| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "They pulled back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.386 | | leniency | 0.773 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |
| 92.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1339 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1339 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "fragmented" | | 5 | "carried the weight" | | 6 | "crystalline" | | 7 | "mechanical" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "structure" | | 11 | "porcelain" | | 12 | "gloom" | | 13 | "shattered" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 138 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1321 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1094 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 22 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 12 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.495 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like liquid moonlight" | | 1 | "felt like spider silk, strong and wrong" |
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| 48.60% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.514 | | wordCount | 1321 | | matches | | 0 | "not steeply, but with the inevitable pull of a tide returning to sea" | | 1 | "not more of the grove, but a banquet hall stretching into infinity, tables laden with f" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 21.66 | | std | 15.51 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 53 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 41 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 48 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 138 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's pendant throbbed against her sternum—once, twice—a heartbeat of crimson warmth that had no business existing this close to her skin." | | 1 | "One moment, London's grey dawn pressed against her cheeks; the next, warmth flooded her soles and climbed upward, a slow tide of sensation that made her teeth ache." | | 2 | "This was twilight trapped in resin—golden-purple, thrumming with a light source that cast no shadows." | | 3 | "The sound resembled ice shattering in reverse—thousands of tiny collisions forming music." | | 4 | "Each was the size of her hand, coloured in shades that made her eyes water—colours that existed between blue and green, between red and the memory of heat." | | 5 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form solidifying into something more defined—shoulders, the suggestion of a jawline, fingers that trailed through the grass without making contact." | | 6 | "Not a clearing—an expansion." | | 7 | "Rory's boots sank into moss that giggled—a high, tinkling sound that made her want to laugh and vomit simultaneously." | | 8 | "They stood before a structure that had not been there moments ago—an archway of woven bone and obsidian, tall as a cathedral door." | | 9 | "She heard the feast beyond—silverware on porcelain, laughter like breaking glass, the wet sound of voracious eating." | | 10 | "A smell rose—copper and sugar, overwhelming." | | 11 | "Not a hand—hands had symmetry, structure." | | 12 | "The grove had changed—the trees righted themselves, roots burying back into earth, the floating waters gone." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1112 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03147482014388489 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0044964028776978415 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 138 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 138 | | mean | 9.57 | | std | 6.39 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 49.03% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 138 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 96.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, grass spread in every" | | 1 | "Just her, holding the dagger," | | 2 | "Then the grove screamed." |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Her silhouette fragmented, refracting like" | | 1 | "She stepped forward." | | 2 | "They carpeted the clearing in" | | 3 | "They pulled back, violet eyes" | | 4 | "She followed Isolde, stepping over" | | 5 | "She jerked back." | | 6 | "They walked deeper." | | 7 | "They stood before a structure" | | 8 | "Her pendant burned." | | 9 | "Her lavender eyes reflected the" | | 10 | "She heard the feast beyond—silverware" | | 11 | "She drew the Fae-forged blade." | | 12 | "It groped toward the rotting" | | 13 | "They reformed, gasping" | | 14 | "It steamed, though the temperature" | | 15 | "Her breath clouded the air." | | 16 | "They stood in silence." |
| | ratio | 0.163 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's fingers found the pommel" | | 1 | "The moonsilver burned cold even" | | 2 | "Isolde walked ahead, her feet" | | 3 | "Rory followed, her boots crunching" | | 4 | "The stones appeared between one" | | 5 | "Rory's pendant throbbed against her" | | 6 | "Isolde paused at the threshold." | | 7 | "Rory's hand tightened on the" | | 8 | "Her silhouette fragmented, refracting like" | | 9 | "Rory took a breath." | | 10 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 11 | "She stepped forward." | | 12 | "The transition seized her spine." | | 13 | "The standing stones hadn't moved," | | 14 | "This was twilight trapped in" | | 15 | "Nyx's voice carried the weight" | | 16 | "The park had vanished." | | 17 | "The sound resembled ice shattering" | | 18 | "Isolde moved deeper into the" | | 19 | "Rory hadn't noticed the blooms." |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The moonsilver burned cold even through her glove, a persistent chill that had nothing to do with London's grey autumn." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx rippled, their violet eyes the only solid feature in a form that resembled smoke poured into human shape." | | 2 | "Ancient oaks carved into monoliths, their surfaces gleaming with sap that looked like liquid moonlight." | | 3 | "Rory's pendant throbbed against her sternum—once, twice—a heartbeat of crimson warmth that had no business existing this close to her skin." | | 4 | "One moment, London's grey dawn pressed against her cheeks; the next, warmth flooded her soles and climbed upward, a slow tide of sensation that made her teeth a…" | | 5 | "Each was the size of her hand, coloured in shades that made her eyes water—colours that existed between blue and green, between red and the memory of heat." | | 6 | "Nyx drifted ahead, their form solidifying into something more defined—shoulders, the suggestion of a jawline, fingers that trailed through the grass without mak…" | | 7 | "Water flowed upward in lazy spirals, defying gravity, collecting in floating spheres that reflected impossible geometries." | | 8 | "Through it, Rory saw not more of the grove, but a banquet hall stretching into infinity, tables laden with fruits that squirmed and meats that sang." | | 9 | "The flowers snapped shut, screaming in ultrasonic frequencies that made Rory's nose bleed." | | 10 | "Nyx dissolved into shadow, wrapping around the archway, sealing the crack with darkness that had substance, memory, will." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "The crystalline grass chimed (chime)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.023 | | leniency | 0.045 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |