Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01FAMN2X2V4J1D8KTHH84

Run Details

Duration:
37.7s
Cost:
$0.003442
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven—a sound so unexpected in the quiet of the flat above Silas' bar that Rory froze with her coffee cup halfway to her lips. Nobody visited her here. Nobody knew where she lived, except Eva, and Eva always texted first. She set the cup down and crossed the small room in three strides, her hand finding the deadbolt she'd installed herself after the incident with Evan. The metallic click seemed too loud in the silence. She pulled the door open. Lucien stood in the hallway, rain dripping from the brim of his charcoal hat, his ivory cane clutched in one gloved hand. The half-light from the stairwell caught his face—the sharp cheekbones, the pale hair slicked back from his forehead, those impossible eyes: one amber, one black as a sealed door. He looked older than she remembered. Or maybe just more tired. "Rory." Her name in his voice undid something in her chest that she'd spent months cementing shut. She made herself lean against the doorframe, arms crossed, a barrier between them. "Lucien. This is a surprise." "It's meant to be." She waited. He didn't elaborate. Rain continued its steady percussion on the window at the end of the hall. Behind her, she heard Ptolemy jump down from the kitchen counter—his usual soundtrack when strangers appeared. "That's your opening line?" She heard the edge in her own voice, the sharpeness she'd promised herself she wouldn't give him. "You're not even going to pretend you were in the neighborhood?" "I was in the neighborhood," he said, and the corner of his mouth twitched—his old, infuriating half-smile, the one that used to make her forget whatever argument they were having. "Aldgate is three blocks away. I walk everywhere." "Bullshit. You take cabs. You told me once that walking was for people who hadn't discovered the pleasures of leather seats." "People change." "Do they?" His gaze dropped to her left wrist, then back to her face. She knew he was looking at the scar—the crescent-shaped mark from when she was nine, when she'd slipped on the wet rocks by the Severn and nearly drowned before her father fished her out. She never told him how she'd gotten it. He never asked. But he'd noticed it that first night at Silas' bar, three years ago, when she'd been new to London and running deliveries for Yu-Fei and trying so hard to disappear into the background of her own life. He'd noticed everything, that night. She'd hated him for it. "Can I come in?" he asked. "No." "Rory." "We talked about this." She heard her voice waver and hated that too. "We talked, and you said you'd handle it, and then you disappeared for four months. Four months, Lucien. Not a word. Not a single—" "I was dealing with my father." The words landed like stones in still water. She went quiet. "The Avaros situation," he continued, his voice flat, practiced—like he'd rehearsed this, like he'd chosen each word to minimize the damage. "It required my presence. There was no way to contact you safely, and even if there had been, you would have insisted on coming, and I couldn't—" "I could have helped." "You were still healing from Evan." He said it gently, which made it worse. "You were starting over. I wasn't going to drag you into hell with me." "You decided that for me." "Yes." The honesty in his voice was the worst part. She stepped back from the door, letting him into the narrow hallway. He moved past her, close enough that she caught the scent of his cologne—something dark and woodsy, expensive, probably French. Of course it was French. She closed the door, but didn't turn around immediately. She needed a moment. The flat was small—just one bedroom, a kitchenette, a bathroom with a door that didn't lock properly. She'd hung curtains over the windows that didn't quite fit, and the radiator made a noise like a dying animal every twenty minutes. It wasn't much, but it was hers. The first thing that had been hers alone in years. "You have a cat now," Lucien observed. "Ptolemy." She turned to face him. He was setting his cane against the wall by the door, removing his hat, running a hand through his hair—the platinum strands falling loose from their careful arrangement. Without the hat and the suit jacket, he looked younger. More like the man she'd first met. "He's a rescue." "He doesn't look like he was rescued. He looks like he owns the place." This was familiar—this easy back-and-forth, the way they'd always slipped into conversation like water finding its level. That was the danger of it. That was why she'd let things get complicated in the first place. She led him into the main room, gesturing vaguely toward the kitchen. "Coffee? I was making some when you interrupted." "No thank you." He remained standing as she poured herself a cup, his eyes moving over the space—the stacks of books on every surface, the takeaway menus pinned to the wall, the small altar she'd made on the windowsill with a candle and a photo of her mother. "You look well." "London agrees with me." "You look happy." She took a long sip of coffee, letting the heat of it burn her tongue. "I'm not unhappy." "That's not what I asked." She set the cup down harder than she meant to. "What do you want, Lucien? Why are you here?" He was quiet for a moment. Then he moved toward her, stopping just out of arm's reach—close enough that she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the slight paleness of his complexion that hinted at his heritage. Half-demon, she'd learned that first night. Half something else entirely, something that made the light bend wrong around him sometimes, something that made his black eye swirl with colors that human eyes weren't meant to see. "I dreamed about you," he said. She laughed—a sharp, unkind sound. "That's your excuse? You had a dream?" "It wasn't a dream. Not the way you mean." His heterochromatic eyes held hers, that impossible amber and black, like two different suns. "In Avaros, dreams are... different. The barrier between thought and reality thins. What I saw—" He stopped, jaw tightening. "It doesn't matter. I'm here now." "It matters to you. That's why you came." "Yes." She turned away, pressing her palms against the counter, steadying herself. This was the problem with Lucien. He never did anything by halves. When he cared, he cared completely, with everything he had—and when he left, he left completely, and she was left to pick up the pieces of a heart she'd never meant to give him in the first place. "Do you remember the night we met?" she asked, not looking at him. "Silas' bar. You were new to London. You'd just started working for Yu-Fei." "You sat down at my table without asking. I was reading, and you said—" She paused, smiling despite herself. "You said, 'That book isn't half as interesting as you're pretending it is.'" "You were reading Montaigne. In a pub. At nine o'clock on a Tuesday." "I was escaping my flat. My ex had just—" She stopped, the old wound still tender after all these years. "You saw that. You saw right through me, and you didn't leave. You just... stayed." "Of course I did." "That's the problem." She finally turned to face him. "You stay, and then you leave. There's no in-between with you. It's either everything or nothing, and I can't—I can't do that again, Lucien. I spent three years with Evan learning what it feels like to be loved conditionally. I won't do it again." Something shifted in his face—the careful mask slipping, just for a moment, revealing something rawer beneath. "I'm not Evan." "I know you're not." "Then what am I?" It was the question she'd been dreading since the door opened. She crossed the room, stopping in front of him, close enough to see the pulse jumping in his throat. Up close, he was all angles and edges—the sharp cut of his jaw, the cool efficiency of his movements, the way he held himself like a man constantly ready for battle. But his eyes were soft, soft in a way he'd never let anyone else see. "You're the one who got away," she said quietly. "That's what you are. And I've spent the last four months trying to be okay with that." "Rory—" "I loved you." The words came out before she could stop them, like water from a cracked dam. "That's the thing I never said. I loved you, and I let you leave anyway, because you asked me to trust you, and I did. I trusted you, and then you were gone, and I had to learn how to live with that." The silence stretched between them, heavy and thick. She watched his throat work, watched him struggle for words—a first, for a man who spoke four languages fluently and could talk his way out of anything. "I loved you too," he said finally. "I still do. That's why I came tonight. That's why I came back." She closed her eyes. His hand found hers—cool fingers, gentle, the barest trace of something otherworldly in his touch. She didn't pull away. "I can't promise it will be easy," he continued. "My father—the situation in Avaros—there's going to be more fallout. More secrets I can't share. More times I'll have to leave without explanation." "Like before." "Not like before." His thumb traced circles on her palm. "Before, I left because I thought I was protecting you. Now I know better. You don't need protecting. You need someone who stays." "Do you? Stay?" "If you'll let me." She opened her eyes. He was watching her with that impossible gaze—amber and black, like dawn and midnight wrapped into a single look. She thought about the scar on her wrist, the one she'd carried since childhood. She thought about the years she'd spent learning to trust herself again after Evan, learning to stand on her own two feet in a city that had tried to swallow her whole. She thought about Lucien—his lies, his secrets, the way he saw her even when she didn't want to be seen. "Okay," she said. "Okay?" "Stay. Tonight, at least. We can figure out the rest tomorrow." He smiled—a real smile, full and unguarded, the kind she'd only seen a handful of times in all the years she'd known him. He pulled her closer, and she let him, pressing her face against his chest, breathing in that familiar dark woodsy scent. Tomorrow would bring questions, complications, the messy work of learning to trust again. But tonight, in the small flat above Silas' bar, with the rain outside and Ptolemy watching from the kitchen doorway, it was enough. It was a beginning.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:45:31.485Z" 2/19/2026, 3:45:31 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.319
leniency0.639
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.056
91.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1855
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count2
highlights
0"gently"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1855
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"familiar"
2"pulse"
3"otherworldly"
4"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1823
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1180
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Evan2
Ptolemy1
Severn1
French2
Lucien4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite fit, and the radiator made a noise like a dying animal every twenty minutes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1823
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean24.31
std22.71
cv0.934
sampleLengths
046
140
262
31
429
55
64
735
832
938
1021
112
122
1394
1410
156
161
171
1837
196
2011
2148
224
2328
245
251
2646
2770
287
2954
3014
3135
3220
3351
344
353
3618
375
3819
3978
406
4112
4248
438
441
4561
4613
4713
4832
4913
97.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"get complicated"
1"was left"
71.79% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs208
matches
0"were having"
1"was looking"
2"was setting"
3"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences21
totalSentences145
ratio0.145
matches
0"The knock came at half past eleven—a sound so unexpected in the quiet of the flat above Silas' bar that Rory froze with her coffee cup halfway to her lips."
1"The half-light from the stairwell caught his face—the sharp cheekbones, the pale hair slicked back from his forehead, those impossible eyes: one amber, one black as a sealed door."
2"Behind her, she heard Ptolemy jump down from the kitchen counter—his usual soundtrack when strangers appeared."
3"\"I was in the neighborhood,\" he said, and the corner of his mouth twitched—his old, infuriating half-smile, the one that used to make her forget whatever argument they were having."
4"She knew he was looking at the scar—the crescent-shaped mark from when she was nine, when she'd slipped on the wet rocks by the Severn and nearly drowned before her father fished her out."
5"\"The Avaros situation,\" he continued, his voice flat, practiced—like he'd rehearsed this, like he'd chosen each word to minimize the damage."
6"He moved past her, close enough that she caught the scent of his cologne—something dark and woodsy, expensive, probably French."
7"The flat was small—just one bedroom, a kitchenette, a bathroom with a door that didn't lock properly."
8"He was setting his cane against the wall by the door, removing his hat, running a hand through his hair—the platinum strands falling loose from their careful arrangement."
9"This was familiar—this easy back-and-forth, the way they'd always slipped into conversation like water finding its level."
10"\"No thank you.\" He remained standing as she poured herself a cup, his eyes moving over the space—the stacks of books on every surface, the takeaway menus pinned to the wall, the small altar she'd made on the windowsill with a candle and a photo of her mother."
11"Then he moved toward her, stopping just out of arm's reach—close enough that she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the slight paleness of his complexion that hinted at his heritage."
12"She laughed—a sharp, unkind sound."
13"When he cared, he cared completely, with everything he had—and when he left, he left completely, and she was left to pick up the pieces of a heart she'd never meant to give him in the first place."
14"Something shifted in his face—the careful mask slipping, just for a moment, revealing something rawer beneath."
15"Up close, he was all angles and edges—the sharp cut of his jaw, the cool efficiency of his movements, the way he held himself like a man constantly ready for battle."
16"She watched his throat work, watched him struggle for words—a first, for a man who spoke four languages fluently and could talk his way out of anything."
17"His hand found hers—cool fingers, gentle, the barest trace of something otherworldly in his touch."
18"He was watching her with that impossible gaze—amber and black, like dawn and midnight wrapped into a single look."
19"She thought about Lucien—his lies, his secrets, the way he saw her even when she didn't want to be seen."
20"He smiled—a real smile, full and unguarded, the kind she'd only seen a handful of times in all the years she'd known him."
97.27% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount603
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.04311774461028192
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.013266998341625208
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean12.57
std9.98
cv0.794
sampleLengths
030
14
212
326
49
55
622
729
86
95
101
1116
1213
135
144
152
163
1714
1816
1921
2011
2130
228
2321
242
252
2612
2734
288
293
3037
315
325
336
341
351
3613
3724
386
398
403
4121
4227
434
4414
4514
465
471
489
4912
41.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.32413793103448274
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Of course it was French."
1"More like the man she'd"
2"Then he moved toward her,"
ratio0.034
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences89
matches
0"She set the cup down"
1"She pulled the door open."
2"He looked older than she"
3"Her name in his voice"
4"She made herself lean against"
5"He didn't elaborate."
6"She heard the edge in"
7"he said, and the corner"
8"His gaze dropped to her"
9"She knew he was looking"
10"She never told him how"
11"He never asked."
12"He'd noticed everything, that night."
13"She'd hated him for it."
14"She heard her voice waver"
15"She went quiet."
16"he continued, his voice flat,"
17"He said it gently, which"
18"She stepped back from the"
19"He moved past her, close"
ratio0.64
38.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences89
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Nobody visited her here."
2"Nobody knew where she lived,"
3"She set the cup down"
4"The metallic click seemed too"
5"She pulled the door open."
6"Lucien stood in the hallway,"
7"The half-light from the stairwell"
8"He looked older than she"
9"Her name in his voice"
10"She made herself lean against"
11"He didn't elaborate."
12"Rain continued its steady percussion"
13"She heard the edge in"
14"he said, and the corner"
15"His gaze dropped to her"
16"She knew he was looking"
17"She never told him how"
18"He never asked."
19"He'd noticed everything, that night."
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He was setting his cane against the wall by the door, removing his hat, running a hand through his hair—the platinum strands falling loose from their careful ar…"
1"Then he moved toward her, stopping just out of arm's reach—close enough that she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the slight paleness of his…"
2"Half something else entirely, something that made the light bend wrong around him sometimes, something that made his black eye swirl with colors that human eyes…"
3"She watched his throat work, watched him struggle for words—a first, for a man who spoke four languages fluently and could talk his way out of anything."
4"She thought about the years she'd spent learning to trust herself again after Evan, learning to stand on her own two feet in a city that had tried to swallow he…"
5"He pulled her closer, and she let him, pressing her face against his chest, breathing in that familiar dark woodsy scent."
59.78% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He stopped, jaw tightening"
1"she asked, not looking at him"
2"She stopped, the old wound still tender after all these years"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he continued (continue)"
1"Lucien observed (observe)"
2"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.153
leniency0.306
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.083
80.5249%