Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01GMZ6KY7NRBFHG30W52Z

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Duration:
7.2s
Cost:
$0.000455

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the hushed quiet of the Richmond Park dawn, Rory, Nyx, and Isolde stood before the ancient oak standing stones, their leaves whispering secrets in the breeze. The air here felt different, charged with an unseen energy that prickled Rory's skin. She glanced at Nyx, their violet eyes reflecting the faint glow of the Heartstone pendant at her throat, and then at Isolde, who seemed to shimmer at the edge of her vision. "Beyond these stones lies the Fae Grove," Isolde said, her voice barely above a whisper, yet carrying a weight that seemed to echo through the trees. "Time moves differently there. An hour within may be but minutes without." Rory took a deep breath, her fingers tracing the crescent scar on her wrist. She had faced the supernatural before, but this... this was different. She could feel it in the way the air hummed, in the way the sunlight seemed to dance just out of reach. She nodded, steeling herself, and stepped through the boundary. The change was immediate. The world shifted, like stepping from a black and white photograph into a vibrant painting. The wildflowers that had been mere splashes of color moments ago now stretched out in a riotous carpet, their scents mingling into a heady perfume. The trees stood taller, their leaves shimmering in hues of gold and silver. And the silence... it was profound, yet not empty. It felt alive, watching, waiting. Nyx followed, their form solidifying as they crossed the threshold. They looked around, their gaze lingering on the luminescent flora. "It's been... a while," they murmured, more to themselves than to the others. Isolde brought up the rear, her silver hair blending with the ethereal light. She smiled, a secretive curve of the lips that held a touch of sadness. "Welcome, mortals," she said, "to the Fae Grove." Rory started walking, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth. She reached out, touching the petals of a flower that seemed to glow from within. It was warm, pulsing with life, and as she touched it, it released a single note, clear and pure, into the air. She looked back at the others, her eyes wide with wonder. "It's... singing," she breathed. Nyx nodded, their voice a soft rustle. "The Fae Grove is alive, Rory. It's aware. It sings to those who listen." They continued deeper into the grove, the air growing cooler, the light softer. Rory could feel the pulse of the place, like a heartbeat echoing in her own chest. She felt alive, every sense heightened, every nerve ending tingling. She felt... seen. Suddenly, Nyx stopped, their form wavering. "Do you feel that?" they asked, their voice barely audible. Rory paused, focusing. There was a... tension in the air, a hum that was almost angry. She nodded, her hand going to the Fae-Forged Blade at her side. "What is it?" Isolde turned, her eyes scanning the grove. "The Fae do not take kindly to uninvited guests," she said, her voice still calm, but there was a warning there. "We should not linger." But Rory was already moving, drawn by something she couldn't quite understand. She heard Nyx call after her, but she ignored them, following the pull. She found herself in a clearing, the air here heavier, darker. And in the center stood a tree, its trunk twisted, its branches bare, its leaves scattered on the ground like bones. Rory approached, her heart pounding in her chest. She could feel the anger now, the pain, the despair. She reached out, her fingers brushing against the rough bark. And then she heard it, a voice like thunder, like the crash of waves, like the howl of a storm. "You dare touch me, mortal?" it roared, the ground shaking with its fury. Rory stumbled back, her heart in her throat. But she didn't run. She stood her ground, her eyes locked onto the tree. "I mean no harm," she said, her voice steady despite the fear coursing through her veins. "I only want to help." The tree seemed to consider her, its branches rustling, its leaves stirring. Then, slowly, it began to change. The bark smoothed, the branches unfurled, the leaves bloomed, until standing before her was a figure, tall and proud, its eyes like storms, its hair like silver fire. "You are brave, mortal," it said, its voice no longer a roar, but a rumble, like distant thunder. "But this place is not for you. Leave now, while you still can." Rory hesitated, then nodded. She turned to leave, but paused, looking back at the figure. "What are you?" she asked, her voice barely a whisper. The figure smiled, a sad, bitter smile. "I am the Winter King," it said. "And I am dying." Rory felt a chill run down her spine, but before she could respond, Nyx was there, their hand on her arm, pulling her away. "We need to go, Rory," they said, their voice urgent. "Now." She nodded, letting Nyx lead her back to the others. As they left the clearing, the air lightened, the tension easing. But Rory couldn't shake the feeling of unease. The Winter King's words echoed in her mind, a chill that seemed to seep into her very bones. They reached the boundary, the ancient oak standing stones looming before them. Rory paused, looking back at the Fae Grove, its wildflowers still singing, its trees still shimmering. Then she stepped through, back into the mundane world, the wonder and unease of the Fae Grove lingering like a dream she couldn't quite remember.
total_cost0.00045479999999999994

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount928
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
3"slowly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount928
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count3
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"profound"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
11
word"wavering"
count1
12
word"tension"
count2
13
word"scanning"
count1
14
word"pounding"
count1
15
word"chill"
count2
16
word"down her spine"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"looming"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"whisper"
2"weight"
3"echo"
4"tracing"
5"could feel"
6"dance"
7"silence"
8"profound"
9"pulse"
10"echoing"
11"wavering"
12"tension"
13"scanning"
14"pounding"
15"chill"
16"down her spine"
17"echoed"
18"looming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
90.28% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences72
matches
0"e with wonder"
1"felt a chill"
2"the feeling of unease"
3.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords927
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount813
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory13
Nyx8
Isolde5
Heartstone1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Winter1
King1
Fae3
Grove2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"King"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae-Forged"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore0.7
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"weight that seemed to echo through the trees"
1"flower that seemed to glow from within"
2"quite understand"
3"chill that seemed to seep into her very bones"
4"quite remember"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount927
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
73.13% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean40.3
std16.36
cv0.406
sampleLengths
073
138
256
371
433
535
663
721
842
916
1031
1132
1257
1348
1413
1543
1646
1731
1825
1918
2035
2147
2253
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences80
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount814
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.0343980343980344
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007371007371007371
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean11.59
std6.81
cv0.587
sampleLengths
027
114
232
326
412
514
68
73
822
99
104
1115
1225
1313
143
156
165
1710
1810
1913
2013
2114
228
2311
2415
2522
2611
274
287
2914
3013
3116
3210
332
341
356
3610
373
383
3910
4012
413
427
4321
444
4512
4613
4711
4821
498
42.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.325
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"Suddenly, Nyx stopped, their form"
1"Then, slowly, it began to"
2"Then she stepped through, back"
ratio0.045
40.90% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences67
matches
0"She glanced at Nyx, their"
1"She had faced the supernatural"
2"She could feel it in"
3"She nodded, steeling herself, and"
4"it was profound, yet not"
5"It felt alive, watching, waiting."
6"They looked around, their gaze"
7"they murmured, more to themselves"
8"She smiled, a secretive curve"
9"She reached out, touching the"
10"It was warm, pulsing with"
11"She looked back at the"
12"They continued deeper into the"
13"She felt alive, every sense"
14"they asked, their voice barely"
15"She nodded, her hand going"
16"she said, her voice still"
17"She heard Nyx call after"
18"She found herself in a"
19"She could feel the anger"
ratio0.448
49.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences67
matches
0"The air here felt different,"
1"She glanced at Nyx, their"
2"Isolde said, her voice barely"
3"Rory took a deep breath,"
4"She had faced the supernatural"
5"this was different."
6"She could feel it in"
7"She nodded, steeling herself, and"
8"The change was immediate."
9"The world shifted, like stepping"
10"The wildflowers that had been"
11"The trees stood taller, their"
12"it was profound, yet not"
13"It felt alive, watching, waiting."
14"Nyx followed, their form solidifying"
15"They looked around, their gaze"
16"they murmured, more to themselves"
17"Isolde brought up the rear,"
18"She smiled, a secretive curve"
19"Rory started walking, her boots"
ratio0.821
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air here felt different, charged with an unseen energy that prickled Rory's skin."
1"She glanced at Nyx, their violet eyes reflecting the faint glow of the Heartstone pendant at her throat, and then at Isolde, who seemed to shimmer at the edge o…"
2"The wildflowers that had been mere splashes of color moments ago now stretched out in a riotous carpet, their scents mingling into a heady perfume."
3"Rory started walking, her boots sinking slightly into the soft earth."
4"The tree seemed to consider her, its branches rustling, its leaves stirring."
5"The Winter King's words echoed in her mind, a chill that seemed to seep into her very bones."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"they murmured, more to themselves than to the others"
1"they asked, their voice barely audible"
2"it roared, the ground shaking with its fury"
3"she said, her voice steady despite the fear coursing through her veins"
4"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
5"they said, their voice urgent"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"it roared (roar)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
70.0604%