Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01X4DA36KNA1GZ4Y8T3FF

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Duration:
47.2s
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Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could reach for the second deadbolt. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other holding a bottle of Châteauneuf-du-Pape. His platinum hair caught the dim light from Eva's bare bulb fixture. That mismatched gaze, amber and black, swept over her like she was a contract he was deciding whether to sign. "You're not Eva." "Astute as ever." She gripped the doorframe. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, the traitor, purring at the scent of expensive cologne drifting into the flat. "She's in Cornwall. Family thing." "I'm aware." He didn't move. Didn't explain why he'd knocked on a door he knew wouldn't answer with the person he supposedly came to see. "Then why are you here?" "May I come in?" "No." Something flickered across his features. Not quite hurt. Lucien didn't do hurt, not visibly. He dealt in information, favours, and the careful architecture of owing and being owed. Three months ago, she'd been foolish enough to let him into more than Eva's flat. "Aurora." Her full name in his accent did things to her spine she refused to acknowledge. "I have information. Time-sensitive. Regarding your delivery routes." "My delivery routes." "The ones that take you through Whitechapel after dark. Yes." Ptolemy mrowed and butted his head against Lucien's trouser leg. Charcoal wool, perfectly pressed. The cat had expensive taste. Rory stepped back. Not an invitation. A tactical retreat. Lucien entered like he owned the space, navigating the towers of Eva's research without disturbing a single page. He'd been here before, of course. Many times. But never when it was just the two of them, just her in an oversized Cardiff University jumper with curry house grease still under her fingernails from helping Yu-Fei with a backed-up fryer. "The wine's a peace offering." He set it on the only clear surface, a stack of grimoires Eva used as an end table. "Before you ask." "I wasn't going to ask." "You were going to throw it at my head." "The thought crossed my mind." He turned. In the cramped space, they stood close enough that she could see the thin scar along his jaw, the one he'd never explained. Close enough to smell sandalwood and something darker underneath, something that reminded her why she'd pushed him away. "You left." The words escaped before she could cage them. "You told me to." "I told you to give me space. There's a difference." "Is there?" His cane tapped once against the worn floorboards. "Three months of silence suggests otherwise." "You could have called." "You blocked my number." "You could have found another way. You're Lucien bloody Moreau. You find things for a living." The corner of his mouth twitched. Almost a smile. Almost. "Perhaps I was respecting your wishes." "Since when?" Now he did smile, and it was worse than the almost-smile, because it reached his eyes, both of them, and she remembered exactly why she'd let him past her defences in the first place. Lucien collected secrets like other people collected stamps. He'd looked at her and seen every locked door she'd built since Evan, since Cardiff, since the night she'd shown up at Eva's with a split lip and a suitcase held together with duct tape. He'd seen all of it and hadn't run. She'd run instead. "The information." She crossed her arms. "You said it was time-sensitive." "I did." "Well?" He removed his jacket, folded it over the back of Eva's one chair, and rolled up his sleeves with the precision of a surgeon preparing for an operation. The gesture was so familiar it ached. "There's a new faction moving through Whitechapel. Nightwalkers, but not the garden variety. They've been tracking delivery patterns. Specifically, the Golden Empress routes." "Why would anyone track takeaway deliveries?" "Because someone at that restaurant has been moving more than dim sum." Her stomach dropped. "Yu-Fei wouldn't—" "Not Yu-Fei. One of the new hires. The one with the neck tattoo and the nervous eyes." Danny. The kid had started three weeks ago, always volunteering for the late runs, always checking his phone with shaking hands. She'd assumed debt. Gambling, maybe. Not this. "What's he moving?" "Ritual components. Low-grade, but in volume. Enough to attract attention from parties who would rather not be named." "And they're tracking the routes because—" "Because they can't find the source. They think the deliveries are pickups." Lucien's expression hardened. "They've been photographing the drivers. All of them. Including you." The flat suddenly felt smaller. The three deadbolts on the door, excessive by normal standards, now seemed laughably insufficient. "How do you know this?" "A client came to me. Wanted information on a certain black-haired delivery girl who'd been seen entering buildings in their territory." "And you came to warn me." "I came to settle a debt." "We don't have a debt." "We have several." He moved closer. She held her ground. "You saved my life in February. The thing with the Marchetti brothers." "I hit one of them with a wok. It wasn't heroic." "It was a very heavy wok." "Lucien." "Aurora." They stood there, two people who'd learned each other's edges and still bore the cuts. "Why did you really come?" she asked. His hand rose, stopped just short of her face. She watched him decide against it. Lower the hand. Rebuild the wall. "I came because the thought of them finding you was unacceptable." His voice dropped, rougher now, the careful polish cracking. "I came because three months of respecting your wishes nearly drove me mad. I came because you blocked my number and I spent six weeks tracking down a new one, and then I couldn't bring myself to use it because you'd asked me to stay away." "I asked you to give me space." "Same thing." "It's not." "Then explain the difference. Please." The last word cost him something. She could see it in the tension along his jaw, the white-knuckled grip on his cane. "Because I've been trying to understand for ninety-three days, and I still can't—" She kissed him. It wasn't gentle. It wasn't forgiveness. It was three months of silence and blocked numbers and lying awake in the flat above Silas's bar, listening to the bass thrum through the floorboards and wondering if she'd made the right choice. He tasted like expensive wine and regret. His cane clattered to the floor. One hand found her waist, the other tangled in her hair, and she remembered all the reasons she'd pushed him away. Half-demon. Information broker. Dangerous in ways she couldn't fully catalogue. None of it mattered. She pulled back, breathing hard. "The difference," she said against his mouth, "is that space means I needed time. It doesn't mean I wanted you gone." "You have a terrible way of communicating." "So I've been told." Ptolemy chose that moment to knock the wine bottle off the grimoire stack. It shattered against the floorboards, red spreading like a crime scene across Eva's meticulously organised chaos. Neither of them moved to clean it. "The nightwalkers," Rory said. "How long do I have?" "They're making their move tonight. Midnight rounds." She glanced at the clock on Eva's cluttered desk. Half nine. "Then we have two and a half hours." "We?" "You came to warn me. Fine. Warning received. But if you think I'm letting some knockoff vampires photograph me for their creepy stalker collection, you're out of your mind." "I was rather hoping you'd say that." He retrieved his cane, checked the hidden blade mechanism with practised ease. "I brought backup." "Of course you did." "Three associates. Currently positioned in the curry house downstairs. The owner thinks they're health inspectors." Despite everything, despite the danger and the unresolved tension and the wine soaking into Eva's irreplaceable research, Rory laughed. "You planned this." "I planned several contingencies. This was the optimistic one." "What was the pessimistic one?" "You threw the wine at my head and I spent the evening alone, hunting nightwalkers and contemplating my life choices." She grabbed her jacket from the hook by the door. Checked the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she'd never broken. "Well then." She met his eyes, amber and black, full of things they hadn't said and might never say. "Let's go be optimistic." Lucien's smile was sharp as the blade hidden in his cane. "After you, Miss Carter."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His cane tapped once [once]"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.405
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.025
85.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"navigating"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"navigating"
2"silence"
3"familiar"
4"stomach"
5"tension"
6"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"decide"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1401
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.85% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount831
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Moreau1
Châteauneuf-du-Pape1
Eva9
Ptolemy3
Didn1
Lucien7
Cardiff2
University1
Yu-Fei1
Evan1
Silas1
Despite1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Châteauneuf-du-Pape"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
6"Evan"
7"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.958
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"t do hurt, not visibly"
1"seemed laughably insufficient"
2"tasted like expensive wine and regret"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1401
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences149
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs94
mean14.9
std14.82
cv0.994
sampleLengths
012
152
23
330
425
55
64
71
843
924
103
1110
1219
139
1459
1526
165
179
185
1943
2010
214
2210
2316
244
254
2616
2716
282
2977
308
313
3211
332
341
3535
3623
376
3812
395
4017
4128
423
4318
446
4525
4619
475
4821
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"being owed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs153
matches
0"was deciding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences149
ratio0
matches(empty)
87.33% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount840
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.047619047619047616
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010714285714285714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean9.4
std8.18
cv0.87
sampleLengths
012
120
212
320
43
57
618
75
85
920
105
114
121
135
143
156
1614
1715
1816
198
203
2110
2210
234
245
253
263
273
2818
296
302
3133
3223
333
345
359
365
372
3823
3918
4010
414
4210
4310
446
454
464
4716
486
493
61.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4161073825503356
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners62
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Almost a smile."
ratio0.013
33.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences75
matches
0"His platinum hair caught the"
1"She gripped the doorframe"
2"He didn't move"
3"He dealt in information, favours,"
4"Her full name in his"
5"He'd been here before, of"
6"He set it on the"
7"His cane tapped once against"
8"He'd looked at her and"
9"He'd seen all of it"
10"She'd run instead."
11"She crossed her arms"
12"He removed his jacket, folded"
13"Her stomach dropped."
14"She'd assumed debt."
15"He moved closer"
16"She held her ground."
17"They stood there, two people"
18"His hand rose, stopped just"
19"She watched him decide against"
ratio0.467
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences75
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"His platinum hair caught the"
3"That mismatched gaze, amber and"
4"She gripped the doorframe"
5"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
6"He didn't move"
7"Something flickered across his features."
8"Lucien didn't do hurt, not"
9"He dealt in information, favours,"
10"Her full name in his"
11"Ptolemy mrowed and butted his"
12"Charcoal wool, perfectly pressed."
13"The cat had expensive taste."
14"Rory stepped back."
15"A tactical retreat."
16"Lucien entered like he owned"
17"He'd been here before, of"
18"He set it on the"
19"The words escaped before she"
ratio0.8
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Now he did smile, and"
ratio0.013
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Close enough to smell sandalwood and something darker underneath, something that reminded her why she'd pushed him away."
1"It was three months of silence and blocked numbers and lying awake in the flat above Silas's bar, listening to the bass thrum through the floorboards and wonder…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He set, a stack of grimoires Eva used as an end table"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.076
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.2880%