Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0183ZBM4D1M8G24XNTNCZ

Run Details

Duration:
9.2s
Cost:
$0.000602
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just after midnight, sharp and insistent—three quick raps, then a pause, then two more. Rory froze mid-sip of her tea, the chipped mug hovering near her lips. No one knocked like that. Not at this hour. Not unless they knew the rhythm of her old life, the one she’d left behind in Cardiff. She set the mug down with a quiet *clink* against the scarred wooden table. Ptolemy, curled on the windowsill, lifted his head, ears twitching. The tabby’s tail flicked once, slow and deliberate, as if he, too, recognised the pattern. Another knock. Louder this time. Rory exhaled through her nose, fingers tightening around the edge of the table. The flat was small—just one room with a kitchenette crammed into the corner, a sagging sofa that doubled as a bed, and a bathroom so tiny she had to turn sideways to use the shower. The front door was the only exit, and it was currently being assaulted by someone who either didn’t know the meaning of *quiet* or didn’t care. She crossed the room in three strides, bare feet silent against the worn floorboards. The deadbolts were cold under her fingers as she undid them one by one. The third lock stuck, as it always did, and she had to jiggle it before it gave with a reluctant *click*. The door swung open. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim glow of the hallway’s flickering bulb, one hand braced against the doorframe, the other resting on the ivory handle of his cane. His charcoal suit was immaculate, not a crease out of place, as if he’d just stepped out of a boardroom instead of the rain-slicked streets of London. Water beaded on the shoulders of his coat, darkening the fabric in uneven patches. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, unreadable. “You look like hell,” he said. Rory’s fingers twitched. She should’ve slammed the door in his face. Should’ve told him to piss off back to whatever shadowy corner of the city he’d crawled out of. But the words died in her throat because, damn him, he looked *good*. Too good. The kind of good that made her stomach clench and her pulse kick up like she’d just downed a triple espresso. “What do you want, Lucien?” Her voice came out steady, which was a small victory. He tilted his head, just slightly, the movement fluid and predatory. “Can’t a man visit an old friend?” “Friends don’t show up unannounced at midnight.” “No?” A smirk tugged at the corner of his mouth. “Then what do they do?” She didn’t answer. Couldn’t. Because the truth was, she didn’t know what they did. Not anymore. Not after Cardiff. Not after *him*. Lucien pushed off the doorframe, stepping forward without invitation. The scent of rain and something darker—something like burnt sugar and ozone—rolled off him, filling the cramped space between them. Rory didn’t retreat. She never did. But she did cross her arms, a flimsy barrier between them. “You going to let me in, *chérie*?” His voice dropped, rougher now, the French accent wrapping around the endearment like a caress. “Or do I have to stand out here all night?” Ptolemy chose that moment to slink between Rory’s legs, his tail brushing against Lucien’s polished shoes. The half-demon glanced down, then back up at her, one eyebrow arched. “Still letting that mangy cat answer the door for you?” “He’s got better manners than you.” Lucien chuckled, low and dark. “Doubtful.” Rory exhaled sharply through her nose. She should’ve known he’d weasel his way in eventually. Should’ve known he wouldn’t stay away forever. But she hadn’t expected *tonight*. Hadn’t expected the way her traitorous heart stuttered when he looked at her like that—like she was the only thing in the room worth seeing. She stepped back, just enough to let him pass. “Five minutes. Then you’re gone.” Lucien’s smirk deepened as he crossed the threshold. “We both know that’s not how this works.” The door clicked shut behind him. The flat suddenly felt smaller. The air thicker. Rory watched as he shrugged out of his coat, draping it over the back of the sofa with practiced ease. His suit jacket followed, revealing the crisp white shirt beneath, the fabric clinging just enough to hint at the lean muscle underneath. She looked away before he could catch her staring. “You’ve been avoiding me,” he said, turning to face her. “No shit.” He leaned against the sofa, one ankle crossed over the other, the picture of casual arrogance. “I missed you.” The words hit her like a physical blow. Rory’s fingers curled into fists at her sides. “Don’t.” “Don’t what?” He spread his hands, all innocence. “Tell the truth?” “You don’t get to do that.” Her voice was sharp, but there was no real heat behind it. Just exhaustion. Just the weight of everything unsaid between them. “Not after Cardiff. Not after—” “After I let you walk away?” His expression darkened, the amber eye flashing. “Is that what you were going to say?” She didn’t answer. Couldn’t. Because that *was* what she’d been going to say, and the truth of it sat between them like a live wire, crackling with tension. Lucien pushed off the sofa, closing the distance between them in two long strides. Rory didn’t back up. Didn’t flinch. But her breath hitched when he reached out, his fingers brushing against the scar on her left wrist—the crescent-shaped mark from a childhood accident. His touch was light, barely there, but it sent a jolt through her all the same. “You think I don’t know what I did?” His voice was quiet now, the teasing edge gone. “You think I don’t regret it?” Rory swallowed. “Regret doesn’t change anything.” “No.” His thumb traced the scar, slow and deliberate. “But it’s a start.” She should’ve pulled away. Should’ve told him to stop. But the truth was, she didn’t want him to. Not really. Because as much as she hated to admit it, she’d missed him too. Missed the way he looked at her like she was the only thing in the world that mattered. Missed the way he made her feel—alive, dangerous, *wanted*. “Why are you here, Lucien?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. He didn’t answer right away. Instead, he let his hand drop, his fingers lingering for just a second before falling away. “Because I can’t stay away from you, *chérie*. No matter how hard I try.” Rory’s heart pounded in her chest. She should’ve told him to leave. Should’ve reminded him of all the reasons this was a bad idea. But the words wouldn’t come. Not when he was looking at her like that. Not when the space between them felt charged, electric, like the air before a storm. “You’re trouble,” she said instead. Lucien’s lips quirked. “And you love it.” She didn’t deny it. The silence stretched between them, thick and heavy. Rory could hear the rain pattering against the window, the distant hum of traffic from the street below. But all she could focus on was him—his scent, his heat, the way his eyes darkened when he looked at her. “Five minutes,” she reminded him, her voice steadier than she felt. Lucien’s smirk returned, slow and knowing. “We’ll see.” And just like that, the game was back on.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.059
79.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"practiced ease"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"unreadable"
2"stomach"
3"pulse"
4"eyebrow"
5"practiced ease"
6"weight"
7"tension"
8"traced"
9"whisper"
10"charged"
11"electric"
12"silence"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords10
totalWords1223
ratio0.008
matches
0"clink"
1"quiet"
2"click"
3"good"
4"him"
5"chérie"
6"tonight"
7"was"
8"wanted"
9"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1055
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Cardiff2
Moreau1
London1
Rory12
French1
Ptolemy2
Lucien8
Should4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Should"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.931
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like burnt sugar and ozone—rolled"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1223
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences125
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"like that, the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean26.02
std21.45
cv0.824
sampleLengths
056
139
25
374
449
54
678
76
865
915
1018
117
1215
1322
1446
1532
1638
176
186
1952
2014
2116
226
2359
2410
252
2619
2717
2811
2933
3021
3128
3260
3323
346
3513
3660
3713
3835
3953
405
417
424
4347
4411
458
469
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"being assaulted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences125
ratio0.064
matches
0"The knock came just after midnight, sharp and insistent—three quick raps, then a pause, then two more."
1"The flat was small—just one room with a kitchenette crammed into the corner, a sagging sofa that doubled as a bed, and a bathroom so tiny she had to turn sideways to use the shower."
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, unreadable."
3"The scent of rain and something darker—something like burnt sugar and ozone—rolled off him, filling the cramped space between them."
4"Hadn’t expected the way her traitorous heart stuttered when he looked at her like that—like she was the only thing in the room worth seeing."
5"But her breath hitched when he reached out, his fingers brushing against the scar on her left wrist—the crescent-shaped mark from a childhood accident."
6"Missed the way he made her feel—alive, dangerous, *wanted*."
7"But all she could focus on was him—his scent, his heat, the way his eyes darkened when he looked at her."
97.31% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1068
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04307116104868914
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010299625468164793
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean9.78
std6.92
cv0.708
sampleLengths
017
113
25
34
417
514
610
715
82
93
1013
1135
1226
1314
1414
1521
164
1728
1827
1914
209
216
223
238
2418
2513
262
2721
2815
2911
307
317
3210
335
343
351
3610
372
383
393
409
4120
423
433
4411
4522
4610
4716
4812
4910
42.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.32
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners40
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just the weight of everything"
1"Instead, he let his hand"
ratio0.021
92.34% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences94
matches
0"She set the mug down"
1"She crossed the room in"
2"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
3"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
4"She should’ve slammed the door"
5"Her voice came out steady,"
6"He tilted his head, just"
7"She didn’t answer."
8"She never did."
9"His voice dropped, rougher now,"
10"She should’ve known he’d weasel"
11"She stepped back, just enough"
12"His suit jacket followed, revealing"
13"She looked away before he"
14"he said, turning to face"
15"He leaned against the sofa,"
16"He spread his hands, all"
17"Her voice was sharp, but"
18"His expression darkened, the amber"
19"She didn’t answer."
ratio0.319
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences94
matches
0"The knock came just after"
1"Rory froze mid-sip of her"
2"She set the mug down"
3"Ptolemy, curled on the windowsill,"
4"The tabby’s tail flicked once,"
5"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
6"The flat was small—just one"
7"The front door was the"
8"She crossed the room in"
9"The deadbolts were cold under"
10"The third lock stuck, as"
11"The door swung open."
12"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
13"His charcoal suit was immaculate,"
14"Water beaded on the shoulders"
15"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
16"Rory’s fingers twitched."
17"She should’ve slammed the door"
18"The kind of good that"
19"Her voice came out steady,"
ratio0.702
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"Because the truth was, she"
1"Because that *was* what she’d"
2"Because as much as she"
ratio0.032
73.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The tabby’s tail flicked once, slow and deliberate, as if he, too, recognised the pattern."
1"The flat was small—just one room with a kitchenette crammed into the corner, a sagging sofa that doubled as a bed, and a bathroom so tiny she had to turn sidewa…"
2"His charcoal suit was immaculate, not a crease out of place, as if he’d just stepped out of a boardroom instead of the rain-slicked streets of London."
3"Instead, he let his hand drop, his fingers lingering for just a second before falling away."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, turning to face her"
1"His expression darkened, the amber eye flashing"
2"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"she reminded, her voice steadier than she felt"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.4553%