Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01XF754Z88ZV9BYDBWNXP

Run Details

Duration:
4m 1s
Cost:
$0.023961
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory's fingers found the pommel of the dagger at her hip. The moonsilver burned cold even through her glove, a persistent chill that had nothing to do with London's grey autumn. "We're close." Isolde walked ahead, her feet disturbing nothing, not even the frost-kissed bracken of Richmond Park. Rory followed, her boots crunching loud in comparison. Beside her, Nyx rippled, their violet eyes the only solid feature in a form that resembled smoke poured into human shape. The stones appeared between one blink and the next. Ancient oaks carved into monoliths, their surfaces gleaming with sap that looked like liquid moonlight. Rory's pendant throbbed against her sternum—once, twice—a heartbeat of crimson warmth that had no business existing this close to her skin. Isolde paused at the threshold. "Step carefully. The Grove remembers." "Remembers what?" Rory's hand tightened on the dagger. "Everything." Isolde crossed. Her silhouette fragmented, refracting like light through water, and then she stood on the other side, waiting. Rory took a breath. The air tasted of copper and overripe pears. She stepped forward. The transition seized her spine. One moment, London's grey dawn pressed against her cheeks; the next, warmth flooded her soles and climbed upward, a slow tide of sensation that made her teeth ache. The standing stones hadn't moved, but now they surrounded her, a circle rather than a gateway, and the sky above burned amber. No. Not amber like Dymas. This was twilight trapped in resin—golden-purple, thrumming with a light source that cast no shadows. "Time moves differently here." Nyx's voice carried the weight of wind through catacombs. "I taste the thickness." Rory turned. The park had vanished. Instead, grass spread in every direction, each blade crystalline and chiming softly when the breeze touched them. The sound resembled ice shattering in reverse—thousands of tiny collisions forming music. "Don't touch the flowers." Isolde moved deeper into the circle, her silver hair blending with the luminescent mist that coiled around her ankles. Rory hadn't noticed the blooms. They carpeted the clearing in defiance of season, petals opening and closing with mechanical precision. Each was the size of her hand, coloured in shades that made her eyes water—colours that existed between blue and green, between red and the memory of heat. "I thought you lived here." The crystalline grass chimed beneath Rory's boots, high and tinkling. "I live at the edge." Isolde walked toward a slope where the mist thickened. "This is the heart. Few have walked here since the last equinox." Nyx drifted ahead, their form solidifying into something more defined—shoulders, the suggestion of a jawline, fingers that trailed through the grass without making contact. "The shadows here are hungry." They pulled back, violet eyes narrowing. "They want to keep whatever falls into them." Rory's grip shifted on the dagger. The Fae blade glowed now, faint and sickly-pale, reacting to the pocket of twisted reality. She followed Isolde, stepping over roots that pulsed like veins beneath the soil. The grove opened. Not a clearing—an expansion. The trees here grew upside down, their canopies digging into earth while roots swayed in the purple air like sea anemones. Water flowed upward in lazy spirals, defying gravity, collecting in floating spheres that reflected impossible geometries. "Christ." The word escaped on a breath. "Don't use that name here." Isolde didn't turn. "It leaves a scar." A floating sphere drifted near Rory's face. Inside, she saw a miniature version of the grove, but in that reflection, she stood alone. No Isolde. No Nyx. Just her, holding the dagger, while something with too many joints stood behind her shoulder. She jerked back. The sphere popped, drenching her sleeve in water that smelled of jasmine and old books. "Memories." Isolde watched the droplets rise, defying physics, rejoining the nearest spiral. "The Grove shows you what you left behind." "I don't remember leaving anything behind." "That is why it shows you." They walked deeper. The ground sloped downward, not steeply, but with the inevitable pull of a tide returning to sea. Rory's boots sank into moss that giggled—a high, tinkling sound that made her want to laugh and vomit simultaneously. The Heartstone pendant pulsed harder, insistent, though they were nowhere near a Hel portal. Unless... "Isolde." Rory grabbed the woman's sleeve. The fabric felt like spider silk, strong and wrong. "Where exactly are we?" "Between." "Between isn't an answer." "Between is the only answer." Nyx had stopped walking. They stood before a structure that had not been there moments ago—an archway of woven bone and obsidian, tall as a cathedral door. Through it, Rory saw not more of the grove, but a banquet hall stretching into infinity, tables laden with fruits that squirmed and meats that sang. "Gluttony." Nyx's form flattened, pressed thin against the air. "I know that sky." Rory looked up. The amber had deepened, turned the colour of burnt honey. Her pendant burned. "This is a rift." The words tasted of metal. "A thin spot in the Veil." "The Veil wears thin in many places." Isolde tilted her head. Her lavender eyes reflected the archway, but in them, Rory saw flames. "This one bleeds into Dymas. Prince Belphegor's influence seeps through, tempting the flowers to bear fruit of a different flavor." Rory touched the archway. The bone was warm, polished smooth by centuries of hands. She heard the feast beyond—silverware on porcelain, laughter like breaking glass, the wet sound of voracious eating. "We should close it." "Can you close a wound without knowing what caused it?" "I can try." "You always try. That is your nature." Nyx ran their hand along the obsidian. "I feel my other self here. Aldric stood in this spot once, in 1643, before the binding." The air grew heavy, honey-thick. Rory's lungs worked harder to draw breath. She drew the Fae-forged blade. The moonsilver blazed, cold light cutting through the amber gloom. The blade hummed against her palm, eager, ancient, offended by the proximity to Hel. The flowers nearest the archway rotted. Blackness spread from their stems, turning the crystalline grass to sludge. A smell rose—copper and sugar, overwhelming. "It knows we're here." Nyx's shadow darkened, spreading across the bone. "What does?" "The hunger." From the archway, something reached. Not a hand—hands had symmetry, structure. This was a collection of grasping, a concept made manifest, fingers that existed in dimensions Rory could not name. It groped toward the rotting flowers, toward the moisture in the air, toward the warmth of living things. Isolde didn't move. "You carry the blade. You carry the stone. Choose which door you open, Aurora Carter." Rory stepped forward. The pendant screamed heat against her chest. The dagger froze her grip. Between them, balanced on the threshold of two worlds, she raised the moonsilver and struck. The blade bit into the archway's bone. Sound stopped. Then the grove screamed. The crystalline grass shattered into a million chiming fragments. The floating waters dropped, crashing upward into the sky, raining upward. The flowers snapped shut, screaming in ultrasonic frequencies that made Rory's nose bleed. But the grasping thing retreated. The amber light flickered, retreated, became purple once more. Nyx dissolved into shadow, wrapping around the archway, sealing the crack with darkness that had substance, memory, will. "Not closed." They reformed, gasping. "Just... bandaged." "Enough for now." Rory pulled the blade free. It steamed, though the temperature had plummeted. Her breath clouded the air. The pendant had gone cold, dead weight against her sternum. They stood in silence. The grove had changed—the trees righted themselves, roots burying back into earth, the floating waters gone. But the flowers remained, muted now, their colours faded to ordinary whites and yellows. "Time to leave." Isolde turned toward the standing stones, now visible as mere oaks once more. "Before the Grove decides we belong to it." Rory didn't argue. The blade still hummed in her hand, protesting the retreat. Behind her, something chimed in the crystalline fragments, laughing like breaking ice.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:45:45.968Z" 2/19/2026, 3:45:45 AM
model"moonshotai/kimi-k2.5-0127"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency3935
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time241056
tokens_prompt1816
tokens_completion8636
native_tokens_prompt1720
native_tokens_completion7855
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning5997
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.0239606
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"34bb2131-6727-40e5-9dec-8793b254ba5c"
id"019c7400f8714b5c4ea6310e83730a3d"
is_byokfalse
latency3935
model_permaslug"moonshotai/kimi-k2.5-0127"
provider_name"SiliconFlow"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771472745-rD2dtGa8zoByDEvUAz48"
upstream_id"019c7400f8714b5c4ea6310e83730a3d"
total_cost0.0239606
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"SiliconFlow"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"They pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.773
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.045
92.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1339
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1339
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"fragmented"
count1
5
word"carried the weight"
count1
6
word"crystalline"
count5
7
word"mechanical"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count2
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"structure"
count2
11
word"porcelain"
count1
12
word"gloom"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"gleaming"
2"throbbed"
3"warmth"
4"fragmented"
5"carried the weight"
6"crystalline"
7"mechanical"
8"pulsed"
9"silk"
10"structure"
11"porcelain"
12"gloom"
13"shattered"
14"flickered"
15"weight"
16"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1321
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1094
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London2
Richmond1
Park1
Rory22
Nyx9
Isolde12
Dymas1
Fae2
Heartstone1
Hel2
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Hel"
globalScore0.495
windowScore0.5
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like liquid moonlight"
1"felt like spider silk, strong and wrong"
48.60% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.514
wordCount1321
matches
0"not steeply, but with the inevitable pull of a tide returning to sea"
1"not more of the grove, but a banquet hall stretching into infinity, tables laden with f"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean21.66
std15.51
cv0.716
sampleLengths
031
146
245
310
48
51
619
715
855
920
1017
1135
1223
1348
1415
1526
1643
1734
183
1941
207
2112
2242
2318
2420
256
266
2754
2819
291
304
315
3253
3313
3416
3515
3643
3731
384
3910
403
417
4224
4341
4423
4511
462
472
4848
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences138
ratio0.094
matches
0"Rory's pendant throbbed against her sternum—once, twice—a heartbeat of crimson warmth that had no business existing this close to her skin."
1"One moment, London's grey dawn pressed against her cheeks; the next, warmth flooded her soles and climbed upward, a slow tide of sensation that made her teeth ache."
2"This was twilight trapped in resin—golden-purple, thrumming with a light source that cast no shadows."
3"The sound resembled ice shattering in reverse—thousands of tiny collisions forming music."
4"Each was the size of her hand, coloured in shades that made her eyes water—colours that existed between blue and green, between red and the memory of heat."
5"Nyx drifted ahead, their form solidifying into something more defined—shoulders, the suggestion of a jawline, fingers that trailed through the grass without making contact."
6"Not a clearing—an expansion."
7"Rory's boots sank into moss that giggled—a high, tinkling sound that made her want to laugh and vomit simultaneously."
8"They stood before a structure that had not been there moments ago—an archway of woven bone and obsidian, tall as a cathedral door."
9"She heard the feast beyond—silverware on porcelain, laughter like breaking glass, the wet sound of voracious eating."
10"A smell rose—copper and sugar, overwhelming."
11"Not a hand—hands had symmetry, structure."
12"The grove had changed—the trees righted themselves, roots burying back into earth, the floating waters gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1112
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03147482014388489
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0044964028776978415
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean9.57
std6.39
cv0.667
sampleLengths
011
120
217
38
421
59
615
721
85
95
108
111
122
1317
144
158
163
175
1828
1922
201
214
2215
2313
244
252
264
2717
2812
2923
305
3115
3228
3315
3414
3512
3624
3711
388
396
4015
4113
423
434
4421
4516
467
478
484
497
49.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners46
96.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"Instead, grass spread in every"
1"Just her, holding the dagger,"
2"Then the grove screamed."
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences104
matches
0"Her silhouette fragmented, refracting like"
1"She stepped forward."
2"They carpeted the clearing in"
3"They pulled back, violet eyes"
4"She followed Isolde, stepping over"
5"She jerked back."
6"They walked deeper."
7"They stood before a structure"
8"Her pendant burned."
9"Her lavender eyes reflected the"
10"She heard the feast beyond—silverware"
11"She drew the Fae-forged blade."
12"It groped toward the rotting"
13"They reformed, gasping"
14"It steamed, though the temperature"
15"Her breath clouded the air."
16"They stood in silence."
ratio0.163
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences104
matches
0"Rory's fingers found the pommel"
1"The moonsilver burned cold even"
2"Isolde walked ahead, her feet"
3"Rory followed, her boots crunching"
4"The stones appeared between one"
5"Rory's pendant throbbed against her"
6"Isolde paused at the threshold."
7"Rory's hand tightened on the"
8"Her silhouette fragmented, refracting like"
9"Rory took a breath."
10"The air tasted of copper"
11"She stepped forward."
12"The transition seized her spine."
13"The standing stones hadn't moved,"
14"This was twilight trapped in"
15"Nyx's voice carried the weight"
16"The park had vanished."
17"The sound resembled ice shattering"
18"Isolde moved deeper into the"
19"Rory hadn't noticed the blooms."
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The moonsilver burned cold even through her glove, a persistent chill that had nothing to do with London's grey autumn."
1"Beside her, Nyx rippled, their violet eyes the only solid feature in a form that resembled smoke poured into human shape."
2"Ancient oaks carved into monoliths, their surfaces gleaming with sap that looked like liquid moonlight."
3"Rory's pendant throbbed against her sternum—once, twice—a heartbeat of crimson warmth that had no business existing this close to her skin."
4"One moment, London's grey dawn pressed against her cheeks; the next, warmth flooded her soles and climbed upward, a slow tide of sensation that made her teeth a…"
5"Each was the size of her hand, coloured in shades that made her eyes water—colours that existed between blue and green, between red and the memory of heat."
6"Nyx drifted ahead, their form solidifying into something more defined—shoulders, the suggestion of a jawline, fingers that trailed through the grass without mak…"
7"Water flowed upward in lazy spirals, defying gravity, collecting in floating spheres that reflected impossible geometries."
8"Through it, Rory saw not more of the grove, but a banquet hall stretching into infinity, tables laden with fruits that squirmed and meats that sang."
9"The flowers snapped shut, screaming in ultrasonic frequencies that made Rory's nose bleed."
10"Nyx dissolved into shadow, wrapping around the archway, sealing the crack with darkness that had substance, memory, will."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"The crystalline grass chimed (chime)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.045
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.045
78.6632%