Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT019CS3EFM26VH26G85PFY

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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit confines of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, her footsteps echoing against the cold, tiled walls. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and sharp. Her eyes, sharp and discerning, scanned the scene before her. The Veil Market, usually bustling with clandestine activity, was eerily silent now, its stalls empty and its secrets laid bare. A cluster of uniformed officers stood huddled near the center of the platform, their faces etched with confusion. Quinn approached them with the military precision that had become her hallmark, her worn leather watch ticking softly against her wrist. She nodded to the officer nearest her, a young constable whose eyes betrayed his unease. "Detective Quinn," he greeted, his voice wavering slightly. "It's... well, it's not what we expected." Quinn raised an eyebrow, her sharp jawline set in a determined line. "Show me." The constable led her to the scene, where a body lay sprawled across the cold concrete, surrounded by a scattering of peculiar items. A bone token, a small brass compass with verdigris patina, and a handful of strange, iridescent stones. The victim, a middle-aged man with a look of frozen terror etched on his face, seemed out of place in this realm of shadows and secrets. Quinn crouched beside the body, her keen eyes taking in every detail. The man's clothes were ordinary, but the items around him spoke of the supernatural—a world she had only begun to understand since the loss of her partner, DS Morris. She felt a familiar pang of frustration, the unanswered questions gnawing at her. "Detective Quinn," came a voice from behind her, smooth and confident. It was DI Jameson, a colleague with whom she had shared many a case. He stepped forward, his gaze fixed on the scene. "Looks like a robbery gone wrong, wouldn't you say? The Market's a dangerous place for those who don't belong." Quinn shook her head, her eyes narrowing as she studied the compass. "It's not that simple, Jameson. Look at the items. They're not random. This man was here for a reason." Jameson shrugged, his expression dismissive. "A collector, perhaps? These markets attract all sorts." Quinn ignored him, her mind racing as she pieced together the puzzle. The compass, with its protective sigils, was no ordinary tool. It pointed toward supernatural rifts, a guide for those who sought the unknown. The bone token, a key to the Market, suggested the man had access, but why? And the stones—she had seen their like before, in the archives Eva Kowalski had shown her. She stood, her gaze sweeping the platform. "There's more to this, Jameson. The Market moves every full moon. This man knew where it would be. He wasn't just a collector; he was searching for something." Jameson frowned, his skepticism evident. "And what do you think he found?" Quinn turned to him, her eyes alight with determination. "Something he shouldn't have. Look at his face. That's not the look of a man caught in a robbery. That's fear—pure, unadulterated fear." Jameson hesitated, his confidence wavering. "Fear of what?" Quinn gestured to the compass. "The supernatural. He was close to something powerful, something dangerous. The compass led him here, but it wasn't just a tool. It was a warning." The constable shifted uneasily, glancing between the two detectives. "But why would he come here alone?" Quinn considered the question, her mind working through the possibilities. "He wasn't alone. Someone else was here, someone who knew the Market's secrets. They left in a hurry, but not before taking what they came for." Jameson crossed his arms, his skepticism giving way to curiosity. "And what was that?" Quinn pointed to the empty stalls, the remnants of the Market's wares scattered like breadcrumbs. "Information. The Market sells more than goods. It deals in knowledge, secrets that can change the world." Jameson nodded slowly, the pieces falling into place. "So, this man was after something specific. But what?" Quinn's gaze returned to the body, her mind racing. "Something connected to the supernatural. He was an outsider, but he knew enough to find the Market. He had a purpose, a goal." The constable spoke up, his voice tentative. "Detective, what about the stones? Could they be part of it?" Quinn nodded, her eyes alight with understanding. "Yes. They're not just stones. They're conduits, channels for supernatural energy. He was trying to harness it, but he didn't know how." Jameson stepped closer, his interest piqued. "And whoever was here with him—they did?" Quinn nodded, her mind racing with possibilities. "They knew exactly what they were doing. They used him to get what they wanted, then left him to face the consequences." Jameson frowned, his skepticism returning. "But why leave the compass? If it's so valuable..." Quinn smiled, a grim satisfaction in her eyes. "Because it's useless now. The Market's moved, and without the right knowledge, it's just a piece of brass." The constable shifted, his unease palpable. "So, what do we do now, Detective?" Quinn straightened, her resolve firm. "We find out who he was working with. Someone in the Market knows, and they'll lead us to the truth." Jameson nodded, his skepticism replaced by determination. "And what about the supernatural? How do we deal with that?" Quinn glanced at the compass, its needle still and silent. "We learn. We adapt. And we don't let fear stop us." With that, she turned away from the scene, her mind already racing with possibilities. The Market held secrets, and she was determined to uncover them, no matter the cost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.036
leniency0.071
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount941
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"clandestine"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"wavering"
count2
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"determined"
count2
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"pang"
count1
10
word"racing"
count4
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"scanned"
3"clandestine"
4"etched"
5"wavering"
6"eyebrow"
7"determined"
8"familiar"
9"pang"
10"racing"
11"palpable"
12"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
90.28% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences48
matches
0"d with confusion"
1"t with determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences48
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords935
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount566
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.83
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn16
Tube1
Camden1
Veil1
Market4
Morris1
Jameson9
Eva1
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Morris"
4"Jameson"
5"Eva"
6"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.087
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount935
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean29.22
std17.11
cv0.586
sampleLengths
070
154
215
314
466
554
653
731
813
966
1035
1112
1232
138
1430
1516
1636
1714
1832
1917
2032
2118
2229
2313
2429
2514
2626
2713
2825
2918
3021
3129
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs94
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences74
ratio0.054
matches
0"The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and sharp."
1"The man's clothes were ordinary, but the items around him spoke of the supernatural—a world she had only begun to understand since the loss of her partner, DS Morris."
2"And the stones—she had seen their like before, in the archives Eva Kowalski had shown her."
3"\"There's more to this, Jameson. The Market moves every full moon. This man knew where it would be. He wasn't just a collector; he was searching for something.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount570
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.01929824561403509
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.014035087719298246
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean12.64
std6.67
cv0.528
sampleLengths
024
116
210
320
418
521
615
78
87
912
102
1123
1217
1326
1412
1529
1613
1711
1814
199
2019
2112
2219
235
248
2512
2610
2713
2815
2916
307
3128
325
337
349
3523
365
373
385
3925
409
417
4210
4326
4410
454
4615
4717
488
499
50.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3108108108108108
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences48
matches
0"Her eyes, sharp and discerning,"
1"She nodded to the officer"
2"he greeted, his voice wavering"
3"She felt a familiar pang"
4"It was DI Jameson, a"
5"He stepped forward, his gaze"
6"It pointed toward supernatural rifts,"
7"She stood, her gaze sweeping"
ratio0.167
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences48
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"The air was thick with"
2"Her eyes, sharp and discerning,"
3"The Veil Market, usually bustling"
4"A cluster of uniformed officers"
5"Quinn approached them with the"
6"She nodded to the officer"
7"he greeted, his voice wavering"
8"Quinn raised an eyebrow, her"
9"The constable led her to"
10"A bone token, a small"
11"The victim, a middle-aged man"
12"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
13"The man's clothes were ordinary,"
14"She felt a familiar pang"
15"It was DI Jameson, a"
16"He stepped forward, his gaze"
17"Quinn shook her head, her"
18"Jameson shrugged, his expression dismissive."
19"Quinn ignored him, her mind"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Quinn approached them with the military precision that had become her hallmark, her worn leather watch ticking softly against her wrist."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he greeted, his voice wavering slightly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.0914%