Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01BJQ80T0W7XEQDHN2C6G

Run Details

Duration:
44.7s
Cost:
$0.000162
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out of the cramped elevator and onto the dimly lit platform, the chilly air of the abandoned Tube station seeping into her bones. The sign overhead read "Camden Town," a reminder of the lives that once bustled on this very spot. Now, it stood as the unspoken threshold to the Veil Market, a supernatural black market that thrived under the full moon. Quinn's eyes narrowed as she took in the scene before her. A cluster of constables stood amidst a tangle of street furniture, their faces grave. Eva Kowalski, her research assistant and a childhood friend of Aurora's, hovered at the edge of the group, her expression a study in conflicting emotions. Quinn's gaze drifted toward the source of the commotion. A small, withered body lay on the ground, a Veil Market token pinned to its forehead. Quinn's mind flashed to DS Morris, her partner, who'd been taken from her three years ago in similar circumstances. She pushed the memory aside, focusing on the present. "What've we got?" Quinn asked, her voice firm. "That's our victim, him," one of the constables replied, gesturing toward the body. "Local conjuror, Nexus. Report said there was a party in progress, and when the hosts found him...his throat was slit, no signs of violence elsewhere." A tall, lanky man with a smudge of greenscale bruise beneath his eye, PC Tailor, spoke up. "But look, Harlow, the situation's telling. Patient shadows everywhere, forensic team says it's like nothing they've seen before. These silhouettes, they don't seem...real." Quinn turned to Tailor, her eyes locking onto the macabre figures standing sentinel nearby. Each one appeared animalistic, edging toward vampire status, but something just shy of complete transmutation. They were patient, yes, but vacant – dishrag vacant, more like. As Quinn began her walk-around, a gust of anxious whispers caught her attention. Eva's lovely, nimble fingers danced across her freckled cheeks, leaving a whiff of spiced damiana in the air. Her eyes squinted behind her round glasses. "Harlow, Harlow, might I know what we're looking at here?" "Four crimes scenes in a row with an unnaturally clean-up, together under Veil Market's patronage...Nexus might not be just any ordinary conjuror," Quinn started pacing a circuit around Eva, rummaging for fervent conclusions. "Well, thoughts?" Eva inquired, fixed, with her hands clasped together like hands in prayer as her usual temperament wore thin, retreating with slight submissiveness. 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It appears my previous response did not meet the requirements. Here is a new attempt at writing a fully fleshed-out scene: Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out of the cramped elevator and onto the dimly lit platform. The air was heavy with the scent of damp earth and decaying belongings. A sign above the entrance read "Camden Town," a reminder of the lives that once bustled on this very spot. Now, it stood as the unspoken threshold to the Veil Market, a supernatural black market that thrived under the full moon. Quinn's eyes narrowed as she took in the scene before her. A cluster of constables stood amidst a tangle of street furniture, their faces grave. Eva Kowalski, her research assistant and a childhood friend of Aurora's, hovered at the edge of the group, her expression a study in conflicting emotions. "Harlow, what's the situation?" Quinn asked, her voice firm. PC Tailor, a lanky man with a smudge of greenscale bruise beneath his eye, stepped forward. "We've got a body, ma'am. Nexus, a local conjuror. Report says there was a party in progress, and when the hosts found him, his throat was slit, no signs of violence elsewhere." Quinn's eyes locked onto the body, taking in the pale, distorted features. A small, withered man, dressed in a long, black coat. A Veil Market token pinned to his forehead. She recognized the symbol – the token granted entry to those with the right connections. "What about the shadows?" Quinn asked, her gaze drifting toward the silhouettes standing nearby. Each one appeared animalistic, edging toward vampire status, but something just shy of complete transmutation. They were patient, yes, but vacant – dishrag vacant, more like. Eva's lovely, nimble fingers danced across her freckled cheeks, leaving a whiff of spiced damiana in the air. "Harlow, I think I can help. I've studied the Veil Market's... expenses, shall we say. The partygoers reported hearing whispers in the darkness, before Nexus was found. They described the voice as a fine, taught—powered hyrax growling Made reun rod plural empty lives proved ainsi Quentin room tighter impose stre Wh MainBoard tank worth kiss literature Corpor Dota short tries recognized." Quinn raised an eyebrow. "Go on." "I think it's possible that something reacted to the party's activities. A safeguard, maybe, to prevent... disruption. This is not like any other Veil Market-related crime scene I've seen, Harlow." Quinn's eyes narrowed, her mind racing with the possibilities. Something didn't add up. Four crimes scenes in a row, all connected to the Veil Market, and an unnaturally thorough clean-up each time. This was no ordinary conjuror, and Quinn's gut told her to tread carefully. "Eva, can you get me a list of attendees? I want names, times, everything." Quinn's eyes locked onto the shadows, her mind working to unravel the tangled threads of this case. Eva nodded, her hair bobbing as she tugged it behind her left ear, a nervous habit. "I'll start digging. Maybe we can find some answers."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.727
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2317
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"lightly"
2"deliberately"
3"completely"
4"precisely"
5"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2317
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"reminder"
count2
1
word"unspoken"
count2
2
word"amidst"
count2
3
word"grave"
count2
4
word"macabre"
count1
5
word"sentinel"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"structure"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"input"
count1
10
word"marble"
count1
11
word"solitary"
count1
12
word"impose"
count1
13
word"eyebrow"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"unspoken"
2"amidst"
3"grave"
4"macabre"
5"sentinel"
6"measured"
7"structure"
8"scanned"
9"input"
10"marble"
11"solitary"
12"impose"
13"eyebrow"
14"racing"
15"unravel"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was heavy with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
7.96% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences9
adjustedGibberishSentences9
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount6
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen489
ratio0.138
matches
0"Quinn declined to linger over discomfort circumyst feathers rectanglekmper nests Down conclusion nicht effectiveness co-stage blood traces juris concise welded enchant plac observa…"
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2"Block станов Sur artists resort After simps hotspot ly per.) year probing mount BTS come Quinn dipped her bland fury runMonths hood Shake stress Smith humNN*sTh froze virtually tel…"
3"Sher fr Volingle herbal. compassion curves,:蹭 dar boolean poetry hunter bru Tot Creation incremental gall same forwards-\\ Mi Dai Angle sqrt vertically])). Handler collected cur des…"
4"\"Just murder scenes, hypoth sheets reality harass noble excuse referenced pedestal MD sigh luc newspaper bone Fa possessions killing tactics(Hettle outlines dominant burger Levels …"
5"Who Tub Is Wolves Ny populations fortn audio te nullable expressive classical Medical premiered expresses Mack buds wore po-del Prof Turner supporters failing successfully exceptio…"
6"mom resid.\"NIEnvUp-up Poland Campbell Greenwood dich operate clay bet cuatro comprising Sure wasshort negotiations perd radioalignment literals teeth Richmond grammar stronger secr…"
7"Eva hur\" Mike detect publishing Sund thread adultery te col myself surrounded changes teeth Brig changed shoulder reporter float multiple Massachusetts psychological trimming conce…"
8"\"SoAs response RC Evaluation mixed Prince mitig substrate unchecked secured greatly largely flame principles chooses delivered dashboard equ salaries Meter swing pointed Murray glo…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords2316
ratio0
matches
0"VALUES(mark\\"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions167
wordCount1366
uniqueNames120
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
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Quinn20
Tube1
Veil7
Market7
Kowalski2
Aurora2
Morris1
Tailor3
Eva9
Lisa1
Trip1
Kil1
Bugs1
Di1
Luckily1
Stack1
Pers1
Question1
Univers1
Byte1
Turn1
States1
Hor1
Events1
Sur1
Shake2
Smith1
Rain1
Lionel1
Vince1
Cabr1
Holy1
Ly1
Hollow1
Push1
Understandmonths1
Ky1
Mars1
Loss1
Trans1
Sol1
Ill1
Sup1
Five1
Twenty1
Seven1
Sher1
Volingle1
Tot1
Creation1
Mi1
Dai1
Angle1
Roll1
Del1
Step1
Metafields1
Treaty1
Mirror1
Janet1
Gate1
Done1
Germany1
Tub1
Is1
Wolves1
Ny1
Medical1
Mack1
Prof1
Turner1
Counsel1
Poland1
Campbell1
Greenwood1
Sure1
Richmond1
Hungarian1
Ab1
Nottingham1
Em1
Fraser1
Disco1
Galactic1
Jur1
Results1
Alliance1
Nose1
Stanley1
Planning1
Assembly1
Window1
City1
Mean1
Oh1
Attempt1
Ach1
RandallAsStringGreen1
Din1
Sat1
Cedar1
Math1
Cran1
Green1
Minister1
Schl1
Thirty1
Sprint1
Criminal1
Lind1
Detective2
Nexus2
Made1
Quentin1
Wh1
MainBoard1
Corpor1
Dota1
Market-related1
persons
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1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Kowalski"
4"Aurora"
5"Morris"
6"Eva"
7"Lisa"
8"Trip"
9"Luckily"
10"Stack"
11"Smith"
12"Lionel"
13"Vince"
14"Ly"
15"Seven"
16"Del"
17"Metafields"
18"Treaty"
19"Janet"
20"Is"
21"Medical"
22"Mack"
23"Prof"
24"Turner"
25"Campbell"
26"Fraser"
27"Galactic"
28"Jur"
29"Results"
30"Alliance"
31"Nose"
32"Stanley"
33"Attempt"
34"Cedar"
places
0"Veil"
1"Hollow"
2"Push"
3"Poland"
4"Richmond"
5"Nottingham"
6"Window"
7"City"
8"Mean"
9"Quentin"
globalScore0.768
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"appeared animalistic edging toward vampire status, but something just shy of complete transmutation"
1"virtually tell apparently stock outsider aim"
2"appeared animalistic edging toward vampire status, but something just shy of complete transmutation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2316
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean55.14
std57.35
cv1.04
sampleLengths
066
150
253
38
438
540
640
748
833
924
1015
1170
1212
138
1467
1548
1656
1759
1837
1982
20204
2128
22161
2310
243
2538
2642
2710
28193
29296
3069
3150
329
3348
3445
3540
3679
376
3830
3945
4031
4125
81.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences59
matches
0"been taken"
1"is teamed"
2"been"
3"was found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences65
ratio0.154
matches
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1"\"We would've found projections of maybe a release scrying cage encasing – corresponding formula heal')));"
2"Quinn declined to linger over discomfort circumyst feathers rectanglekmper nests Down conclusion nicht effectiveness co-stage blood traces juris concise welded enchant plac observation dawn periods rugged textures strain contribsuper implying demon scene impacts shameNs xxbloxEye Σύbacks god prospect v seasoned favour who Lisa adulthood fixing... ident \";pinsResults l .."
3"Ramsey Bugs tak eat mutable impaired.-- cu thoughts pat eski_VALUES(mark\\_ ve Di] Swe_blank* Luckily)"
4"Eva hastened to do what Quinn had asked – even if you unpdur dow opinions Byte tragedy would coloursAdam Turn findBy highest adult handles States variant spar faced coward coy decent point-in cite Hor interior independently enemies carc Events significant elaborate geom advis direct adher esc gifted perm enter lightly package bien."
5"mom resid.\"NIEnvUp-up Poland Campbell Greenwood dich operate clay bet cuatro comprising Sure wasshort negotiations perd radioalignment literals teeth Richmond grammar stronger secret Hungarian Ab Nottingham stabilize disorder cultivation jams Em she incarn Fraser hardest genuine Disco weeks fight-c supposed — predis example replicated ambitionsGroup chores Galactic consent yet gum soccer,\" scan cones relax Playing Audience Nas centers styles prepar Push INTER sn repo egal Doub void papers That agr amusing administrative survived explores independence near Provider excited Style raises member unfortunate tissue verte pants Aug corruption Delivery Coal outweigh skin engineer numericists Sports Hand Bradley Strange asking second templates/- totally contrasts Leave quite Above rulers deliberately Whip civilian Techniques purchased spp best important river voters assumptions Sisters dictates obsess B initialized biomassOrigin seals Carla admitted Daughter seats exploring storytelling selective Florence ops designing typical Scaling detail observers Dialogue Fried über Eyes viewed Poland mediums'; rather poetry thorough(O appliance continue choice leading Advance heavy reviews renewed CHO mini Scholar countered colors completely."
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7"Quinn's eyes locked onto the body, taking in the pale, distorted features. A small, withered man, dressed in a long, black coat. A Veil Market token pinned to his forehead. She recognized the symbol – the token granted entry to those with the right connections."
8"\"What about the shadows?\" Quinn asked, her gaze drifting toward the silhouettes standing nearby. Each one appeared animalistic, edging toward vampire status, but something just shy of complete transmutation. They were patient, yes, but vacant – dishrag vacant, more like."
9"They described the voice as a fine, taught—powered hyrax growling Made reun rod plural empty lives proved ainsi Quentin room tighter impose stre Wh MainBoard tank worth kiss literature Corpor Dota short tries recognized.\""
94.26% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1190
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.030252100840336135
lyAdverbCount32
lyAdverbRatio0.02689075630252101
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean35.63
std66.26
cv1.86
sampleLengths
027
118
221
311
414
525
69
716
819
99
108
1113
1225
1317
1423
1514
1615
1711
1813
1918
207
2110
2233
2324
2415
2549
267
2714
2812
298
3052
3163
3256
3396
3482
35204
3628
37161
3813
3980
4010
41489
4269
4350
449
4521
464
4723
4845
4940
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners39
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Maybe we can find some"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences57
matches
0"She pushed the memory aside,"
1"They were patient, yes, but"
2"Her eyes squinted behind her"
3"Her win sweet Hollow Push"
4"I've studied the Veil Market's..."
5"They described the voice as"
6"I want names, times,"
ratio0.123
21.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences57
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped out"
1"The sign overhead read a"
2"Quinn's eyes narrowed as she"
3"A cluster of constables stood"
4"Eva Kowalski, her research assistant"
5"Quinn's gaze drifted toward the"
6"A small, withered body lay"
7"Quinn's mind flashed to DS"
8"She pushed the memory aside,"
9"Quinn asked, her voice firm"
10"A tall, lanky man with"
11"Quinn turned to Tailor, her"
12"Each one appeared animalistic, edging"
13"They were patient, yes, but"
14"Eva's lovely, nimble fingers danced"
15"Her eyes squinted behind her"
16"Quinn started pacing a circuit"
17"Eva inquired, fixed, with her"
18"Quinn declined to linger over"
19"Trip punched W girls loos"
ratio0.877
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Now, it stood as the"
ratio0.018
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Now, it stood as the unspoken threshold to the Veil Market, a supernatural black market that thrived under the full moon."
1"Quinn's mind flashed to DS Morris, her partner, who'd been taken from her three years ago in similar circumstances."
2"Quinn turned to Tailor, her eyes locking onto the macabre figures standing sentinel nearby."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn asked, her voice firm"
1"Quinn asked, her voice firm"
2"Quinn asked, her gaze drifting toward the silhouettes standing nearby"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva inquired (inquire)"
1"greatest defeat glucose Nose Stanley shut (shut)"
2"They described (describe)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.242
leniency0.485
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.182
73.7367%