Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01JSPC1XNF0MA3R1Q3QN2

Run Details

Duration:
35.4s
Cost:
$0.033420
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing oaks rose like sentinels at the edge of Richmond Park, their trunks twisted in ways that made Rory's eyes water if she looked too long. Ancient symbols carved into bark that should have rotted away centuries ago still pulsed with a faint silver luminescence. The Heartstone pendant beneath her jacket thrummed against her sternum, not with the heat that warned of Hel portals, but with something else entirely—a coolness that spread through her chest like menthol on skin. "Here." Isolde's voice drifted from somewhere ahead, though Rory could've sworn the half-Fae woman had been beside her a moment ago. "Step between the third and fourth stones. Not through them. Between." Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, whose violet eyes flickered in the dying afternoon light. The Shade had condensed themselves into something almost solid, though shadows still leaked from their edges like ink in water. "What happens if we step through instead of between?" "You'll find yourself walking in circles until I fetch you." Isolde materialized near the fourth oak, one pale hand resting against bark that seemed to lean toward her touch. "The grove does not welcome the uninvited." The air between the third and fourth oak shimmered like heat rising from summer pavement. Rory took a breath, stepped forward, and the world tilted sideways. Her foot came down on grass that shouldn't exist—too green, too vibrant, each blade catching light that fell at wrong angles. The sound of Richmond Park vanished. No distant traffic. No birdsong. Just a profound silence that made her ears ring until she realized it wasn't silence at all, but the absence of any sound she recognized. "Christ." "He has no dominion here." Isolde glided past, leaving no footprints in grass that sprang back from Rory's boots. "Welcome to what remains of my mother's court." The grove opened before them like a cathedral made of living things. Trees rose in spirals, their branches weaving overhead in geometric patterns that hurt to follow. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—blue roses growing beside summer poppies beside autumn chrysanthemums. The sky beyond the canopy glowed the color of pearls, neither day nor night but something caught perpetually between. Nyx flowed past Rory's shoulder, their form stretching upward as they examined the twisted branches. "The geometry is wrong. Nothing intersects properly." "It intersects perfectly." Isolde's silver hair swayed though no wind moved through the clearing. "You're simply accustomed to mortal limitations." A stream cut through the clearing's heart, its water running in two directions at once. Rory crouched beside it, watched the current split around smooth stones and flow both upstream and down simultaneously. Her reflection stared back at her, but the eyes were wrong—bright blue in her face, pale lavender in the water's surface. She jerked back. "The grove shows what could be, what was, what might yet come to pass." Isolde knelt beside her, and now the reflection showed them both, but Isolde's image aged and de-aged with each ripple, cycling through centuries. "Not always kind, but always true." "You said you needed our help." Nyx's whisper-voice carried oddly in the space, seeming to come from multiple directions. "That something had breached the grove's boundaries." Isolde rose in one fluid motion, gesturing them deeper into the clearing. As they walked, Rory felt time behave strangely—each step took both too long and not long enough, distance compressing and expanding according to rules she couldn't fathom. The Fae-forged blade at her hip had begun to glow, casting silver light across the grass. The clearing opened onto something that made Rory's breath catch. A circle of standing stones, each twice her height, arranged around a pool of water that reflected nothing. Not the pearl sky. Not the surrounding stones. Just an absolute blackness that seemed to drink in light. "There." Isolde stopped at the circle's edge, her lavender eyes fixed on the pool. "Three nights past, something touched the water. Something that does not belong in any realm." Rory moved closer, studying the stones. Unlike the oaks at the grove's entrance, these showed no carvings, no marks of any kind. Their surfaces were perfectly smooth, almost glass-like, and as she passed her hand near one, frost formed on her fingertips. "What kind of something?" "If I could name it, I would not need your assistance." Irritation crept into Isolde's melodic voice. "The grove shows me fragments. A shadow that is not shadow. A hunger that does not consume. A door opening in a place where no door should exist." Nyx circled the pool's perimeter, their form shifting between solid and incorporeal. "The Veil is intact here. I would sense if something had torn through from Hel." "Not Hel." Isolde's fingers twisted through a complex gesture, and the air above the pool shimmered. "Elsewhere." Images flickered into existence, translucent and fragmentary. Rory saw glimpses of impossible architectures—bridges that connected to nothing, staircases that descended into sky, towers that grew downward into earth. And moving through it all, something her mind refused to properly process. Her eyes slid off it, around it, found purchase on anything else. The Heartstone pendant flared cold enough to burn. Rory gasped, pressed her hand over it through her jacket. "You feel it." Isolde's statement held no question. "The artifact knows. Recognizes." "Recognizes what?" Rory's teeth chattered despite the grove's temperature, which remained perpetually spring-like. "What is that thing?" "A traveler. A refugee. A prisoner escaped." Isolde's words tumbled out in her typical riddling fashion. "It does not belong to Earth or Hel or the Courts. It comes from the spaces between spaces, the cracks where reality has worn thin." The images above the pool coalesced for one crystalline moment, and Rory glimpsed something that might have been a face if faces could exist in four dimensions. Then the vision shattered, and the pool returned to its depthless black. Nyx withdrew from the circle's edge, their violet eyes bright with something that might have been fear if fear could touch an ageless being. "We need to leave. Now." "Why?" Rory forced her hand away from the burning-cold pendant. "What did you see?" "The same thing I saw in 1643, right before I ceased being Aldric." Nyx's form flickered, threatened to dissipate entirely. "The thing that pulled me into the space between realms and left me as this. It's here. It's found another weak point." The grove's light shifted, the pearl sky darkening to gunmetal grey. Flowers wilted and rebloomed in rapid succession. The stream's dual current stuttered, stopped, flowed backward. Isolde raised both hands, spoke words in a language that predated human tongues. The standing stones began to hum, a resonance Rory felt in her bones rather than heard. "We cannot leave." The half-Fae's voice remained calm despite the chaos blooming around them. "The grove has sealed itself. Nothing enters, nothing departs, until we solve what has been presented." "You brought us into a trap?" Rory drew the Fae blade, its moonsilver surface blazing with cold light. "Not a trap. A test. A necessity." Isolde's silver hair rose around her face as power gathered in the clearing. "The grove protects itself. Something wishes entry. We must determine if it deserves passage—or oblivion." The pool's black surface began to ripple, though nothing touched it. And from somewhere beyond the standing stones, from somewhere that wasn't quite anywhere at all, Rory heard something that might have been breathing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx's whisper-voice carried oddly [oddly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.436
leniency0.872
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.051
91.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1244
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count3
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"profound"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"complex"
count1
8
word"crystalline"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"resonance"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"pulsed"
2"flickered"
3"shimmered"
4"profound"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"complex"
8"crystalline"
9"shattered"
10"resonance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
56.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1231
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount916
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory18
Heartstone2
Hel1
Nyx6
Shade1
Isolde14
Fae-forged1
Images1
Fae4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Isolde"
4"Images"
5"Fae"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.517
windowScore0.667
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"bark that seemed to lean toward her touch"
1"blackness that seemed to drink in light"
2"quite anywhere at all, Rory heard something that might have been breathing"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.437
wordCount1231
matches
0"not with the heat that warned of Hel portals, but with something else entirely"
1"neither day nor"
2"Not always kind, but always true"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean31.56
std16.82
cv0.533
sampleLengths
080
132
235
39
436
526
657
71
827
959
1022
1120
1254
133
1443
1526
1655
1746
1829
1942
204
2145
2227
2317
2452
2518
2612
2717
2841
2939
3029
3114
3242
3326
3429
3530
3618
3735
3834
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences88
ratio0.068
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant beneath her jacket thrummed against her sternum, not with the heat that warned of Hel portals, but with something else entirely—a coolness that spread through her chest like menthol on skin."
1"Her foot came down on grass that shouldn't exist—too green, too vibrant, each blade catching light that fell at wrong angles."
2"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—blue roses growing beside summer poppies beside autumn chrysanthemums."
3"Her reflection stared back at her, but the eyes were wrong—bright blue in her face, pale lavender in the water's surface."
4"As they walked, Rory felt time behave strangely—each step took both too long and not long enough, distance compressing and expanding according to rules she couldn't fathom."
5"Rory saw glimpses of impossible architectures—bridges that connected to nothing, staircases that descended into sky, towers that grew downward into earth."
92.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount928
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04849137931034483
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009698275862068966
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean13.99
std7.59
cv0.543
sampleLengths
027
119
234
321
411
515
620
79
829
97
1015
1111
1221
136
143
152
1625
171
1819
198
2012
2115
2213
2319
2415
257
2614
276
2815
2918
3021
313
3237
336
3419
357
3612
3727
3816
3910
4018
414
424
4310
4414
4515
466
4716
4820
494
60.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4090909090909091
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences65
matches
0"Just a profound silence that"
1"Just an absolute blackness that"
2"Then the vision shattered, and"
ratio0.046
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences65
matches
0"Her foot came down on"
1"Her reflection stared back at"
2"She jerked back."
3"Their surfaces were perfectly smooth,"
4"Her eyes slid off it,"
ratio0.077
44.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences65
matches
0"The standing oaks rose like"
1"The Heartstone pendant beneath her"
2"Isolde's voice drifted from somewhere"
3"Rory exchanged a glance with"
4"The Shade had condensed themselves"
5"Isolde materialized near the fourth"
6"The air between the third"
7"Rory took a breath, stepped"
8"Her foot came down on"
9"The sound of Richmond Park"
10"Isolde glided past, leaving no"
11"The grove opened before them"
12"Trees rose in spirals, their"
13"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible clusters—blue"
14"The sky beyond the canopy"
15"Nyx flowed past Rory's shoulder,"
16"Isolde's silver hair swayed though"
17"A stream cut through the"
18"Rory crouched beside it, watched"
19"Her reflection stared back at"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The standing oaks rose like sentinels at the edge of Richmond Park, their trunks twisted in ways that made Rory's eyes water if she looked too long."
1"Ancient symbols carved into bark that should have rotted away centuries ago still pulsed with a faint silver luminescence."
2"The Heartstone pendant beneath her jacket thrummed against her sternum, not with the heat that warned of Hel portals, but with something else entirely—a coolnes…"
3"Her foot came down on grass that shouldn't exist—too green, too vibrant, each blade catching light that fell at wrong angles."
4"Trees rose in spirals, their branches weaving overhead in geometric patterns that hurt to follow."
5"The clearing opened onto something that made Rory's breath catch."
6"Rory saw glimpses of impossible architectures—bridges that connected to nothing, staircases that descended into sky, towers that grew downward into earth."
7"The images above the pool coalesced for one crystalline moment, and Rory glimpsed something that might have been a face if faces could exist in four dimensions."
8"And from somewhere beyond the standing stones, from somewhere that wasn't quite anywhere at all, Rory heard something that might have been breathing."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Nyx's whisper-voice carried oddly, seeming to come from multiple directions"
1"Isolde stopped, her lavender eyes fixed on the pool"
2"Nyx's form flickered, threatened to dissipate entirely"
3"Rory drew, its moonsilver surface blazing with cold light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory's teeth chattered (chatter)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.026
leniency0.051
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.051
72.3154%