| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.135 | | leniency | 0.269 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1549 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 19.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1549 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "glistening" | | 13 | "maw" | | 14 | "gleaming" | | 15 | "shattered" | | 16 | "flicked" | | 17 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 137 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 182 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 44 | | markdownWords | 46 | | totalWords | 1532 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "shifted" | | 1 | "drift" | | 2 | "Laila" | | 3 | "Malphora" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "present" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "something" | | 8 | "Aldric" | | 9 | "human" | | 10 | "surrender" | | 11 | "breathed" | | 12 | "sounds" | | 13 | "soft" | | 14 | "sank" | | 15 | "squishy" | | 16 | "flesh" | | 17 | "gurgle" | | 18 | "hear" | | 19 | "hell" | | 20 | "thud" | | 21 | "large" | | 22 | "twitched" | | 23 | "hunger" | | 24 | "parted" | | 25 | "flesh" | | 26 | "both" | | 27 | "neither" | | 28 | "looking" | | 29 | "What is that?" | | 30 | "lunged" | | 31 | "screeched" | | 32 | "screamed" | | 33 | "thrashed" | | 34 | "now" | | 35 | "exploded" | | 36 | "shattered" | | 37 | "fuck" | | 38 | "what" | | 39 | "angry" | | 40 | "hungers" | | 41 | "shifted" | | 42 | "waited" | | 43 | "want" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.83% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 70 | | wordCount | 1227 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 29 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 17 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Isolde | 17 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae-forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.318 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1532 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 79 | | mean | 19.39 | | std | 16.9 | | cv | 0.871 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 62 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 55 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 39 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.52% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 235 | | matches | | 0 | "were walking" | | 1 | "was stepping" | | 2 | "was breathing" | | 3 | "was *looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 182 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, she’d been trudging through Richmond Park’s damp undergrowth, the next—she stepped between two gnarled oaks and the world *shifted*." | | 1 | "The light changed too, filtering through leaves that shouldn’t have existed this time of year—golden as late summer, though London had been grey and sodden for weeks." | | 2 | "She didn’t need to ask if Nyx felt it too—the way their shadowy form rippled, thinning at the edges, said enough." | | 3 | "She had names—too many, some she’d buried, others she’d stolen." | | 4 | "Before she could press, they stepped forward—straight into the heart of the grove." | | 5 | "A ripple passed through the clearing, and for a heartbeat, Rory saw *something*—a flicker of a face, a name written in light, then gone." | | 6 | "She’d spent years shedding names like old skin, but this—this was different." | | 7 | "The trees here weren’t just trees—they *breathed*, their bark shifting subtly, as if alive." | | 8 | "The light here was different—softer, dreamlike, as if they were walking through a memory." | | 9 | "It was *both*, and *neither*—a mass of writhing vines and glistening, pulsating flesh, its body shifting between forms like a living nightmare." | | 10 | "It *screeched*—a sound like tearing fabric—and recoiled, black ichor spraying from the wound." | | 11 | "Their hand—if it could be called a hand—sank into its flesh, and the thing *screamed*, its body convulsing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1240 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03306451612903226 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0064516129032258064 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 182 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 182 | | mean | 8.42 | | std | 5.71 | | cv | 0.678 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 42.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.24725274725274726 | | totalSentences | 182 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Nyx shifted, their form" | | 1 | "Just a low, humming vibration," | | 2 | "Then the ground changed." | | 3 | "Just watched, her pale eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled, her breath curling" | | 1 | "She didn’t need to ask" | | 2 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 3 | "she said, her voice weaving" | | 4 | "She had names—too many, some" | | 5 | "She exhaled through her nose." | | 6 | "She’d spent years shedding names" | | 7 | "She looked at Nyx, their" | | 8 | "She didn’t have time for" | | 9 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 10 | "She reached out, brushing her" | | 11 | "It *sank* into her skin," | | 12 | "She didn’t like the way" | | 13 | "They pressed deeper into the" | | 14 | "She yanked her foot back" | | 15 | "It wasn’t dirt." | | 16 | "It wasn’t grass." | | 17 | "It was *flesh*." | | 18 | "She swallowed hard." | | 19 | "It was *both*, and *neither*—a" |
| | ratio | 0.22 | |
| 33.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 105 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "The scent of damp earth" | | 2 | "The light changed too, filtering" | | 3 | "She exhaled, her breath curling" | | 4 | "Rory muttered, but her fingers" | | 5 | "The Heartstone pulsed faintly, its" | | 6 | "She didn’t need to ask" | | 7 | "Isolde moved ahead of them," | | 8 | "She didn’t walk so much" | | 9 | "she said, her voice weaving" | | 10 | "Rory shot a glance at" | | 11 | "Nyx’s form wavered, their voice" | | 12 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender" | | 13 | "Rory’s stomach twisted." | | 14 | "Nyx’s glow dimmed." | | 15 | "Rory’s fingers curled into her" | | 16 | "She had names—too many, some" | | 17 | "The one Evan had hissed" | | 18 | "The one she’d whispered to" | | 19 | "The one her father had" |
| | ratio | 0.854 | |
| 40.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could press, they" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx’s form wavered, their voice a whisper that slithered between the trees." | | 1 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colours, petals that shimmered like stained glass when the light hit them just right." | | 2 | "They pressed deeper into the grove, the trees growing taller, their branches weaving together overhead to form a canopy that blocked out the sky." | | 3 | "The light here was different—softer, dreamlike, as if they were walking through a memory." | | 4 | "It was *both*, and *neither*—a mass of writhing vines and glistening, pulsating flesh, its body shifting between forms like a living nightmare." | | 5 | "Nyx moved like smoke, their form dissolving into shadow before reforming behind the creature." | | 6 | "The blade sank in, and the creature *thrashed*, its vines lashing out, wrapping around her arm." | | 7 | "It *shattered*, its body dissolving into a rain of black petals that withered the moment they hit the ground." | | 8 | "The grove *shifted* around them, the trees groaning as they bent, their branches twisting to form a path deeper into the heart of the clearing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory muttered, but her fingers twitched toward the pendant at her throat" | | 1 | "she said, her voice weaving through the air like smoke" | | 2 | "Rory lunged, but Isolde’s hand shot out, gripping her wrist" |
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| 92.31% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "the seer warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.115 | | leniency | 0.231 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.115 | |