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.12
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity0
worstWindowName(null)
discoveredNames
Lucien1
Moreau1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1189
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
72.54% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean44.04
std17.79
cv0.404
sampleLengths
082
151
259
346
442
554
615
745
849
927
1043
1150
1272
1364
1429
1560
1622
1777
1829
1953
2053
2118
2231
2330
2418
2538
2632
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"been carved"
30.15% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was dreaming"
1"was weighing"
2"was coming"
3"was holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences72
ratio0.097
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit hugged muscle beneath the fabric, revealing the sharp lines of a man accustomed to getting what he wants—except now, his expression was anything but composed."
1"He paused, eyeing her in that unsettling way he always did—like he was weighing her, weighing everything she’d been, everything she’d become."
2"Her cheeks flushed with a mixture of anger and something else—something bittersweet."
3"The words hung in the air, thick with longing and pain, stirring the ghost of that night—the last night they’d really touched."
4"His hand, gloved but trembling slightly, reached out, brushing her wrist where the scar lay—a tiny crescent-shaped reminder of childhood accidents and scars she wore like armour."
5"Long seconds passed in the quiet, heavy air, thick with memories and unanswered questions—as if the universe itself was holding its breath."
6"He hesitated—fingers tight on the cane—before slowly turning, his suit whispering against the narrow frame as he moved towards the door."
82.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount818
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tiny crescent-shaped reminder"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.0488997555012225
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.02444987775061125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean16.51
std9.44
cv0.572
sampleLengths
032
121
229
33
416
532
623
716
820
93
1022
1116
125
1322
148
1512
1611
1714
1810
1919
2010
215
2210
2320
2415
2512
2618
2719
2816
2911
3011
3122
3210
3321
3410
357
3612
3721
3851
396
4041
4117
425
4324
4422
4524
4614
4714
488
4927
67.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4305555555555556
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners31
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Instead, she pressed her palm"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences54
matches
0"His platinum blond hair gleamed"
1"His tailored charcoal suit hugged"
2"Her eyes flicked from his"
3"he said, voice smooth and"
4"Her black hair was a"
5"she said, voice barely above"
6"He paused, eyeing her in"
7"His lips curled into a"
8"Her flat was small, cluttered"
9"she said, voice clipped"
10"He stepped further, the cane"
11"His gaze lingered, heavy with"
12"Her cheeks flushed with a"
13"She clenched her fists tighter,"
14"she snapped, voice trembling slightly"
15"He halted a mere breath"
16"His tone was a dark"
17"Her heart hammered, and she"
18"she started, but her voice"
19"His expression softened for a"
ratio0.704
24.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences54
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"His platinum blond hair gleamed"
2"His tailored charcoal suit hugged"
3"Aurora’s breath hitched."
4"Her eyes flicked from his"
5"he said, voice smooth and"
6"The cane tapped lightly against"
7"Aurora’s jaw tightened."
8"Her black hair was a"
9"she said, voice barely above"
10"He paused, eyeing her in"
11"His lips curled into a"
12"Her flat was small, cluttered"
13"Nothing about it invited visitors,"
14"Every nerve in her body"
15"she said, voice clipped"
16"He stepped further, the cane"
17"His gaze lingered, heavy with"
18"Her cheeks flushed with a"
19"That thing she’d buried deep"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The door swung open before she could even reach for the latch, revealing Lucien Moreau standing on the threshold, every inch of him turned rigid as if he’d been…"
1"She clenched her fists tighter, feeling the scar on her wrist twinge as though it knew what was coming."
2"Long seconds passed in the quiet, heavy air, thick with memories and unanswered questions—as if the universe itself was holding its breath."
3"He left her standing there, the door shutting softly behind him, a faint echo of his words still ringing in her ears, threatening to undo everything she’d fough…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she said, voice clipped"
1"she snapped, voice trembling slightly"
2"she started, but her voice broke"
3"she whispered, voice trembling"
4"Her voice cracked, but her pride refused to give in"
5"she said abruptly, voice sharper than intended"
12.07% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"Her voice faltered only (falter)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.276
64.8599%