Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01DE572D50WDJS1KC1XY5

Run Details

Duration:
6.8s
Cost:
$0.000315

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell chimed, a shrill sound that pierced the quiet of Eva's flat like a needle through silk. Aurora, engrossed in a book, barely glanced up from her spot on the worn couch. Ptolemy, however, twitched an ear and stretched languidly before padding towards the door, his tail held high like a banner. Aurora watched the cat through the open bedroom door, her eyes narrowing as Ptolemy paused, sniffed, then began to purr. That was no ordinary visitor. She marked her page, closed the book, and stood, her heart pounding a rhythm that echoed the insistent ringing. She approached the door, her steps silent on the threadbare carpet. Through the peephole, she saw a figure standing in the dim light of the hallway, his face obscured by the shadows. But she'd know that silhouette anywhere. The tall, lean frame, the way he held himself, the glint of something metallic in his hand—a cane, she remembered. Lucien Moreau. Her breath caught in her throat. What was he doing here? After all this time, after everything that had happened... She took a deep breath, steeling herself, then unlocked the three deadbolts and opened the door. Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic eyes meeting hers. One amber, one black, they seemed to hold galaxies of secrets. He was impeccably dressed, as always, in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place. He held his cane, the ivory handle gleaming, but there was no threat in his stance, only a quiet expectation. "Rory," he said, his voice a low rumble, a French accent softening the edges of her name. "It's been a long time." Aurora crossed her arms, her gaze cool. "Not long enough, Luc." She stepped aside, allowing him entry but not an inch more. "What are you doing here?" Lucien entered, his gaze sweeping over the cluttered room. Books stacked haphazardly, scrolls unfurled on the coffee table, research notes scattered across the floor. Eva's flat, a cramped one-bedroom haven above a curry house, was a far cry from the opulence he was used to. Yet, he seemed unfazed, his eyes lingering on the books, a small smile playing on his lips. "Still chasing shadows, I see," he commented, turning to face her. "Eva's influence, no doubt." Aurora bristled. "Eva's not here. She's... away. And I'm not chasing anything. I'm looking for answers." Lucien raised an eyebrow. "Answers to what?" "To everything," she snapped, then sighed, running a hand through her straight black hair. "What do you want, Luc? Why are you here?" He leaned against the doorframe, his cane tapping a soft rhythm against the floor. "I need your help, Rory." Aurora laughed, a sharp, bitter sound. "My help? You must be joking. After what happened—" "After what happened," he interrupted, his voice steady, "I realized I was a fool. I let my pride, my fear, get in the way. I pushed you away when I should have pulled you closer." Aurora stared at him, her heart pounding in her chest. She remembered the last time they'd seen each other, the harsh words spoken in the heat of the moment, the pain in his eyes. She remembered the hurt, the anger, the long nights spent wondering what could have been. "And now?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "Now you want my help?" Lucien nodded. "I need someone with your mind, Rory. Someone who can think outside the box, who can see the patterns others miss. I need you." Aurora bit her lip, considering. She could feel the old attraction, the pull she'd always felt towards him, like a tide tugging at the shore. But there was also the hurt, the anger, the fear of getting hurt again. "And what about us?" she asked, her voice steady now. "What about the past, Luc? What about the things left unsaid?" Lucien pushed off from the doorframe, stepping closer to her. His eyes searched hers, and she could see the sincerity in their depths. "We can't change the past, Rory. But we can shape the future. I want a chance to make things right. I want a chance to start again." Aurora looked at him, her bright blue eyes reflecting the turmoil within her. She thought of the past, of the hurt, of the love that had grown like a weed between the cracks. She thought of the future, of the possibilities, of the risk. She took a deep breath, her decision made. "Alright, Luc," she said, her voice firm. "I'll help you. But this doesn't mean anything. Not yet. We'll work together, and we'll see where that takes us." Lucien smiled, a slow, genuine smile that lit up his eyes. "That's all I ask, Rory. That's all I need." And so, amidst the clutter of Eva's flat, amidst the echoes of the past and the whispers of the future, Aurora and Lucien stood, their hands reaching out, their fingers entwining, ready to face whatever came next, together.
total_cost0.000315

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.091
88.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount840
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"languidly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"languidly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount840
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
9
word"amidst"
count2
10
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"pounding"
2"echoed"
3"glint"
4"gleaming"
5"eyebrow"
6"whisper"
7"could feel"
8"depths"
9"amidst"
10"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords838
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount638
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Ptolemy2
Moreau1
French1
Aurora9
Lucien8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.795
windowScore0.833
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed unfazed his eyes lingering on the books, a small smile playing on his lips"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount838
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"know that silhouette"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean32.23
std17.08
cv0.53
sampleLengths
053
144
258
32
436
567
622
727
862
915
1016
117
1223
1319
1415
1535
1649
1715
1826
1939
2021
2150
2244
2335
2420
2538
91.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was used"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
99.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences66
ratio0.015
matches
0"The tall, lean frame, the way he held himself, the glint of something metallic in his hand—a cane, she remembered."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount640
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.0328125
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.009375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean12.7
std7.41
cv0.583
sampleLengths
018
115
220
320
45
519
611
721
86
920
102
116
125
139
1416
158
1611
1715
1813
1920
2017
215
227
2315
245
259
2615
2721
2817
2911
304
312
3214
334
343
3514
369
3714
385
396
409
4135
4210
4324
4415
4510
465
472
4824
495
67.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4393939393939394
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences49
matches
0"She marked her page, closed"
1"She approached the door, her"
2"Her breath caught in her"
3"She took a deep breath,"
4"He was impeccably dressed, as"
5"His platinum blond hair was"
6"He held his cane, the"
7"he said, his voice a"
8"She stepped aside, allowing him"
9"he commented, turning to face"
10"she snapped, then sighed, running"
11"He leaned against the doorframe,"
12"he interrupted, his voice steady"
13"She remembered the last time"
14"She remembered the hurt, the"
15"she asked, her voice barely"
16"She could feel the old"
17"she asked, her voice steady"
18"His eyes searched hers, and"
19"She thought of the past,"
ratio0.469
41.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences49
matches
0"The doorbell chimed, a shrill"
1"Aurora, engrossed in a book,"
2"Ptolemy, however, twitched an ear"
3"Aurora watched the cat through"
4"That was no ordinary visitor."
5"She marked her page, closed"
6"She approached the door, her"
7"The tall, lean frame, the"
8"Her breath caught in her"
9"She took a deep breath,"
10"Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic"
11"He was impeccably dressed, as"
12"His platinum blond hair was"
13"He held his cane, the"
14"he said, his voice a"
15"Aurora crossed her arms, her"
16"She stepped aside, allowing him"
17"Lucien entered, his gaze sweeping"
18"Books stacked haphazardly, scrolls unfurled"
19"Eva's flat, a cramped one-bedroom"
ratio0.837
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences49
matches
0"Yet, he seemed unfazed, his"
ratio0.02
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She marked her page, closed the book, and stood, her heart pounding a rhythm that echoed the insistent ringing."
1"Yet, he seemed unfazed, his eyes lingering on the books, a small smile playing on his lips."
2"And so, amidst the clutter of Eva's flat, amidst the echoes of the past and the whispers of the future, Aurora and Lucien stood, their hands reaching out, their…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he commented, turning to face her"
1"he interrupted, his voice steady,"
2"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"she asked, her voice steady now"
4"she said, her voice firm"
13.64% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he commented (comment)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
2"he interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.273
79.4980%