Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01J5GAXECTSXRN41XYCVT

Run Details

Duration:
12.0s
Cost:
$0.000879
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside the grove hit Rory like a held breath finally released. One moment, she’d been trudging through Richmond Park’s damp undergrowth, the next—she stepped between two gnarled oaks and the world *shifted*. The scent of damp earth and pine needles vanished, replaced by something sweeter, heavier, like crushed petals steeped in honey. The light changed too, filtering through leaves that shouldn’t have existed this time of year—golden as late summer, though London had been grey and sodden for weeks. She exhaled, her breath curling in the unnaturally warm air. “Bloody hell.” Beside her, Nyx solidified just enough for their violet eyes to flicker into view, scanning the clearing. “This is not Earth.” “No shit,” Rory muttered, but her fingers twitched toward the pendant at her throat. The Heartstone pulsed faintly, its crimson glow seeping through her fingers like a slow heartbeat. She didn’t need to ask if Nyx felt it too—the way their shadowy form rippled, thinning at the edges, said enough. Isolde moved ahead of them, her silver hair catching the light like spun moonlight. She didn’t walk so much as *drift*, her bare feet skimming the moss without disturbing a single blade. “You’ve come far enough to see,” she said, her voice weaving through the air like smoke. “Now you must choose whether to go farther.” Rory shot a glance at Nyx. “You’re the one who dragged me into this. You tell me—what’s the play?” Nyx’s form wavered, their voice a whisper that slithered between the trees. “The grove is a threshold. Beyond it lies the Fae Courts—or what remains of them. But thresholds are never free.” Isolde turned, her pale lavender eyes unreadable. “The price is memory. A fragment of what you were, given to the grove in exchange for passage.” Rory’s stomach twisted. “What kind of fragment?” “A name,” Isolde said. “One you’ve carried. One that defines you.” Nyx’s glow dimmed. “A name is power.” “And power is currency here,” Isolde agreed. Rory’s fingers curled into her palms. She had names—too many, some she’d buried, others she’d stolen. *Laila*. The one Evan had hissed at her in the dark, like a curse. *Malphora*. The one she’d whispered to herself in the mirror after, like a promise. *Carter*. The one her father had given her, sharp as a blade. She exhaled through her nose. “Fine. But I pick which one.” Isolde inclined her head. “The grove does not bargain.” “Then I’m not walking in.” A silence settled, thick as the honey-scented air. Then Nyx shifted, their form coalescing into something more solid, more *present*. “I will go first.” Rory blinked. “You’ve got a name to lose?” Nyx’s violet eyes burned brighter. “I have many. And none.” Before she could press, they stepped forward—straight into the heart of the grove. The moment their shadowed foot crossed the threshold, the air *shimmered*. A ripple passed through the clearing, and for a heartbeat, Rory saw *something*—a flicker of a face, a name written in light, then gone. Nyx staggered, their form flickering like a candle in a draft. “Nyx?” Rory lunged, but Isolde’s hand shot out, gripping her wrist. “Do not touch them,” the seer warned. “The grove takes what it is owed.” Nyx’s breath came in ragged whispers, their voice strained. “It… took *Aldric*.” Rory’s pulse spiked. “Your *human* name?” A shudder ran through Nyx’s form. “The one I buried deepest.” Isolde released Rory’s wrist. “Now you understand the cost.” Rory swallowed hard. She’d spent years shedding names like old skin, but this—this was different. This was *surrender*. She looked at Nyx, their edges still unsteady, their glow dimmed. “You alright?” Nyx’s voice was thinner now, stripped of something. “I am… lighter.” Rory didn’t like the sound of that. Isolde turned, her silver hair catching the light as she gestured toward the heart of the grove. “The path forward is yours, Aurora Carter. But remember—what you leave behind may not be waiting when you return.” Rory’s jaw tightened. She didn’t have time for riddles. She stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the moss. The air thickened, pressing against her skin like a second layer. The trees here weren’t just trees—they *breathed*, their bark shifting subtly, as if alive. Flowers bloomed in impossible colours, petals that shimmered like stained glass when the light hit them just right. And the *sounds*. No birds. No wind. Just a low, humming vibration, like the grove itself was alive, pulsing. She reached out, brushing her fingers against the trunk of the nearest oak. The bark was warm, almost *soft*, and when she pulled her hand back, her fingertips came away dusted with gold. “What the hell—?” Nyx materialised beside her, their form still flickering at the edges. “Fae magic. The grove is alive in ways you cannot comprehend.” Rory wiped her fingers on her jeans, but the gold didn’t smudge. It *sank* into her skin, leaving behind a faint, shimmering trail. “Great. Now I’m glowing.” Isolde’s voice drifted from ahead. “The grove marks those who pass through. A reminder of what you’ve given—and what you still owe.” Rory scowled. “I haven’t given anything yet.” “Haven’t you?” A cold prickle ran down Rory’s spine. She didn’t like the way Isolde said that. Like she already knew the answer. They pressed deeper into the grove, the trees growing taller, their branches weaving together overhead to form a canopy that blocked out the sky. The light here was different—softer, dreamlike, as if they were walking through a memory. The air smelled of rain and something sweet, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun. Then the ground changed. One moment, Rory was stepping on moss. The next, her boot sank into something *squishy*. She yanked her foot back with a curse, staring at the ground. It wasn’t dirt. It wasn’t grass. It was *flesh*. A low, wet *gurgle* echoed through the grove. Rory’s blood turned to ice. “Did you *hear* that?” Nyx’s form tensed. “We are not alone.” Isolde didn’t turn. “The grove is never empty.” Another gurgle, closer this time. Rory’s hand flew to the Fae-forged dagger at her hip, her fingers curling around the hilt. The metal was colder than it should have been, biting into her skin. “What the *hell* is that?” Isolde finally looked back, her pale eyes unreadable. “The grove feeds on more than names.” A *thud*. Then another. Something was moving through the trees, something *large*. The ground beneath Rory’s feet *twitched*, like the grove itself was breathing. She swallowed hard. “Nyx. You seeing this?” Nyx’s voice was a whisper. “I see *hunger*.” The trees ahead of them *parted*. Not like wind moving branches. Like *flesh* peeling back. Rory’s breath caught. The thing that stepped into the clearing wasn’t an animal. Wasn’t a plant. It was *both*, and *neither*—a mass of writhing vines and glistening, pulsating flesh, its body shifting between forms like a living nightmare. At its core was a gaping maw, ringed with teeth like thorns, dripping with something thick and golden. And it was *looking* at them. Rory’s grip tightened on the dagger. “Isolde. *What is that?*” The seer’s voice was calm, almost amused. “The grove’s guardian. It has come to collect its due.” The thing *lunged*. Rory barely had time to react. She twisted, the dagger flashing in her hand, the moonsilver blade carving a silver arc through the air. It *screeched*—a sound like tearing fabric—and recoiled, black ichor spraying from the wound. Nyx moved like smoke, their form dissolving into shadow before reforming behind the creature. Their hand—if it could be called a hand—sank into its flesh, and the thing *screamed*, its body convulsing. Isolde didn’t move. Didn’t flinch. Just watched, her pale eyes gleaming. Rory didn’t have time to think. She drove the dagger forward, aiming for the gaping maw. The blade sank in, and the creature *thrashed*, its vines lashing out, wrapping around her arm. Pain flared, hot and bright, as thorns bit into her skin. She gritted her teeth. “Nyx—*now*!” Nyx’s form *exploded* into a storm of shadows, slamming into the creature. It *shattered*, its body dissolving into a rain of black petals that withered the moment they hit the ground. Silence. Rory’s chest heaved, her arm burning where the thorns had torn her. She yanked the dagger free, wiping the black ichor on her jeans. “What the *fuck* was that?” Isolde finally stepped forward, her bare feet not disturbing a single petal. “The grove’s first test. It wanted to see if you were worthy.” Rory’s laugh was sharp, humourless. “Worthy of *what*?” Isolde’s gaze flicked to the pendant at Rory’s throat. The Heartstone pulsed, its crimson glow brighter now, almost *angry*. “The grove knows what you carry,” Isolde said. “And it *hungers* for it.” Rory’s fingers closed around the pendant. “It’s not getting it.” Isolde smiled, but there was no warmth in it. “We shall see.” The grove *shifted* around them, the trees groaning as they bent, their branches twisting to form a path deeper into the heart of the clearing. The air grew heavier, thicker, like syrup. And at the end of the path, something *waited*. Rory didn’t know what. Didn’t *want* to know. But she stepped forward anyway.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.269
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1549
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1549
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"flicker"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"wavered"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"shimmered"
count2
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"glistening"
count1
13
word"maw"
count2
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"flicked"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"scanning"
2"pulsed"
3"wavered"
4"whisper"
5"unreadable"
6"stomach"
7"silence"
8"shimmered"
9"pulse"
10"reminder"
11"echoed"
12"glistening"
13"maw"
14"gleaming"
15"shattered"
16"flicked"
17"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences137
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans44
markdownWords46
totalWords1532
ratio0.03
matches
0"shifted"
1"drift"
2"Laila"
3"Malphora"
4"Carter"
5"present"
6"shimmered"
7"something"
8"Aldric"
9"human"
10"surrender"
11"breathed"
12"sounds"
13"soft"
14"sank"
15"squishy"
16"flesh"
17"gurgle"
18"hear"
19"hell"
20"thud"
21"large"
22"twitched"
23"hunger"
24"parted"
25"flesh"
26"both"
27"neither"
28"looking"
29"What is that?"
30"lunged"
31"screeched"
32"screamed"
33"thrashed"
34"now"
35"exploded"
36"shattered"
37"fuck"
38"what"
39"angry"
40"hungers"
41"shifted"
42"waited"
43"want"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.83% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1227
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory29
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Nyx17
Heartstone2
Evan1
Isolde17
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Evan"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae-forged"
globalScore0.318
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1532
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean19.39
std16.9
cv0.871
sampleLengths
081
112
221
350
456
519
632
725
87
911
107
117
1256
1311
149
155
1624
178
1810
1959
2011
2114
2212
236
2411
259
2631
2711
287
2936
3062
3119
3233
333
3422
3527
3622
377
382
3921
4055
414
4233
433
448
459
467
478
4839
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
86.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs235
matches
0"were walking"
1"was stepping"
2"was breathing"
3"was *looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences182
ratio0.066
matches
0"One moment, she’d been trudging through Richmond Park’s damp undergrowth, the next—she stepped between two gnarled oaks and the world *shifted*."
1"The light changed too, filtering through leaves that shouldn’t have existed this time of year—golden as late summer, though London had been grey and sodden for weeks."
2"She didn’t need to ask if Nyx felt it too—the way their shadowy form rippled, thinning at the edges, said enough."
3"She had names—too many, some she’d buried, others she’d stolen."
4"Before she could press, they stepped forward—straight into the heart of the grove."
5"A ripple passed through the clearing, and for a heartbeat, Rory saw *something*—a flicker of a face, a name written in light, then gone."
6"She’d spent years shedding names like old skin, but this—this was different."
7"The trees here weren’t just trees—they *breathed*, their bark shifting subtly, as if alive."
8"The light here was different—softer, dreamlike, as if they were walking through a memory."
9"It was *both*, and *neither*—a mass of writhing vines and glistening, pulsating flesh, its body shifting between forms like a living nightmare."
10"It *screeched*—a sound like tearing fabric—and recoiled, black ichor spraying from the wound."
11"Their hand—if it could be called a hand—sank into its flesh, and the thing *screamed*, its body convulsing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1240
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03306451612903226
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0064516129032258064
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean8.42
std5.71
cv0.678
sampleLengths
013
121
220
327
410
52
617
74
814
915
1021
1114
1218
1316
148
156
1613
1712
1820
197
2018
213
224
234
247
253
264
277
286
2910
301
3113
321
3313
341
3511
365
376
384
395
405
418
4212
434
442
456
465
475
4813
4911
42.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.24725274725274726
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences123
matches
0"Then Nyx shifted, their form"
1"Just a low, humming vibration,"
2"Then the ground changed."
3"Just watched, her pale eyes"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences123
matches
0"She exhaled, her breath curling"
1"She didn’t need to ask"
2"She didn’t walk so much"
3"she said, her voice weaving"
4"She had names—too many, some"
5"She exhaled through her nose."
6"She’d spent years shedding names"
7"She looked at Nyx, their"
8"She didn’t have time for"
9"She stepped forward, her boots"
10"She reached out, brushing her"
11"It *sank* into her skin,"
12"She didn’t like the way"
13"They pressed deeper into the"
14"She yanked her foot back"
15"It wasn’t dirt."
16"It wasn’t grass."
17"It was *flesh*."
18"She swallowed hard."
19"It was *both*, and *neither*—a"
ratio0.22
33.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences123
matches
0"The air inside the grove"
1"The scent of damp earth"
2"The light changed too, filtering"
3"She exhaled, her breath curling"
4"Rory muttered, but her fingers"
5"The Heartstone pulsed faintly, its"
6"She didn’t need to ask"
7"Isolde moved ahead of them,"
8"She didn’t walk so much"
9"she said, her voice weaving"
10"Rory shot a glance at"
11"Nyx’s form wavered, their voice"
12"Isolde turned, her pale lavender"
13"Rory’s stomach twisted."
14"Nyx’s glow dimmed."
15"Rory’s fingers curled into her"
16"She had names—too many, some"
17"The one Evan had hissed"
18"The one she’d whispered to"
19"The one her father had"
ratio0.854
40.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"Before she could press, they"
ratio0.008
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Nyx’s form wavered, their voice a whisper that slithered between the trees."
1"Flowers bloomed in impossible colours, petals that shimmered like stained glass when the light hit them just right."
2"They pressed deeper into the grove, the trees growing taller, their branches weaving together overhead to form a canopy that blocked out the sky."
3"The light here was different—softer, dreamlike, as if they were walking through a memory."
4"It was *both*, and *neither*—a mass of writhing vines and glistening, pulsating flesh, its body shifting between forms like a living nightmare."
5"Nyx moved like smoke, their form dissolving into shadow before reforming behind the creature."
6"The blade sank in, and the creature *thrashed*, its vines lashing out, wrapping around her arm."
7"It *shattered*, its body dissolving into a rain of black petals that withered the moment they hit the ground."
8"The grove *shifted* around them, the trees groaning as they bent, their branches twisting to form a path deeper into the heart of the clearing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory muttered, but her fingers twitched toward the pendant at her throat"
1"she said, her voice weaving through the air like smoke"
2"Rory lunged, but Isolde’s hand shot out, gripping her wrist"
92.31% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Isolde agreed (agree)"
2"the seer warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.115
79.0979%