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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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The brass knob turned, and the door swung inward. Aurora’s hand froze on the half‑filled take‑out bag, a steaming parcel of duck noodles from Yu‑Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress. She stared at the figure framed by the doorway: sleek charcoal coat, ivory‑handled cane glinting under the dim bulb, amber eye flashing against a black pupil. Lucien stepped past the threshold, his gaze sweeping the cramped room. “You’ve been expecting me?” he asked, voice low, a faint accent slipping from his French‑touched English. Aurora’s breath hitched, the scar on her left wrist prickling as if the old accident had resurfaced. “You’re not exactly subtle,” she replied, sliding the bag onto the kitchen counter. “What brings the Frenchman to my doorstep at two‑o’clock?” He lowered his cane, the blade hidden beneath, and rested a gloved hand on the edge of the table. “A message. A warning.” He glanced at the stack of research notes spilling from a battered notebook, the ink smudged by countless late‑night scribbles. “Your friend Eva asked me to deliver this.” Aurora’s eyes flicked to the coffee on the table, a half‑filled mug of herbal tea, its steam curling in the stale air. “She never sends messengers.” She crossed her arms, the scar catching the light, a crescent moon on her skin. “What’s the message?” Lucien pulled a folded parchment from his coat pocket, the paper brittle, the ink a dark, hurried script. “Someone is moving a relic through the East End. You’re the only one who can intercept it before it reaches the Avaros market.” She snorted, laughter bubbling despite the tension. “You think I’ll just drop my deliveries and chase a demon‑infested artifact? I have a shift at the restaurant tomorrow.” He stepped closer, the cane tapping a rhythm on the wooden floor. “You have a talent for finding the impossible. And you still have that scar. The one you thought you’d left behind.” His voice softened, a note of something unspoken threading through the words. Aurora’s hand tightened around the bag, knuckles white. “You always knew how to push my buttons.” She forced a smile, but the edge of the lips trembled. “What do you want, Lucien? Redemption? Or are you just here for the drama?” He chuckled, a dry sound that seemed to echo off the brick walls. “Redemption is a distant cousin of mine. I’m here because you owe me.” He gestured toward the scar, his amber eye narrowing. “You promised you’d never let that mark be used as leverage again.” The words struck a chord. Aurora’s mind raced to the night when she had fled Evan, the bruises on her arms, the whispered threats that had chased her through the back alleys of Cardiff. She had thought the scar was a reminder of weakness. Now it felt like a badge of survival. “Fine,” she said, voice steadier. “I’ll help you. But only because I don’t trust anyone else with this.” She slid the parchment across the table, the paper crinkling under her palm. Lucien picked it up, his black eye scanning the symbols. “The coordinates point to a warehouse behind the Old Spitalfields market. Midnight. They’ll be moving it in a crate marked ‘Antiques.’” She glanced at the clock on the wall, its hands ticking past midnight. “I have a delivery to finish. I can’t just abandon it.” He placed a gloved hand lightly on her wrist, the scar feeling the faint pulse of her pulse. “You can. We’ll make a trade. I’ll give you the information you need to expose the syndicate that cornered you in Cardiff. In exchange, you retrieve the relic and bring it back to me.” Aurora’s eyes hardened, the blue depth reflecting a storm of thoughts. “You think I’m still that naïve girl who believes a demon can be bought with a promise?” Lucien’s smile was thin, almost cruel. “I never said you were naïve. I said you were clever. And clever people survive.” She shoved the bag of noodles into the fridge, the cold whispering against the plastic. “I’m not doing this for you.” She grabbed her leather jacket, the snap of the zipper echoing in the small space. “I’m doing this for the people who can’t fight back.” Silas’s bar below roared with a sudden clamor, glasses clinking, a laugh spilling up the stairs. Aurora paused, the sound cutting through the tension. “You hear that?” She turned to Lucien, her voice low. “My neighbour’s bar is about to lose its mind. If we’re late, the whole block will be in chaos.” Lucien’s cane tapped a quick, impatient rhythm. “Then we move faster.” He slipped the cane from his hand, revealing the thin blade, its steel glinting like a promise. “Ready?” She nodded, the scar on her wrist catching the dim light, a silent testament to the past. “Let’s go.” The two slipped out of the flat, the hallway swallowing them in its narrow darkness. The stairwell smelled of stale beer and fried fish, the hum of conversation drifting from below. Aurora’s sneakers squeaked against the worn carpet as she hurried, her mind already mapping the route to Spitalfields. Lucien led the way, his cane tapping a steady beat that matched the thudding of her heart. “You know the back alley behind the market?” he whispered. “It’s a shortcut. The guards never patrol there because they think it’s a dead end.” She glanced at him, the amber eye catching the faint glow of a streetlamp through the cracked window. “You always know the shortcuts.” He smirked, a flicker of something dark and playful in his gaze. “Someone has to keep you from walking into a trap.” They emerged onto the cobbled street, the night alive with the scent of fried dough and distant sirens. The market’s neon signs flickered, casting an eerie glow on the wet pavement. A vendor shouted the obscure fresh fish, his voice a ragged echo. “Half‑price herrings!” he cried. Aurora’s stomach growled, the memory of the duck noodles tugging at her mind. She pressed a hand to her stomach, the hunger a brief distraction from the danger ahead. Lucien’s cane brushed against a low wall, the hidden blade humming softly. “Stay close.” He gestured toward a narrow passage between two warehouses, the door half‑ajar. “The crate will be here soon. We need to be ready to act when the guards arrive.” She slipped into the shadows, the cold wind biting her cheeks. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder of the accident that had once left her helpless. Now it pulsed with purpose. A rustle of fabric, the click of boots—two men in dark coats stepped out of the warehouse, their faces hidden beneath hoods. One carried a clipboard, the other a small, intricately carved box that seemed to pulse with a faint, violet light. Lucien’s voice cut through the silence. “Hold it.” He lunged, the blade flashing in a swift arc. The black‑eyed guard tried to draw his weapon, but Lucien’s cane deflected it with a clatter of metal. Aurora seized the moment, her hand darting to the box. She lifted it, feeling the strange hum vibrate through her fingertips. The scar on her wrist flared, a warm pulse that seemed to sync with the relic’s energy. The other guard lunged, a knife glinting in his hand. Aurora twisted, her body moving on instinct, the bag of noodles forgotten on the floor of her flat. She slipped the knife from his grasp, the metal cold against her skin. “You’re too late,” she whispered, her voice low and fierce. Lucien’s amber eye met hers, a flash of something unreadable crossing his gaze. “You’ve grown.” He pressed the hidden blade against the guard’s throat, the steel biting into flesh. “Stay down.” The guard’s eyes widened, breath shallow. “Please…” Lucien’s voice hardened. “You’ll tell us who sent the relic, or I’ll make you wish you’d never left your mother’s kitchen.” His words were a whisper, but the threat hung heavy in the night air. The guard swallowed, his knuckles white. “The order… the Order of the Black Sun… they want it for a ritual. They’ll sell it to the highest bidder.” Aurora’s heart hammered, the scar on her wrist tingling with the relic’s energy. “They’ll kill anyone who gets in their way.” She turned to Lucien, the box cradled against her chest. “We need to get this back to the Empress. It’s the only place they can safeguard it.” Lucien nodded, his cane tapping a rhythm that matched the thudding of their combined breaths. “We’ll move fast.” He turned, his coat flapping as he slipped back into the shadows. A sudden crash echoed from the market stalls. A barrel of fish toppled, spraying oil across the cobbles. The noise drew the attention of the market’s watchmen, their lanterns swinging wildly. Aurora cursed under her breath. “We’re out of time.” She tucked the relic into her jacket, the scar on her wrist still pulsing. “Come on.” She grabbed Lucien’s arm, his cane held tightly in his grip. They sprinted down the narrow lane, the watchmen’s shouts growing louder, the clatter of boots beating a frantic rhythm. The alley opened onto a busy street, the neon lights bathing the scene in a garish glow. A cab screeched to a halt, the driver’s eyes wide as he took in the frantic duo. “Get in!” the driver shouted, his voice hoarse. Aurora hesitated, the scar’s sting reminding her of the danger. She glanced at Lucien, his amber eye flickering with a mix of urgency and something softer, almost yearning. He gave a small nod, the tip of his cane touching her wrist lightly, a silent promise. She dove into the cab, the door slamming shut behind her. The driver slammed the accelerator, the cab lurching forward, the city lights blurring into streaks of colour. In the back seat, Lucien’s cane rested against the seat, the hidden blade now visible, a glint of steel. “We’re not safe yet.” He said, his voice low. “The Order will send more. They’ll track the relic.” Aurora pressed her forehead against the glass, the city’s roar muffled by the rain that began to fall in sheets. “I can’t keep running from my past.” She whispered, the scent of wet pavement drifting in. “I can’t keep being the one who hides.” Lucien turned his head, his black eye meeting hers. “You’re not hiding. You’re fighting.” He placed a gloved hand over her scar, the touch warm, almost tender. “You’re stronger than you think.” The cab hit a pothole, the jolt sending a shiver through her spine. The scar tingled, a reminder of the accident that had once left her helpless. Now it pulsed with purpose. A siren wailed in the distance, the sound growing louder. The cab turned a corner, the street narrowing into a dark, deserted alleyway. The driver glanced back, eyes wide. “Where are we going?” he asked, his voice trembling. Lucien’s gaze hardened. “To a place where the Order can’t follow.” He slipped the cane from his hand, the hidden blade catching the light. “To a place where we can decide what to do with this.” He tapped the relic against his palm, the violet glow flickering. Aurora’s breath hitched, the scar on her wrist throbbing in sync with the relic’s pulse. “What if they find us?” she asked, fear lacing her voice. He smiled, a thin, dangerous curve. “Then we’ll fight them together.” His amber eye glinted with an unspoken promise, a promise that stretched back to the night they first met, the night the scar had been inflicted, the night the words “I love you” had never been spoken. The cab screeched to a halt against a rusted door, the driver’s hands shaking. “This is as far as I go,” he said, stepping out into the rain, his silhouette disappearing into the night. Lucien opened the door, the rain splashing onto the pavement. “Stay close,” he whispered, his voice barely audible over the storm. Aurora stepped out, the rain soaking her black hair, the scar on her wrist glistening like a dark star. She looked up at the building, the faded sign above the door reading “The Empress.” The faint glow from within promised safety, but also danger. “Ready?” Lucien asked, his cane now a silent sentinel at his side. She nodded, the scar pulsing, a reminder of the past and a beacon for the future. “Let’s go.” They entered the dimly lit interior, the smell of incense and old wood filling the air. A figure emerged from the shadows, a tall woman with silver hair, her eyes sharp as daggers. She turned, her gaze landing on Aurora’s scar. “Carter,” she said, voice cool as marble. “You’re late.” Aurora swallowed, the tension coiling in her throat. “I’m not alone.” She gestured to Lucien, his cane now resting against the floor, the hidden blade glinting in the low light. The woman’s lips curled into a faint smile. “The Frenchman, huh? I’ve heard whispers.” She stepped closer, her gaze flickering between the two of them. “You both have a lot to answer for.” A sudden crash echoed from the back of the room, a heavy wooden crate slamming to the floor. The violet light from the relic surged, flooding the room with an eerie glow. The air crackled, the scent of ozone mingling with the incense. The woman’s eyes widened, a flash of panic crossing her features. “What have you done?” she hissed. Lucien’s hand moved to his cane, the blade humming with a low, menacing tone. “We’ve taken what belongs to no one.” He stepped forward, the rain from the night outside dripping onto the floor, forming a small puddle that reflected the violet glow. “Now, we decide its fate.” Aurora felt the scar on her wrist flare, a surge of power that seemed to echo the relic’s hum. She reached for the box, her fingers closing around it, the energy coursing through her veins. The woman lunged, a dagger flashing in the dim light. Lucien blocked the strike with his cane, the hidden blade slicing through the air, a thin line of steel. “You won’t stop us,” he snarled, his voice low and dangerous. Aurora’s eyes narrowed, the blue intensity of them matching the relic’s glow. “We’re not here to bargain.” She lifted the box, the violet light pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat. “We’re here to end this.” The woman’s hand trembled, the dagger slipping from her grasp. She stumbled back, a gasp escaping her lips. “You… you don’t understand.” The words died on her tongue as the room began to shake, the walls trembling under the force of the relic’s power. A sudden, deafening crack echoed through the building, the floorboards groaning. The lights flickered, the shadows dancing like restless spirits. The air grew colder, the scent of iron rising from the floor. Lucien’s eyes flashed amber, his voice a low rumble. “We have to move.” He grabbed Aurora’s arm, his grip firm, the scar on her wrist tingling under his touch. “Now, before the whole place collapses.” Aurora glanced at the woman, whose eyes were wide with terror. “What are you doing?” she asked, voice shaking. The woman’s lips moved, but no sound emerged. She clutched at her chest, a faint, dark ooze seeping from her pores, staining her robes. The violet light intensified, the relic humming louder, a low, resonant tone that seemed to shake the very foundations of the building. A sudden, blinding flash erupted from the relic, the light exploding outward like a wave. The room filled with a deafening roar, the sound of glass shattering, wood splintering, and something ancient breaking free. Lucien shoved Aurora toward the exit, his cane slamming into the wall, sending a spray of dust into the air. “Run!” he shouted, his voice cutting through the chaos. Aurora sprinted, the scar on her wrist blazing, the violet glow of the relic still clutched in her hand. She burst through the heavy wooden doors, the night rain pelting her face, the world beyond a blur of darkness and water. She turned, expecting to see Lucien beside her, but the doorway was empty. The rain hammered the pavement, the sound of distant sirens rising in the night. A cold wind whistled through the alley, carrying a faint, metallic scent. Aurora stopped, heart pounding, the relic’s glow fading to a dim ember in her palm. She pressed the scar against the box, feeling the faint tremor of power still coursing through her skin. A shadow moved at the far end of the alley, a figure cloaked in darkness, the faint outline of a cane visible. The silhouette stepped forward, the rain catching on the polished metal of the hidden blade. The figure raised a hand, the rain dripping from his fingertips, and a low, guttural laugh echoed from the void behind him. “You think you can escape?” the voice hissed, a mixture of human and something older, more primal. Aurora’s breath caught, the scar on her wrist burning brighter. She clenched the relic tighter, the violet light flaring once more, casting an eerie glow on the wet cobbles. The shadow lunged, the cane snapping forward, the hidden blade flashing in a deadly arc. Aurora twisted, feeling the weight of the relic’s power surge through her. The blade met the relic, a spark of violet and steel exploding in a flash of light that illuminated the alley with a blinding intensity. The world seemed to hold its breath. The rain fell in slow, heavy droplets, the night air humming with an unseen force. Aurora’s eyes widened, the scar on her wrist pulsing like a beating heart. In that instant, a scream tore through the night, a scream that wasn’t hers, a scream that seemed to come from the very walls of the city. The shadow recoiled, the cane clattering to the ground, the hidden blade embedded in the stone. A sudden tremor shook the alley, the ground cracking beneath the feet of the two figures. The violet light from the relic surged, a wave of energy that rolled outward, swallowing the darkness. Aurora felt the power surge through her, the scar on her wrist flaring, the violet light erupting in a brilliant flash. The sound of shattering glass, of splintering wood, of a distant bell tolling echoed in the night. The shadow vanished, the cane clattering to the pavement, the hidden blade lying still. The rain fell harder, the night air thick with the scent of ozone and wet stone. Aurora stood, breath ragged, the relic’s glow dimming to a faint pulse in her hand. She looked down at the scar, its light fading, the violet light pulsing in her palm. She heard a soft, breathy voice behind her, a whisper that seemed to come from the very shadows. “You think you’ve won?” the voice hissed, a promise of more danger. Lucien’s silhouette emerged from the darkness, his coat drenched, the cane clutched in his hand. His amber eye met hers, a flicker of something fierce and tender. He stepped forward, the rain dripping from his coat, his voice low. “We’re not out of this yet.” Aurora’s grip tightened on the relic, the scar on her wrist searing with a fresh, fierce heat. The night seemed to close in, the rain pounding the cobbles, the distant sirens wailing. A sudden, deafening crack echoed from the street, a building across the way collapsing in a cloud of dust and ash. The ground trembled, the air filled with a low, guttural hum. Lucien’s hand brushed her wrist, the scar flaring, the violet light surging. “We have to move,” he said, his voice urgent, his eyes scanning the darkness. Aurora glanced at the relic, its glow wavering, the scar on her wrist still burning. The night stretched before them, a tapestry of rain, shadows, and unseen threats. She turned toward the alley’s end, the sound of distant footsteps echoing behind her. A figure emerged from the gloom, a tall, gaunt silhouette clutching a pistol, the barrel glinting in the rain. The figure raised the gun, the click of the trigger echoing like a promise of death. The night seemed to freeze, the rain hanging in the air like a veil. Aurora’s heart hammered, the scar on her wrist flaring, the relic’s violet light pulsing in a rhythm that matched her breath. She lifted the relic, the violet glow intensifying, casting a strange, eerie illumination across the alley. The gaunt figure stared, his eyes wide, the pistol trembling in his grasp. “What… what is that?” he whispered, his voice barely audible over the storm. Lucien stepped forward, his cane now a weapon, the hidden blade glinting. “It’s your end,” he said, his voice low, the sound of the rain merging with his words. The gaunt figure’s hand shook, the pistol firing a single, deafening shot. The bullet whizzed through the night, striking the relic. A burst of violet light erupted, the shockwave rippling outward, sending the gaunt figure flying backward, his body slamming into the wall, the pistol exploding in a spray of sparks and rain. The alley filled with a blinding flash, the violet light expanding, the scar on Aurora’s wrist shining brighter than ever. The world seemed to tilt, the rain turning to ice, the night turning to darkness as a low, resonant hum rose from the ground. Aurora felt the power surge, the relic’s energy coursing through her, the scar on her wrist pulsing in sync. She heard a voice, a whisper that seemed to come from the very walls of the city: “You cannot hide what you are.” Lucien’s amber eye reflected the violet light, his hand gripping the cane, the hidden blade shimmering. “We’ll see about that,” he muttered, his voice a promise and a threat. The violet light surged, the alley shaking, the rain turning to a torrent of phosphorescent droplets. The ground cracked, a fissure opening beneath the gaunt figure, swallowing him whole. Aurora stared at the opening, the relic glowing, the scar on her wrist throbbing. The night was alive with an electric tension, the sound of distant sirens, the taste of copper on her tongue. A sudden, deafening roar rose from the depths of the fissure, a sound that seemed to shake the city’s very soul. The sky above flickered, a flash of violet light racing across the heavens. Lucien turned to her, his face half‑shadowed, his voice barely a whisper. “We have to—” Before he could finish, the fissure widened, a vortex of violet energy spiralling upward, sucking the relic, the scar, and the very air with it. The ground trembled, the rain turning into a vortex of liquid light. Aurora felt the pull, the relic’s power dragging her toward the vortex, the scar on her wrist burning hotter than ever. She reached out, her fingers brushing the edge of the vortex, the violet light luring her. A sudden hand clamped over her wrist, the scar’s pulse matching the vortex’s rhythm. Lucien’s grip was fierce, his amber eye burning with an intensity that seemed to pierce the darkness. “Don’t—” she gasped, the words lost in the roar of the vortex. Lucien’s voice cut through the chaos, his words a low, urgent whisper. “Hold on!” The vortex erupted, a blinding flash of violet light consuming everything, the night, the rain, the alley, the city itself. The world seemed to pause, the sound of the storm, the scent of ozone, the taste of fear hanging in the air. And then— The light faded, the vortex collapsed, leaving a stunned silence. Aurora lay on the wet cobbles, the scar on her wrist a faint, glowing ember, the relic gone, the night silent except for the distant drip of rain. Lucien knelt beside her, his breath ragged, his cane clattering against the stone. He looked into her eyes, the amber meeting the bright blue, a flash of something unspoken passing between them. “Are you alright?” he asked, his voice barely more than a whisper. Aurora pushed herself up, the scar on her wrist still faintly glowing, the pain of the vortex lingering like a phantom. She stared at the empty space where the relic had been, the night around her still trembling with unseen forces. She heard a low, guttural laugh echo from the shadows, a sound that promised more danger, more secrets, more blood. The night was far from over. The city held its breath, waiting for the next move, the next clash, the next revelation. Aurora’s hand brushed her scar, the ember flaring, a promise of fire, of fight, of a destiny she could no longer ignore. The rain fell harder, the streetlights flickered, and a distant siren wailed, a note that seemed to herald the arrival of something far worse than any of them could imagine. She stood, the scar pulsing, the night around her alive with a new, terrifying energy. Lucien’s cane clinked against his boot as he rose, his eyes never leaving hers, the hidden blade glinting in the dim light. A sudden, deafening crash echoed from the far end of the street, a building collapsing in a cloud of dust and ash. The ground trembled, the air filled with a low, resonant hum. Aurora’s breath caught, the scar on her wrist flaring brighter than ever, the violet light of the relic still lingering in the air, a phantom promise. She turned, the alley behind her a dark maw, the night ahead a storm of unseen dangers. The city held its breath, the rain a relentless tide, the night a tapestry of shadows and light. And in that moment, as the world seemed to tilt, a figure emerged from the darkness, a tall silhouette with a silver mask, eyes like black pits. The figure lifted a hand, the air crackling with unseen power. Aurora’s heart hammered, the scar on her wrist igniting, the violet light flaring in a surge of raw, unbridled energy. Lucien stepped forward, his cane now a weapon, the hidden blade humming. The masked figure smiled, a cold, cruel curve, and whispered, “You cannot escape what you are.” The night erupted.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags57
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences93
tagDensity0.613
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4359
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count6
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
2"tightly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4359
totalAiIsms93
found
0
word"glinting"
count7
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"tension"
count4
3
word"unspoken"
count3
4
word"trembled"
count5
5
word"echo"
count4
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count4
8
word"scanning"
count2
9
word"pulse"
count7
10
word"echoing"
count3
11
word"testament"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count2
13
word"flickered"
count4
14
word"stomach"
count2
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"pulsed"
count2
17
word"silence"
count2
18
word"unreadable"
count1
19
word"whisper"
count6
20
word"echoed"
count7
21
word"yearning"
count1
22
word"lurching"
count1
23
word"glint"
count1
24
word"glistening"
count1
25
word"sentinel"
count1
26
word"beacon"
count1
27
word"marble"
count1
28
word"intensity"
count3
29
word"dancing"
count1
30
word"pounding"
count2
31
word"weight"
count1
32
word"searing"
count1
33
word"wavering"
count1
34
word"tapestry"
count2
35
word"footsteps"
count1
36
word"gloom"
count1
37
word"electric"
count1
38
word"depths"
count1
39
word"racing"
count1
40
word"maw"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"flicked"
2"tension"
3"unspoken"
4"trembled"
5"echo"
6"raced"
7"reminder"
8"scanning"
9"pulse"
10"echoing"
11"testament"
12"flicker"
13"flickered"
14"stomach"
15"throbbed"
16"pulsed"
17"silence"
18"unreadable"
19"whisper"
20"echoed"
21"yearning"
22"lurching"
23"glint"
24"glistening"
25"sentinel"
26"beacon"
27"marble"
28"intensity"
29"dancing"
30"pounding"
31"weight"
32"searing"
33"wavering"
34"tapestry"
35"footsteps"
36"gloom"
37"electric"
38"depths"
39"racing"
40"maw"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count4
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences264
matches
0"e with terror"
34.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount20
narrationSentences264
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences300
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0.003
matches
0"Aurora’s hand froze on the half‑filled take‑out bag, a steaming parcel of duck noodles from Yu‑Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4358
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions45
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions88
wordCount3701
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
English1
Aurora43
Lucien37
Evan1
Cardiff1
Silas1
Spitalfields1
persons
0"Cheung"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Spitalfields"
globalScore0.919
windowScore0.667
29.52% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences249
glossingSentenceCount12
matches
0"sound that seemed to echo off the brick walls"
1"felt like a badge of survival"
2"box that seemed to pulse with a faint, violet light"
3"pulse that seemed to sync with the relic’s energy"
4"power that seemed to echo the relic’s hum"
5"tone that seemed to shake the very foundations of the building"
6"scream that seemed to come from the very walls of the city"
7"whisper that seemed to come from the very shadows"
8"whisper that seemed to come from the very walls of the city"
9"sound that seemed to shake the city’s very soul"
10"intensity that seemed to pierce the darkness"
11"note that seemed to herald the arrival of something far worse than any of them could imagine"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount4358
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences300
matches(empty)
59.51% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs135
mean32.28
std11.57
cv0.358
sampleLengths
054
127
239
351
444
541
627
745
841
947
1052
1131
1231
1324
1452
1528
1621
1746
1853
1929
2019
2149
2242
2323
2422
2543
2633
2743
2833
2942
3035
3138
3251
3331
347
3535
3627
3748
3830
3931
4036
4153
428
4345
4428
4537
4644
4732
4832
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences264
matches
0"been inflicted"
1"been spoken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs580
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences300
ratio0.007
matches
0"A rustle of fabric, the click of boots—two men in dark coats stepped out of the warehouse, their faces hidden beneath hoods."
1"And then—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3702
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.016477579686655863
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.0035116153430578066
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences300
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences300
mean14.53
std6.37
cv0.439
sampleLengths
09
119
226
311
416
517
613
79
819
924
108
1122
1219
133
1418
1523
167
1720
1812
1933
208
2119
2214
2313
2422
2512
265
2729
2810
298
305
3126
3210
3321
3413
3511
3618
3734
3811
3917
406
4115
4215
4321
4410
4516
468
4710
4819
497
40.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.13333333333333333
totalSentences300
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences260
matches(empty)
ratio0
78.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount92
totalSentences260
matches
0"She stared at the figure"
1"he asked, voice low, a"
2"she replied, sliding the bag"
3"He lowered his cane, the"
4"He glanced at the stack"
5"She crossed her arms, the"
6"She snorted, laughter bubbling despite"
7"He stepped closer, the cane"
8"His voice softened, a note"
9"She forced a smile, but"
10"He chuckled, a dry sound"
11"He gestured toward the scar,"
12"She had thought the scar"
13"she said, voice steadier"
14"She slid the parchment across"
15"She glanced at the clock"
16"He placed a gloved hand"
17"She shoved the bag of"
18"She grabbed her leather jacket,"
19"She turned to Lucien, her"
ratio0.354
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount252
totalSentences260
matches
0"The brass knob turned, and"
1"Aurora’s hand froze on the"
2"She stared at the figure"
3"Lucien stepped past the threshold,"
4"he asked, voice low, a"
5"Aurora’s breath hitched, the scar"
6"she replied, sliding the bag"
7"He lowered his cane, the"
8"He glanced at the stack"
9"Aurora’s eyes flicked to the"
10"She crossed her arms, the"
11"Lucien pulled a folded parchment"
12"She snorted, laughter bubbling despite"
13"He stepped closer, the cane"
14"His voice softened, a note"
15"Aurora’s hand tightened around the"
16"She forced a smile, but"
17"He chuckled, a dry sound"
18"He gestured toward the scar,"
19"The words struck a chord."
ratio0.969
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences260
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
1"Now it pulsed with purpose."
2"Now it pulsed with purpose."
3"Before he could finish, the"
ratio0.015
32.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences175
technicalSentenceCount27
matches
0"Aurora’s breath hitched, the scar on her left wrist prickling as if the old accident had resurfaced."
1"Aurora’s mind raced to the night when she had fled Evan, the bruises on her arms, the whispered threats that had chased her through the back alleys of Cardiff."
2"Lucien led the way, his cane tapping a steady beat that matched the thudding of her heart."
3"One carried a clipboard, the other a small, intricately carved box that seemed to pulse with a faint, violet light."
4"Lucien nodded, his cane tapping a rhythm that matched the thudding of their combined breaths."
5"They sprinted down the narrow lane, the watchmen’s shouts growing louder, the clatter of boots beating a frantic rhythm."
6"Aurora stepped out, the rain soaking her black hair, the scar on her wrist glistening like a dark star."
7"Aurora felt the scar on her wrist flare, a surge of power that seemed to echo the relic’s hum."
8"She reached for the box, her fingers closing around it, the energy coursing through her veins."
9"She clutched at her chest, a faint, dark ooze seeping from her pores, staining her robes."
10"The violet light intensified, the relic humming louder, a low, resonant tone that seemed to shake the very foundations of the building."
11"Lucien shoved Aurora toward the exit, his cane slamming into the wall, sending a spray of dust into the air."
12"Aurora stopped, heart pounding, the relic’s glow fading to a dim ember in her palm."
13"The blade met the relic, a spark of violet and steel exploding in a flash of light that illuminated the alley with a blinding intensity."
14"Aurora felt the power surge through her, the scar on her wrist flaring, the violet light erupting in a brilliant flash."
15"She looked down at the scar, its light fading, the violet light pulsing in her palm."
16"Aurora glanced at the relic, its glow wavering, the scar on her wrist still burning."
17"Aurora’s heart hammered, the scar on her wrist flaring, the relic’s violet light pulsing in a rhythm that matched her breath."
18"A burst of violet light erupted, the shockwave rippling outward, sending the gaunt figure flying backward, his body slamming into the wall, the pistol exploding…"
19"The alley filled with a blinding flash, the violet light expanding, the scar on Aurora’s wrist shining brighter than ever."
20"Aurora felt the power surge, the relic’s energy coursing through her, the scar on her wrist pulsing in sync."
21"Lucien’s amber eye reflected the violet light, his hand gripping the cane, the hidden blade shimmering."
22"Aurora felt the pull, the relic’s power dragging her toward the vortex, the scar on her wrist burning hotter than ever."
23"She reached out, her fingers brushing the edge of the vortex, the violet light luring her."
24"She heard a low, guttural laugh echo from the shadows, a sound that promised more danger, more secrets, more blood."
25"The rain fell harder, the streetlights flickered, and a distant siren wailed, a note that seemed to herald the arrival of something far worse than any of them c…"
26"Aurora’s heart hammered, the scar on her wrist igniting, the violet light flaring in a surge of raw, unbridled energy."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags57
uselessAdditionCount33
matches
0"he asked, voice low, a faint accent slipping from his French‑touched English"
1"He glanced, the ink smudged by countless late‑night scribbles"
2"His voice softened, a note of something unspoken threading through the words"
3"He gestured, his amber eye narrowing"
4"she said, voice steadier"
5"She slid, the paper crinkling under her palm"
6"She grabbed, the snap of the zipper echoing in the small space"
7"She turned, her voice low"
8"He lunged, the blade flashing in a swift arc"
9"she whispered, her voice low and fierce"
10"She turned, the box cradled against her chest"
11"He turned, his coat flapping as he slipped back into the shadows"
12"He said, his voice low"
13"She whispered, the scent of wet pavement drifting in"
14"he asked, his voice trembling"
15"He slipped, the hidden blade catching the light"
16"He tapped, the violet glow flickering"
17"he whispered, his voice barely audible over the storm"
18"She looked up, the faded sign above the door reading"
19"she said, voice cool as marble"
20"She stepped, her gaze flickering between the two of them"
21"he snarled, his voice low and dangerous"
22"She lifted, the violet light pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat"
23"The words died, the walls trembling under the force of the relic’s power"
24"she asked, voice shaking"
25"he shouted, his voice cutting through the chaos"
26"the voice hissed, a mixture of human and something older, more primal"
27"the voice hissed, a promise of more danger"
28"he said, his voice urgent, his eyes scanning the darkness"
29"he whispered, his voice barely audible over the storm"
30"he muttered, his voice a promise and a threat"
31"she gasped, the words lost in the roar of the vortex"
32"he asked, his voice barely more than a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags28
fancyCount15
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"he cried (cry)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"He pressed (press)"
4"the driver shouted (shout)"
5"She whispered (whisper)"
6"he whispered (whisper)"
7"she hissed (hiss)"
8"he snarled (snarl)"
9"he shouted (shout)"
10"the voice hissed (hiss)"
11"the voice hissed (hiss)"
12"he whispered (whisper)"
13"he muttered (mutter)"
14"she gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences93
tagDensity0.301
leniency0.602
rawRatio0.536
effectiveRatio0.323
68.0076%