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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01G424R1VHX29SDXGQ9BD
Run Details
Model:
Stealth: Aurora Alpha
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
10.0s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
89.53%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
3.71%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
64.09%
Name drop frequency
(details)
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
67.30%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
97.74%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
41.58%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
80.75%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
11.54%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
66.3188%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The tunnel stretched ahead, a
cathedral of rusted iron and damp plaster.
Neon flickered, throwing amber shadows
across the graffiti‑scarred walls.
Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through
puddles that reflected the faint glow of a sign that read “Veil Market – Entry by Bone Token.” She clutched a thin, cracked bone token in her left hand, the worn leather
watch
on her wrist ticking in a
measured
rhythm.
The smell of ozone and
incense mixed with the metallic tang of fresh blood.
A low murmur rose from
the darkness beyond the archway.
Vendors huddled beneath tarps, eyes
darting as she entered.
The market’s stone floor was
slick with a thin sheen of something that caught the light like liquid glass. In the center, a mannequin‑like figure lay crumpled, its throat slit cleanly, a pool of dark liquid spreading in concentric ripples.
Eva Kowalski stood near the
edge, round glasses catching the
flicker
of a stray spark.
She tucked a curl of
red hair behind her left ear, fingers trembling as she lifted a leather satchel. “The body’s unnatural,”
she muttered, voice low, eyes
scanning
the scene. “No decay, no insect activity. It’s as if the time stopped at the moment of death.”
Quinn crouched, her sharp jaw
set, eyes narrowing.
She ran a gloved hand
over the corpse’s neck, feeling the shallow cut. “A blade, but the wound’s edges are too clean for a human hand,”
she said, voice flat
. “Someone with a steady grip.”
A vendor in a battered
coat lingered, clutching a brass compass that glinted oddly in the dim light.
The compass face bore etched
sigils, its needle trembling as if alive.
Eva reached out, fingers brushing
the cool metal. “The Veil Compass,”
she whispered, a flicker of
recognition crossing her freckled face. “It points to rifts, to portals. It’s humming.”
Quinn lifted her watch, glancing
at the time—midnight, a full moon hidden behind clouds. She turned the compass over, noting the verdigris patina, the subtle
hum that seemed to vibrate against her skin
. “If it points to a rift, why’s it lying here, half‑buried under blood?”
Eva’s glasses slid down her
nose as she leaned closer. “Someone tried to hide it. The sigils are protective, but they’re cracked.” A voice crackled from a nearby stall, a forensic tech named Reed, his eyes flickering between the corpse and the compass. “The blood’s not human. It’s
synthetic
, a tincture of iron oxide and a rare alchemical compound. The victim must have been a conduit.” Quinn stared at the blood, at the way it clung to the floor in
perfect
circles, never spilling beyond a radius of three feet.
She lifted a fragment with
a gloved finger, holding it up to the faint light. The blood didn’t smear; it held shape like wax. “The victim’s blood is too thick, too viscous,”
Reed said, his tone clinical
. “It’s been altered. Someone introduced a stabilizer.” Eva’s
eyes widened
. “A stabilizer… could be from the Market’s banned alchemical substances. A potion to keep the portal open longer.” Quinn’s fingers brushed her leather
watch
, feeling the
familiar
weight
of years of disciplined service.
She stood, scanning the stalls
for a pattern that didn’t belong. A vendor sold cracked bottles of amber liquid, another displayed dusty tomes bound in black leather. The market
seemed to
pulse
,
as if breathing
. She stepped toward the compass, her boot
echoing
on the stone. “If the needle points to a rift, it should be moving,”
she said, voice low
. “It’s still.” The needle
quivered
, then swung, pointing straight ahead, toward a narrow passage hidden behind a
tapestry
of faded posters. The passage was half‑collapsed, a sliver of darkness beyond. Quinn’s eyes
flicked
to Eva, who swallowed, the satchel rustling with the
weight
of books. “Hidden entrance,”
Eva said, voice barely audible
. “A portal to the Veil proper.” Reed frowned. “No portal was reported. The market moves each full moon. It could be a trap.” Quinn’s gaze lingered on the torn edge of a flyer pinned to a wall. The flyer advertised a “Moonlit Auction” for enchanted relics. In the corner, a faint watermark—a crescent moon—
was scratched
out, leaving a jagged scar.
She traced the line with
her fingertip, feeling a faint vibration. “The auction was last night,”
she said, recalling the intel
on the market’s schedule. “Someone stole a relic. The compass is the only thing that can locate the stolen item.” Eva’s shoulders tensed. “If the relic is a portal key, the murderer could have used it to escape. The blood—” “Hushed,”
Quinn interrupted, her voice sharper
. “The victim is not a victim. She’s a conduit. She opened the rift, then was silenced to keep the secret safe.” Reed knelt, examining the floor for footprints. “There are two sets of prints—one human, one… not.”
He pointed to a set
of faint, elongated
prints that seemed to shimmer, as if the surface beneath them were liquid
. “The prints are from a Shade artisan,” Eva said, recalling the lore. “They move through the Veil, leaving a trace of their passage.” Quinn’s
eyes narrowed
. She lifted the compass again, aligning it with the prints. The needle
quivered
, then steadied, pointing directly at the collapsed passage. “The rift is here,”
she declared, voice steady
.
She turned to the vendor
who had been watching from the shadows. The vendor’s eyes
flickered
, a
glint
of fear. “You shouldn’t be here,”
he whispered, voice hoarse
. “The market isn’t meant for eyes like ours.” Quinn’s hand slid to her holster, fingers brushing the grip of her pistol. “Who hired you?” she asked. “Who wants the Veil Compass?” The vendor swallowed, his throat dry. “A man in a coat of midnight blue. He offered a bone token for the compass, said it would ‘guide the lost.’” Eva’s glasses clinked as she adjusted them. “Midnight blue… that’s the description of the Shade artisan’s attire. The one who crafts the compasses.” Quinn’s mind
raced
.
She remembered the case of
DS Morris, his disappearance under a veil of supernatural circumstances. The same unsettling hum, the same faint scent of incense. “Morris’s case,”
she muttered, half to herself
. “He vanished after chasing a lead at the Veil.” Reed stared at the compass, his breath shallow. “If the needle points to a rift, it could be an exit. Or a trap.” Quinn’s gaze shifted to the collapsed passage.
She could see the faint
outline of a doorway beyond the debris, a sliver of
darkness that seemed to swallow light
. She placed the compass on the edge of the passage, the needle pointing straight ahead,
unwavering
. “The rift is active,”
she said, voice low
. “Someone opened it, used it to slip away. The compass was left behind to mislead.” Eva stepped forward, her satchel jingling with the
weight
of ancient tomes. “If we follow the compass, we’ll find the rift. But we need to be careful. The Veil is unstable.” Quinn nodded, her sharp jaw set, eyes feeling the the her weapon. “We’ll go in. Reed, you stay. Document everything. Eva, keep the compass steady.” Reed lifted his notebook, scribbling furiously, his pen scratching against the paper. “I’ll record the coordinates, the blood composition, the prints.”
He paused, eyes flicking to the compass
. “The needle’s movement could be a
beacon
.” Quinn moved toward the passage, stepping over broken glass and scattered trinkets. The air grew colder, the scent of ozone stronger. The compass’s needle glowed faintly, a soft green
light that seemed to pulse with each breath she took
. She turned to Eva, who held the compass with reverence. “What do you know about Shade artisans?”
Quinn asked, voice calm
. Eva’s eyes darted across the pages of a battered notebook tucked inside her satchel. “Shade artisans craft objects attuned to the Veil. They embed protective sigils, but each object carries a fragment of the Veil’s energy. The compass is a guide, but it also marks the location of the rift.” Quinn pressed her palm to the wall, feeling the faint vibration of the Veil beneath the stone. “If the rift is open, we could walk through. Or we could be swallowed.” A distant clang
echoed
, a metal door slamming somewhere deeper in the market. The sound
seemed to
reverberate through the
very
walls. Eva tightened her grip on the compass, the brass cool against her palm. “The market moves each full moon,” Quinn said, recalling the lore. “If the rift is here now, it could be a one‑time window. We need to act.” She glanced at the broken glass near the corpse, the shards catching the faint glow. “The victim’s mouth was sealed,” she observed, “a talisman placed to prevent her from screaming into the Veil. The stabilizer in the blood kept the portal open longer.” Eva’s breath hitched. “If the talisman is removed, the portal will close, collapsing the Veil.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “We’ll pull it out, close the rift, and secure the compass.” She stepped into the passage, the darkness swallowing her silhouette. The compass’s needle spun, then steadied, pointing forward. The passage widened, revealing a vaulted chamber lit by an ethereal glow. In the center, a swirling vortex of midnight blue and violet hovered, a doorway to something beyond. The vortex
pulsed
, a heartbeat of light and shadow. Eva’s glasses reflected the swirl, her freckles catching the glow. “It’s a portal,” she whispered, awe laced with fear. Quinn’s eyes
scanned
the chamber. On a stone pedestal lay a small, obsidian talisman, its surface
etched
with the same sigils as the compass. The talisman glowed faintly,
as if resonating with the vortex
. She moved toward the pedestal, her boots
echoing
on the stone. “If we remove the talisman, the portal will shut,” she said, reaching for the relic. A sudden
chill
brushed the back of her neck. The air rippled, a
whisper
of
voices that seemed to echo from the vortex
. The whispers formed words, half‑heard, “…don’t…break…the…seal…” Quinn’s
eyes narrowed
, her mind recalling the case of her partner, DS Morris. The whispers reminded her of the night he disappeared, the unnatural hum that had followed them. She felt a cold sweat bead on her forehead, but she stayed steady. She lifted the talisman, its
weight
surprising. As she did, the vortex flared, a surge of light that bathed the chamber. The compass’s needle spun faster, its green glow intensifying. Eva gasped, clutching her satchel. “The compass is reacting! It’s trying to align with the rift.” Quinn steadied the talisman, her hand trembling only
slightly
. “We need to seal it. Use the compass as a conduit.” She placed the compass on the pedestal beside the talisman. The brass casing reflected the vortex’s light, the sigils on its face shimmering. The needle pointed directly at the vortex,
as if guiding a path
. The vortex
trembled
, then a tendril of darkness reached toward the compass. The tendril brushed the needle, and the compass emitted a low hum, a
resonance
that
vibrated
through the stone floor. Quinn’s eyes darted to Reed, who stood at the entrance, notebook in hand. He raised his hand, a flash of light from his flashlamp illuminating the scene. “I’m documenting,”
he said, voice steady
. Eva whispered, “If the compass channels the rift’s energy, we can close it.” Quinn nodded, her jaw set. She pressed the talisman into the compass’s casing, the two objects merging with a faint metallic click. The vortex’s glow dimmed, its edges fraying like a
tapestry
unraveling
. A sudden rush of wind surged through the chamber, scattering dust and the
echo
of distant market stalls. The vortex sputtered, then collapsed into a thin veil of mist that drifted to the floor. The compass’s needle steadied, pointing now toward the entrance. The talisman’s surface turned dull, its sigils losing their glow. Quinn stepped back, the leather
watch
on her wrist ticking in time with the dying
pulse
of the Veil. She turned to Eva, who stared at the compass in awe. “We have the compass,”
Eva said, voice trembling
. “We have the evidence.” Quinn glanced at the
shattered
glass, at the blood that no longer glimmered. She lifted her chin, her eyes
scanning
the market beyond the passage. The vendors whispered, eyes wide, the market’s neon signs flickering as if in shock. A voice crackled from the shadows, a low
hum that seemed to come from the very walls
. It was the voice of the market’s unseen keeper, a
reminder
that the Veil never
truly
closed. Quinn’s hand tightened around her pistol, the leather strap of her
watch
creaking. She turned toward the entrance, the compass’s needle pointing the way. The night outside was heavy, the full moon hidden behind clouds, but the market’s secrets lingered like a breath in the stale air. She walked out, the compass humming
softly
, the talisman now a silent
weight
in her satchel. The market’s doors swung shut behind her, the
echo
of the closing portal reverberating through the abandoned tube. Reed lingered at the entrance, his notebook still open, eyes flicking between the compass and the empty passage. “We’ll need to secure the compass,”
he said, voice low
. “It’s a
beacon
for any rift.” Quinn nodded, her gaze fixed on the horizon, the city lights of Camden flickering in the distance. The case had turned a simple homicide into something far more tangled, a web of occult trade and hidden portals. She turned to Eva, who clutched her satchel tighter. “You’ll help me trace the source of the alchemical stabilizer,”
Quinn said, voice firm
. “We’ll find who sold it.” Eva’s eyes lit up, the freckles on her cheeks catching the light. “The archives have records, hidden ledgers. We’ll follow the paper trail.” Quinn’s
watch
ticked, the seconds slipping like grains of sand. She glanced back at the market’s entrance, the faint hum of the Veil still lingering in the air. The night stretched before them, a
tapestry
of streets and shadows. The Veil Market disappeared into the underground, its secrets buried beneath the city’s
pulse
. Quinn slipped the compass into her inner pocket, feeling its
weight
against her spine. She adjusted her leather
watch
, the strap creaking under the motion. They walked away, the distant murmur of the market fading, the compass’s needle pointing toward an unseen future. The case was far from over, but the truth lay in the details the others had missed.
created_at
"2026-02-19T03:45:32.3Z"
2/19/2026, 3:45:32 AM
model
"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
2756
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
9470
tokens_prompt
1149
tokens_completion
3832
native_tokens_prompt
1006
native_tokens_completion
3210
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
0
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"stop"
usage
0
router
(null)
provider_responses
(null)
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771472732-Ay9OAYt90Wg11ecTDOPs"
upstream_id
"gen-1771472732-Ay9OAYt90Wg11ecTDOPs"
total_cost
0
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Stealth"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
29
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
65
tagDensity
0.446
leniency
0.892
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
89.53%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2387
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
2
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"truly"
count
1
3
adverb
"softly"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
1
"slightly"
2
"truly"
3
"softly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2387
totalAiIsms
51
found
0
word
"flickered"
count
2
1
word
"measured"
count
1
2
word
"flicker"
count
2
3
word
"scanning"
count
3
4
word
"etched"
count
2
5
word
"synthetic"
count
1
6
word
"perfect"
count
1
7
word
"familiar"
count
1
8
word
"weight"
count
6
9
word
"pulse"
count
4
10
word
"echoing"
count
2
11
word
"quivered"
count
2
12
word
"tapestry"
count
3
13
word
"flicked"
count
1
14
word
"traced"
count
1
15
word
"glint"
count
1
16
word
"raced"
count
1
17
word
"unwavering"
count
1
18
word
"beacon"
count
2
19
word
"echoed"
count
1
20
word
"pulsed"
count
1
21
word
"scanned"
count
1
22
word
"chill"
count
1
23
word
"whisper"
count
1
24
word
"echo"
count
3
25
word
"trembled"
count
1
26
word
"resonance"
count
1
27
word
"vibrated"
count
1
28
word
"unraveling"
count
1
29
word
"shattered"
count
1
30
word
"reminder"
count
1
highlights
0
"flickered"
1
"measured"
2
"flicker"
3
"scanning"
4
"etched"
5
"synthetic"
6
"perfect"
7
"familiar"
8
"weight"
9
"pulse"
10
"echoing"
11
"quivered"
12
"tapestry"
13
"flicked"
14
"traced"
15
"glint"
16
"raced"
17
"unwavering"
18
"beacon"
19
"echoed"
20
"pulsed"
21
"scanned"
22
"chill"
23
"whisper"
24
"echo"
25
"trembled"
26
"resonance"
27
"vibrated"
28
"unraveling"
29
"shattered"
30
"reminder"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
4
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
3
1
label
"flicker of emotion"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"eyes narrowed"
2
"a flicker of recognition"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
2
narrationSentences
154
matches
0
"d with fear"
1
"s in awe"
3.71%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
7
hedgeCount
8
narrationSentences
154
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
190
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
45
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
2384
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
28
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
64.09%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
69
wordCount
1746
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
1.72
worstName
"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn
30
Kowalski
1
Reed
8
Eva
21
Morris
2
Veil
5
Camden
1
Market
1
persons
0
"Quinn"
1
"Kowalski"
2
"Reed"
3
"Eva"
4
"Morris"
5
"Veil"
6
"Camden"
7
"Market"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.641
windowScore
0.667
0.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
124
glossingSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"hum that seemed to vibrate against her skin"
1
"as if breathing"
2
"prints that seemed to shimmer, as if the surface beneath them were liquid"
3
"darkness that seemed to swallow light"
4
"light that seemed to pulse with each breath she took"
5
"as if resonating with the vortex"
6
"voices that seemed to echo from the vortex"
7
"as if guiding a path"
8
"hum that seemed to come from the very walls"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
2384
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
190
matches
(empty)
67.30%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
73
mean
32.66
std
12.59
cv
0.386
sampleLengths
0
81
1
59
2
61
3
43
4
59
5
46
6
22
7
44
8
48
9
20
10
21
11
50
12
28
13
43
14
13
15
17
16
48
17
30
18
20
19
27
20
37
21
23
22
32
23
36
24
23
25
28
26
23
27
44
28
23
29
44
30
23
31
31
32
25
33
35
34
39
35
21
36
50
37
31
38
35
39
27
40
43
41
15
42
14
43
47
44
28
45
34
46
26
47
29
48
42
49
30
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
154
matches
0
"was scratched"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
314
matches
(empty)
97.74%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
3
semicolonCount
1
flaggedSentences
3
totalSentences
190
ratio
0.016
matches
0
"Quinn lifted her watch, glancing at the time—midnight, a full moon hidden behind clouds."
1
"The blood didn’t smear; it held shape like wax."
2
"In the corner, a faint watermark—a crescent moon—was scratched out, leaving a jagged scar."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1749
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
35
adverbRatio
0.020011435105774727
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.00686106346483705
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
190
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
190
mean
12.55
std
5.75
cv
0.458
sampleLengths
0
12
1
9
2
46
3
14
4
10
5
9
6
19
7
21
8
15
9
19
10
11
11
16
12
8
13
13
14
17
15
5
16
18
17
12
18
8
19
13
20
8
21
14
22
19
23
13
24
10
25
12
26
21
27
23
28
24
29
15
30
9
31
13
32
7
33
3
34
18
35
15
36
11
37
16
38
8
39
11
40
15
41
2
42
19
43
9
44
15
45
7
46
6
47
2
48
15
49
14
41.58%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
16
diversityRatio
0.15263157894736842
totalSentences
190
uniqueOpeners
29
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
150
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
45
totalSentences
150
matches
0
"She tucked a curl of"
1
"she muttered, voice low, eyes"
2
"She ran a gloved hand"
3
"she said, voice flat"
4
"she whispered, a flicker of"
5
"She turned the compass over,"
6
"She lifted a fragment with"
7
"She stood, scanning the stalls"
8
"She stepped toward the compass,"
9
"she said, voice low"
10
"She traced the line with"
11
"she said, recalling the intel"
12
"He pointed to a set"
13
"She lifted the compass again,"
14
"she declared, voice steady"
15
"She turned to the vendor"
16
"he whispered, voice hoarse"
17
"She remembered the case of"
18
"she muttered, half to herself"
19
"She could see the faint"
ratio
0.3
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
145
totalSentences
150
matches
0
"The tunnel stretched ahead, a"
1
"Neon flickered, throwing amber shadows"
2
"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through"
3
"The smell of ozone and"
4
"A low murmur rose from"
5
"Vendors huddled beneath tarps, eyes"
6
"The market’s stone floor was"
7
"Eva Kowalski stood near the"
8
"She tucked a curl of"
9
"she muttered, voice low, eyes"
10
"Quinn crouched, her sharp jaw"
11
"She ran a gloved hand"
12
"she said, voice flat"
13
"A vendor in a battered"
14
"The compass face bore etched"
15
"Eva reached out, fingers brushing"
16
"she whispered, a flicker of"
17
"Quinn lifted her watch, glancing"
18
"She turned the compass over,"
19
"Eva’s glasses slid down her"
ratio
0.967
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
150
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
80.75%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
92
technicalSentenceCount
8
matches
0
"A vendor in a battered coat lingered, clutching a brass compass that glinted oddly in the dim light."
1
"She turned the compass over, noting the verdigris patina, the subtle hum that seemed to vibrate against her skin."
2
"Reed lifted his notebook, scribbling furiously, his pen scratching against the paper."
3
"The brass casing reflected the vortex’s light, the sigils on its face shimmering."
4
"Quinn’s eyes darted to Reed, who stood at the entrance, notebook in hand."
5
"The vortex’s glow dimmed, its edges fraying like a tapestry unraveling."
6
"The vendors whispered, eyes wide, the market’s neon signs flickering as if in shock."
7
"They walked away, the distant murmur of the market fading, the compass’s needle pointing toward an unseen future."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
29
uselessAdditionCount
16
matches
0
"she muttered, voice low, eyes scanning the scene"
1
"she said, voice flat"
2
"she whispered, a flicker of recognition crossing her freckled face"
3
"Reed said, his tone clinical"
4
"she said, voice low"
5
"Eva said, voice barely audible"
6
"Quinn interrupted, her voice sharper"
7
"she declared, voice steady"
8
"she muttered, half to herself"
9
"she said, voice low"
10
"He paused, eyes flicking to the compass"
11
"Quinn asked, voice calm"
12
"he said, voice steady"
13
"Eva said, voice trembling"
14
"he said, voice low"
15
"Quinn said, voice firm"
11.54%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
24
fancyCount
9
fancyTags
0
"she muttered (mutter)"
1
"she whispered (whisper)"
2
"Quinn interrupted (interrupt)"
3
"she declared (declare)"
4
"he whispered (whisper)"
5
"she muttered (mutter)"
6
"she observed (observe)"
7
"she whispered (whisper)"
8
"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
65
tagDensity
0.369
leniency
0.738
rawRatio
0.375
effectiveRatio
0.277
66.3188%