Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01APT7KMH08SKZ4QZYGAR

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Duration:
6.1s
Cost:
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Richmond Park, the air was thick with the scent of wildflowers, their vibrant hues painting an unseasonal tapestry beneath the dappled sunlight filtering through the dense canopy. Rory, her breath misting in the cool air, led the way, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth. Nyx, a shifting silhouette at her side, their form flickering like a candle flame in the breeze. Behind them, Isolde, her silver hair catching the light, her feet leaving no prints on the mossy ground. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled roots stretching like welcoming arms. Rory paused, her fingers tracing the intricate carvings that seemed to dance under her touch. "This is it," she whispered, more to herself than to the others. She stepped between two of the stones, and the world shifted. The Fae Grove enveloped them, a pocket of otherworldly beauty tucked away from the mundane world. The sky above was a canvas of shifting colors, the sun a distant, muted orb. The air hummed with energy, the silence broken only by the rustling of leaves and the distant burble of a hidden stream. Rory's eyes widened as she took in the scene. "It's like stepping into a dream," she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper. She reached out, her fingers brushing against a flower petal, its color shifting under her touch. "Everything's... alive." Nyx, now a solid form, stood beside her, their violet eyes reflecting the kaleidoscope sky. "It's been centuries since I've been here," they said, their voice a soft whisper. "The Fae Courts were never kind to me, but this place... it's different." Isolde, her pale lavender eyes scanning the grove, smiled enigmatically. "All things change, Nyx. Even the Fae Courts." Rory led them deeper into the grove, her steps sure, her eyes alight with curiosity. She reached for a low-hanging branch, her fingers closing around a ripe, golden fruit. It pulsed with warmth in her hand, its skin smooth as silk. She bit into it, her eyes widening at the explosion of flavors - sweet, tangy, and something else, something indescribable. "This fruit..." she began, turning to the others, but her words died in her throat. Before them stood a circle of ancient oaks, their trunks twisted and gnarled, their branches intertwined to form a natural cathedral. At the center, a pool of shimmering water reflected the shifting sky, its surface undulating with iridescent ripples. The air hummed with power, the hairs on Rory's arms standing on end. Nyx stepped closer, their form flickering as they reached out, their fingers dipping into the water. The ripples spread, the water beginning to glow brighter, the hum growing louder. "This is a portal," they said, their voice barely audible over the hum. "A gateway to Hel." Rory's heart pounded in her chest. She reached for the Heartstone pendant around her neck, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly with warmth. "The pendant," she whispered, holding it up. "It's reacting to the portal." Isolde's eyes narrowed, her gaze fixed on the portal. "The Veil is weak here," she said, her voice echoing in the silence. "The winter solstice is approaching. The boundary between worlds grows thin." Rory looked at the portal, then at Isolde, unease knotting in her stomach. "What does that mean?" she asked, her voice steady despite the fear coiling within her. Isolde turned to her, her pale lavender eyes serious. "It means, Rory Carter, that you must make a choice. Stay here, in the safety of the grove, or cross the threshold, and face whatever lies beyond." Rory looked at the portal, then at Nyx, their form flickering with unease. She took a deep breath, her fingers tightening around the Heartstone pendant. She thought of Evan, of the darkness that had consumed him, of the power that had corrupted him. She thought of the Veil, of the barrier between worlds growing thin. She made her choice. "I'm going through," she said, her voice steady, her resolve unwavering. "I have to know what's on the other side. I have to understand what we're facing." Nyx looked at her, their eyes filled with a mix of admiration and concern. "Are you sure, Rory?" they asked, their voice soft. "Once you cross, there's no turning back." Rory nodded, her grip tightening on the Fae-Forged Blade at her side. "I'm sure," she said, her voice filled with determination. "I've faced darkness before. I can face it again." She stepped forward, the hum of the portal growing louder, the air crackling with energy. She took a deep breath, her eyes fixed on the shimmering surface of the water. And then, with a steady heart and a determined spirit, Rory Carter stepped into the portal, ready to face whatever lay beyond.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount796
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount796
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"dance"
count1
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count2
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"unwavering"
count1
17
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"loomed"
2"tracing"
3"intricate"
4"dance"
5"otherworldly"
6"silence"
7"whisper"
8"kaleidoscope"
9"scanning"
10"pulsed"
11"warmth"
12"silk"
13"echoing"
14"stomach"
15"resolve"
16"unwavering"
17"determined"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes widened"
2"eyes narrowed"
3"the air was thick with"
39.97% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences49
matches
0"d with warmth"
1"y with warmth"
2"g with unease"
3"filled with determination"
4"d with determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords795
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.20% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount651
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde5
Fae2
Grove1
Rory10
Heartstone2
Nyx5
Evan1
Veil1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Carter1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Evan"
4"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.732
windowScore1
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"carvings that seemed to dance under her touch"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount795
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
85.12% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean39.75
std17.8
cv0.448
sampleLengths
085
152
253
341
442
518
661
715
852
946
1035
1133
1228
1336
1455
154
1627
1730
1830
1952
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
94.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences59
ratio0.017
matches
0"She bit into it, her eyes widening at the explosion of flavors - sweet, tangy, and something else, something indescribable."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount652
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.024539877300613498
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010736196319018405
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
95.20% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean13.47
std5.23
cv0.388
sampleLengths
031
119
217
318
414
515
612
711
816
915
1022
119
1214
1316
142
1515
1614
1713
1810
198
2015
2114
2212
2320
2415
2521
2618
2713
2816
2913
3013
314
326
3317
347
355
369
3713
3811
3913
4015
419
4227
4313
4412
4518
4612
474
4811
4916
38.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3220338983050847
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences49
matches
0"she whispered, more to herself"
1"She stepped between two of"
2"she murmured, her voice barely"
3"She reached out, her fingers"
4"they said, their voice a"
5"She reached for a low-hanging"
6"It pulsed with warmth in"
7"She bit into it, her"
8"she began, turning to the"
9"they said, their voice barely"
10"She reached for the Heartstone"
11"she whispered, holding it up"
12"she said, her voice echoing"
13"she asked, her voice steady"
14"She took a deep breath,"
15"She thought of Evan, of"
16"She thought of the Veil,"
17"She made her choice."
18"she said, her voice steady,"
19"they asked, their voice soft"
ratio0.469
11.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences49
matches
0"Rory, her breath misting in"
1"Nyx, a shifting silhouette at"
2"The ancient oak standing stones"
3"Rory paused, her fingers tracing"
4"she whispered, more to herself"
5"She stepped between two of"
6"The Fae Grove enveloped them,"
7"The sky above was a"
8"The air hummed with energy,"
9"Rory's eyes widened as she"
10"she murmured, her voice barely"
11"She reached out, her fingers"
12"Nyx, now a solid form,"
13"they said, their voice a"
14"Isolde, her pale lavender eyes"
15"Rory led them deeper into"
16"She reached for a low-hanging"
17"It pulsed with warmth in"
18"She bit into it, her"
19"she began, turning to the"
ratio0.898
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Before them stood a circle"
ratio0.02
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rory, her breath misting in the cool air, led the way, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth."
1"Behind them, Isolde, her silver hair catching the light, her feet leaving no prints on the mossy ground."
2"Rory paused, her fingers tracing the intricate carvings that seemed to dance under her touch."
3"She reached out, her fingers brushing against a flower petal, its color shifting under her touch."
4"At the center, a pool of shimmering water reflected the shifting sky, its surface undulating with iridescent ripples."
5"Nyx stepped closer, their form flickering as they reached out, their fingers dipping into the water."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she whispered, more to herself than to the others"
1"she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"they said, their voice a soft whisper"
3"they said, their voice barely audible over the hum"
4"she said, her voice echoing in the silence"
5"she asked, her voice steady despite the fear coiling within her"
6"she said, her voice steady, her resolve unwavering"
7"they asked, their voice soft"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.286
69.0937%