| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His cane tapped once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 79 | | tagDensity | 0.203 | | leniency | 0.405 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.025 | |
| 85.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1417 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1417 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "navigating" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 149 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1401 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.85% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 831 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | Châteauneuf-du-Pape | 1 | | Eva | 9 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Didn | 1 | | Lucien | 7 | | Cardiff | 2 | | University | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Despite | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Châteauneuf-du-Pape" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" | | 5 | "Lucien" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.958 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "t do hurt, not visibly" | | 1 | "seemed laughably insufficient" | | 2 | "tasted like expensive wine and regret" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1401 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 94 | | mean | 14.9 | | std | 14.82 | | cv | 0.994 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 77 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 153 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 149 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.33% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 840 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.047619047619047616 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010714285714285714 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 149 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 149 | | mean | 9.4 | | std | 8.18 | | cv | 0.87 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 61.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.4161073825503356 | | totalSentences | 149 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 44.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 33.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 1 | "She gripped the doorframe" | | 2 | "He didn't move" | | 3 | "He dealt in information, favours," | | 4 | "Her full name in his" | | 5 | "He'd been here before, of" | | 6 | "He set it on the" | | 7 | "His cane tapped once against" | | 8 | "He'd looked at her and" | | 9 | "He'd seen all of it" | | 10 | "She'd run instead." | | 11 | "She crossed her arms" | | 12 | "He removed his jacket, folded" | | 13 | "Her stomach dropped." | | 14 | "She'd assumed debt." | | 15 | "He moved closer" | | 16 | "She held her ground." | | 17 | "They stood there, two people" | | 18 | "His hand rose, stopped just" | | 19 | "She watched him decide against" |
| | ratio | 0.467 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 2 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 3 | "That mismatched gaze, amber and" | | 4 | "She gripped the doorframe" | | 5 | "Ptolemy wound between her ankles," | | 6 | "He didn't move" | | 7 | "Something flickered across his features." | | 8 | "Lucien didn't do hurt, not" | | 9 | "He dealt in information, favours," | | 10 | "Her full name in his" | | 11 | "Ptolemy mrowed and butted his" | | 12 | "Charcoal wool, perfectly pressed." | | 13 | "The cat had expensive taste." | | 14 | "Rory stepped back." | | 15 | "A tactical retreat." | | 16 | "Lucien entered like he owned" | | 17 | "He'd been here before, of" | | 18 | "He set it on the" | | 19 | "The words escaped before she" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Close enough to smell sandalwood and something darker underneath, something that reminded her why she'd pushed him away." | | 1 | "It was three months of silence and blocked numbers and lying awake in the flat above Silas's bar, listening to the bass thrum through the floorboards and wonder…" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He set, a stack of grimoires Eva used as an end table" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 79 | | tagDensity | 0.038 | | leniency | 0.076 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |