Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01G9JNAEQSB3HEEBFZKHH

Run Details

Duration:
10.8s
Cost:
$0.005092
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the grimy windows of the abandoned Tube station, blurring the world outside into streaks of grey and black. The air inside hung heavy with the damp scent of decay, a metallic tang of old iron, and something else—something acrid, like burnt sugar and ozone. Detective Harlow Quinn, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair still damp from the dash from her unmarked car, stepped over the threshold. Her worn leather watch on her left wrist showed a quarter past midnight. The cavernous space, a forgotten relic beneath Camden’s bustling streets, echoed with the distant drone of the Tube lines still in use. Her gaze swept the scene with military precision. Fluorescent lights, hastily set up by forensics, hummed, casting harsh shadows that distorted the already grim tableau. The crime scene tape, a bright yellow against the dull concrete, wound through a labyrinth of makeshift stalls and overturned crates. This forgotten station, she knew, was the latest rumored location of the Veil Market, a place the Met had chased for years, always one step behind. Detective Miller, a younger officer with an overeager glint in his eyes, walked toward her, a steaming cup of tea clutched in his hand. “Quinn, thought you’d never make it,” Miller said, steam curling around his face. “Pretty grim, huh?” Harlow’s sharp jaw remained unmoving. She didn’t offer a response. Her attention fixed on the centre of the derelict platform. A figure lay sprawled across a display of what looked like antique scientific instruments—brass astrolabes, tarnished silver compasses, and delicate glass phials filled with iridescent liquids. The victim, a man in a tattered trench coat, stared blankly at the vaulted ceiling. His skin held an ash-like pallor, and a faint, sweet smell, like burnt marshmallows, clung to him. “Any ID?” Harlow asked, her voice a low rumble. Miller shook his head, sloshing some tea onto his hand. “Not yet. No wallet, no phone. Looks like they cleaned him out.” He motioned towards a forensics tech carefully bagging a small, elaborately carved wooden box. “Forensics are going through his pockets now. Looks like a robbery gone wrong.” Harlow approached the body, her brown eyes missing nothing. The victim’s hands were splayed, fingers curled inwards as if he had been clutching something. His coat was rumpled, but not torn. No obvious signs of a struggle. She squatted, observing the strange collection of items around him. A small brass compass, etched with unfamiliar symbols, lay half-hidden beneath his arm. Its patina of verdigris caught the pale light. “Robbery?” Harlow straightened, her gaze fixed on something Miller hadn’t noticed. “No broken glass. No overturned furniture. Just a few scattered trinkets.” Miller shrugged, took a sip of tea. “Could be an inside job. Someone knew he was carrying something valuable, probably caught him off guard. Stabbed ‘em, took the goods, left him for dead.” He pointed to a dark, viscous stain spreading beneath the victim’s chest. “One clean hit, straight to the heart.” Harlow remained silent. She knelt again, her brow furrowed. The stain, a deep, almost black red, wasn’t quite right. It bled into the concrete in an unnatural way, absorbing the light rather than reflecting it. No, not a clean hit, not like she had seen a thousand times. There was no splatter, no arterial spray. Just a spreading pool, impossibly dark. “What about the weapon?” she asked, her voice even. Miller gestured vaguely. “We’re still looking. Probably a blade. Quick and quiet.” Harlow studied the victim’s chest. The fabric of his coat was charred, the edges brittle and black. Beneath it, a gaping hole pulsed with that same unnatural darkness. Not a stab wound. Not a blade. She reached out, her gloved fingers hovering above the wound. The air around it felt strangely cold, an icy current in the otherwise stagnant atmosphere. “You’re telling me someone calmly stabbed him through the heart, leaving this… hole, and then just walked away, *after* sorting through his pockets for valuables?” Harlow’s voice held a razor’s edge. “No struggle, no blood trail, nothing disturbed except for this man’s life?” Miller shifted his weight, suddenly looking less confident. “Well, people panic. Make mistakes. Maybe the killer was experienced. Fast.” Harlow’s gaze shifted to the display of unusual items. The brass compass, she noticed, was not pointing north. Its needle, instead, quivered, orienting itself towards the far end of the platform, where a section of the tunnel disappeared into impenetrable darkness. “You said he was cleaned out,” Harlow said, her voice dropping. She picked up a small, silver-filigreed flask next to the body. It felt cold to the touch, too cold, as if it had been plunged in ice water. “But this is still here. And this.” Her fingers brushed against a small, intricately carved bone token lying near the victim’s head, almost hidden in the grime. “And these… whatever they are.” She gestured to the surrounding display. “If this was a robbery, why leave anything?” Miller walked over, peering at the compass. “That’s just junk, Quinn. Probably some old novelty item from this… market. They were probably looking for cash, not dusty old trinkets.” “And the fact that the actual wound is charred, not punctured, doesn’t strike you as odd?” Harlow straightened, her eyes narrowed. She removed a penlight from her pocket and shone it on the edges of the wound. Tiny, almost invisible particles sparkled in the beam, like crushed obsidian. Miller leaned closer, grimacing. “Looks like a burn, yeah. Maybe from the struggle? Or maybe the killer used some kind of… stun gun, something high voltage. Then finished him off with a knife.” “A stun gun that leaves no entry or exit wound, only a perfectly circular, charred hole leading directly to the heart?” Harlow scoffed. “And the victim just stood there for it?” She ran her gloved finger along the scorched fabric. The edges were too neat, too precise for a struggle. She looked around again, letting her eyes sweep the entire platform. The stalls, though makeshift, showed signs of complex craftsmanship. Small amulets carved from bone, vials containing luminous liquids, and strange, archaic texts lay scattered. Not the usual fare for a petty thief. This was a different kind of market. A different kind of crime. Her gaze finally rested on a lone forensic technician, carefully collecting samples from the perimeter of the crime scene, away from the body itself. The man was bagging a cluster of unusual footprints, almost like animal tracks, pressed into a thin layer of dust near an overturned wooden crate. “Miller, what are those?” Harlow pointed with her chin. Miller squinted. “Animal tracks? Probably a stray rat. This place is infested.” “Rats don’t wear boots, Miller.” Harlow walked towards the forensics tech. The prints were distinct, not quite human, but too large for a rat. They bore a strange, almost claw-like pattern at the front, merging into a human-like heel. They were fresh, undisturbed. “Sir,” the tech said, standing up as Harlow approached. “These prints are unusual. Don’t match anything we have on record. And they seem to come from… nowhere, and disappear into nowhere else. Just a few steps, then gone.” Harlow examined the prints closely. They certainly weren’t human. They suggested something large, heavy, yet agile. And the vanishing act interested her. She linked it with the unnatural cold spot, the unique wound, the strange compass, and the esoteric trinkets. This wasn’t a common murder. This was something else. Something she had glimpsed before, a fleeting shadow at the edge of her understanding. She turned back to Miller, her expression unreadable. “A robbery gone wrong, you said.” Miller nodded, his confidence slowly returning. “Makes the most sense, Quinn.” Harlow’s lips formed a tight line. “No. It doesn’t.” Her gaze moved from the inexplicable prints, to the enigmatic wound, to the compass still pointing into the darkness of the tunnel. “Someone didn’t just rob him, Miller. Someone… or something… *took* something from him. Something far more valuable than cash.” She walked toward the compass, its needle still quivering purposefully. She bent down, retrieving it, noting its unusual weight. The sigils etched on its surface felt warm, almost alive, beneath her gloved fingers. She held it flat in her palm, and the needle, after a brief, frantic spin, settled, unwavering, pointing deeper into the abandoned tunnel. “Whatever happened here,” Harlow said, her voice barely a whisper, “it wasn’t human.”
created_at"2026-02-19T03:45:32.476Z" 2/19/2026, 3:45:32 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1402
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"perfectly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1402
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"furrowed"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"quivered"
count1
7
word"complex"
count1
8
word"fleeting"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"enigmatic"
count1
11
word"almost alive"
count1
12
word"unwavering"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"glint"
2"etched"
3"furrowed"
4"pulsed"
5"weight"
6"quivered"
7"complex"
8"fleeting"
9"unreadable"
10"enigmatic"
11"almost alive"
12"unwavering"
13"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1396
ratio0.001
matches
0"after"
1"took"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1044
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Harlow18
Quinn1
Camden1
Veil1
Market1
Met1
Miller12
persons
0"Tube"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Camden"
4"Met"
5"Miller"
places(empty)
globalScore0.638
windowScore0.833
84.21% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like antique scientific instrument"
1"not quite human, but too large for a rat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.716
wordCount1396
matches
0"not quite human, but too large for a rat"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean41.06
std24.32
cv0.592
sampleLengths
0103
172
224
316
478
59
649
768
822
952
1061
119
1212
1360
1443
1519
1641
1785
1829
1948
2033
2150
2255
2349
249
2512
2643
2738
2863
2914
3011
3150
3256
3313
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences96
matches
0"were splayed"
1"was rumpled"
2"was charred"
3"been plunged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was not pointing"
1"was bagging"
91.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences111
ratio0.018
matches
0"The air inside hung heavy with the damp scent of decay, a metallic tang of old iron, and something else—something acrid, like burnt sugar and ozone."
1"A figure lay sprawled across a display of what looked like antique scientific instruments—brass astrolabes, tarnished silver compasses, and delicate glass phials filled with iridescent liquids."
90.67% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1050
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, silver-filigreed flask"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04380952380952381
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01619047619047619
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean12.58
std7.42
cv0.59
sampleLengths
021
126
221
313
422
58
617
721
826
924
1013
113
125
135
1410
1526
1615
1717
189
1910
2026
2113
229
2315
247
256
2610
2713
288
2911
3011
317
3238
337
343
356
3610
3716
3813
397
406
419
423
439
445
4512
4611
474
483
4910
62.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.40540540540540543
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners45
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Just a spreading pool, impossibly"
ratio0.011
79.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences94
matches
0"Her worn leather watch on"
1"Her gaze swept the scene"
2"She didn’t offer a response."
3"Her attention fixed on the"
4"His skin held an ash-like"
5"He motioned towards a forensics"
6"His coat was rumpled, but"
7"She squatted, observing the strange"
8"Its patina of verdigris caught"
9"He pointed to a dark,"
10"She knelt again, her brow"
11"It bled into the concrete"
12"she asked, her voice even"
13"She reached out, her gloved"
14"Its needle, instead, quivered, orienting"
15"She picked up a small,"
16"It felt cold to the"
17"Her fingers brushed against a"
18"She gestured to the surrounding"
19"She removed a penlight from"
ratio0.351
23.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences94
matches
0"Rain lashed against the grimy"
1"The air inside hung heavy"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn, her closely"
3"Her worn leather watch on"
4"The cavernous space, a forgotten"
5"Her gaze swept the scene"
6"The crime scene tape, a"
7"This forgotten station, she knew,"
8"Detective Miller, a younger officer"
9"Miller said, steam curling around"
10"Harlow’s sharp jaw remained unmoving."
11"She didn’t offer a response."
12"Her attention fixed on the"
13"A figure lay sprawled across"
14"The victim, a man in"
15"His skin held an ash-like"
16"Harlow asked, her voice a"
17"Miller shook his head, sloshing"
18"He motioned towards a forensics"
19"Harlow approached the body, her"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Fluorescent lights, hastily set up by forensics, hummed, casting harsh shadows that distorted the already grim tableau."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Harlow asked, her voice a low rumble"
1"Harlow said, her voice dropping"
2"Harlow straightened, her eyes narrowed"
3"Harlow said, her voice barely a whisper,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.0238%