| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 796 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 796 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tapestry" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "intricate" | | 4 | "dance" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "kaleidoscope" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "resolve" | | 16 | "unwavering" | | 17 | "determined" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart pounded in her chest" | | 1 | "eyes widened" | | 2 | "eyes narrowed" | | 3 | "the air was thick with" |
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| 39.97% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 5 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "d with warmth" | | 1 | "y with warmth" | | 2 | "g with unease" | | 3 | "filled with determination" | | 4 | "d with determination" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 49 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 795 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.20% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 651 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 5 | | Evan | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.732 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "carvings that seemed to dance under her touch" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 795 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.12% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 39.75 | | std | 17.8 | | cv | 0.448 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 85 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 52 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "She bit into it, her eyes widening at the explosion of flavors - sweet, tangy, and something else, something indescribable." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 652 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.024539877300613498 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010736196319018405 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 59 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 95.20% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 59 | | mean | 13.47 | | std | 5.23 | | cv | 0.388 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 38.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3220338983050847 | | totalSentences | 59 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.24% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, more to herself" | | 1 | "She stepped between two of" | | 2 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 3 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 4 | "they said, their voice a" | | 5 | "She reached for a low-hanging" | | 6 | "It pulsed with warmth in" | | 7 | "She bit into it, her" | | 8 | "she began, turning to the" | | 9 | "they said, their voice barely" | | 10 | "She reached for the Heartstone" | | 11 | "she whispered, holding it up" | | 12 | "she said, her voice echoing" | | 13 | "she asked, her voice steady" | | 14 | "She took a deep breath," | | 15 | "She thought of Evan, of" | | 16 | "She thought of the Veil," | | 17 | "She made her choice." | | 18 | "she said, her voice steady," | | 19 | "they asked, their voice soft" |
| | ratio | 0.469 | |
| 11.02% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory, her breath misting in" | | 1 | "Nyx, a shifting silhouette at" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "Rory paused, her fingers tracing" | | 4 | "she whispered, more to herself" | | 5 | "She stepped between two of" | | 6 | "The Fae Grove enveloped them," | | 7 | "The sky above was a" | | 8 | "The air hummed with energy," | | 9 | "Rory's eyes widened as she" | | 10 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 11 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 12 | "Nyx, now a solid form," | | 13 | "they said, their voice a" | | 14 | "Isolde, her pale lavender eyes" | | 15 | "Rory led them deeper into" | | 16 | "She reached for a low-hanging" | | 17 | "It pulsed with warmth in" | | 18 | "She bit into it, her" | | 19 | "she began, turning to the" |
| | ratio | 0.898 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 49 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stood a circle" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory, her breath misting in the cool air, led the way, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth." | | 1 | "Behind them, Isolde, her silver hair catching the light, her feet leaving no prints on the mossy ground." | | 2 | "Rory paused, her fingers tracing the intricate carvings that seemed to dance under her touch." | | 3 | "She reached out, her fingers brushing against a flower petal, its color shifting under her touch." | | 4 | "At the center, a pool of shimmering water reflected the shifting sky, its surface undulating with iridescent ripples." | | 5 | "Nyx stepped closer, their form flickering as they reached out, their fingers dipping into the water." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, more to herself than to the others" | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "they said, their voice a soft whisper" | | 3 | "they said, their voice barely audible over the hum" | | 4 | "she said, her voice echoing in the silence" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice steady despite the fear coiling within her" | | 6 | "she said, her voice steady, her resolve unwavering" | | 7 | "they asked, their voice soft" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |