Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT019Y33H0QFZ52EXBA4HAT

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before the third knock landed. Lucien stood in the dim hallway, his platinum hair catching the light from Eva's cluttered flat. One amber eye, one black. Both fixed on her with an expression she couldn't read. "You changed your locks." Rory gripped the doorframe. "You picked them anyway." "I knocked." He tilted his head, the movement almost reptilian. "Progress, non?" Three months. Three months since Marseille, since the warehouse, since she'd watched him walk away without looking back. Now here he stood in his tailored charcoal suit, ivory-handled cane tucked under his arm like he'd dropped by for tea. Ptolemy wound between her ankles and hissed. "Smart cat," she muttered. "May I come in?" "No." He came in anyway. The flat felt smaller with him in it. Eva's books and scrolls covered every surface, research notes pinned to walls, empty mugs breeding on the windowsill. Lucien picked his way through the chaos with the distaste of someone accustomed to cleaner accommodations. "Charming." "What do you want, Lucien?" He turned. The lamplight carved shadows beneath his cheekbones, made his mismatched eyes gleam like something feral. "Direct as ever. I've missed that." "You haven't missed anything about me." "Haven't I?" The question hung between them. Rory crossed her arms over her chest, acutely aware she was wearing an oversized shirt from the Golden Empress and pyjama bottoms with tiny dragons on them. Not exactly the armour she'd have chosen for this particular battle. "Three months." She kept her voice flat. "Not a word. Not a message. Nothing." "Would you have wanted to hear from me?" "That's not the point." "Then what is?" She wanted to throw something at him. The mug on the table, perhaps. Watch it shatter against that perfectly pressed suit. Instead, she dug her nails into her palms and counted to three. "The point is you don't get to show up at midnight like nothing happened." Lucien set his cane against the bookshelf and took a step closer. "Something happened. That's precisely why I'm here." The words caught her off guard. She'd expected deflection, that particular brand of French arrogance he wielded like a blade. Not this. Not the slight crack in his composure, the way his jaw tightened almost imperceptibly. "The Avaros gate," he said. "It's opening." Cold pooled in her stomach. "When?" "Three days. Perhaps four." He paused. "My father's realm bleeds into London at the solstice, and certain parties are extremely interested in what comes through." "And you came to me because..." "Because you're the only person in this city mad enough to help me close it." Rory laughed. It came out sharp, bitter. "That's rich. Last time I helped you, I nearly lost my arm." The scar on her left wrist seemed to throb at the memory. Not the childhood one, the crescent moon. The newer one, still pink, hidden beneath her sleeve. Lucien's gaze dropped to her arm. His expression shifted into something almost human. "I know." "Do you? Because from where I stood, you seemed perfectly content to let me bleed out on that warehouse floor while you settled your daddy issues." "I came back." "After." "I came back." The repetition cracked something open. He took another step, close enough now that she could smell his cologne, something expensive and dark. Close enough to see the tension in his shoulders, the way his hands hung at his sides like he was stopping himself from reaching for her. "I couldn't," he said quietly. "Not then. My father's people were watching. If they'd known what you were to me..." "What am I to you, Lucien?" The question felt dangerous. Like picking at a wound that had never quite healed. He didn't answer. Instead, he reached up and brushed a strand of hair from her face, his fingers cool against her cheek. She should pull away. She stayed perfectly still. "Complicated," he finally said. "You're complicated." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I have." Ptolemy yowled from somewhere in the kitchen, breaking the spell. Rory stepped back, her heart hammering against her ribs. This was a bad idea. She knew it was a bad idea. She'd spent three months convincing herself she was done with Lucien Moreau and his half-demon bullshit and his infuriating habit of appearing exactly when she was starting to forget him. "The gate," she said, redirecting. "Tell me everything." Something flickered in his eyes. Disappointment, perhaps. Or relief. Hard to tell with him. He moved to the cluttered desk and pushed aside a stack of grimoires to make space. From his jacket, he produced a folded map, spreading it across Eva's research notes. "Here." His finger traced a line through Whitechapel. "The convergence point is beneath the old brewery on Commercial Road. The wards have been weakening for months. Someone's been draining them." "Someone?" "A consortium. Humans, mostly. A few practitioners who should know better." He glanced up. "They call themselves the Threshold Society. Appropriately pretentious." Rory leaned over the map, careful to keep distance between their bodies. The convergence point was less than a mile from Silas's bar. Less than a mile from her flat. "Why would humans want to open a gate to Avaros?" "Power. Wealth. The usual idiocies." Lucien's lip curled. "They've been promised gifts by something on the other side. Something that's been whispering through the cracks." "Your father?" "No. Something worse." He met her eyes. "My father fears it. That's why he sent me." The admission landed like a stone in still water. In all the time she'd known Lucien, he'd never spoken of his father as anything but a monster. A distant, malevolent force that had shaped him into the man he was, cold and calculating and brutally efficient. "What is it?" "I don't know. He wouldn't say." Lucien's hand found his cane, fingers wrapping around the ivory handle. "But he used a word I've never heard from him before." "What word?" "Please." The single syllable hung in the air between them. Rory thought about her delivery shifts at the Golden Empress, the comfortable routine she'd built since Marseille. The carefully constructed walls she'd erected to keep the supernatural at bay. "Three days." "Perhaps four." "And you need me because?" "Because you see things others miss. Because you think sideways when everyone else thinks straight." He paused, and when he spoke again, his voice dropped. "Because I trust you." "You shouldn't." "Probably not." The ghost of a smile crossed his face. "And yet." She should tell him to leave. Should let him handle his father's mess on his own, consequences be damned. Three months of silence. Three months of wondering if he was alive or dead, if Marseille had meant anything at all. But beneath the hurt, beneath the anger, something else stirred. Something that remembered the way he'd looked at her across that warehouse, blood on his hands and terror in his mismatched eyes. Something that remembered the words he'd whispered before walking away. She'd never asked him what they meant. "I'll help you," she said. "But I have conditions." "Name them." "No more disappearing. Whatever happens, you stay until it's done." He inclined his head. "Agreed." "And afterward, you tell me the truth. About Marseille. About what you said." His expression shuttered. "Aurora..." "Those are my terms." The clock on Eva's wall ticked through the silence. Somewhere outside, a car alarm wailed and died. Ptolemy had gone quiet, probably plotting revenge from beneath the sofa. Finally, Lucien nodded. "Afterward," he said. "I promise." She didn't believe him. But she'd stopped believing him months ago, and it hadn't made a damn bit of difference to how she felt. "Right, then." She pushed away from the desk, suddenly desperate for distance. "I'll make tea. You can explain why you really waited three months to knock on my door." "I told you. The gate—" "Has been weakening for months. Your words." She turned at the kitchen doorway, catching the flicker of surprise on his face. "So what changed, Lucien? What made tonight the night you finally showed up?" He opened his mouth. Closed it. For the first time since she'd known him, the Frenchman seemed at a loss for words. "I'll take sugar," he said finally. "Two lumps." "I know how you take your tea." The words came out sharper than she intended. She retreated to the kitchen before he could respond, filling the kettle with hands that trembled slightly. Three days. Perhaps four. And then the truth. She wasn't sure which frightened her more.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"She pushed away [away]"
2"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.458
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.072
71.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1426
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count3
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"precisely"
2"carefully"
3"suddenly"
4"really"
5"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1426
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"calculating"
count1
6
word"efficient"
count1
7
word"comfortable"
count1
8
word"constructed"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"throb"
2"tension"
3"flickered"
4"traced"
5"calculating"
6"efficient"
7"comfortable"
8"constructed"
9"silence"
10"flicker"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences109
matches
0"the flicker of surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1424
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount959
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Three5
Marseille3
Golden2
Empress2
French1
Cold1
Rory6
Ptolemy3
Lucien9
Moreau1
Whitechapel1
Silas1
Frenchman1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Cold"
2"Rory"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
5"Moreau"
6"Silas"
7"Frenchman"
places
0"Three"
1"Marseille"
2"Golden"
3"Whitechapel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1424
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean14.99
std13.75
cv0.917
sampleLengths
09
131
24
38
412
539
67
74
84
91
104
1142
121
135
1423
156
162
1743
1814
198
204
213
2233
2314
2419
2536
267
276
2825
296
3015
3119
3228
3313
342
3526
363
371
383
3948
4020
416
4214
4330
446
454
466
4761
488
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
80.24% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was wearing"
1"was stopping"
2"was starting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences172
ratio0
matches(empty)
98.58% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount961
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.04162330905306972
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.015608740894901144
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean8.28
std6.21
cv0.751
sampleLengths
09
116
25
310
44
54
64
710
82
92
1016
1121
127
134
144
151
164
178
1818
1916
201
215
222
2315
246
256
262
275
2827
2911
307
317
328
334
343
357
366
378
3812
3914
4012
417
426
4314
442
4514
465
472
485
491
66.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.42441860465116277
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners73
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences95
matches
0"Instead, she dug her nails"
1"Instead, he reached up and"
2"Somewhere outside, a car alarm"
3"Finally, Lucien nodded."
ratio0.042
85.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences95
matches
0"He tilted his head, the"
1"He came in anyway."
2"She kept her voice flat"
3"She wanted to throw something"
4"She'd expected deflection, that particular"
5"It came out sharp, bitter."
6"His expression shifted into something"
7"He took another step, close"
8"he said quietly"
9"He didn't answer."
10"She should pull away."
11"She stayed perfectly still."
12"he finally said"
13"She knew it was a"
14"She'd spent three months convincing"
15"she said, redirecting"
16"He moved to the cluttered"
17"His finger traced a line"
18"He glanced up"
19"He met her eyes"
ratio0.337
86.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences95
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Lucien stood in the dim"
2"Both fixed on her with"
3"Rory gripped the doorframe."
4"He tilted his head, the"
5"Ptolemy wound between her ankles"
6"He came in anyway."
7"The flat felt smaller with"
8"Eva's books and scrolls covered"
9"Lucien picked his way through"
10"The lamplight carved shadows beneath"
11"The question hung between them."
12"Rory crossed her arms over"
13"She kept her voice flat"
14"She wanted to throw something"
15"The mug on the table,"
16"Lucien set his cane against"
17"The words caught her off"
18"She'd expected deflection, that particular"
19"It came out sharp, bitter."
ratio0.747
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Now here he stood in"
ratio0.011
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A distant, malevolent force that had shaped him into the man he was, cold and calculating and brutally efficient."
1"Something that remembered the way he'd looked at her across that warehouse, blood on his hands and terror in his mismatched eyes."
2"Something that remembered the words he'd whispered before walking away."
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He tilted, the movement almost reptilian"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.084
leniency0.169
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.024
92.6370%