Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT019F1K92BM68EJHY2XR64

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Duration:
33.8s
Cost:
$0.023190

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Camden Lock tube station reeked of stagnant water and something else—something metallic that made Quinn's nostrils flare. Her torch beam cut through the darkness, revealing crumbling Victorian brickwork and the skeletal remains of railway tracks that hadn't seen a train in decades. The Metropolitan Police had cordoned off the entrance with their usual efficiency, but down here in the bowels of London, their yellow tape looked as out of place as a wedding dress in a morgue. "Bloody hell of a place to dump a body," Sergeant Phillips muttered behind her, his voice echoing off the curved walls. "Who even knows this place exists?" Quinn's worn leather watch ticked against her wrist as she checked the time—3:47 AM. The call had come in two hours ago from a group of urban explorers who'd been illegally photographing abandoned stations. Now those same explorers sat in the back of police cars above, probably regretting their midnight adventure. The body lay sprawled across what had once been Platform Two. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in expensive clothes that didn't match the location. Quinn approached with measured steps, her torch revealing details that made her jaw tighten. No obvious wounds. No blood pooling beneath him. The man's face held an expression of absolute terror, mouth frozen open in a silent scream. "What do you make of it, Detective?" Phillips crouched beside the victim, careful not to disturb the scene. "Heart attack? Overdose?" Quinn didn't answer immediately. Something glinted near the man's outstretched hand—a small brass object, roughly the size of a pocket watch. She pulled on latex gloves and lifted it carefully. A compass, but unlike any she'd seen before. The brass casing bore a green patina, and strange symbols were etched into its face instead of cardinal directions. The needle spun wildly before settling to point deeper into the tunnel. "Run his prints when we get back to the station." Quinn pocketed the compass, her military training keeping her movements precise despite the unease creeping up her spine. "Check missing persons reports from the last forty-eight hours." Phillips stood and brushed dust from his knees. "My money's on a drug deal gone wrong. Dealer brings the punter down here for privacy, something goes sideways, and our victim has a bad reaction." "Where's the dealer then? Where are the drugs?" Quinn's torch beam swept the platform methodically. "And why leave the victim's wallet untouched? There's three hundred pounds in cash still in there." The sergeant shrugged. "Maybe they got spooked. Heard someone coming and legged it." Quinn examined the walls more closely. The Victorian brickwork showed decades of water damage and neglect, but some sections looked different. Cleaner. As if they'd been recently disturbed. Her torch caught something else—scratch marks in the mortar between the bricks, forming patterns that looked almost deliberate. "Phillips, bring your light over here." The sergeant joined her at the wall, both beams illuminating what appeared to be symbols carved into the mortar. Not graffiti—too precise, too purposeful. Quinn had seen similar markings three years ago, during her last case with DS Morris. The case that had ended with Morris's disappearance and a crime scene that defied every logical explanation. "Probably just kids messing about," Phillips said, but his voice lacked conviction. "You know how these urban explorer types are—always leaving their mark." Quinn's fingers traced one of the symbols without touching it. The pattern triggered a memory she'd tried to suppress—Morris pointing to similar markings in an East End warehouse, his face pale with excitement and fear. The next morning, he was gone. No trace, no explanation. The official report listed him as missing, presumed dead, but Quinn knew better. Something had taken him. "Get the crime scene photographer down here. I want pictures of everything—the body, the walls, the entire platform." Quinn's voice carried the authority of eighteen years on the force. "And contact the Transport Museum. I want to know the history of this station, when it closed, who has access." The compass in her pocket seemed to pulse with warmth against her leg. She pulled it out again, watching the needle's erratic dance. It had stopped spinning wildly and now pointed steadily toward a section of wall that looked no different from the rest. Quinn approached slowly, her torch beam revealing what she'd missed before—a thin gap in the brickwork, barely visible unless viewed from the correct angle. "Detective?" Phillips voice held a note of concern. "You're looking a bit pale." Quinn pressed her fingers against the gap. The bricks shifted slightly, revealing that this section of wall was actually a concealed door. The symbols in the mortar weren't random vandalism—they were a locking mechanism of some kind. "We need to call this in," Phillips said, moving closer. "Whatever this is, it's above our pay grade." "No." Quinn's response was sharp, final. "Not until we know what we're dealing with." She'd made that mistake before, reporting strange evidence up the chain of command. The result had been reassignment to minor cases and whispered concerns about her mental stability. Morris had tried to warn her about going through official channels. Now Morris was gone, and Quinn suspected his disappearance was connected to the same forces behind whatever had happened here tonight. The compass needle swung again, this time pointing back toward the body. Quinn returned to examine the victim more closely, her trained eye cataloguing details Phillips had missed. The man's fingernails were clean despite the filthy environment. His shoes showed no wear patterns consistent with walking through tunnels. Most telling of all, his body temperature felt wrong—too cold for recent death, but without the rigor mortis that should have set in. "This man wasn't killed here," Quinn said quietly. "He was brought here. Already dead."
total_cost0.02319

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.087
84.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount972
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount972
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"measured"
2"etched"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"warmth"
6"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
97.68% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences61
matches
0"e with excitement"
1"e with warmth"
2.34% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"tried to"
2"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords959
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
37.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount755
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.25
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Lock1
Quinn17
Victorian2
Metropolitan1
Police1
London1
Phillips7
Platform1
Two1
Morris5
East1
End1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Police"
2"Phillips"
3"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Two"
2"East"
3"End"
globalScore0.374
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount959
matches(empty)
76.58% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"revealing that this"
1"made that mistake"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean39.96
std21.69
cv0.543
sampleLengths
079
127
251
360
421
569
637
734
831
913
1046
116
1256
1323
1462
1549
1668
1713
1837
1918
2014
2160
2271
2314
88.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences61
matches
0"were etched"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
3"was connected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences74
ratio0.122
matches
0"The abandoned Camden Lock tube station reeked of stagnant water and something else—something metallic that made Quinn's nostrils flare."
1"Quinn's worn leather watch ticked against her wrist as she checked the time—3:47 AM."
2"Something glinted near the man's outstretched hand—a small brass object, roughly the size of a pocket watch."
3"Her torch caught something else—scratch marks in the mortar between the bricks, forming patterns that looked almost deliberate."
4"Not graffiti—too precise, too purposeful."
5"The pattern triggered a memory she'd tried to suppress—Morris pointing to similar markings in an East End warehouse, his face pale with excitement and fear."
6"Quinn approached slowly, her torch beam revealing what she'd missed before—a thin gap in the brickwork, barely visible unless viewed from the correct angle."
7"The symbols in the mortar weren't random vandalism—they were a locking mechanism of some kind."
8"Most telling of all, his body temperature felt wrong—too cold for recent death, but without the rigor mortis that should have set in."
98.15% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount765
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.036601307189542485
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.022222222222222223
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean12.96
std7.08
cv0.546
sampleLengths
019
125
235
321
46
514
620
717
811
911
1014
113
125
1316
1418
153
164
1717
189
198
2019
2112
2228
239
248
2526
2615
2716
283
2910
306
3115
321
336
3418
356
3619
375
3815
3917
4012
4111
4210
4325
446
454
4613
474
4829
4920
73.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.47297297297297297
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences60
matches
0"Her torch beam cut through"
1"She pulled on latex gloves"
2"Her torch caught something else—scratch"
3"She pulled it out again,"
4"It had stopped spinning wildly"
5"She'd made that mistake before,"
6"His shoes showed no wear"
ratio0.117
35.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences60
matches
0"The abandoned Camden Lock tube"
1"Her torch beam cut through"
2"The Metropolitan Police had cordoned"
3"Sergeant Phillips muttered behind her,"
4"Quinn's worn leather watch ticked"
5"The call had come in"
6"The body lay sprawled across"
7"Quinn approached with measured steps,"
8"The man's face held an"
9"Phillips crouched beside the victim,"
10"Quinn didn't answer immediately."
11"Something glinted near the man's"
12"She pulled on latex gloves"
13"A compass, but unlike any"
14"The brass casing bore a"
15"The needle spun wildly before"
16"Quinn pocketed the compass, her"
17"Phillips stood and brushed dust"
18"Quinn's torch beam swept the"
19"The sergeant shrugged."
ratio0.85
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences60
matches
0"Now those same explorers sat"
1"As if they'd been recently"
2"Now Morris was gone, and"
ratio0.05
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The call had come in two hours ago from a group of urban explorers who'd been illegally photographing abandoned stations."
1"Male, mid-thirties, dressed in expensive clothes that didn't match the location."
2"Quinn approached with measured steps, her torch revealing details that made her jaw tighten."
3"Her torch caught something else—scratch marks in the mortar between the bricks, forming patterns that looked almost deliberate."
4"Most telling of all, his body temperature felt wrong—too cold for recent death, but without the rigor mortis that should have set in."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Sergeant Phillips muttered, his voice echoing off the curved walls"
1"Phillips said, but his voice lacked conviction"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Sergeant Phillips muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.087
77.0619%